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Deep within the imperial palace at Timbuktu, Amie has suffered a devastating loss. Once the daughter of a prosperous salt merchant Amie's life was cruelly overturned in a matter of months. At sixteen, Amie now finds herself disinherited, framed for a scandalous crime, and forced to serve Princess Mariama of Mali . Her father, Emperor Sulyeman, has created a series of impossible trials for his daughter's suitors. When they fail, he publicly boils them alive, littering Mariama's path to marriage with ninety-nine corpses.

At first, Amie's life at court is drudgery-the chores are difficult, the servants despise her, and Princess Mariama is prone to mood swings-but the more she learns about the princess's circumstances, the closer the two girls become. Amie and her intended, Kader, plan to escape Timbuktu and make a new life far away from the shadow of death that has fallen upon the emperor's court, but she finds herself increasingly drawn to the princess in ways she doesn't understand.

When a mysterious discovery forces her hand, she must choose between fleeing with the boy she loves or helping the princess to end the trials forever. Amie will need to draw on all of her strength and courage to make the perilous journey through the desert to seek the aid of an exiled god in a final, desperate attempt to take charge of her own destiny.

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First published January 28, 2025

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Mina Fears

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Mina Fears earned her BA and MFA in Fiction from Columbia University. Originally from Michigan, she remains in New York City to support corporate communications for tech and finance brands. The Scorpion Queen is her first novel

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924 reviews149 followers
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January 23, 2025
I tried and tried to get into the story, but ultimately, I gave up. This is a debut, and it definitely reads like one. I could never get connected to the characters, and it annoyed me how they kept making the most idiotic decisions. There are elements of a really interesting plot here, but unfortunately, as is, it’s not a book for me.

I appreciate the eARC sent from NetGalley and Flatiron Books. All opinions are mine alone.

I’m not rating it since I DNF’ed.
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592 reviews538 followers
February 9, 2025
I deeply regret not DNFing this. I had promised myself I wouldn’t push this year.

The writing is this book’s biggest issue. The characters are unlikable, the introduction is weak, the plot takes a while to be set up, the pacing is all over the place, more telling than showing, the conversations are weirdly executed, the characters don’t react, the reason for her epic downfall wasn’t strong enough, etc.
I do think this needed severe editing.

Reading is subjective, hope others enjoy this.
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971 reviews236 followers
April 16, 2025
Although the synopsis of The Scorpion Queen sparked my interest, I remember when I read it thinking "This doesn't give me the best understanding of what this book is about. What is it that the main character will be working towards?" I had hoped that reading the novel would answer this question, but unfortunately, it did not. I liked many parts of The Scorpion Queen, but ultimately, I don't think it came together very well to tell a complete, cohesive story. The first half of the book focuses on court politics and a love triangle, whereas the second half is a desert adventure with less of a clear end goal. I liked the sapphic romance that was building up in the first half of the book, but then it quickly stopped being a plot point half way through. And I never really cared for the couple on the other side of the love triangle, perhaps because they started the book already together, so we never saw them fall in love. I also found that during the second half of this story, as characters' alliances and motives changed, I felt like I lost grip of where the plot was headed, and as such, stopped being as invested. The plot twists were not bad, but they did move the plot away from the direction I wanted it to go. Finally, I found the tone of this novel very heavy. Sometimes that can be a good thing, but there wasn't enough payoff to make the sad or slow parts worth it to me. So overall, I think this story does have some strong elements, and I can see the author being successful in the future, but this very much felt like a debut. It didn't feel like a comprehensive story was being told to me, but rather like I was following along as the author explained a book idea she had. I just couldn't stop asking myself "Where is this going". Hopefully the series (the ending is vague making me think this is not a standalone) comes together, because I do see potential in it.
Thank you to MacMillan Audio for the audio ARC in exchange for an honest review!
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892 reviews185 followers
January 21, 2025
firstly, thank you to the publisher for an arc and an alc.

this was an ok ya fantasy debut, but unfortunately the pacing of the plot left me rather confused, especially considering the dark fantasy element.

as for the audio, i think the narrator did a fine job!
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607 reviews17 followers
December 20, 2024
Thank you to NetGalley and Macmillan Audio for this advanced copy. You can pick up The Scorpion Queen on January 28, 2025.

