MC asked about how a stranger’s genitals looked like the first time they met. and he was described as “unfiltered” MC, ofc 🙄 and was justified by a line: “never feel bad about saying what you’re thinking.” fucking disgusting.
”Do you even have a penis? Or a vagina? Or genitalia? Or both? Oh! Wouldn’t that be awesome—you could have both and be with a man or a woman! I’d love to have both, but I’m guessing I can’t just turn into a demon, even if I never go back to that other place again.”
“So? What do you have? I mean, penis? Vagina? Are you all smooth like a Ken doll down there? Because even if so, that tail still has so many possibilities.”
bare in mind this was on page 17 and 23.
gosh, i DESPISED Adam. he talks aLOT. non stop, for pages and pages only full of his dialogues. i can hear his voice in my head the whole time reading this book. it’s haunting. it was soooo much. not only he talked too much, but he mansplained everything, he thinks he’s so cool and nice and he wont shut the fuck up. he’s annoying and had zero fucking manners. what the fuck is wrong with him ?!?!?
“Oh my god, then! You totally hate my random rambling and word vomit, and I’m so sorry! I really thought you didn’t mind, and I don’t know what’s wrong with me, but I can’t seem to help myself,” stfu bro…. yes, i hate you.
no worries, the one star is not solemnly for Adam. i only play fair game.
anyway, back to the actual review: this book was insta lust, which didn’t help with Adam’s fucking annoying attitude. i don’t like insta lust especially with non-existent connection between the MCs. which exactly what happened in this book. the Demon claimed Adam at 26% and the whole time, Minos only talk like three times. and then they proceed to keep having sex till the end. how do they keep thinking about sex when they don’t even know each other?????? they had zero connection and idek why Adam was made to be with this Devil. it’s pointless.
i think this story had potential, i was hooked in the beginning until Adam started talking. and i can’t deny the hate i have for him. i wish this was called PWP erotica instead so i could’ve stay the fuck away.