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With everything around her crumbling, Scarlett’s vulnerability becomes the target of someone else's sinister plan, leaving her grappling with everything she feels and knows.
And if that wasn’t enough, her stepfather’s pressure to end her already fragile relationship with Elijah hangs over her head.
Their love is strained not only by their own struggles but also by his father’s disapproval, driving an even deeper wedge between father and son.
But Scarlett isn’t just fighting a battle for love, but one of freedom, for her people. Her father, Zidane, has ruled her birth pack with cruelty for years, and the time has come to end his reign of terror. With Elijah by her side, she must find the strength to take back what is rightfully hers and put an end to the suffering her people have endured for far too long.
Yet trust doesn’t come easy. Can Scarlett let Elijah back in and trust him enough to allow him to fight beside her?
With tensions at a breaking point, under growing pressure, they both attend the Blood Moon Ball. Will the night reveal them as fated mates or prove once and for all that they are not meant to be?
Will Scarlett and Elijah be able to put an end to Zidane once and for all?
As the final battle looms, Scarlett and Elijah must fight not only for her pack’s freedom but also for their own love. Will they rise together, or will their forbidden bond be snuffed out before it ever has the chance to truly burn?

Book 2 of the Power of Bonds Saga brings the conclusion to Elijah and Scarlett’s epic love story, a thrilling rewrite of Her Forbidden Alpha.This book is a work of fiction and contains adult content. Including violence & explicit content. Due to the nature of the series, you should expect to come across various subject matter that some readers may find disturbing and is intended for readers 18+. Please read responsibly and know your own limits before diving in.

458 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 14, 2025

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Profile Image for Justine M.
105 reviews1 follower
March 15, 2025
There are some books that you instinctively know that you thoroughly enjoyed and don’t want to reread in case you ruin the magic. This book most definitely doesn’t fall into that category!

The change from third person to first person tense brings a whole new dimension and depth to an already brilliant book in my opinion. The additional content further enriches this read for the second time round. I already know that I’ll be reading this book again (and maybe again and again 😉). If you already fell in love with the cocky Alpha and feisty badass Alpha/Luna Red I promise you’ll fall that bit more. Highly recommend 💖
Profile Image for Kitty Kat  Davis.
7 reviews
February 12, 2025
What a rollercoaster!!!! This book has everything you want in a story and more! Muse's storytelling in this re-write is simply magnificent🥰
Profile Image for Rustanette Yosores.
24 reviews3 followers
March 23, 2025
My Only Luna was a bit hard to read—not because of the writing, but because I already had an idea of how things would turn out. However, compared to the original, this version is much clearer and gives us deeper insight into each character. We get to know their friends—a guy and a girl—on a more personal level, understanding the emotions they secretly hide.

I won’t spoil anything, but the battle was absolutely heartbreaking for me. I also loved how the famous brothers stepped in to help—it was such a powerful moment! Muse is truly an incredible author. Even though this is a rewrite, she managed to make us revisit Her Forbidden Alpha while still making it feel like a brand-new story.

As always, her books get a 5/5 rating from me because of how she immerses readers in her world and leaves us in awe. As for the spicy scenes, I’d give them a 4/5. I can’t wait for the next book!
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10 reviews
March 15, 2025
⭐ Rating: ★★★★☆ (4.5/5)

🌶️ Spice Level: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️ (Steamy but emotionally intense)

📚 Trope: Forbidden Step-Sibling Romance, Alpha Female, Fated Mates, Slow Burn, Pack Politics

🔮 Genre: Paranormal Romance / Werewolf Fantasy


Scarlett – The FMC
Scarlett isn’t just any she-wolf—she’s the first Alpha Female, a role no one expected and even fewer accepted. She’s strong, fierce, and determined to carve her own path. But fate has other plans, and when she finds herself drawn to the one man she shouldn’t want, resisting becomes its own kind of war.

Elijah – The MMC
Elijah is cocky, dominant, and used to getting what he wants. He never cared about love, nor did he believe in the mate bond. Until Scarlett. The push and pull between them is pure tension—electric, dangerous, and completely irresistible.

👀 Supporting Cast & Pack Politics
One thing I loved about My Only Luna is that it’s not just about the romance—the world-building is compelling. From Grandma Amy’s feisty charm to the intricacies of pack dynamics, rivalries, and expectations, the story feels alive.