After reading the description for this book, I expected a high-stakes, action-packed YA fantasy with a fairytale twist. And it truly felt like I got a watered-down version of that.

Tell me why nothing substantial happened for the first 30-40% of this book. They FINALLY leave for their quest about halfway, and admittedly, things did pick up there. The entire sequence with the god Hausakoy was the most interesting part of this, but I didn't care enough about the characters to care if they escaped. For all the character build-up we see in the first half of the book, I didn't find myself rooting for Amie or her plights. If anything, she taught me that there's NO reason to go through THAT much effort for a man OR a conniving best friend who wants to be more than friends. Everyone betrays her at every turn, and even when we find out that the sister who kicks off the betrayal is actually a good guy, it's too late to form an attachment to her.

All in all, not my favorite YA fantasy, and unfortunately, not a series I'll be continuing.
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334 reviews25 followers
November 29, 2024
*sigh* well, that wasn’t what I expected. Review to come 🦂

(FINAL REVIEW:)

This was an interesting take on a Malian fairytale (still trying to figure out which it is), and while the plot twist and ending was a great inclusion to the story itself, the first half of the book felt rushed with some decisions that overall, were’nt working for it. 😐

The story follows Amie, a 17-year-old who finds herself disinherited and cast out by her parents for something that she didn’t do. She finds herself the maid of the Princess Mariama, the daughter of Emperor Suleyman. Amie is a bit of a weird case for me. While I do feel bad for her situation and liked that she was proactive in attempting everything she can to escape with her lover and former fiancee, Kader, I found her pretty pessimistic and whiny here and there. I also felt like the attraction between her, Kader, and the Princess felt superficial and not really well explained. 🫤

Speaking of the Princess, Mariama just came off as the average spoiled princess that is used to everything working out for her. While I get that her relationship with her father isn’t the best at times, the ending and plot twist verified my feelings at the end, and it just felt weird. 😕

Speaking of that plot twist, that came literally out of nowhere. While I liked that it explained a few things that left me scratching my head at in the first half of the book, it still felt like it just punched you in the face. That and the ending felt too nicely wrapped up and also weirdly ends on a cliffhanger. I’m not sure if this is set to be the start of a new duology or series, but I’ve not seen nor heard of any sequel coming out so it really leaves me wondering, “why that ending in the first place?” 🤔

All in all, I think this could’ve done very well if it had at least 50 extra pages just to help with the pacing and character development. Because of that ending, I am interested to see where the sequel would go (if there is going to be one), but I would really like to see a shift in narration style because it just felt younger than the character’s age. 🫢

Big thank you goes out to Flatiron Books and NetGalley for accepting my request to read this in exchange for an honest review. ❤️

Publication date: January 28!

Overall: 2.5/5 ⭐️
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2,402 reviews616 followers
January 31, 2025
I liked this overall. It's a first novel, and that could be felt in places as a bit of awkwardness. The first half of this story felt like royal historical fiction. I quite enjoyed the court politics and background. The second half of the book was full of fantastical magical situations and solutions. This is clearly a retelling of fairytale or a modern take on a fairytale.

This is set in pre-colonial Imperial Mail in 1359. The main character is Amie. Who was disinherited by her family, which resulted in her working as a servant. She's assigned as a kind of ladies maid to Princess Mariama, the daughter of Emporer Suleyman. This has clear mythological elements, stunning reveals, and the story is wrapped up nicely, but there's also a cliffhanger of sorts.

One of the best aspects of this audiobook is the narrator, Sandra Okuboyejo. Sandra does a phenomenal job of both keeping the historical aspects imbued with realistic feelings while at the same time adding to the magical and fantastical elements of the story.

