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Heavy Hearts
It was Blaise Pascal who wrote "The heart has its reasons which reason knows not," and that couldn't be more true for love-struggling Lucy Whitten.
This romantic time jumping tale takes you back into Lucy's past and spiraling into her present where three men all confess their undying love to her. When she finds herself caught in the center of this epic love triangle it takes a heavy heart to decide whose heart to love, and whose hearts to break.
This romantic time jumping tale takes you back into Lucy's past and spiraling into her present where three men all confess their undying love to her. When she finds herself caught in the center of this epic love triangle it takes a heavy heart to decide whose heart to love, and whose hearts to break.
- GenresRomance
203 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 26, 2014
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Kylie Kaemke
2 books28 followersI'm just a normal girl who loves to write, read, and do fangirlish things. If you see me in real life stop to give me a high five!
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May 18, 2016
This book is much lighter than what I usually read, which was a nice change for me. It was like going on a trip somewhere and having a good time. I always prefer the bad boys, so Finn was my favorite. I don't care what he did, my heart bled for him and he's my fav of favs in this book! : ) Fun read! ☺️
September 28, 2014
For a first book, Kylie did a wonderful job. This is definitely more of a new adult book. I enjoyed the story a lot. The plot was strictly based on three different romances. There were a couple odd phrasings/grammatical errors I noticed, but that's only because I'm a huge grammar nazi. Either way, you should definitely buy this book (it's only $2.99!!) and support the wonderful Kylie as well as all indie authors.
February 5, 2015
Kylie Kaemke’s Heavy Hearts is full of heart - heart, love, drama, heartbreak, passion…I really enjoyed this story and the main character, Lucy. If only we had so many ideal men to choose from in life! It does make a great tale though. Sometimes we choose love for all the wrong reasons so it’s fun to enjoy this journey with Lucy as she finds herself in this dilemma. Well done Ms. Kaemke.
August 12, 2014
Fun, sexy book! Who wouldn't want 3 guys in love with them?? 4****
July 4, 2015
Mixed Feelings
I love chick lit. And I was ready for a fix of it, considering that my last few reads have been about sex, sex, and, you guessed it, more sex. So I downloaded this freebie and was on my way.
I was ready for light and frothy, but there was something about this read that felt off for me. And I almost nearly stopped reading early on. But people that know me know I power through to the bitter end of everything, so I kept going.
It did get better, and there were some bright parts, but overall this wasn't what I wanted it to be.
My biggest issue with the plot itself was that I felt Lucy was entirely too young to be in the conundrum she found herself: three true loves of her life and being unable to choose. Seriously. She's not even legal drinking age. Had Lucy been thirty or so, this would have been easier for me to swallow.
The execution also left a lot to be desired. Lucy spent a lot of time flashing back to the past to recount falling in love with these men. So much so that it was disconcerting to actually be in the present, which didn't happen all that much.
Technically, the manuscript could have used a good once over. Punctuation, especially in quotations, and synonyms were a major stumbling block. I am horribly picky about that kind of thing, and it drove me crazy to see two different people speaking in the same paragraph.
I did enjoy the fact that Lucy wasn't entirely a spoiled rich girl. Her time at her family's ranch showed her love for horses and her ability to get her hands dirty and help out with chores. And I liked that she respected the hired help and treated them as family.
In the end, Lucy does make a decision, and there is quite a bit of drama before the happy ever after. For all the shortcomings that I struggled through, this one ended on a good note.
I love chick lit. And I was ready for a fix of it, considering that my last few reads have been about sex, sex, and, you guessed it, more sex. So I downloaded this freebie and was on my way.
I was ready for light and frothy, but there was something about this read that felt off for me. And I almost nearly stopped reading early on. But people that know me know I power through to the bitter end of everything, so I kept going.
It did get better, and there were some bright parts, but overall this wasn't what I wanted it to be.
My biggest issue with the plot itself was that I felt Lucy was entirely too young to be in the conundrum she found herself: three true loves of her life and being unable to choose. Seriously. She's not even legal drinking age. Had Lucy been thirty or so, this would have been easier for me to swallow.
The execution also left a lot to be desired. Lucy spent a lot of time flashing back to the past to recount falling in love with these men. So much so that it was disconcerting to actually be in the present, which didn't happen all that much.
Technically, the manuscript could have used a good once over. Punctuation, especially in quotations, and synonyms were a major stumbling block. I am horribly picky about that kind of thing, and it drove me crazy to see two different people speaking in the same paragraph.
I did enjoy the fact that Lucy wasn't entirely a spoiled rich girl. Her time at her family's ranch showed her love for horses and her ability to get her hands dirty and help out with chores. And I liked that she respected the hired help and treated them as family.
In the end, Lucy does make a decision, and there is quite a bit of drama before the happy ever after. For all the shortcomings that I struggled through, this one ended on a good note.
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