I fell in love with this book when I was in high school; the phantom-vibe of it totally won me over, and I count it as one of my favorite books of ALL TIME. However, the book definitely has some major flaws and sticking plot points that make for a terrible read.
Once the hero and heroine are together, there seems to be no driving catalyst to keep the story going. They're together, they're wealthy, they have great friends--the end. Or, at least, it should have been... Valiantly though, Vale Allen trudges on...like 200 pages on...and the reader is treated to the problems bored socialites have when they have too much money and not enough sense. Oh, and randomly enough,we are also informed of various methods of birth control and their horrid, strange side effects... Trust me, by the end of the novel, you will be rooting for sterility for both the hero and the heroine.
They should NOT reproduce!
But ultimately, if you're looking for a modern retelling of PoTO, Night Magic may suit the bill...but honestly, there is much better FanFiction out there you can get your hands on for free ;D
xxkattiaxx