3.5 stars, quite a fun book overall. I loved the DC and Northern Virginia location, and of course the White House. Those locations were all as real as possible, but the foreign delegations were from fictional lands, an interesting choice that I'm sure could be debated, but felt like the right choice for this book which wasn't meant to be political commentary but primarily entertainment.
The only problem is that the Ollie suffers from cozymysteritis, closely related to the dreaded TSTL (too stupid to live disease). People with cozymysteritis just can't help getting involved with things that are clearly none of their business and are horribly dangerous, and then handle those things in ways that prove that they may, in fact, be TSTL. But it is a standard in the genre, so I generally only pick at the degree to which my suspense of disbelief made my enjoyment of the story less. Sometimes I can shake my head and move on, other times I throw the book across the room on annoyance. This was much more the former.
The book is really kind of half way between a fluffy cozy and a more serious mystery, well written and with some more serious elements, but also with recipes and office politics and lighthearted elements. I like the middle of the road approach of not being too silly or too scary or suspenseful, but it does make for a balancing act. It makes me expect more solid follow-through on plots and for Ollie to be more mature. I would have preferred a more solid reason for Ollie to have gotten involved with this mystery all together. The opening really fun chase scene across the White House Lawn, ending in the big Pan Slam, was a great way to start things off, but the idea that this guy needed the assistant chef's help never made sense. Her nosiness made perfect, if irritating, sense! But she was idiotic to follow-up with him and not trust the Secret Service to take care of matters. What did she think she could do? And when she did the normal cozy novel mistakes to draw things out and add to confusion on their end (but having already giving hints to us as readers) of not giving complete information because she was too embarrassed or didn't want to involve her boyfriend or whatever (like not reporting an attempted break-in to the Secret Service), it was infuriating because it wasn't just her life on the line, it was the President's and possibly many others, not a topic you can just be casual about and certainly not her call to make. I seldom get that worked up in reading about dog walkers or caterers, their mistakes won't change the fate of the world. But in general, she did get caught up in something
way beyond her "pay grade" as they say and other than a few idiotic moves managed to conduct herself well. The overall story was very readable, with an intelligent and welcoming style that made me feel
comfortable with the characters and their world rght away, like I really was getting a peek into backstairs at the White House.