🖋️ Writing Style & Pacing
The writing is smooth, intense, and emotionally gripping. The author does an amazing job of balancing angst, passion, and raw emotion. The tension between Scarlett and Elijah? Absolutely palpable.

✨ Overall Thoughts
🔥 My Only Luna is the second book of the duet rewrite of Her forbidden Alpha. It delivers on forbidden romance, slow-burning tension, and the struggle between fate and choice. It’s a fast-paced, addictive read that pulls you in from page one. If you love dominant Alphas, strong heroines, and emotional depth, you’ll devour this one. Make sure to read part 1 : My Forbidden Alpha, before diving into it.

📌 Highly recommend for fans of:
✔️ Forbidden Romance
✔️ Fated Mates vs. Chosen Mates
✔️ Werewolf Pack Dynamics
✔️ Alpha Male Energy + Strong-Willed FMC

📢 Both books now available now on Kindle!
Profile Image for Kellyanne.
146 reviews4 followers
March 15, 2025
My Only Luna continues straight after the cliff-hanger we were left with from book one My Forbidden Alpha.

The rollercoaster ride continues for Elijah and Scarlett in the second part of this rewrite and with the points of view being in first person it continues to add even more depth to the characters, their journey and Muse’s telling of this amazing paranormal love story.

If you have read the original book Her Forbidden Alpha, then you will appreciate the length that Muse has gone to enhance the content of this outstanding book.

The journey that Elijah and Scarlett embark on to overcome the hurdles that they face to be together will pull at your heartstrings. Their romantic journey is just laden with betrayal, heart break, loss, revelations and suspense.

The growth you see in Scarlett’s character is wonderful. You see this strong confident Alpha female finally let down her barriers to let Elijah into her heart. Knowing he is willing to stand by her side no matter what gives her the added strength and encouragement she needs to face her past and overcome it. Letting nothing she has been through discourage her.

I do see Elijah in a new light and love how his character changes and softens to win the heart of his one and only Luna. He has the charm to just make you fall in love with him even more in this rewrite.

The supporting characters that are introduced will have you laughing, crying, shouting and pulling your hair out.

I must admit that this book kept me on tenterhooks from start to finish and I found a new appreciation for Scarlett and Elijah's passionate and intense love story.

I can’t wait as I am so looking forward to seeing how the rest of the re writes go for this series.
Exciting times ahead I predict.

Note - I was lucky to receive this copy as an ARC. I also went on to purchase a copy on kindle.
Profile Image for Eszti Balog.
45 reviews8 followers
March 26, 2025
Through all obstacles and past traumas

It’s the 2nd book of the Power of the Bonds Saga. Rewrite of the Alpha series.
I thought I know what am I in it for as I read the original book, Her Forbidden Alpha. But I was wrong. Very wrong...

After the cliffhanger of the 1st book we dived right into the mess of someone who couldn't control themselves.
I was satisfied the punishment and Red Just grew in my eyes even more. I loved her feisty personality but that one move... Wow...

After everything Elijah was there for her, didn't let Red push her away, and let me tell you, she wasn't subtle.
I loved how both character changed in this book. Elijah was all for Scarlett since he realized he loves her. And he wasn't even let another come between them.
Red was hesitant but even her knew she wasn't as happy as she is with her handsome, cerulean eyed man.

There is a character I loved and mourned in the end and I feel even more delighted knowing his memory will be there for us.
Muse's writing always fascinates me, but what she did in this story, I just want to bow down in front of her.

The detailed explanations of certain events added deeper meaning of a character or their actions.
I loved everything in this book. The spice level became high, and I know their bedroom activities just became a lot more energetic than before.

Thank you Muse for this rewrite, I will forever be grateful for Elijah, who proved that a playboy can be loyal if he finds the right woman. And I am happy to know Red, the strong and fierce Alpha Female, who didn't let her past define her.

With that, I still have to warn you about the triggers, Muse wrote down at the beginning of the story. Know your triggers and venture carefully!
Profile Image for Kassia DeVane.
Author 8 books56 followers
March 15, 2025
“For everyone searching for their Elijah, don’t settle for less than you deserve”

I read Her Forbidden Alpha when Muse wrote it and have been in love with Elijah and Scarlett's story since.

I was so nervous for the rewrites exactly because Elijah is my favorite, but I should have trusted the Muse Goddess. Changing to first person and giving a more in-depth view of the characters makes this feel like an entirely new story.

