(Please forgive my acid tongue, I just got off work and am very hungry.)
This was all at once bland, all over the place, and pointless. For a driving school manga, I felt as though the driving part hardly took the precedent it should have. A big chunk of this was dedicated to either late night convenience store meetups and a manga research trip to Hokkaido. It was to the point where I felt like I was reading two different manga, one about driving, another about a mangaka who draws manga based on a guy he’s stalking. And both are bad.
And part of this is because the driver in question, our LI, has such a scattered personality. He dresses suave and cool at the driving school, and some people consider him a prince-type. But surprise, he’s also a mangaka who walks around in character merch. But we also see what he used to look like just two years ago when he worked at a convenience store. All three of these personas seem like utterly different characters to me, when really they’re just the same character at different times. I could never get a decent read on what type of person our LI actually is because he’s all at once flustered, calm, shy, brave, suave, cool, stalkerish, and respectful.
And Chiba, our protagonist, is much the same to me. They introduce a whole conflict in his past where a fellow instructor cheated on him, but they do that to explain why he doesn’t date students…? The logic doesn’t follow for me. I thought his trauma around dating students would be based around students themselves, but it wasn’t. Maybe they were trying to make a point of, “this is why he doesn’t date people from the school”, but all of it was just muddy. I feel like his conflict with being cheated on barely even makes a splash as he decides he’s into his LI extremely quickly.
The conflicts in this in general are so dumb and are such typical misunderstandings. Talk about a waste of time. The LI has been drawing a manga where the main man in it is based on Chiba. Chiba rightfully tells him that it’s very disturbing and a violation of his privacy. But then like seemingly a few days later they go on a trip together and are all buddy buddy again. It’s like, that severe of a conflict may as well have never happened if we were just going to end up brushing it off and touching butts anyways. If I found out someone I barely knew was characterizing me in their story, I would feel so upset, violated, embarrassed, and furious. Not to mention the person writing the story would probably feel deeply, deeply ashamed. It would be hard to come back from that.
This story just never gives the deep emotions that a situation requires. It feels like we’re just treading water the whole time. Nothing hits, and in my opinion, both characters are either unlikable, flat, or both. This just wasn’t well written or well thought out.
I think if you want a pretty good BL that involves going on drives, you should check out Flip, Flip Slowly, which has a great atmosphere as well as interesting characters.
If I had to describe this BL in one word, it would be “lazy”. It feels like the mangaka just threw whatever at the wall. It almost feels like this story didn’t have an editor checking the story, in my opinion. I think some feedback and tightening this up could have made it better. But as it is, it’s just so mediocre.