My only complaint would be that this suffers from pacing issues. I was invested in the world building, but pacing can kill the flow for slower readers. This is a first novel, and the result is clunky in places. I deeply look forward to another novel by this author.

Thank you to Mina Fears, Macmillan Audio, and NetGalley for the opportunity to listen to and review this audiobook. All opinions and viewpoints expressed in this review are my own.
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821 reviews184 followers
January 7, 2025
*sigh* I feel like I am on a string of meh audiobooks. The Scorpion Queen had a lot of potential and a lot of good ideas that never really coalesced into a good story.

The first forty percent of this story or so feels like an entirely different book than the last. The first part is almost entirely devoid of magic and is more a royal family drama (and an ok one if it paid off) while the last half goes into a completely different world with so much magic and very quickly built systems and world building. The first half of any book should be establishing the second half but this felt like they were so disconnected to as not be necessary to each other. Magic goes from not really existing to being the solution to every problem.

Amie was actually a pretty interesting character to me, she was one of the few I have seen who was just happy with her lot in life to be married and just settle down in the society that works for her until all that was taken away and even after that, she is more fighting to go back to the status quo of marrying this guy than trying for anything broader or more grand. Its a different perspective from a lot of YA heroines so I didn't mind it but I don't know if it was utilized that well in her development as the author seemed to get wishy washy about her motives and actions.

Overall, this was just pretty disappointing.

Thank you to Netgalley for a copy of this audiobook in exchange for an honest review. It was narrated by Sandra Okuboyejo who did a wonderful job.
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354 reviews166 followers
February 1, 2025
all amie wants is to marry the boy she loves and raise a family, but a scandal leaves her ruined and working as a maid in the palace instead. her plan to run away and start a new life with her love is complicated by her growing closeness with the princess, who wants to end the impossible trials her father has set for her suitors.

i really, desperately wanted to love this—a historical fantasy inspired by a malian fairytale! with a queer protagonist!—but damn did the execution fall short. amie is potentially interesting, with different hopes and dreams than many YA heroines, but fears falls into the trap of telling instead of showing, and as a result i have no idea why i should root for her or anyone else. (i can tell you i’m not rooting for either love interest.) the characters’ motivations and relationships made no sense. the plot and pacing are all over the place (the first third read like an entirely different book than the last two-thirds) and the fight scenes actually left me cringing.

it’s a shame when there’s so much potential here. this is one of the rare occasions when i think a YA fantasy might have benefited from a higher page count to better explore these characters and their relationships.

rating: 1.0/5.0 stars


thank you to netgalley and the publisher for the eARC!
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764 reviews36 followers
January 29, 2025
New Fantasy Alert! I was immediately drawn in to this after reading the description. Shocker because I rarely read descriptions. Immediately pulled in to the audiobook once I began listening with the deception and betrayal that we start off with. I was so intrigued to see why the betrayal which lead to disinherited and forced to serve another princess.

This one had all good bones and was a great debut fantasy novel. There were times where the story did get a little confusing and the pacing slowed, but I was invested to see how we would end. My question… is this going to be a series because I need to know what happens next. I feel like I was left on a big cliffhanger and now I can’t wait to see what happens next.

With that, yes, I enjoyed this one and the audiobook was good. I think the narrator did a great job with the characters. I felt like her voice was perfect for the characters. It made me wonder how I would feel if I read with my eyes! Anyway, if you’re a novice fantasy reader looking to dabble in to the genre, this would be perfect for you. And for my seasoned fantasy readers, I think you would enjoy it too!
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990 reviews50 followers
February 11, 2025
1.5⭐
The book does take a long time go really get going. The pacing was very much an issue through the whole book unfortunately but the plot itself had really interesting aspects to it. It was a fantastic concept but I do think it was lacking on the execution. There could have been a bit more editing to the plot and more work on the characters and this book could have really shined. This is a debut book and I think the author has a really good base to work from. The characters were hot and cold. I liked them some scenes and didn't in others. I will say our FMC was a little frustrating at times with her decisions and the love interests are not the most likable.

for the audiobook the narrator did a really good job! I really enjoyed the audiobook a lot!

