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276 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2012
I made the mistake of reading this book sober, I'm writing this review drunk now. This book has turned me into an alcoholic. I put in all the effort to finish it because it's in the backlog of books I got for my birthday, and now that it's over I'm not sure I'll ever want to look at it again.
The saddest part is how much I wanted to like it.
I was originally going to give it three stars, since as a literary firstborn it did have a fair share of hiccups and stumbles along the way. Even so, once you met it halfway and got used to the style, it actually did become an enjoyable read with interesting characters and a ton of potential, along with a VERY well established backdrop of London at the time (I personally found the gap between the rich and the poor, the servant life, and the historical tidbits VERY fun and well written) all in all, it was just a fun story with good bones and lots of potential, by a fairly inexperienced novel author with lots of strength in other places.
But then the last fifth of the book happened and I experienced the literary equivalent of doing a trust fall and getting dropped straight into the Victorian London shit-covered street. How stupid of me. I should trust the narrator set up to be unreliable blindly in everything outside of her own self-hatred and doubt, because she just CAN'T be wrong otherwise! And the chapter where she finds out who the killer is and just... hangs out with him, instead of dramatic and intense, felt more like the jumbled disjointed rambling that I'm doing now than an explosive climax of what's been MARKETED as a thriller.
The epilogue dragged on, and on, and on, and on, and any hint of character development for the side characters (who WEREN'T our strong heroine) went out of the window, and I spent the last few pages crying and begging for this to finally be over because I already got this far.
In conclusion: interesting bones of a story, good worldbuilding, clumsy writing that steadily improves and grows a charm before turning into an absolute trainwreck for the last few chapters, the only surprises it had in store for me were because I genuinely (and stupidly) thought it WOULD try to surprise me. And then it didn't.
I'm suspecting it only did well enough to be translated to other languages is because of the occasional (and not even that well-written) erotica and the softcore lesbianism. Kate Williams as a novelist has some solid potential, but damn it, way to take one of the most interesting characters out back and shoot him like a lame horse .
1/5 will never trust a living soul again.