Kind of corny and cheesy most of the time, and too many exclamation marks, which should only be used in conversation, no where else. Always with the physical attraction first, they need to get to know each other first for it to develop into such a fierce attraction.
Also, her being white and her parents dying in the river . . . really, was it just because the heroine needed to be white that it was thrown in there like that? Because none of that really played an important part in the story. One could almost forget that she was white.
Oh, and not to spoil anything, though of course everyone knows they end up with each other and have kids, but there is no possible way that the daughter they have would have golden hair and blue eyes, but dark skin; it can't be both. Even if it was possible, then the son would have some trait from his mother. But instead, the son supposedly looks just like his father.I know the whole romantic notion of the daughter looking like her mother and son looking like his father, but it rarely happens that way. When a full white woman has children with a full black man, or vice versa, the children always have lighter skin, but follow the stronger traits of the darker parent, that's just how it is.
Sorry to rant like this, but the author really disappointed me. I want a more realistic story. What, just because I wanted to read a romance book meant I'm supposed to accept this drivel and just concentrate on how hot the scenes are? They aren't THAT good, if at all. Nor is the story.