Thank you Netgalley & The publishers for the audio copy!!
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1,863 reviews320 followers
February 11, 2025
2025 reads: 28/300

2025 tbr: 12/111


i received an advanced listening copy from the publisher as part of their influencer program. this did not affect my rating.

amie has lived her life as the overlooked daughter of a prosperous salt merchant. in a matter of months, though, her life has turned upside down: she’s been disinherited after being framed for a scandal, and she now serves princess mariama of mali. the princess’s path to marriage has been lined with ninety-nine corpses so far, but as amie gets to know her on a deeper level, she begins to see that the two have a lot in common. still, amie yearns for freedom and for kader, her love. getting out of timbuktu is going to be much harder than she anticipated, though, especially when she realizes she might be able to help the princess end the trials once and for all.

i love books inspired by fairy tales, so even though i, admittedly, went into this book unfamiliar with the malian fairy tale that inspired it, i was still so excited to read this! i loved the court intrigue, as amie is in the thick of it, seeing as she works for the princess. going into this, i had no idea that this was queer, and while this aspect wasn’t explored much, it was still interesting to see. the plot was also very interesting, with plenty of twists to keep me on my toes. i hope that there will be a sequel!

narration: the narrator, sandra okuboyejo, did a lovely job narrating this audiobook! i felt deeply immersed in the story while listening. i highly recommend this audiobook!
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874 reviews120 followers
January 15, 2025
This book took me awhile to get into. I found the main FMC frustrating. Also, it took awhile for the journey to begin and I did like that. The narration was done very well.

Thank you @macmillanaudio for the gifted copy.
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581 reviews22 followers
January 11, 2025
4.25/5
This was an exciting adventure that brings court politics with a scandalous higher society. The FMC strength and emotions towards others is very well achieved with the first love, her betrayal and her thoughts on the society itself. I found she embodied what someone who felt betrayed should and the story line of her sister and her is very well written. The story has an interesting plot twist and it was such a great listen.
The characters were very well distinguished with her voice and she put the emotions needed to figure out what seemed more extreme than another. The story was unique and such a fun listen.
Thank you NetGalley and Macmillan Young Listeners for the advanced listening copy.
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186 reviews4 followers
December 16, 2024
I’m not gonna lie, I was pretty bored for most of this book. The part that kept me going was the romance but even then it wasn’t a big part of the story. Amie in general gave me annoying vibes and then confirmed it as the story kept going. I felt like the sister wasn’t doing enough for Amie. Amie wasn’t clear about her feelings for the Princess. Kader felt like a typical Hans from Frozen storyline. The whole god being married to the mother of the princess was confusing for me. I ended up regretting not DNFing this book. I truly wanted to like this book but it was just not for me.

Thank you to the author, Macmillan Audio, and NetGalley for this audiobook.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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July 14, 2024
I so sorely needed this. I've been deep in the trenches of particularly shitty fantasy for my dissertation, and this is exactly the opposite. A refreshing setting, both time and place. Fantasy storytelling tropes that are familiar but not tired and twists I didn't always see coming. It definitely has the telltale signs of a first-time author in that it occasionally tries to do a little too much and pack too many things into one volume, but still, I really loved it overall.
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46 reviews
February 19, 2025
Five stars for my girl Mina’s debut book!

I enjoyed this story and the descriptions of time and place. The first hundred pages or so read much more like historical fiction than the remaining chapters, which read much more like mythology.

Looking forward to see what happens next in the series.
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November 20, 2024
DNF. I kept waiting for the fantasy part of this story to happen, but it didn't before I got too disinterested to continue.
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252 reviews
December 26, 2024
The Scorpion Queen is an adventurous novel where our main character explores who she is once she has lost everything. Overall, this book and story were enjoyable and engaging. The first half is slowly paced and our main character makes some questionable choices, however, the second half is amazingly done. I loved the adventure, the journey, and character development that happens in the second half of the story. 

