Haunted Mcmansion: "a true ghost story"

by Violet Exe

*This is a true story based on actual events. After working hard and achieving the American dream we had set out to build our dream home. We built our "Mcmansion", on what we thought was a prime piece of land in a rural town. Something in the earth was disturbed, and our beautiful home became a haunted dwelling, inhabited by an frightening ghost that infiltrated our lives and kept us terrified.

110 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 21, 2014

Reviews

[Marie]

This was a very scary true story! This book was a major page turner and I finished the book in one day! The family in this book went through a terrible endurance for 10 long years in a house that was super haunted. They probably would have got out of the house sooner but they didn't know about ghost or entities - they didn't realize that there is real life horror out there. They kept trying to find explanations for the things that were happening to them. This book will scare the pants off of you! Keep the light on with this one if you read it at night!

[P.S. Winn]

This was an interesting story and I think that unless a person has to actually go through something like this they aren't aware of the emotional toll it takes on people.This story was written by the author and tells her true story of what it is like to have a paranormal entity in your life.I found the book and the story compelling and hope the best for the people involved as they go forward in life, If you like to read about the paranormal and especially the psychological effects this is a story to pick up.

[Sooziemac McLaughlin]

Ok, breath and breathe

Are NOT interchangeable. Also, every word that is supposed to be plural does not have an apostrophe.
That's NOT how it works.
And, don't , use, so, many, comma's.
Remember, less, is, more.
Just, take, a, deep, breathe, and, everything's going to be all right.

[Karen Hyatt]

Might have been a good read....

I just couldn't get past all the grammatical and punctuation errors. I skipped to the end about halfway through the story.

[Stephanie Wright]

Short & Scary

Short and scary.... always hoping f or longer story err use that end with an answer on what was haunting them and maybe why?

[Stu Harris]

The story was really good, but I have to say that the book could use a review from a good editor. There were many grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors that made it hard to read in some places.

[Donna Minyard]

A good read !!!

I really enjoyed this story. I can relate to the author's experience. I've experienced some rather odd things in my life. This should be a cautionary tale to others. If you experience a ghostly presence, get out as soon as you can.

[Videoclimber(AKA)MTsLilSis]

For a true ghost story this was not very scary. This was very repetitive throughout. A quick read but not much to grab your attention.