*this review contains minor spoilers*
Y'know, I've been reading books a long time. True, fantasy usually isn't my preferred genre, but I don't think I've ever read or heard of a book involving fantasy with *crows* before. That was definitely, I think, the most interesting thing about this book - well, that and the opening chapters/introduction. With that being said, let's get started, shall we?
Crow's Rest starts off with a BANG and I think the very first chapter is one of the most engaging/interesting hooks I've read in a long time. The novel starts off with the main character - Avery - finding out that one of her best friends has landed himself in the hospital. I won't go into the how or why, but by the time he gets out, Avery realizes that, hey - Daniel isn't quite the same boy that he had been when she saw him last summer.
I thoroughly liked the plot of the book up until this point, but the turn in which Avery realizes that something's up with Daniel read like something straight up out of Twilight, when Bella confronts Edward about being a vampire (this book doesn't have anything to do with vampires, I'm just saying that the revelation itself feels very similar). And when Daniel/Lonan (that name split will be made clear once you read the book, aha) realizes that she's found out his 'secret,' he... doesn't really do much about it. The scene with the crows was cool, but the actual face-to-face confrontation is just sort of like "oh, yeah, this is what I am and, uh, hey, I kind of need your help with a Very Important Thing. You chill with that?" And after that, there were definitely plot points here and there that didn't really...click together very well? Just, like, every once in awhile there would be a plot point that came up that didn't seem to connect very well. Think like a puzzle piece that fit into the RIGHT puzzle, but in the WRONG location, but it was being forced in anyway. That's what some parts of this book felt like - another word I can think of to describe it is sort of "patchy."
As for Avery herself, I... don't really know how to feel about her character. Her first person narration flows VERY easily and this was a quick read (less than 24 hours I think?) because of how well her narration flowed. However, while there were some parts that Avery was a funny, even relatable, character, other parts read very... oddly. I think the author was trying a little *too* hard to fit in with the teenage narration and "modern lingo." It kind of read like when you tell a joke in front of a roomful of people, but nobody laughs and you're just left feeling very... awkward and uncomfortable.
Speaking of Avery, though, there's another situation in this book that I want to talk about and that is: the romance. The summary of this book is a little deceiving because it makes it sound like Avery is pining after one guy, Daniel. But really, there are TWO guys she likes - three if you count the third person, Nykur, that she briefly expresses some, uh, desire for:
“...Nykur still had a direct line to my thoughts. Even the naughty ones.”
In fact, Avery expresses, uh, 'naughty thoughts' for three guys. Which wouldn't be so bad, I don't think (*waves in asexual*), except for the fact that besides her old, old great-uncle and her briefly-mentioned father, there are literally only *four* members of the male species mentioned in this novel. And, including Nykur, she wants to screw three of them:
"We could sort it out face to face—or lips to lips, hips to hips...” (referencing Daniel)
“I shrieked as he pulled me down beside him, and for the next couple of hours, showed me exactly how up for the challenge he was.” (referencing Lonan)
And I KNOW that sex is not a bad thing and I'm not trying to "slut shame" the main character (don't come for me, Goodreads), but it just... seems like... a lot. Especially when there are basically only four characters (excluding family members) with the XY chromosomes and you've got more important things - like, say, trying to get your best friend back into his own body? - to worry about. And overall, the love triangle was just handled... kind of lazily, I think? I won't say how that all turned out, but it was pretty anticlimactic. I've said in other reviews that love triangles typically aren't my favorite thing in the world in general, but this one just sort of felt particularly dull.
So, overall, I don't know how I feel about Avery. However, I DO like Lonan - he was easily my favorite character - and I like the concept of being able to "trade places," essentially, with the faeries and experience their world. That, and the plot with "running out of time" with the moon, and the crows, were my favorite bits of this novel.
Overall, my thoughts and feelings are very back and forth with one another. This novel was not at all bad - like I said, the hook was GREAT, the inclusion of the crows was very unique, Avery's narration read very quickly and naturally, and Lonan is my favorite character. I just wish there was... more. A lot of things felt very forced trying to connect together and the ending, I feel, was the weakest part of the book - it's the first in a series, but didn't really have an ending impactful enough to lead into a second book. However, if you like fantasy and faeries (and crows!), I think it's still worth giving this book a go. I think the concept behind the plot is very unique, I just think it could have been... developed a bit better.