Elijah is dedicated to loving Scarlett despite the taboo of their relationship and her crippling insecurities. Elijah is everything a man should be, sexy, strong, smart, protective, all the best "Alpha" qualities without any of the bad ones. Truly just an amazing man. A lot of authors weaken their male characters so their females will appear strong by comparison, but not Muse.

Scarlett is every bit the Alpha Elijah is and the epitome of a strong woman, not just physically strong, but her compassion, empathy and strength of character. I love that she still has insecurities and self doubt to overcome, I think that is what makes her the most relatable.

This is a beautiful duo that sets up an amazing series. Everything Muse writes is pure gold and this one is a masterpiece. I cannot say enough good things about this book, especially if I avoid spoilers.

Werewolves, Alpha, Fated mates, Strong female, forbidden love, spicy romance. This book hits every note.
52 reviews5 followers
March 20, 2025
This is the second Book of The Power of Bonds Saga. Elijah & Scarlett's epic love story started in Book 1 - "My Forbidden Alpha" and found its conclusion in "My Only Luna". I suggest you to read book 1 first before starting this one. These books are the rewrites of Muse's popular book " Her Forbidden Alpha".

These rewrites are so awesome and wonderfully written with amazing storyline, great word building, Multiple POVs, added conversations , Intense Emotions and spice.

Scarlett is Bold & Beautiful first ever Alpha female blessed by Moon Goddess. She endured so much in the past but still came out to be strong. She faced her fears & traumas bravely and fought fiercely with the ones who did her wrong.

Elijah is Hot & Handsome Alpha. We can see his tremendous character growth from playboy Alpha to doted and supportive lover. He is so possessive & protective of Scarlett. He has decided that She's The Only Luna for him with or without the mate bond . He always chose her in any conditions and stood by her side in any circumstances and supported her in her decisions and her battle against her cruel father to end his region of terror.

They both fought for their love and became power couple. I love their romantic moments, playful teasing, emotional & tender moments , explosive chemistry and passionate spicy scenes.

Muse has written Elijah & Scarlett's incredible love story so beautifully that you can't help but fall in love with them more once again.
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470 reviews22 followers
March 12, 2025
(Dark (read the trigger warnings), paranormal/werewolf romance, stepsiblings, forced proximity, heroine in danger, touch her and d!3, sassy and strong FMC, playboy MMC)

This is part two of the rewrite of Her Forbidden Alpha. This new version is written in various character POVs and really adds to the story! Part two starts up at the end of book one's cliffhanger!

Original write: Her Forbidden Alpha
Part one rewrite: My Forbidden Alpha
Part two rewrite: My Only Luna

This was a thrilling and spicy dark werewolf romance and I really enjoyed it!

This is not only dark but also taboo romance with stepsiblings and I ate it up. (Not blood related FYI) This story was full of action, pack dynamics and drama between all the characters. It made me FEEL just like part one!

As noted in my book one review, the FMC has past trauma, please read the TWs, and it really added to her character growth through both parts. The MMC is a well-known playboy and, although I don't typically like this in an MMC, it really added to the story and made for some good drama. Once a playboy always a playboy, right!?

This book was a great conclusion to the story! It was interesting, thrilling and delicious. Check it out!
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105 reviews6 followers
March 17, 2025
So for the second part of the rewrite, I have to admit that I fell all over again.
The story of Elijah and Scarlett continues and as her true capabilities come to light, so does their forbidden relationship. Through difficulties, they end up together silencing those who were against them.
Things I loved:
- Elijah's resilience regarding Scarlett's denial in the beginning.
- The Blood Moon scene. It's my favorite from all the mate scenes I read; though I have a confession: the original line in HFA when Scarlett realizes they are mates 'There he stood...' is stuck in my head and I don't think I can ever forget it.
- The different POVs. Especially Aunt Amelia and the real reason she treated Jackson like that. Also, Jessica's suffering when she learned the truth about Scarlett's healing.
- The spicy and steamy moments were again OTP.
- The end... Just makes me want to go and re-re read Alejandro. Yeah and now wait for Rafael and Maria's story... Well, in Al's style: Can't F!..ing Wait.
It was an excellent read and I enjoyed it very very much. What I want to emphasize is the fact that even if I knew the plot I was eager to read one more chapter every night, even if I had stuff to do...
I highly recommend it.
Profile Image for Linda  Mercorio.
19 reviews1 follower
March 19, 2025
My Only Luna by Moonlight Muse continues from My Forbidden Alpha. It concludes the Elija/Scarlett arc in The Power of Bonds Saga.

