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Alpha City #1
Obsessions
Alpha City series, Book 1:
A city run by shifters?
In Alpha city, wolves, bears, tigers, panthers, and jaguars live together in peace, centred and led by the Council of Alpha’s.
Ryder Malone, is the Alpha of his werewolf pack. He carefully balances his responsibilities as the official head of the Council, and older brother to his sister Zoey, but when she decides to leave for college, he finds himself drawn to her roommate.
Like an obsession, London Grey is under Ryder’s skin. To his shock, the young witch orphan, and her best friend decide to move back to Alpha City with Zoey to create a new business. But someone in Alpha City doesn’t want them to succeed.
Like a bad itch, mysterious happenings haunt the newcomers and the town’s Alpha. Can they figure out the mystery before tragedy happens?
Or will Ryder and London’s own chemistry cause them to miss the obvious?
A city run by shifters?
In Alpha city, wolves, bears, tigers, panthers, and jaguars live together in peace, centred and led by the Council of Alpha’s.
Ryder Malone, is the Alpha of his werewolf pack. He carefully balances his responsibilities as the official head of the Council, and older brother to his sister Zoey, but when she decides to leave for college, he finds himself drawn to her roommate.
Like an obsession, London Grey is under Ryder’s skin. To his shock, the young witch orphan, and her best friend decide to move back to Alpha City with Zoey to create a new business. But someone in Alpha City doesn’t want them to succeed.
Like a bad itch, mysterious happenings haunt the newcomers and the town’s Alpha. Can they figure out the mystery before tragedy happens?
Or will Ryder and London’s own chemistry cause them to miss the obvious?
234 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 6, 2014
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About the author
Bryce Evans
32 books277 followersBryce is a mother, a writer, and a wife who loves to escape to the world she built in the Ashland Pack. She burst onto the publishing scene with a hit in The Trinity. She loves writing and talking to people who have the same tastes as she does.
I'm a wife to a great hubby and mother to three beautiful children. I love to read books and write about places that come together in my head. I try to write about what I know and usually you will find some law enforcement in my books.
I write about strong characters that I want to see succeed in life. I always write a happy ending. I have to guys. I put a lot of tragedy in my books and then give them the much- needed break they need to be successful.
I would love to hear from you. Contact me at: www.bryceevans.webs.com or on Twitter: Bryce__Evans or on Facebook:
https://www.facebook.com/BryceEvansAu...
I'm a wife to a great hubby and mother to three beautiful children. I love to read books and write about places that come together in my head. I try to write about what I know and usually you will find some law enforcement in my books.
I write about strong characters that I want to see succeed in life. I always write a happy ending. I have to guys. I put a lot of tragedy in my books and then give them the much- needed break they need to be successful.
I would love to hear from you. Contact me at: www.bryceevans.webs.com or on Twitter: Bryce__Evans or on Facebook:
https://www.facebook.com/BryceEvansAu...
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October 6, 2014
The writing style really didn't work for me - far too much telling instead of showing. This is especially evident in chapter 5, which is the epitome of an info dump.
I didn't get London as a character - one minute she's assertive and all kickass, then the next she's shy, introverted and having panic attacks.
I also was not convinced about the two cases of insta-love (is there such a thing as insta-bffs?)
I did not like Ryder as a character. Mostly because of this scene (Warning: contains adult themes)
Overall, an interesting idea, but the execution lacked polish and depth.
I didn't get London as a character - one minute she's assertive and all kickass, then the next she's shy, introverted and having panic attacks.
I also was not convinced about the two cases of insta-love (is there such a thing as insta-bffs?)
That was when London knew for sure that Zoey was right. They would be best friends forever.
Ryder stared down at the picture inside. He tried not to look at it constantly, but he couldn’t stop himself. His wolf went wild as he studied her beautiful face.
I did not like Ryder as a character. Mostly because of this scene (Warning: contains adult themes)
Overall, an interesting idea, but the execution lacked polish and depth.
November 6, 2020
Shifters, hot alphas, a spunky heroine with powers and a dash of danger should have made for a delicious read.
I really was not keen on the scene with
Writing at times didn't flow great, plus there was way too much telling and not enough showing. Descriptions at times had my eyes crossing and I zoned out a tiny but.
I really was not keen on the scene with
Writing at times didn't flow great, plus there was way too much telling and not enough showing. Descriptions at times had my eyes crossing and I zoned out a tiny but.
