This book destroyed any respect I had for the main characters
I detest when authors put sexual encounters in incongruous scenarios of the action. A hunt and fight for their lives is the last point in time anyone with half a brain would be wanting to have sex. I was not turned on, and all I could do at that point is roll my eyes at how stupid the characters were to be distracted by a sexual encounter when they needed to be trying to stay alive. It. Is. STUPID. I don't want to read sex then. I want to see intelligence, savvy strategy, and courage, not idiots dropping their guard to get their rocks off -- it doesn't fit the scenario -- my inclination is to skip it. So, so NOT sexy or smart. All I can think is, really, REALLY?
I have to admit my enjoyment in this series is declining rapidly between the stupidity of the female character and the leaders. I mean, how and why do they even let the bad guys on the campus? With the miniscule explanation of this plot twist being entirely insufficient to cover the how or why the author made all of the characters look idiotic by allowing the fox to stay in the hen house an entire week (long enough to take over), I am beyond frustrated. I strongly recommend a better explanation through plot development because as it stands it's like she just threw spaghetti at the wall to see if it would stick with no explanation no discussion or development around the topic, just boom, they're here and they shouldn't be, we don't know how but this is where the plot's going. Suuuuuure, that's not problematic when I can find all kinds of reasons why it doesn't work with the plot. It's feels like she dropped it in out of nowhere and doesn't HAVE an explanation, i. e. didn't take the time to develop one to write in because the other wanted it to be this way but couldn't figure out how to explain it or think one up. Couldn't the monarchy or school admin figure out the villain was there for nefarious purposes and kick him off rather than letting him stay the week? Why not just outright kill him when they've got the enemy on hand with so few guards? If this realm is always fighting against its neighbors why did it take so long for them to mount an offensive against the captured school? Yeah, the fourth year students are frequently among the soldiers but surely they have the larger body of troops outside of the student body (or they don't have much of an army)? Wedging the sexual encounter in the middle of a hunt for their lives, killed any sense of respect I had for the female lead, much less the male leads, pretty much destroying it all with that scenario -- especially given how it ended. The jerk wouldn't have to worry about my delayed gratification ever again because he would never touch me ever again after that shit. You hear that author, respect gone. Stupid scene. So stupid, I was tempted to make this a dnf.
To make matters worse, all of the important threads are set aside so these idiots can get their freak on. So, it's not really believable when they finally get around to being worried about what happened to her familiar, Ari. In fact, it's comical that the author actually expects us to believe Raven gave a damn about anything other than f**king when it takes an entire week for her to get around to looking for somebody who's supposed to be one of the most important beings in her life? Basically we went from a series that had a strong plot with sex that feathered in and built the relationship between the characters, to a diminishing plot, diminishing character respect, and a storyline that spends all its time wedging sexual encounters in places just to have more sex at the expense of the plot that I actually enjoyed. To top it all off the overall tenor of the book is so dark, dismal, miserable, and hopeless I'm not sure I want to continue. What a disappointment.