In this book we discover more about Scarlett's heartbreaking past where many secrets are revealed leading to emotional turmoil for many of the characters. After the blood moon - Scarlett and Elija, with the assistance of other allies, tackle the problem of her psychotic father. The story continues after those main events and opens the door for the next couple in the arc which will be Rafael and Maria.

This story had me holding my breath in places, spitting mad at certain events and characters, and extremely emotional many times. Moonlight Muse tears your heart out but gently puts it together again making you feel all extremes of the emotional spectrum. If you are looking for a well-rounded book that has spice, emotion, action and completely loveable and unlikeable characters then this is for you. But don't read it without reading My Forbidden Alpha first.

Once you have read these 2 books you will be hooked and the good news is that there are other books to read by Moonlight Muse - which I highly recommend as every single one of her books are amazing. The world building, the plots and the characters are always gripping and really draw you in.
Profile Image for Yudith Camacho.
99 reviews
February 25, 2025
I absolutely loved Elijah and Scarlett’s story the first time I read it, but getting to experience it again from their POV? Incredible. Seeing their thoughts, their emotions, and getting a deeper look into their love story made it even more special. And the added bonus of learning more about the other characters? it was jus amazing.

But let’s talk about Liam. Oh my heart. The first time I read about him, I mourned hard. He was the first character from Muse’s books who truly broke me, and after reading about him again, I know for sure he’ll always have a special place in my heart. Seeing how much he meant to Elijah and Scarlett, and then them naming their kids after him? That was just everything.

And the attack that injured Kiara? Absolutely devastating. Seeing Elijah and Scarlett so heartbroken, with Elijah feeling like he failed even though he did everything he could—it was just so painful to read. Their love, their pain, their strength… it all just made me love them even more.

This book was beautiful in every way. Emotional, heartbreaking, and filled with so much love. Elijah and Scarlett will forever be my favorite power couple
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
6 reviews
March 14, 2025
Once again I'm left speechless by Author Moonlight Muse's work.

I read this story twice before, but this re-write brings a whole new dept to the characters and their path in the story and I'm so glad I had the privilege of receiving an ARC.

After the leaving us in a clifhanger in book 1, MOL take's us in an incredible and emotional ride in the most amazing roallercoaster, through Elijah and Scarlett's story.
In this second book we get to know more of Scarlett's heartbreaking past, but the way she was abble to confront it and turn trauma into strenght forging a new path, was one of my favourite parts. As for Elijah's we watch him grow as the story progresses and turn from a playboy to a real man, who stands by the one he loves, no matter what.
This book made smile, cry with the most emotional scenes, but also bluch ocasionaly from all the spicy scenes, that are placed just wright.
It is really a wonderful story, written masterfully by the most amazing author who, once again, leaves us anxiously waiting for the next chapter...
Can't wait to see what book 3 will bring.
Congrats Moonlight Muse
Profile Image for Claire Montgomery.
189 reviews3 followers
March 15, 2025
An truly exhilarating read

I have devoured this book in a day not being able to stop reading it.
This is book 2 in the Power of bonds saga series and the second part of Elijah and Scarletts story.
It is a shifter romance with a taboo relationship of step siblings.
Elijah and Scarlett face many battles in both the fight for each other, their pack and their lives.
This book is action packed with family, friends, found family, spice, betrayal, an epic battle and sizzling spice.
This is a rewrite of a book I have read twice before and what an amazing job the author has done. Moonlight muse shows multiple povs through this book which helps you understand side characters, what's going through their heads in different scenarios. These are few and far between so don't in any way distract from the main characters but help build a bigger more in depth story. This is something I have rarely seen and often wish for and I love that the author does this.
If you are a fan of shifter romance then I honestly can't recommend both parts of this story enough. Moonlight use is always an instant read for me and never fails to hit every emotion available when reading her books.
Profile Image for Laura Montesinos.
83 reviews1 follower
March 17, 2025
I thought I wouldn't cry... Since I've read the OG book several times. I thought I would be safe from the tears.

Man was I wrong. Moonlight Muse pulls everything out of you. And when you think she's done...she pulls more.