June 9, 2014
Obsessions is Bryce Evans new book in her Alpha City series. Bryce has created a whole new "book world" where alphas of different shifter groups have formed a city where shifters can feel safe in. The general public isn't aware of shifters in this universe. London Grey meets Zoey Malone in college and they become fast friends. Zoey eventually tells London she is a werewolf shifter and of course London has a few secrets of her own. Ryder Malone is Zoey's older brother and the head Alpha werewolf shifter of Alpha City. He becomes obsessed with London as soon as he sees her picture but he keeps his distance cause she is human so he thinks she is too weak to be an alpha shifter mate. ***Sigh*** men are so silly sometimes. Of course London isn't weak and actually kicks butt a few times.
I really enjoyed Obsessions. The plot line has a lot going on....like lots and lots of details...I actually had the urge to take notes at one point. Bryce does a great job of building up her new world and I definitely look forward to the next book in the series.
I really enjoyed Obsessions. The plot line has a lot going on....like lots and lots of details...I actually had the urge to take notes at one point. Bryce does a great job of building up her new world and I definitely look forward to the next book in the series.
October 22, 2014
Obsessions was actually a really awesome and unique story, I had a lot of fun reading it. It's like one of those rare gems that once you find it you go all "my precious" on it. I was delighted by the idea of a "shifter" only city and said city being run by several different types of shifters. I thought the mixture of different types of shifters all living together was a cool and cohesive idea, normally there all kept apart.
The story mainly revolves around best friends London and Zoey, and of course Zoey's big brother Ryder. I enjoyed the changing points of view and then a couple full pages detailing Ryder and Londons perspective. Zoey and London are wonderfully written, I can actually picture them as people, which rarely happens with PNR stories. Both these women represented their age brackets well, London personified the tougher type of gal, while Zoey was softer and needed more of a helping hand. Ryder both intrigued and annoyed me. The supporting characters were all well fleshed out, I could easily see how this group works.
Now for the bad guys, they were just totally hate-able. When I read about them I honestly thought it was a mash up of Cruella de Vil married the Governor from the walking dead, because it's a hubby and wife combo! They were so two faced and evil, ugh! Perfect bad guys for this story!
I'd definitely recommend this book to shifter and paranormal lovers. The story was well written, it had an easy flow about it. Nothing was really rushed relationship wise, it slowly developed and then exploded;) I'd definitely read more from this author.
I received this book in exchange for an honest review via LoP on goodreads.com
The story mainly revolves around best friends London and Zoey, and of course Zoey's big brother Ryder. I enjoyed the changing points of view and then a couple full pages detailing Ryder and Londons perspective. Zoey and London are wonderfully written, I can actually picture them as people, which rarely happens with PNR stories. Both these women represented their age brackets well, London personified the tougher type of gal, while Zoey was softer and needed more of a helping hand. Ryder both intrigued and annoyed me. The supporting characters were all well fleshed out, I could easily see how this group works.
Now for the bad guys, they were just totally hate-able. When I read about them I honestly thought it was a mash up of Cruella de Vil married the Governor from the walking dead, because it's a hubby and wife combo! They were so two faced and evil, ugh! Perfect bad guys for this story!
I'd definitely recommend this book to shifter and paranormal lovers. The story was well written, it had an easy flow about it. Nothing was really rushed relationship wise, it slowly developed and then exploded;) I'd definitely read more from this author.
I received this book in exchange for an honest review via LoP on goodreads.com
July 15, 2014
Fantastic Story
First of all I have to say in all honesty that it has been a very long time since I have read a story that has captivated and literally transported me into the story. I felt all that what was happening, all the sadness, joy, the fighting and even felt the passion between Ryder and London their first time together and man was it passionate.
Zoey, London and Ryder have to work through a lot of intrigue, hurt and revelations which lead to plenty of surprises.
Zoey finally comes out of her shell to prove her status as the sister of a very powerful Alpha. Ryder a very powerful, strong willed Alpha let's lose to live and love the way he wants and London realizes she is a witch and more powerful then anyone thought....
There is quite a battle of wills and power in this riveting story.. London and Ryder's pack must battle evil unknowing of how all will end.
I certainly can't wait for the next book in this wonderful series which promises to be a hit with Shifter & Paranormal fans..
Congratulations Bryce Evans and thank you for the fun!
First of all I have to say in all honesty that it has been a very long time since I have read a story that has captivated and literally transported me into the story. I felt all that what was happening, all the sadness, joy, the fighting and even felt the passion between Ryder and London their first time together and man was it passionate.
Zoey, London and Ryder have to work through a lot of intrigue, hurt and revelations which lead to plenty of surprises.
Zoey finally comes out of her shell to prove her status as the sister of a very powerful Alpha. Ryder a very powerful, strong willed Alpha let's lose to live and love the way he wants and London realizes she is a witch and more powerful then anyone thought....