You can hear the changes in thoughts, and how our character comes into herself very clearly in the audio edition of this book. Her voice changes and she seems to grow into herself and a way that almost makes her sound different from how she did in the first half of the book. The audio narration does the character development so well! 

I will definitely pick up the sequel, I can't wait to see where the story goes. If you love any stories with old gods, mysteries to unravel and great character development. I would recommend you pick this up! Thank you to the publisher for providing an advance copy via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review

3.75/5 Rounded up to 4/5 Stars
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391 reviews23 followers
August 11, 2025
I'm a bit disappointed to be honest. I had high expectations because of the cool storyline, but yeah. I have so many questions that are not answered. What will happen with Hazzy? What happened with Jeneba, is she eventually rescued? Who is the scorpion queen? the scorpion order is understand, but who the hell is it's queen? I have absolutely no clue if this is a standalone or not.
But other than that I enjoyed it. And bonus points for being such a pretty edition with the sprayed edges. 2.5⭐️
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174 reviews1 follower
February 4, 2025
There’s an awful lot I have to say about this book, im going to keep it as concise as humanly possible. I promise.

Well let me start with what I liked: the plot, especially at the beginning was really well thought out. I can tell the author has a lot of love and a lot of studying behind her about how to build a world and make it lush and expansive. I typically don’t like stories that lean heavily into “men are terrible to women” territory because it usually isn’t done well and the men are written as cartoonishly evil and not enough priority is leant to the ideology of female friendships being so strong in worlds like this. But, this author had a very strong inclination towards female friendships, and the cruelty of many of the men presented is actually depicted as quite realistic. The FMC, Amie, was very realistically written, being smart but also having her moments of immaturity.

What could’ve been done better: The plot progression starts very very slow but then ramps up after 100 pages or so. It then slows down again without picking up until the last 3 chapters of the book. The plot of the book isn’t even technically resolved. Yeah they complete their main mission but like…another issue is presented during the course of their quest and it’s left unresolved. Same with the entire concept of the rebellion, which is happening in the background without progression or resolution. We are introduced to the concept of the “Scorpion Order” early on which is a group that has magic and so, logically, I believed that the title of the book “The Scorpion Queen” was referring to either the FMC getting involved with the order and learning magic to progress her plot or someone else being involved with them or with magic. None of that happens. They’re just kind of…there. And show up a couple times. The one queen we do meet or have contact with has nothing to do with magic, the order, or even really scorpions at all. The character’s also seemed to be written rather flatly. A lot of character development is harried along by saying, more or less, “and then for the next few weeks we became friends”. I know this is probably a fault of this being a debut novel, but it is such a cop out to short cut character building and relationship building by saying “and then we became friends over a period of time!” The same could be said between the romance of our FMC and Kader. I’m told a lot that Amie loves him but I don’t really experience it or even know why. We are just told she does. At first I thought it was intentional but the more I read the more I realized the author just doesn’t build up any character relationships at all. The language and structure felt a little immature but I don’t know if that is because of the author or because this book is maybe a lower level YA book. The FMC is 16 so it could go either way.

As a total and complete side note I was 100% convinced at some point in this book it was going to become a sapphic novel. The way Amie talks about the princess, how beautiful she is, how her heart races when she’s around her, how she has an “unnamed feeling” she is “too afraid to examine” about her, how she can feel the heat of where their skin presses together, how the princess smells….all felt very sapphic to me. The princess even, at some point says she loves Amie only for the end of the book for them to shove them into the friendship box. SHE EVEN SAYS SHE MISSES THE PRINCESS MORE THAN THE DUDE SHE CLAIMS TO BE IN LOVE WITH AND WANTS TO SEE HER MORE WHEN ON HER QUEST!! Bruh. what a waste.

