This was a read-aloud with my 12-year-old and, when I finished reading the last page, she said, “FIVE STARS AND ORDER THE NEXT ONE NOW!”
She's the intended audience for this series, so that may be all you need to know.
However, the rules for our daughter-mother buddy reads are: daughter listens and then rates the book, mother reads aloud and then reviews the book.
So, the author, Jeanne Birdsall, who seems like an incredibly affable person, gets those shiny five stars, but I have a few observations I'd like to make.
I'm not sure why, but I don't seem to be as won over by this series as my youngest daughter and so many others on Goodreads. I liked this one, book #2, better than the first offering. I found it a lot more original and I think the characters were far more developed.
And, yet, I wonder why sentences like these are peppered throughout this middle grades read:
Too obviously not speaking, she folded a bathrobe and placed it neatly into the suitcase on the bed (67)
After picking Batty up and inspecting her for damage—none—Mr. Penderwick helped Aunt Claire into the car. (71)
We all make mistakes when we're writing, but when a book is published by Alfred A. Knopf, I expect a certain level of professionalism. I found a minimum of 14 sentences in this novel that would have made both Strunk and White shrink and turn pale.
Also—I find it difficult to believe that children this young would casually use words like “morrow,” “hither” and “yon.” I understand that their father is a professor who casually uses Latin with his English speaking children, but when the kids talk like this, regularly, I'm not convinced.
And WHY is Rosalind 12 and Batty 4?? Rosalind should have been 14, right from the start, and Batty should have been 6 or 7. Their ages do not align with their speech, their knowledge, nor their circumstances. My youngest is 12-years-old, in the 6th grade, and she's considered one of the “older” kids in her class. Rosalind, at 12, is already a 7th grader, contemplating things that would never enter my daughter's mind or come out of her mouth. I am surrounded by preteens and teens; I sometimes have up to 6 of them at my house at a time, and I can tell you HOW they talk and what they would and wouldn't say. Rosalind could easily be 28, the way she is written.
Regardless, it looks like I'll be reading ALL of these books, so I might as well make my peace with them.
I just get a little irritated when an author depicts children without really understanding how they behave or talk.