There is quite a battle of wills and power in this riveting story.. London and Ryder's pack must battle evil unknowing of how all will end.
I certainly can't wait for the next book in this wonderful series which promises to be a hit with Shifter & Paranormal fans..
Congratulations Bryce Evans and thank you for the fun!
October 24, 2014
Something wicked comes this way!
The picture of London drove Ryder mad, but meeting her in person was a whole different ballgame. It was a day from hell he could not do or say anything right. London was driving him crazy. Everyone in the place wanted her, and he needed to get control of his wolf, before he jump across the table in front of all these people and take her on the table.But as life goes London will leave for her new life in New York and he will go back to his pack only to be throw together again by his sister. Little do someone knows that there are some real evil in Alpha Town and the question, becomes can they get pass the small stuff in time to save the pack? Or can the love save them from this evil? This was a great story one you will not put down once you start reading it. Loved it!!!
I was given this book in exchange for my honest review (LOP) Goodreads.com
The picture of London drove Ryder mad, but meeting her in person was a whole different ballgame. It was a day from hell he could not do or say anything right. London was driving him crazy. Everyone in the place wanted her, and he needed to get control of his wolf, before he jump across the table in front of all these people and take her on the table.But as life goes London will leave for her new life in New York and he will go back to his pack only to be throw together again by his sister. Little do someone knows that there are some real evil in Alpha Town and the question, becomes can they get pass the small stuff in time to save the pack? Or can the love save them from this evil? This was a great story one you will not put down once you start reading it. Loved it!!!
I was given this book in exchange for my honest review (LOP) Goodreads.com
October 25, 2014
Bryce EvansI received this book in exchange for an honest review (LoP)
" How desperate can you get London? it's just a smile. yeah, it's a panty dropping smile."
4 stars. Obsessions is the first book of the Alpha City series.
First thing I have to say about this book is..... Have you seen the cover?!? Wow!
Moving on.....
We are introduced to Alpha City. A City where shape shifters of many kinds and supernatural beings co exist in peace. Where it is safe and protected from the outside world.
From the first chapter we are introduced to London and Zoey and how their friendship began. London Grey is a tough,strong-willed woman who is shy and keeps to herself. On her first day at Milton College she meets Zoey Malone. Zoey is the complete opposite of London. She is open and soft,but also not so tough.Even with their differences they instantly become friends. Their bond grew strong, secrets were told and a new world was unraveled for London.
Pack Alpha, Ryder tries to resist the desire he has for his little sister's roommate and best friend, London.
Nothing goes to plan as the girls decide to open a business together in Alpha City. Ryder believes a relationship with a human to be impossible.....what if London isn't a human after all? With so many dangers lurking around every corner, can London survive in Alpha City?
"Today, right now, I'm telling you, London Grey, that I love you and you are my mate. I will do whatever I have to do to make you mine."
This story is brilliant! It took the right amount of time to develop. I loved the fact that this was a city run by shifters. Also that all different kinds of shifters were able to co-exist. At first when I read the blurb I wasn't too sure how Bryce Evans could've pulled that off. But it did, it actually worked. The story itself came to life with all it's characters, both good and evil.
I also loved how London and Ryder's relationship wasn't rushed. The attraction was instantaneous but they had to work for their relationship. It was a push-pull situation filled with desire and jealousy. It was such a pleasant ride. Once London and Ryder finally got together I had the biggest smile on my face. That's what this book does, it pulls you in, you feel what the characters are going through.
" I...I thought I could live without you, alone. Immerse myself in my work, but I can't London. My life isn't complete if your not in it and I don't want to live anymore without you."
The only reason I am not giving this book five stars is due to a lot of grammatical errors and misplaced/ misspelled words.
However I am most definitely looking forward to the next book in this series.The story line has me hooked! I am also hoping to see more of Zoey and Kayden, and see how their relationship progresses. And of course much more of London and Ryder.
This is a must read to shape shifter/ paranormal romance fans. It's is a captivating,unique story which is worth the attention.
June 9, 2014
This was a truly wonderful book. Alpha City is a city for many paranormal life! Away from humans , a place to be safe! The city is made up of a group of council members each a different shifter. This is the story of Ryder. He is the Alpha wolf! He is strong, smart , and courageous. Zoey is Ryder's sister she is smart, fun and highly intelligent. Wanting her education she goes off to college to get her degree and to get away from her very protective brother and the other alphas. She meets London her first day there and they immediately hit it off and become best friends right away. London is one tough cookie! She will not back down from a fight especially when her friends and family are in trouble. She is a truly good person inside and out! All she wants to do is go to school and get her degree so she can finally work for her dream company. But fate changes everything for both her and Ryder. Ryder is fascinated with London and wants her so bad, but she is human and he needs a strong alpha female to mate with. Trying to stay away from her and their attraction doesn't work for him because all he seems to be doing is hurting and ticking London off. Then evil is trying to get their hands on Alpha city. Will Ryder be able to save Alpha City and will he finally let his guard down to his destiny and claim London for his mate?
