It's not terrible, and the beginning is very good, when they're still all there own people, but besides the insta-love (which isn't VERBAL insta-love but MC is commanded to move in like, right after they all get physical for the first time and he, someone whose never jumped into the dom/sub life style, just dives right in to total immersion basically)
ANYWAY
My problems are:
-PROBLEM ONE: There is cheating. I know, I know, they all become a triad. But let's put it this way. If Guy 2 and 3 were in a relationship, and Guy 1 took Guy 2's word for it that Guy 3, who hadn't agreed, consented, and had no knowledge of them fucking, would be okay with it and does it, does that sound like consent between all partners to you? Taking only one guy's in the relationship's word for it (and he could be lying) that it's okay to fuck him when his long term partner has no idea and is not present? Even if Guy 2 and 3 talked about this between them, Guy 3 was not there to verbalize that it WAS IN FACT okay. Guy 1 is taking only one half of the couples word for it-and in fact when Guy 3 comes in, Guy 1 is ready to dash across the room like a scared bunny-HMMMM that sounds like the reaction of someone who doesn't know for sure if somethings on the up and up. In THIS situation, Guy 3 ends up fucking Guy 1 who is fucking Guy 2. He only has one brief moment of "oh hell no" as he watches from the door way but then is like "but actually...." and joins in. But if you take out how that turned out, and you cut it down to the facts: Guy 3 did not consent to his partner having sex with another man, or at least not to that man's face so HE has no idea if Guy 2 is telling the truth or not AND he just about runs out of the room when found by Guy 3 because he KNOWS its not all on the up and up......WOW. SOUNDS A LOT LIKE CHEATING, with a smash of "lucky in THIS situation it worked out."
Problem 2: Although Liam and Greg are long term partners, they never fuck each other. It's Guy 1 who gets fucked by both (but mostly Greg) and Liam even gets fucked by Guy 1, but we never see Liam and Greg go at it.
It's enjoyable at first but as soon as she tries to speed mash them all together, it just doesn't work. It loses something.