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256 pages, Hardcover
First published February 1, 2015
This is a brilliantly-constructed short story collection from Virginia-born but West-By-God-Virginia-raised Ann Pancake. I had to read this as soon as I saw the title.
Ann Pancake’s short stories excel as “slice of life” narratives. Her stories, rather than building to a climax or springing a surprise ending, are perfectly evocative of the set and setting she selected for the tale. I could hear the sounds, smell the smells, and feel the atmosphere in every single one of these stories, each of which are set in the most rural mountains of West Virginia.
The author had me hooked when I read this spot-on description of the autumn sky in the mountains: “Late bright October and the kind of blue like, if you struck the sky with a pipe it would ring.” (“Rockhounds,” p. 236).
There are several excellent stories here. “In Such a Light” finds a college student home for the summer who spends her free time hanging out with mentally-deficient Uncle Bobby and her angry and moody neighbor-boy Nathan.
In “Mouseskull,” an old hired hand moves into a family’s icehouse, bringing with him albino cats and a ouija board.
Two of the best stories are “Arsonists” and “Dog Song.” In “Arsonists,” the narrator’s friend paranoid Kenny has become convinced that someone is torching the houses of those who won’t sell out to the coal company as it prepares for “mountaintop removal” mining.
In “Dog Song,” Motley ain’t right, but he loves his collection of strays and misfit animals - and now they are disappearing one by one.
This poor review does not capture the essence of or do justice to Ann Pancake’s storytelling, but she perfectly captures the essence of the disquiet if not despair commonly shared by rural folks everywhere who feel that control of their lives is in someone else’s hands.
My rating: 7.25/10, finished 4/18/22 (3636).