In all I see so much potential but alas, there are too many elements that fell flat to me.
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800 reviews91 followers
January 4, 2025
**I RECEIVED A FREE ARC OF THE AUDIOBOOK FROM NETGALLEY AND MACMILLIAN. THANK YOU A TON. THIS HAS NOT IMPACTED MY REVIEW IN ANY WAY, SHAPE OR FORM. **

*NO MAJOR SPOILERS WERE HARMED IN THE MAKING OF THIS REVIEW**

This was quite the tale! This was a bit of a different direction with my reading tastes and I had never heard of this mythology, which made me all the more eager to dive in. I really enjoyed learning about Amie's world , her culture, and the gods. I like that the writing takes us through a walk of life of a servant and a princess in Amie's culture. I actually enjoyed just being in the 'now' in the book and experiencing what Amie is through her eyes. The narrator did a fantastic job at bringing this world to life. The writing was good, but I did think the pacing was off just a tad. I would of liked a bit more time in the meat of the story, the entire reason they set off on the quest, then of course, the big plot twist. That described more than just. . . what it got. But I understand it is being lined up for a sequel, so there is definitely wiggle room.

Amie man, you feel for her but you are also irritated by her. Sure, you feel bad regarding why she is a servant now, and its almost a fierce sort of protectiveness to save her from the one that wronged her. The author makes you want her to have her happily ever after. Then things happen and its..intriguing. Because while you know the 'main' love story, I feel like there is another one that buds from the story, intentional or not. But regardless, its story of beautiful to see that blossoming and blooming, and to see Amie Happy. But then of course, it all comes crashing down. I for one, would love to see Amie in her villain era.

For the love interest (s?)...they are interesting. I think one impacts Amie's past thoughts and future behavior, but the other impacts her present. The dynamic is interesting and even I started to feel myself torn between the two extremes. But of course, that all goes up in smoke by the end of the book, so I am on a whirlwind just like poor Amie.

Im glad the travel scenes werent a drag, they were pretty quick, so I liked that. But once they got to their destination, I guess I just expected more. I liked the overall tone and interactions, but I felt like it needed something more. Perhaps I am just being nitpicky. The buildup to an important moment was good but also twisted. The author definitely keeps you on your toes.

Overall, I thought this was a strong debut novel full of intrigue, betrayal and a whirlwind adventure with a splash of romance. Be sure to check it out when it releases late January!
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172 reviews1 follower
January 28, 2025
If you enjoy a dark fairy tale that reads like a bedtime story and feels different from other stories of this genre, then this will scratch that itch for you. This debut YA historical fantasy hit the mark in several places and is a refreshing addition to the genre. However it missed the mark in other places and I’m still undecided if I’ll want to read the next book.

Amie is the disgraced daughter of a noble tradesman in 14th century Mali. She is forced into servitude of the Princess of Mali but soon discovers that the Princess is not what she seems. Her father, the Emperor of Mali, is a ruthless ruler and father and forces her daughter’s suitors to endure deadly trials to attempt to win his daughter’s hand in marriage. Together Amie and the princess concoct a plan to end the trials and achieve their mutual goals.

This novel was a refreshing introduction to the culture and folklore of Mali, one that I was not familiar with. It was exciting and vividly written. However I didn’t get quite enough character development for me to fall in love with the characters. I think I like Amie by the end? I needed more from other supporting characters like her sister and the princess to really get to know them and root for them. I think there was a lot of potential for redemption arcs and romantic side-plots but it didn’t get built up enough for me as the reader.

I want my stories to show, not tell. This book did too much telling for me—I didn’t get to put the puzzle pieces together as the reader as far as plot twists. Motives and tension were spelled out for the reader and while they were interesting to read, it didn’t feel as fun having things explained to me. For this reason this book gets staunchly placed in the YA category for me. Fantasy elements felt scarce for me as well; the first 50-55% of the book reads and feels like historical fiction. But the introduction of the fantasy elements felt sparse and not fleshed out enough. I wanted and needed more from both the historical fiction and fantasy elements to feel fully invested in either facet of the story.

Bottom line: not bad but not great either. This series has the potential to be really amazing with just a little more meat on its bones. 3/5 for being entertaining!

