Sexy Superhero Romp
This story is not a serious super hero story, but a little closer to a "Penthouse Letter with Super Powers." It was fun to read, and a couple scenes had me wanting to go jump my wife, but it was missing some of the elements that are usually taken more seriously in supers novels.
For one thing, the author left out a fair amount of detail on some of the most critical fights and situations the protagonist had to deal with. Usually, in these sorts of novels, that is THE most important parts. I'm not sure if it was a point of his design, or what, but the sex scenes got a LOT of detail, and the foe who gave him the biggest fight of the novel wasn't even really described. We were told about his incredible action conflicts later, "but for now, let's peer in our protagonist while he's screwing his house slave." I think novelist was just attempting to focus on the relationships in the protagonist's life, rather than the usual action sugar.
Technically, the novel wasn't bad, but there were issues. Plot-wise, the pacing wasn't outstanding. This novel felt like 20 short stories taped together. Because the protagonist never seemed to be in dire conditions, for the most part, there were no real worry-ratcheting moments. I never felt unsure that the protagonist was going to win. Also, grammar and spelling were great in the first half or so, and then the author kind of fell off on that aspect...apostrophes used poorly, word choice errors, etc. We began to mourn the death of his editor at around 50%, almost exactly.
Overall, not a bad novel. I had fun reading it, which is the main thing.