Book 2 picks up from the cliffhanger left in book 1. Scarlett's left feeling betrayed and losing trust in Elijah. While Elijah is sure of his feelings for her and he's dedicated to show her.

I love how even with this being a retelling, we were able to get so much more of the pieces that I always wondered about. More in depth POV's with multiple POV's. You get the parts from everyone where it makes so much sense for the current book as well as the books to come.

Scarlett remains the strong Alpha female that she is, while being able to lean into a softer side for Elijah.

I loved the added parts of asking for Liam's name and finding out how she found her daughters name. It was a truly beautiful touch and I'm thrilled with the way she ended the book, giving us the perfect stopping point to bring in the next books.

This book is amazing all around with lots of spice, tears, and even some laughter.
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55 reviews
March 26, 2025
This is the 2nd book to the two book remastered story of "Her Forbidden Alpha". This new series is the remastered and additional stories called The Power of Bonds Saga.

Initially I was nervous about the rewrite, because I loved the story the way it was and didn't want it to change; however, I was wrong. This remastered story is better than the first. I love all the different POVs from not only the two main characters but from also the side characters. Just reading their POVs and their feelings allowed you to connect with them more. Having read the original did not even take away from going through the different emotions with this book, as well as part one. This book starts exactly where the first book left off so you will need to read part one first.

It’s the conclusion of Elijah and Scarlett's love story and what they have to overcome to get their HEA. It's not an easy ride, so I will say please read the trigger warnings. I laughed and cried; my heart broke in areas like it was the first time I read it. I will always recommend this book, it's that good. And it's one that I can read over and over again.
8 reviews
March 22, 2025
Elijah's only luna

In the second book of Elijah and Scarlett's forbidden love story, Elijah's determination to have Scarlett as the only woman in his life, is proven over and over again. He is ready to defy fate and give up his alpha title.

What I love about this book is the way Elijah stood by Scarlett side in any circumstances, giving her space to fight her own battles, but always remembering her that she is not alone. He is a man admiring her strength, caring for her vulnerabilities. Not scared of the sharp edges of her scars.

Scarlett is a strong and resilient she wolf that can take her own challenges alone. She learns to share her burden with someone she trusts. She is the first alpha female and true to the title.

This book has it all, the story telling, moments that bring you tears, steam and passion, family bonds, humor and dark.

Moonlight Muse beautifully wrapped this love story, with added POVs, in debth details and with characters that are defying fate. She brought two strong alphas that fight side by side.
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11 reviews
March 13, 2025
My Only Luna (Part 2 of My Forbidden Alpha) delivers a captivating conclusion, seamlessly blending strength, vulnerability, and deep emotional growth.

Scarlett is the definition of an Alpha—fierce, strong, and confident—but what truly makes this story stand out is how it highlights the power of vulnerability.

Throughout the book, we witness Scarlett’s incredible personal growth as she slowly lets Elijah in, learning to share her trauma and overcome it with his unwavering love and support. Their journey is beautifully written (it’s Moonlight Muse, so that’s no surprise), making every moment between them feel raw and real.

The plot is engaging, setting the stage for an exciting continuation of the series. The addition of new POVs brings even more depth and insight, enriching the overall experience.

If you haven’t read this yet, do yourself a favor and dive in—because, honestly, who wouldn’t want an Elijah in their life?

I can't wait for the rest of the rewrites!
Profile Image for Annarose Krone.
14 reviews
March 4, 2025
The dedication immediately got me:
“For everyone searching for their Elijah, don’t settle for less than you deserve”

Elijah set all the standards for me in the beginning of ~book boyfriends~. So if you like shifter romances, spice, and the gods always interfering with it all—read this series, but make sure to start with My Forbidden Alpha (pt 1 to this book). Bonus: you don’t have to experience the cliffhanger because this book (pt 2) is here!

Muse created a unique world that grew so much that there’s 13 books, 1 serializing, 2 novellas, and more in the works. I’m happy she decided to go back to the beginning and rewrite this book—not only for the POV style, but the overall growth of the story itself. I got to learn about the characters more in depth, and the writing is more consistent with the series than the first version (which I still loved, haha).

I do want to trigger warn that there is domestic violence and child abuse, but it is not glorified in any way and more of the back story.
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593 reviews15 followers
March 15, 2025
“If I have to choose between being an Alpha and Scarlett, I’ll choose her. Every single fucking time.”