My deepest gratitude and thanks to NetGalley and the publisher, Flatiron Books, for the opportunity to read and review this ARC. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
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376 reviews18 followers
April 4, 2025
3.5. Fun debut!

A straightforward but enjoyable story! The audiobook was great.

I love a historical fantasy, and The Scorpion Queen checked both boxes - historical setting AND actual magic. When I want historical fantasy, I want some magic, not just fictionalized history! (I will say, I would have enjoyed more historical details, but I consider that aspect satisfactory.) The sorcery is intriguing and I hope we get to learn more about the mechanics or source as well.

I wasn't sold on Ami at first, as she seemed to just accept the awful things that had happened to her. She's naive and infatuated with her crush. However, as time goes on, she begins to act for herself and push back against the unfairness. I still think she needs growth, but she's like 16 so hopefully she'll get there in the next book or so.

The plot seemed simple, and there is a good amount of down time before the plot kicks off. However, it felt necessary to me for the background on Ami, her sister, and the court. (I think the audiobook helped this portion feel faster, too.) When the quest does begin, the pacing rockets. There is a major twist that threw me, which I loved! How this affects Ami and her relationship with others will be juicy...

I will read the next book in this world! Would recommend to those looking for an easy read with some surprises - and as a debut, I'm excited to see where the author goes next!
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**content notes: violence against dangerous wild animals (graphic description), mentions of sexual assault, murder/death mentioned, I believe there was mention of a pregnancy loss.
**romance notes: at least one prominent character is bisexual and feel attraction for both a man and woman over the course of the book. some kisses/makeouts (more remembered than actively happening).

Thank you to Macmillan Audio for the gifted audiobook copy. All opinions and thoughts are fully and genuinely my own.
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316 reviews1 follower
January 9, 2025
Slower pacing. Great story telling. As long as you go in knowing you won’t get a HEA, you’ll enjoy it! Sandra Okuboyejo is a fantastic narrator!

Mina Fears gives readers a suspenseful historical YA fantasy, as the story follows the events of Amie's life as a young adult woman in Mali, which is ruled by an arrogant and horrific Emperor. As Amie goes to work for his daughter, the Princess Mariama, things become more difficult, more complicated, and more hopeless. The actions of Amie's sister are further reaching than she can imagine, with Hattie (sp?) taking Amie's decisions away from her.

The narrator, Sandra Okuboyejo, is absolutely outstanding. It really felt like Amie was telling the story. She did a great job capturing the emotions, but also the seemingly hopeless of the entire situation at hand. I would absolutely listen to other books narrated by Okuboyejo.

As long as readers go in knowing they are not getting a traditional HEA, and that this is a true fantasy with an ending that can be taken however the reader wishes to interpret it (happy, sad, or anywhere inbetween) then I think readers will enjoy this book! I recommend this for all YA fantasy readers, and some YA romantasy readers. Readers that enjoyed What the Woods Took (by Courtney Gould), A Song to Drown River (by Ann Liang), Off With Their Heads (by Zoe Hana Mikuta), and Masquerade (by O.O. Sangoyomi), will enjoy this title.
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162 reviews5 followers
January 22, 2025
1.5* man i really don't want to be harsh to a debut book, especially when malian fairy tales are not super common in western lit right now... but...

this was disappointing. the pacing was very off for me. some chapters spanned a singular day or two and then there was a sudden jump where it had been weeks/a month, and then back to day(s) long stretches. it makes it seem as if the entirety of this book and its relationships happened in the span of a month and it is hard for me to suspend my disbelief.

the relationships are the biggest issue i have though. none of them felt fleshed out enough. the trust and behavior that mariama exhibited towards amie in the span of only knowing her for hours does not make sense. the conclusion of another relationship towards the end of the book was not satisfying at all for me. the relationships and conclusion of this felt more juvenile than i expected.

i think amie has the potential to be a good main character but she feels too surface-level at the moment for me to truly have an opinion on her. overall, i think this book would have really benefited from a larger page number so that things could be properly explored and come together in a more cohesive/sensical way.

i really, really wish i enjoyed this and i'm so sad i didn't. however, i am still glad i read it and was able to diversify my mythology/folklore bookshelf!
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197 reviews
May 12, 2025
“A girl my age was to be like the dawn”

2.5 ⭐️

This book had potential, unfortunately it fell flat in execution. This novel has an interesting premise, some strong ideas, and solid twists - but it never truly got off the ground for me. I found the characters frustrating, the writing over-expositional, and the pacing rough for a book so short.