The story has many great characters all of which you will fall in love with and will have you wanting to read their stories as well.
Looking forward to the next in this series!
The story has many great characters all of which you will fall in love with and will have you wanting to read their stories as well.
Looking forward to the next in this series!
October 14, 2014
First thing that caught my eye was the smexy cover, I am all about eye candy! Then I noticed the bear, I can never resist a yummy bear shifter! The main character is a wolf but I hold out hope the delicious bear will get a HEA too!
Great story, with solid world building. There is plenty of back story delivered and developed over the whole book. I loved the mixed narrative and the way we really had time to get to know London and Ryder over time. It does take a good chunk of the book before any interaction between them occurs. There are holes in the plot, but not so much that it turned me off the book.
The smexy stuff is plenty hot, even though it is closer to mainstream than erotic. I always adore the instant attraction of true mates. It makes the shifter romances some of my favorites. Emotions come quickly , but I am fine with that.
Loads of great supporting characters who I can only hope to see in upcoming books. Plenty of intrigue in the town and supernatural events. I can definitely see this becoming a series I crave!
Great story, with solid world building. There is plenty of back story delivered and developed over the whole book. I loved the mixed narrative and the way we really had time to get to know London and Ryder over time. It does take a good chunk of the book before any interaction between them occurs. There are holes in the plot, but not so much that it turned me off the book.
The smexy stuff is plenty hot, even though it is closer to mainstream than erotic. I always adore the instant attraction of true mates. It makes the shifter romances some of my favorites. Emotions come quickly , but I am fine with that.
Loads of great supporting characters who I can only hope to see in upcoming books. Plenty of intrigue in the town and supernatural events. I can definitely see this becoming a series I crave!
December 17, 2014
**I received this book in exchange for an honest review (LoP or Lovers of Paranormal)**
3.5 Stars!
I so desperately wanted to love this book and rate it higher but unfortunately I couldn't.
I will start with the negatives and end with the positives!
The whole book felt like a first draft, not a finished piece. At times the use of grammar and tenses was simply awful, which meant that the novel didn't flow as easily as it should. "Want" and "Won't" seemed to have been mixed up throughout. In my opinion this is an easily fixable problem, however it obviously wasn't picked up on editing?
There were some seriously cheesy, cringing moments; 'he was perfection on a stick...one she wanted to lick.' I am all for a bit of cheese but at times I found it too much.
The whole novel was rushed in my opinion. The plot could have been better developed and allowed more pages to breath and come into its own. The bare bones of the story were fascinating and I would have enjoyed it more had Evans delved deeper.
Despite this, the story itself was intriguing and very gripping. I loved the relationship between London and Ryder, despite finding it infuriating at times. I just couldn't put it down because I needed to know what would happen with them and Alpha City. I would like to read the rest of the series at some point however due to the negatives I have mentioned, I won't be picking them up just yet.
I would recommend reading this book because of the great story line and well developed characters. However, I would like to see an edited version in the future.
3.5 Stars!
I so desperately wanted to love this book and rate it higher but unfortunately I couldn't.
I will start with the negatives and end with the positives!
The whole book felt like a first draft, not a finished piece. At times the use of grammar and tenses was simply awful, which meant that the novel didn't flow as easily as it should. "Want" and "Won't" seemed to have been mixed up throughout. In my opinion this is an easily fixable problem, however it obviously wasn't picked up on editing?
There were some seriously cheesy, cringing moments; 'he was perfection on a stick...one she wanted to lick.' I am all for a bit of cheese but at times I found it too much.
The whole novel was rushed in my opinion. The plot could have been better developed and allowed more pages to breath and come into its own. The bare bones of the story were fascinating and I would have enjoyed it more had Evans delved deeper.
Despite this, the story itself was intriguing and very gripping. I loved the relationship between London and Ryder, despite finding it infuriating at times. I just couldn't put it down because I needed to know what would happen with them and Alpha City. I would like to read the rest of the series at some point however due to the negatives I have mentioned, I won't be picking them up just yet.
I would recommend reading this book because of the great story line and well developed characters. However, I would like to see an edited version in the future.
