Nerve Damage has an interesting enough idea, even if it becomes more than a tad preposterous by the end, and and a cast of idiosyncratic characters, but the clunky writing really detracted from my overall enjoyment. I really appreciated the focus on research, as well as the ER work, even if it was from the American pharma perspective which was a little jarring to my brain having worked so long in academic clinical research.
The premise of this is interesting; a suspicious death that doesn't look suspicious on the surface, a research project with the potential to have a life-changing impact on those with spinal cord injuries, three dedicated - mostly - clinicians, alongside a helping of ER drama. It should be an absolute winner, particularly as medical thrillers absolutely fascinate me. And to begin with, it did. Even if the clunky dialogue in particular had me rolling my eyes at points, the narrative drew me in. The idea behind the research fascinated me and I liked the slice of life aspects that involved the ER.
But I do think this would have been a far more solid offering if the author had stuck to the realms of what he knows best; the medical side with a side of the police investigation into the suspicious death and the pathology. Instead as the plot picks up pace it careens into something wildly improbable and highly unbelievable. Corporate shenanigans, drug crazed mania, assassinations and kidnapping all thrown in together detracted from the really interesting aspects of the novel, as well as making it increasingly far-fetched. One of the above may have been fine, but it almost felt like the author was throwing things at the wall to see what stuck but ended up with all of it.
Between this and the clunky writing, I found this a disappointing read in honesty. I was looking forward to reading a medical thriller and whilst there were some medical aspects to it - quite a lot, in fairness - they ended up over shadowed by the all of the rest of the crazy stuff.