Femme Fatale...sounds so intriguing doesn't it? I thought so too. After reading the synopsis, I dug into this book ready for one hell of story, and what I got was bits and pieces of a hell of a story. It was really hard for me to rate this book because I really liked the idea of this story. I really liked the characters, I liked the writing style, and I LOOOOOOVED the ending.
The story starts off with Amelia, the femme fatale herself, doing what she does best–killing. It takes off with such a bang that you just know it's going to be an awesome book. She does her job dutifully and goes home to her mobster family where her father controls her life. She does her few jobs, you learn about her cold disposition, and you get a good feel for how things go in the family. You just really feel like you know these characters. Then her daddy tells her she has another job and it's her ex-boyfriend, love of her life, Zane the Detective. You think holy hell, this is really gonna get good. This story can only get more awesome from here! She's a killer from a family of killers, he's a cop, shit's gonna hit the fan.....nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. That's not what happens at all. From here the plot starts to head downhill a bit and there are even times I wonder if I am reading the final edited version because there are so many mistakes, missing words, and things like this:
"When I glance at the screen of my iPhone, I notice I have three missed calls from my father compared to eight from Zane."
But on the next page it says this,
""Hello?" he answers, his voice confused. I never gave him my number back and my number shows up as unknown most of the time."
This made me go hmmmmmmm what? How is he calling her if she didn't give him her number? And how is he confused to who it is if he already called her 8 times?? Yaaaaaa, there are a couple of other moments like this, but luckily only a few altogether. This is what causes me to hope, for the author's sake, that I got an unedited version and this is not the version for sale.
The story continues on with Amelia telling her father that she was up for this job and that no one else was going to do it but her. Now she knew she still loved Zane, and she knew that there was no way she would be able to kill him. She is using this as a stalling method. That's all fine and dandy, but when daddy runs a mob family, and you are his #1 killing machine, he will not stand for stalling. When he tells you to do something, you do it or you swim with the fishes, see?
But her dad allows her time to come to terms with things for some odd reason, doing the job in her own way, her own time, and this begins her acting defiantly. She begins to talk back, becomes disrespectful, and she does what she wants. Her father attempts to put her in her place at one point, which is pretty fucking scary if you ask me, and she seems to straighten up a bit, but once again begins acting out. Now she knows her father means business, and no matter what he does it's all games. So knowing this, she goes thru this period where she doesn't think he's going to do anything?! Are you kidding me?! There is quite a bit that is drug out through the story that just keeps Amelia stalling from killing Zane. There is no way the head of a mob family would leave a cop alive for that long just so his daughter could have a little bit of love in her life, especially when said cop has been looking into the background of the mob family. And another thing, there is never any interaction with the cops. NONE. There is brief talk of past questioning and raids, but no actual cop action.
Zane is a cop, right? Yes, we've covered this. He never really questions Amelia,though. He tells her he assumed she was the Femme Fatale the whole time and just turned his head because he loved her. Denial, it's not just a river in Egypt. So he knows, HE KNOWS, there are toooooooons of cases with her calling card all over them. He still loves her and is able to look past it if she changes. So they start working towards this relationship that Amelia knows will never last because she's stuck in a daydream in her head not trying to do anything to save him! So, what, she just thinks if she stalls enough her dad will forget?! No freaking way! And with her psychotic brother hanging on her dad's coat tails she will never have her happy ending. When Zane freaks out later in the book about all of the killings attributed to her, it made me freeze. Whoa, whoa, whoa. Wait a minute. He said he knew! That it didn't matter to him. I understand the ones he didn't know about, but he knew about almost all of them.
The ending....WOW! Loved it! This story closed up with a bang. Too bad it wasn't a bang from start to finish, cause it could've been. This story should've been a 10 star book, but somewhere along the way the plot flittered and the characters kind of went meh before it picked back up again. Taking that into consideration, along with all the mistakes in this book (that drove me nuts because it was written so well), I was left rating it 3 stars. I know with how this one ended that book two has a lot to tell. I look forward to seeing where this series is headed.