There is a noticeable point in which the plot of this book picks up, the intrigue increases and the potential and twists I mentioned earlier come out to play. But the payoff was let down by characters and interpersonal relationships I was not given time to, or solid cause to care about. Relationships needed more time to develop - giving Amie a mere number of weeks to bond with her fellow servants and the Princess did this story as much of a disservice as the swiftly wrapped up forgiveness she offers her sister.

There is promise within the bones of this novel, an interesting magic system begging to be further developed, complex interpersonal relationships that need time to grow. I and the narrative were just not given the opportunity to ruminate on these points. While I think there could be further space to build upon these ideas in a possible sequel alluded to by the open ending, I believe my journey with any possible series ends here.
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802 reviews8 followers
January 27, 2025


Amie’s life completely changes after she is disinherited and at the center of a crime. She is sentenced to serve a Princess. The Princess’s father has set up a challenge for those who want his daughter’s hand in marriage. Those who fail are met with a brutal end, being burned alive.

Amie initially sees the Princess as another rich girl who she can’t relate to at all, but the more she gets to know her and what she is going through internally, they start to bond. Even with this, Amie still plots to run off with Kader, a scholar who is seen as an embarrassment compared to his strong and stealthy brothers.

She gets stuck in the middle of helping the princess and end the trials for her hand or run away with Kader. They set off on a quest to make a change and take a stand.

I see how some of the themes are considered dark YA fantasy. Was a bit confused at the ending in seemingly a cliffhanger but no indication that this is a series? Would’ve benefitted from a bit more, it was so abrupt and unresolved. I would read a sequel, but I’m not raving about this book. It was just okay.

Narration was excellent!

Thank you to NetGalley and Macmillan audio for the ALC in exchange for an honest review. Release date 1/28/25.
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788 reviews30 followers
July 4, 2025
Book Review⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thank you to the author @MinaFears and @FlatIron_Books for the #gifted book.

An epic journey, an ancient magic, and a deadly world filled with secrets—The Scorpion Queen is a dark fantasy debut that completely captivates.

From the very first page, Mina Fears immerses readers in a richly built world full of danger, ancient power, and gruesome trials. The writing is immersive, the pacing relentless, and the stakes feel higher with every chapter. There’s an unforgettable romance woven through the story, filled with emotion, tension, and heart.

This book is dark and daring, the kind of fantasy that pulls no punches. If you’re into gritty, high-stakes adventures with fierce heroines and ancient magic, this belongs on your TBR.

Also… can we talk about the cover?! The colors, the artwork, the sprayed edges—it’s absolutely stunning and totally shelf-worthy.

🔥 A powerful and atmospheric debut that fantasy fans won’t want to miss!

🗡️✨🦂
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272 reviews14 followers
January 30, 2025
The Scorpion Queen

Wow what debut fantasy adventure. This was a fresh premise, which I love to see.

Ami has been disgraced and finds herself now a servant to the princess, who she developed an unexpected bond with, even though her former bethrothed, Kader, is who she hopes to run away with.

On a journey to obtain the life she thinks she wants, Ami experiences betrayal, hardship, trials and is called to question who she is and how she wants to live. An epic, coming of age adventure that doesn’t feel finished at the end so maybe there will be a sequel?

The narration brought the characters to life and helped move the story along. It at times felt slow due to excessive descriptive language, but I appreciated the ability to speed up the narration to stay engaged.

Thank you to Macmillan Audio for this ALC! My opinions are my own.
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