April 8, 2015
I received this book for an honest review. It was difficult getting into the book for a couple reasons. The first was the dialog between characters and the internal monologue that took place. The author did a lot of telling or stating facts instead of showing the reader threw actions so they could come to there own/the authors conclusion. There were a lot of grammatical errors, misplaced words/commas/etc that took away from the story.
The plot encompasses love, destiny, friendship, and an upcoming war. The chapters switched between character perspective and sometimes this happened within the chapters. When that happened, it wasn't always clear on who was describing what was happening. The plot had some unrealistic elements, especially when it came to military grade spy equipment and the love between Ryder and London. Overall, I think the author had a good idea when creating the plot but wasn't able to execute it 100%.
November 7, 2014
Amazing read !!!
I really enjoyed this book. I love the entire concept of Alpha city and its background. The book was very well written with a great pace. There was plenty of detail getting you up close and personal without dragging on, truly a perfect mix. The story line was really good and felt "real".
The main characters are absolutely adorable. Bryce makes you feel like you could just sit down and have a talk with them, like friends not yet met. They are all very balanced and likeable, well besides the bad buys of course. London is a very strong female character and seems like someone I would like to know more.
Overall this read is fantastic and a must read for the lovers of paranormal, especially the ones who enjoy a little romance thrown in :)
I can't wait for the next one in this series and will keep an eye out for it.
I have received this book from the author for an honest review. (LoP, Lovers of Paranormal)
I really enjoyed this book. I love the entire concept of Alpha city and its background. The book was very well written with a great pace. There was plenty of detail getting you up close and personal without dragging on, truly a perfect mix. The story line was really good and felt "real".
The main characters are absolutely adorable. Bryce makes you feel like you could just sit down and have a talk with them, like friends not yet met. They are all very balanced and likeable, well besides the bad buys of course. London is a very strong female character and seems like someone I would like to know more.
Overall this read is fantastic and a must read for the lovers of paranormal, especially the ones who enjoy a little romance thrown in :)
I can't wait for the next one in this series and will keep an eye out for it.
I have received this book from the author for an honest review. (LoP, Lovers of Paranormal)
October 23, 2014
I was given this book to read by the author in exchange for an honest review (LOP).
I really loved this book. The characters and world were built so well that you felt like you were right there with them, experiencing each event. The dynamics and strength of the friendship of the characters really blew me away as did the romance. Zoey and London are the kind of characters that really draw you in, but reading about the friendship between Zoey, London and Donnie was even better and I cannot wait to see what happens next in this absolutely stunning series. Evans has now become one of my "go to" authors with this fantastic read.
I really loved this book. The characters and world were built so well that you felt like you were right there with them, experiencing each event. The dynamics and strength of the friendship of the characters really blew me away as did the romance. Zoey and London are the kind of characters that really draw you in, but reading about the friendship between Zoey, London and Donnie was even better and I cannot wait to see what happens next in this absolutely stunning series. Evans has now become one of my "go to" authors with this fantastic read.
June 13, 2014
LOOOVVEEDDDD this book. A perfect blend of fantasy, filled with shifters and witches.
The characters are all very attaching, Zoey and London hit it instantly and we dive into the developing friendship with them and grow with them. And then Ryder appears. The attraction is instantaneous!! And we fill it. But it takes time to actually flourish and the trust to build after their rocky start.
I loved this story because the story took its time to develop, nothing was rush but it wasn't slow either. I fell in love with the characters and I cannot wait for the next books to come out!!
The characters are all very attaching, Zoey and London hit it instantly and we dive into the developing friendship with them and grow with them. And then Ryder appears. The attraction is instantaneous!! And we fill it. But it takes time to actually flourish and the trust to build after their rocky start.
I loved this story because the story took its time to develop, nothing was rush but it wasn't slow either. I fell in love with the characters and I cannot wait for the next books to come out!!
July 13, 2014
Bryce Evans writes with such ease and creativeness. I will be honest I usually do not enjoy books in this genre, but Bryce builds her story and her characters so well, that I had a difficult time putting the book down. Once I started reading Obsession Alpha City I was so captured by two characters, London and Zoey. London and Zoey brought the book alive and brought the best out of Bryce’s story.
I would recommend this book to any reader that is looking for a first book series that presents a great story line
I would recommend this book to any reader that is looking for a first book series that presents a great story line
June 21, 2014
3.5 stars :D
August 11, 2019
Book Review
Basic Details:
Book Title: Obsessions
Subtitle: Alpha City #1
Author: Bryce Evans
Genre: Fantasy/Shifters
Part of a series? Yes
Order in series: 1
Best read after earlier books in series? No
Available: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2...
