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228 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 2, 2014



The music played again as the couple continued to slow dance in the centre of the room.
“Keep those hands on her upper back, Jared,” Sam reminded. “Evelyn Callum is not your girlfriend yet.”
Tara bit her lip to stifle a giggle.
Jared scowled, “Cut it, Tara.”
“You’ve got two left feet, brother,” she whispered with a grin. “You sure you can pull this off?”
“If you don’t shut up, you’ll find yourself on the floor,” he warned
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“If you don’t position your feet correctly, she will find her way to the floor,” Sam growled into his ear. "
"His father had been arrested because he was suspected for hunting in the woods." or “If anything should happen to you, I don’t know what I’d do,”
now, they're a bit annoying to read, and as the story progresses, they still annoy the hell out of me, but I was too absorb in reading that I, marked them as "passable"
all in all: I love the concept of the story, the author's imagination is amazing.But that's just it. I felt no spark when reading it. It got messy in the end, and I felt like the story was dragged on too long. anyway it's just my opinion!
Rating: I give the book 4.5 of 5 stars