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336 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 16, 2025

Thanks to Jeff Wheeler, 47North/Amazon and NetGalley for this ARC in exchange for a balanced review.
Context: I picked this up due its genre (I mostly read fantasy), description and cover. I haven't read the previous entries in the series, but The Alchemy of Fate does a good enough job of getting the reader up to speed and mostly stands on its own.
I sense I'm going against the tide by saying that I wasn't a fan of this book. It had its strengths: there are some fun twists, hints at further lore yet to be revealed, and some nice relationship moments. You can hear more about these, and the general gist of the story, from all of the other reviews that have led to a stellar 4.8/5 average rating before publication. For me, however, these strengths were damaged by what I felt to be under-edited writing that lacked the finesse shown in the areas where it exceled. I'll discuss a few of those areas and give examples.
Relationships
We largely follow married couple Robinson and McKenna, with interludes spent many years before with Isaac Berrow, the founder of the Invisible University. Readers of the series will already be familiar with the married couple, who frequently exhibit all the signs of a mature, loving relationship (a strength of this book in a genre full of questionable relationships). However, what starts as a refreshing example of mutual affection becomes, for me, a tad sickly; the book very frequently reiterates how the characters feel about each other. A few examples (though I only started highlighting these some way through):
"...I see you for who you really are, Robinson Hawksley. And I love you for it."
"And I love you for you."
"I love her too much to let them hurt her."
"I find gossip rather tedious," Rob said, and McKenna was proud of him for saying so.
It made her bristle with outrage because Rob had more integrity than anyone she'd ever met.
The issue here isn't, of course, that they love each other, that McKenna is proud of Rob for his principles, or that she is outraged at under-handed tactics. It's that a) the reader is three books into the series, with very well-established characters and relationships - we know Robinson is principled and we know McKenna appreciates it, and b) this type of reflection is in there a lot, in both directions. A plot point also involves various people reiterating to a mostly ignorant Robinson how moral he is.
Portraying emotion
For someone of Jeff Wheeler's calibre, descriptions of emotion that I would consider overly direct are common in this book:
McKenna... felt a fiery determination in her own heart.
But it had firmed her resolve to defy...
She felt a surge of gratitude for him.
[She] was proud of the children for helping.
He faced her, feeling agitated at the injustice.
Determination swarmed inside her.
…but he felt a drive of persistence pushing him on.
She looked very pleased to be able to say that.
Sarah was suitably proud of the accomplishment and it showed.
These phrases get the job done, but they lack the finesse of the world-building. A little physical description (a clenched fist, white knuckles, etc.) goes a long way, and makes it a fuller experience for the reader.
The most glaring example was perhaps this (though no book is perfect!):
"I don't know why Society feels it must shun others," McKenna said, feeling a strong feeling of alignment with Sarah.
Themes/Society
I had a similar quibble with some of the common themes in this book, which include social justice, broadly, and the experiences and difficulties of deaf people, specifically. The approach is hit-and-miss.
The 'hit' part concerns the integration of deafness into the story. I can't go into detail without risking spoilers, but there is some thought-provoking interaction between deafness and the frequently verbal magic system. How could magic that requires singing in tune be addressed/accessed by people who can't hear pitch? Great question; my favourite scene in the book (featuring Mr Fludd) seeks to answer it, and does a great job. Could there be any benefits to not hearing the spells being cast? Another good one, explored well here. The book pulls off these aspects because they are fully integrated into the story, they make sense, and there is no hammer where a needle will do.
Where I got frustrated, however, is where certain points felt overstated. Exhibits:
"...At least Society is beginning to acknowledge how special these children can be." She looked very pleased to be able to say that. "I don't know why Society feels it must shun others," McKenna said, feeling a strong feeling of alignment with Sarah.
McKenna was proud of the children for helping, and Father had told her they were being paid for their work. They deserved to feel valued and important, and perhaps they would be better appreciated in the future.
As with the Relationships section earlier, the problems here aren't that the book/characters are wrong - of course, for example, deaf children deserve to feel valued and important. The question is whether the book works this point in elegantly, and I found the examples above to be ineffective. Books can portray injustice and characters working for society's betterment without removing nuance. The line "I don't know why Society feels it must shun others," doesn't do justice to McKenna's usual maturity and eloquence. It's a shame to take away from the good exploration of these themes in earlier sections.
In summary...
If you've followed me to this point and the points/examples above don't pose issues to your reading experience, then I think you will enjoy the book. There is plenty going for it (and the other reviews do a far more comprehensive job of discussing that), but ultimately I felt that the characters, relationships, story and history didn't have the necessary support to fully hit home.
The Alchemy of Fate, the third installment in Jeff Wheeler’s Invisible College series, is steampunk fantasy at its finest—blending the atmosphere and social culture of the 19th century with fantastical science, potent magic, immortality, and mysterious intelligences. Wheeler masterfully weaves these elements into a high-stakes adventure where the fate of the world hangs in the balance.
Returning protagonists Robinson Hawksley, a gifted sorcerer and inventor of magical devices, and his deaf wife, McKenna Foster Hawksley, plunge directly into the peril left unresolved in The Violence of Sound. Even if you’re new to the series, Wheeler provides enough context to follow along without confusion. Longtime fans will find the characters deeper, richer, and as familiar as old friends.
Reading The Alchemy of Fate felt like hearing the starter’s gun and racing headlong for the finish line. The story shifts between events fifteen years before the founding of the Invisible College and the characters’ present-day struggle. More than once, I found myself tensing when danger loomed, speaking aloud to cheer on the characters, and even crying. The relentless pacing, clever time shifts, and sustained suspense make it nearly impossible to put down. The story offers answers to long-standing questions, along with startling revelations and genuine surprises.
Wheeler explores persistence, loyalty, hope, mercy, and love, while unflinchingly portraying ambition, greed, and revenge. Magic itself becomes a character, its proper use determining whether the world can survive the destructive ambitions of the Aesirs, immortals at war with humanity. True to his style, Wheeler hints at a multiverse bound by universal moral laws, with magic a constant across realms.
The Alchemy of Fate delivers an unforgettable blend of steampunk wonder, philosophical depth, and emotional intensity. It is powerful, immersive, and will leave you eager for the next chapter in the series the moment you turn the last page.