Overall score:
I scored this book 5/5
⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️
Short Summary of the book:
This book tells the story of London Grey, an orphaned young woman and her college roommate Zoey. London’s parents were killed in a car accident a few years earlier and she lived with her eccentric grandmother.
Zoey’s brother is very protective of her and has put restrictions on her freedom. As the eldest in their family, he is responsible for his little sister. Their parents died several years earlier. Ryder Malone has had London investigated to ensure his sister will be safe. The moment he sees her on a picture, his obsession with her starts.
What will happen once Zoey and London graduate from college? Will all go separate ways or will their paths cross again?
What I liked about the book:
Although Ryder is very controlling, I loved the obvious love he had for his little sister. The obvious power struggle between responsibilities and love playing inside him is also well played out.
What I didn’t like about the book:
I hate bullies with a vengeance and I hated Zoey was bullied by some other college girls. There wasn’t anything about the book I didn’t like, though.
My favourite bits in the book:
I loved when London stood up for Zoey and how she fought for those she cared about. Her obvious shock at finding out what Zoey and Ryder were and at a later stage finding out her own identity were great too.
My least favourite bits in the book:
I loved the book in its entirety and it was with difficulty I stopped myself from buying the next book in the series already.
Any further books in the series? Any more planned by this author?
I understand this is the first in the series and, once I have read some more of the massive collection of books on my Kindle, I will look forward to getting the next in the series.
What books could this be compared to and why?
There are certainly a lot of commonalities with other books in the paranormal range, shifters, witches, animal attraction etc.
Recommendation:
Children No
Young Adult Yes
Adult Yes
If you like paranormal stories about shifters and witches and sexual tension this book may be the book for you.
I look forward to reading more books by this author.
Book Description by Author:
Alpha City series, Book 1:
A city run by shifters?
In Alpha city, wolves, bears, tigers, panthers, and jaguars live together in peace, centred and led by the Council of Alpha’s.
Ryder Malone, is the Alpha of his werewolf pack. He carefully balances his responsibilities as the official head of the Council, and older brother to his sister Zoey, but when she decides to leave for college, he finds himself drawn to her roommate.
Like an obsession, London Grey is under Ryder’s skin. To his shock, the young witch orphan, and her best friend decide to move back to Alpha City with Zoey to create a new business. But someone in Alpha City doesn’t want them to succeed.
Like a bad itch, mysterious happenings haunt the newcomers and the town’s Alpha. Can they figure out the mystery before tragedy happens?
Or will Ryder and London’s own chemistry cause them to miss the obvious?
About the Author:
Bryce is a mother, a writer, and a wife who loves to escape to the world she built in the Ashland Pack. She burst onto the publishing scene with a hit in The Trinity. She loves writing and talking to people who have the same tastes as she does.
I'm a wife to a great hubby and mother to three beautiful children. I love to read books and write about places that come together in my head. I try to write about what I know and usually you will find some law enforcement in my books.
I write about strong characters that I want to see succeed in life. I always write a happy ending. I have to guys. I put a lot of tragedy in my books and then give them the much- needed break they need to be successful.
I would love to hear from you. Contact me at: www.bryceevans.webs.com or on Twitter: Bryce__Evans or on Facebook:
https://www.facebook.com/BryceEvansAu...
Basic Details:
Book Title: Obsessions
Subtitle: Alpha City #1
Author: Bryce Evans
Genre: Fantasy/Shifters
Part of a series? Yes
Order in series: 1
Best read after earlier books in series? No
Available: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2...
Overall score:
I scored this book 5/5
⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️
Short Summary of the book:
This book tells the story of London Grey, an orphaned young woman and her college roommate Zoey. London’s parents were killed in a car accident a few years earlier and she lived with her eccentric grandmother.
Zoey’s brother is very protective of her and has put restrictions on her freedom. As the eldest in their family, he is responsible for his little sister. Their parents died several years earlier. Ryder Malone has had London investigated to ensure his sister will be safe. The moment he sees her on a picture, his obsession with her starts.
What will happen once Zoey and London graduate from college? Will all go separate ways or will their paths cross again?
What I liked about the book:
Although Ryder is very controlling, I loved the obvious love he had for his little sister. The obvious power struggle between responsibilities and love playing inside him is also well played out.
What I didn’t like about the book:
I hate bullies with a vengeance and I hated Zoey was bullied by some other college girls. There wasn’t anything about the book I didn’t like, though.
My favourite bits in the book:
I loved when London stood up for Zoey and how she fought for those she cared about. Her obvious shock at finding out what Zoey and Ryder were and at a later stage finding out her own identity were great too.