In this book, we see the conclusion of Elijah and Scarlett’s love story.

Here, we see how their love is tested in different ways and how they prove time and time again that they are each other's endgame, whether they're fated or not. We also see both Scarlett and Elijah come into power and the conclusion of the war, which brought some betrayal and a very painful loss.

This story has a little bit of everything, and even though it is a long story, it never feels like it's dragging. Also, Muse does an excellent job at building the foundation for the rest of the series.

Quote: “You are the one I have given myself to. How can I give away something I no longer possess? You hold my heart, Elijah. You, and only you.”
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Author 1 book1 follower
March 15, 2025
Moonlight Muse's "My Only Luna" is a captivating addition to the Power Bonds Saga, expertly concluding the intense love story of Elijah and Scarlett. This remastered version strikes the perfect balance between passion and conflict, showcasing their undeniable chemistry as a possessive Alpha and a fierce, seductive Luna. The story is a rollercoaster of emotions, rife with tests of loyalty, power struggles, and heart-wrenching betrayals, yet it remains compelling from start to finish, never losing momentum even at its length. Muse's masterful storytelling not only ties up this couple's journey but also lays a strong foundation for future books in the series, making it a must-read for fans of the genre. As one poignant quote states, "You hold my heart, Elijah. You, and only you." This sentiment perfectly encapsulates the depth of their connection and the enduring appeal of their saga.
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242 reviews
March 17, 2025
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Rating
🌶️ 🌶️ 🌶️ Spice

My Only Luna marks the breathtaking conclusion to *The Power of Bonds Saga*. It explores the depth of Scarlett and Elijah’s bond as it faces trials from both external adversaries and internal family struggles. I adore how Muse reimagines Scarlett and Elijah’s story in the first person, transforming it into a fresh, unique narrative distinct from its rendition on GoodNovel.

Muse’s talent for creating not only resilient, compelling female protagonists but also remarkable supporting characters has always drawn me to her work. It’s one of the traits that sets her writing apart.

If you’ve yet to venture into the world of shifter romance, this is the perfect place to start. It’s where it began for me, and it’s where Muse’s intricate, captivating universe truly comes to life.
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11 reviews
March 19, 2025
THE RISE OF THE ALPHA QUEEN


Scarlett has spent her life surviving, but now? Now she’s ready to fight. The monster from her past wants her back, but she won’t be caged again. With Elijah by her side, she faces her demons, her destiny, and a battle that will change everything. This book isn’t just about love—it’s about power, resilience, and becoming something more. And let’s just say… the rise of the first Female Alpha? Chills.

Moonlight Muse took My Forbidden Alpha and turned it into something even more powerful with this duet, and I am OBSESSED. The chemistry between Elijah and Scarlet is 🌶️🌶️🌶️. The tension, the passion 🔥🔥🔥, the heartbreak—this story has it all. If you love forbidden romances with a mix of action, strong heroines, and possessive Alphas who will burn the world down for their mate, heartbreak, and swoon-worthy moments, you need to read this duet!
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18 reviews
March 24, 2025
If you love werewolves, forbidden love stories, and book the make feel every emotion throughout the journey…then this a must read!!

This is a rewrite to her book, Her Forbidden Alpha and you really need to read the first book My Forbidden Alpha to get the complete story.

This beautifully written and keeps you on the edge of your seat and wanting more. The story follows Scarlet and Elijah after the first book ends. This retelling gives you more depth and background to the original story (yes, you should read that too because Moonlight Muse’s books are amazing and the Museverse hooks you in and makes you want to read more).

This book has love, lost, epic battle scenes, a strong sexy FMC and hot headed love struck MMC. This book has everything you want in a spicy shifter romance and more!!!
105 reviews4 followers
March 13, 2025
This book starts right where My Forbidden Alpha finishes giving you all the romance, tension, dispair and action that the first book put in place. In this story not only does our Alpha female have to deal with her violent father but the mate ball looms and although Elijah has said she is his Luna there are doubts that he would reject her as promised. They also have to deal with Jackson and his denial and not understanding their relationship.

I loved this book the first time round and the re writes just add something extra and special. The change of POV just adds more to the characters and the tension in the storylines. The battle scene towards the end is intense and so brilliantly written that it had me in tears even though I knew what happened.

