Thank you so much to JJ Whit for this ARC!
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My rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ (2.75 stars rounded up to 3)
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So I have ophidophobia (extreme fear of snakes). When I say extreme, I mean it. I have nightmares about them. I don't like anything about them - the way they look, sound, and move is all terrifying to me. What possessed me to apply for an ARC with a snake on the cover and a synopsis that spoke of a world ruled by serpents, I have no idea. But I applied and got chosen and here we are. This book is a ya fantasy (the author's first foray into fantasy and young adult as she usually writes adult romance) but for me, parts of it were more like a horror novel due to my fear of snakes. But it is not the author's fault that I applied for this ARC when it was very clear the book was about snakes so I'm going to put aside my phobia for this review.
The concept of this book was really interesting and it had a lot of potential. Unfortunately, in my opinion, it wasn't executed very well. There were pacing issues and I did not like the writing style. The first forty percent of the book was mostly setup. This might not have been an issue except that it was clear that the setup could have been half that length. The scenes were stretched out too long to the point of being repetitive. Many things were reiterated multiple times just in slightly different wording. The book got better a little before the halfway mark, once the story started moving and there were less needlessly drawn-out scenes. However, though these issues lessened, they didn't disappear. There were several words, phrases, and descriptions that were overused. Ideas that I thought had already been established were being presented as brand new. There were too many similes, which in small doses would have been fine, there were times that I appreciated them, but the near constant nature of them was annoying. There were parts of this book that I enjoyed and elements that of it that were really cool - specifically I enjoyed the trials and some of the scenes of Keira and Eryx - but I had to force myself through much of it.