My least favourite bits in the book:
I loved the book in its entirety and it was with difficulty I stopped myself from buying the next book in the series already.
Any further books in the series? Any more planned by this author?
I understand this is the first in the series and, once I have read some more of the massive collection of books on my Kindle, I will look forward to getting the next in the series.
What books could this be compared to and why?
There are certainly a lot of commonalities with other books in the paranormal range, shifters, witches, animal attraction etc.
Recommendation:
Children No
Young Adult Yes
Adult Yes
If you like paranormal stories about shifters and witches and sexual tension this book may be the book for you.
I look forward to reading more books by this author.
Book Description by Author:
Alpha City series, Book 1:
A city run by shifters?
In Alpha city, wolves, bears, tigers, panthers, and jaguars live together in peace, centred and led by the Council of Alpha’s.
Ryder Malone, is the Alpha of his werewolf pack. He carefully balances his responsibilities as the official head of the Council, and older brother to his sister Zoey, but when she decides to leave for college, he finds himself drawn to her roommate.
Like an obsession, London Grey is under Ryder’s skin. To his shock, the young witch orphan, and her best friend decide to move back to Alpha City with Zoey to create a new business. But someone in Alpha City doesn’t want them to succeed.
Like a bad itch, mysterious happenings haunt the newcomers and the town’s Alpha. Can they figure out the mystery before tragedy happens?
Or will Ryder and London’s own chemistry cause them to miss the obvious?
About the Author:
Bryce is a mother, a writer, and a wife who loves to escape to the world she built in the Ashland Pack. She burst onto the publishing scene with a hit in The Trinity. She loves writing and talking to people who have the same tastes as she does.
I'm a wife to a great hubby and mother to three beautiful children. I love to read books and write about places that come together in my head. I try to write about what I know and usually you will find some law enforcement in my books.
I write about strong characters that I want to see succeed in life. I always write a happy ending. I have to guys. I put a lot of tragedy in my books and then give them the much- needed break they need to be successful.
I would love to hear from you. Contact me at: www.bryceevans.webs.com or on Twitter: Bryce__Evans or on Facebook:
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September 1, 2017
It started off really good...
3.5 stars. I really liked this book and couldn't put it down... London was a kickass girl... but then not. The tone of the story changed and kinda got annoying with London running away from things, throwing tantrums, and was actually getting on my nerves. It actually seemed like the characters were regressing and rather than growing. The reasons why Ryder wanted to stay away seemed legitimate, but it doesn't seem like London really proves herself with her immature responses to her personal relationships. And she does some up with great ideas and solutions to solve Alfa City's problems, but in the middle of the "mission," she throws a tantrum and once again, runs away. Completely lost her focus on the real task at hand. She is very immature although she started off as mature. Trying to finish off the book... but having a hard time.
3.5 stars. I really liked this book and couldn't put it down... London was a kickass girl... but then not. The tone of the story changed and kinda got annoying with London running away from things, throwing tantrums, and was actually getting on my nerves. It actually seemed like the characters were regressing and rather than growing. The reasons why Ryder wanted to stay away seemed legitimate, but it doesn't seem like London really proves herself with her immature responses to her personal relationships. And she does some up with great ideas and solutions to solve Alfa City's problems, but in the middle of the "mission," she throws a tantrum and once again, runs away. Completely lost her focus on the real task at hand. She is very immature although she started off as mature. Trying to finish off the book... but having a hard time.
May 12, 2017
Heart pounding
This is the first book I have read by this author. I meet her at RT Atlanta. Bought three books in this series. Came home and found that I had the first book in my kindle library.
I started this book and got sucked right in. I needed to turn the page to see what will happen next. You have your hero who fights the pull of his mate. You have the heroine who thinks the hero is a jerk. Then you have the family and friends who think they are perfect for each other. Can they admit that they love each other before the enemy gets them?
This is the first book I have read by this author. I meet her at RT Atlanta. Bought three books in this series. Came home and found that I had the first book in my kindle library.
I started this book and got sucked right in. I needed to turn the page to see what will happen next. You have your hero who fights the pull of his mate. You have the heroine who thinks the hero is a jerk. Then you have the family and friends who think they are perfect for each other. Can they admit that they love each other before the enemy gets them?
January 29, 2018
Excellent read
This is a new author for me and a very happy find. I loved the multiple points of view and the gradual building of the characters. Although London and Ryder were the central couple the others weren't ignored. I also liked that even with the strong attraction they didn't immediately jump into bed, it seemed more realistic to me. I can't wait to read the rest of the series.