This book kept me hooked from start to finish and made me fall in love with Scarlett and Elijah's intense relationship all over again. It made me laugh, smile and cry and introduces us to my favourite Muse character, Alejandro. I can't wait to see how well the rest of the re writes go for this series.

I received this as an ARC and am leaving my own review
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309 reviews6 followers
March 20, 2025
It is a love story, yes. Romantasy, definitely. However, the one thing that often gets overlooked is the action sequences. For me, they were described so well that while reading, I felt like I was actually in the middle of the conflict. I've read the succeeding books, so I know there is more to follow, but it didn't take away from the enjoyment of anticipating what will happen in upcoming books when certain characters are highlighted.

Even with fictional characters, I have difficulty dealing with important players dying or getting hurt, so you can probably imagine me hiding behind a pillow while reading the battle scenes.

All around an EXCELLENT STORY! I would tag it as a MUST READ, but you need to make sure to read MY FORBIDDEN ALPHA first.
Profile Image for Sarah Lowe.
141 reviews14 followers
February 16, 2025
My all-time favourite book is the original Her Forbidden Alpha, and I loved the rewritten versions just as much. The original was split into a two-part rewrite, with My Forbidden Alpha being the first part, available on Kindle, and My Only Luna being the second part, which has just been completed.

As a new Indie Author, I was blown away by Her Forbidden Alpha when I first read it, getting so lost in the story that I forgot about my real-world troubles. When I heard it was being rewritten, I was thrilled. Author Moonlight Muse delved deeper into the characters' motivations and added more POVs, making the story even more engaging. I was sad to see it end.
212 reviews2 followers
March 15, 2025
This is the second story for Elijah and Scarlett, and there’s even more plot twists.

This story comes straight in from the cliff hanger from My Forbidden Alpha which threatens to tear Elijah and Scarlett apart and then chaos erupts, battles are fought, hidden secrets are revealed, it’s a rather big emotional rollercoaster until the very end. They have to fight it out to help Scarlett’s original pack where her dad reigns.

I really love this O.G Alpha Couple! They have developed such a dynamic relationship, they are ready to defy all odds with their forbidden relationship being step siblings and having to attend a Bloodmoon mating bond to find their fated mates. Blood is spilt, tensions remain high most of the time, It is such a thrilling read and I cried many times throughout, but it was such a beautiful end to Elijah and Scarlett’s story.

My thoughts on the characters:
Elijah- oh I am so happy he grew up and matured a little bit more. He’s still typical Alpha male- possessive, arrogant and still draws you in and you can’t not love him! I love seeing his defensive side especially when he stands up against his dad- Jackson (the Jerk) and hes a bit of a romantic with our girl, Scarlett. He is on his way to become one very amazing Alpha.

Scarlett is an absolute firestorm of a kickass Alpha Female- Elijah has met his match! She’s grown more confident, she’s a force to be reckoned with, an absolute babe who is as possessive and stubborn as Elijah. Give him hell Scar!! I absolutely adore her nickname, Red- so much feeling in such a small word but when you read Elijah say it, it melts your insides a little.

Hello Young Alejandro ;)
Cannot wait to see more of you
IYKYK
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1,745 reviews21 followers
March 8, 2025
Scarlett & Elijha
Step siblings
Werewolves
Past trauma
Fated mates
Part 2 of 2

This book is a rewrite of "Her Forbidden Alpha", which will always have a special place in my heart as it was the book that got me back into reading in 2022.

I love this book and the rewrite is so good!

I'm not a huge fan of third person so I love that this has changed to first person, I feel like it gives so much more depth to the story as well. I also love the additional content that has been added too ❤️

This book is a rollercoaster of emotions and you won't be disappointed 😍

I cannot wait for the next rewrites!!!
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473 reviews3 followers
March 17, 2025
Picks up right where My Forbidden Alpha ends. There is a shift in this book. It's less YA immature stuff and even less spice, still some spice but it's more balanced, with focus more around the storyline and drama and the romance of Scarlett & Elijah as they commit to each other.

There is a lot of predictable content;
The mates ball.
Fiona.
Alejandro, Rafael's brother, hints at his differences.

The storyline wraps up at 90%
The last 10% jumps into the future, focused around the offspring of the couples.
My assumption confirmed, setup for Alejandro book, which I now want because that ending intrigues me.
Another predictable twist on who his mate is?
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