This is a new author for me and a very happy find. I loved the multiple points of view and the gradual building of the characters. Although London and Ryder were the central couple the others weren't ignored. I also liked that even with the strong attraction they didn't immediately jump into bed, it seemed more realistic to me. I can't wait to read the rest of the series.
May 7, 2018
Alpha City Book 1
The idea for this series is an excellent example of the author 's creative ability. However, Bryce Evans comes up woefully short in execution. The editing is a hot mess. The grammar is almost as bad. I like Ryder and the Alphas ,but Crazy London is an insult to all heroines. She's insanity with Ryder until he actually heals her with his Alpha penis. Please!! The characters are good but one can only hope this series can improve.
The idea for this series is an excellent example of the author 's creative ability. However, Bryce Evans comes up woefully short in execution. The editing is a hot mess. The grammar is almost as bad. I like Ryder and the Alphas ,but Crazy London is an insult to all heroines. She's insanity with Ryder until he actually heals her with his Alpha penis. Please!! The characters are good but one can only hope this series can improve.
October 12, 2019
Amazing Alphas
Author Bryce Evans knows how to make you fall in love with her wonderful characters and fantastic communities that a full of loyal friendships and family love. This story really gives you an inside look at Alpha City. The Alphas are fun, sexy, dominant and very powerful. They work great together. London is an awesome mate for Ryder. I absolutely recommend this fantastic story!
Author Bryce Evans knows how to make you fall in love with her wonderful characters and fantastic communities that a full of loyal friendships and family love. This story really gives you an inside look at Alpha City. The Alphas are fun, sexy, dominant and very powerful. They work great together. London is an awesome mate for Ryder. I absolutely recommend this fantastic story!
October 24, 2017
In all honesty that it has been a very long time since I have read a story that has captivated and literally transported me into the story. I felt all that what was happening, all the sadness, joy, the fighting and even felt the passion between Ryder and London their first time together and man was it passionate. I just kept turning the pages and I can't wait to read the next!
November 22, 2017
DNF - Was this written by a teenager?
On top of all tell and little show, editorial glitches (piqued, not peaked; SEAL, not seal), this story reads like a 14-year old girl wrote it. I managed to get nearly to 60% before calling it quits on this book. Even insomnia can't make this story good.
On top of all tell and little show, editorial glitches (piqued, not peaked; SEAL, not seal), this story reads like a 14-year old girl wrote it. I managed to get nearly to 60% before calling it quits on this book. Even insomnia can't make this story good.
August 25, 2024
This storyline grabbed me from the offset and didn't let go. The storyline was evolving from beginning to end, and you didn't know where it would end. The characters were carasmatic, engaging and evolved right along with the story. I was really surprised with this book but am happy that there are more.
August 1, 2017
Great
The story was great. London was an awesome female character, was incredibly strong willed and was able to take down Alphas. When reading this book London's personality shines through and that's what makes you want to be on Team London.
The story was great. London was an awesome female character, was incredibly strong willed and was able to take down Alphas. When reading this book London's personality shines through and that's what makes you want to be on Team London.
May 11, 2018
Intoxicating😍😍😍😍😍
This is a must read!!! Once you start you will not want to put it down. You will be craving for more. Bryce Evans this series is heart stopping,thank you for making my night!!💖💖💖💖
This is a must read!!! Once you start you will not want to put it down. You will be craving for more. Bryce Evans this series is heart stopping,thank you for making my night!!💖💖💖💖
June 28, 2018
Great Book
First book I've read off Bryce Evans and omg I really enjoyed it read it in a few hours it was such an addictive page turner.Just noticed there's a book 2 so I'm guessing I'll hit the download button now see what happens next
First book I've read off Bryce Evans and omg I really enjoyed it read it in a few hours it was such an addictive page turner.Just noticed there's a book 2 so I'm guessing I'll hit the download button now see what happens next
October 30, 2018
Potential
First time reading this author. My issues with this book are: 1. it wasn’t until 80% that they were actually a couple. I didn’t feel a connection between the characters. She could barely stand him before that. 2. It was to predictable.
First time reading this author. My issues with this book are: 1. it wasn’t until 80% that they were actually a couple. I didn’t feel a connection between the characters. She could barely stand him before that. 2. It was to predictable.
February 14, 2019
Obsessions
Brilliant Book! It is written beautifully, there is angst, laughter, romance, suspense and steamy sex! I can't wait to read the next book in the series. If you enjoy paranormal romance, this book is a must read!
Brilliant Book! It is written beautifully, there is angst, laughter, romance, suspense and steamy sex! I can't wait to read the next book in the series. If you enjoy paranormal romance, this book is a must read!
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