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Mourn Not the Mortals
Centuries have passed since the Dhal’nar fled the Sphere of Man, fearing extinction at the hands of humans. All that remains of the otherworldly race are the forgotten relics and ruins of an ancient age, now coveted by kingdoms.
Aliss Cistalion has never set foot beyond her city’s walls. An untested servant of the Prophet, Dhal’nar history is heresy to her creeds. But someone high in the Empire believes otherwise, deeming her worthy of leading her first expeditionary force. The Empire’s very survival hinges on her to pursue the rumors of a Dhal’nar relic buried behind enemy borders. Intent on restoring the Empire’s glory, Aliss leaves her home and family behind, with no promise of seeing either ever again.
Across the sea, the Protectorate are the long-hated enemies of the Luviatran Empire— and seek the rumored Dhal’nar relics for themselves. Already, they possess a powerful Dhal’nar craft capable of prophecy, and seek to plunder yet another jewel to add to their trove. Having lost their lands to the Protectorate centuries ago, Aliss and her squad of veterans must outrace them, lest their dying Empire be doomed to become a footnote in the annals of man.
Aliss Cistalion has never set foot beyond her city’s walls. An untested servant of the Prophet, Dhal’nar history is heresy to her creeds. But someone high in the Empire believes otherwise, deeming her worthy of leading her first expeditionary force. The Empire’s very survival hinges on her to pursue the rumors of a Dhal’nar relic buried behind enemy borders. Intent on restoring the Empire’s glory, Aliss leaves her home and family behind, with no promise of seeing either ever again.
Across the sea, the Protectorate are the long-hated enemies of the Luviatran Empire— and seek the rumored Dhal’nar relics for themselves. Already, they possess a powerful Dhal’nar craft capable of prophecy, and seek to plunder yet another jewel to add to their trove. Having lost their lands to the Protectorate centuries ago, Aliss and her squad of veterans must outrace them, lest their dying Empire be doomed to become a footnote in the annals of man.
- GenresFantasy
416 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 18, 2025
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Jordan Smith
1 book14 followersJordan Smith is an avid reader, birdwatcher, JRPG and boardgame player, student of history, and metal music fan. He also writes books occasionally.
A San Diego native, Jordan resides in San Antonio with his wife and daughter. He has been trying to escape the gravitational pull of Texas for years, to no avail.
Mourn Not the Mortals is his first book.
A San Diego native, Jordan resides in San Antonio with his wife and daughter. He has been trying to escape the gravitational pull of Texas for years, to no avail.
Mourn Not the Mortals is his first book.
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February 19, 2025
Scorn not the mortals, for their sins they will atone. Mourn not the mortals, for they feed us flesh and bone.
Jordan Smith's Mourn not the Mortals is a strong contender for my book of the year already.
I've been following progress of this for a while and with each reveal and tidbit I've been on the edge of my seat to digest more. Little did I know that I'd be engrossed in a journey for the ages and find a new favourite series. And one that I haven't been able to get out of my head.
This was a book that just had me wanting to read it constantly. I was neck deep into this world and I did not want to get out. Jordan has written the story in such a way that we have multiple points of view showing different parts of the world and what impact they have overall. You can tell that Jordan has thought of everything with how vastly different each area is and how each persons POV offers different insights to the world and the area that they are in.
The character work here was outstanding. The multiple points of view felt like their own story and I was constantly excited to see how each persons story pushed forward. These were characters with incredibly written backstory, their own concerns and goals, and their own personalities. It's hard to pick a favourite but there's a certain character that is really excited to uncover a long-lost language and I love stories like that. I also enjoyed the character dynamics and how each POV had their own personal story. These character relationships were a definite highlight and Jordan doesn't shy away from their flaws. The different personalities offered a good flow to the story. We have the scholars, pit-fighters and politicians and each of them offered a unique insight.
Jordan's writing is easily accessible, but I was a massive fan of how deep the lore was and how we uncovered everything. There are gods, dead languages, hidden corners of the world, mysteries and everything in between. I'm really excited to see where the story goes from here and how Jordan grows as an author. The plot is an exciting one and is only just getting started. I cannot wait for book two to see where this plot is going.
This is a solid debut that I am obsessed with. I've never been more gutted to finish a book, due to the sheer enjoyment I was having. From the start of Jordan's journey until the end of Mourn not the Mortals, I have been utterly fascinated by this, and I can honestly say that it will not end there. This is dark fantasy that will keep your eyes glued to the page for all its length. This is one of those stories that takes you to a faraway land and has you invested until you snap out of that trance.
Jordan Smith's Mourn not the Mortals is a strong contender for my book of the year already.
I've been following progress of this for a while and with each reveal and tidbit I've been on the edge of my seat to digest more. Little did I know that I'd be engrossed in a journey for the ages and find a new favourite series. And one that I haven't been able to get out of my head.
This was a book that just had me wanting to read it constantly. I was neck deep into this world and I did not want to get out. Jordan has written the story in such a way that we have multiple points of view showing different parts of the world and what impact they have overall. You can tell that Jordan has thought of everything with how vastly different each area is and how each persons POV offers different insights to the world and the area that they are in.
The character work here was outstanding. The multiple points of view felt like their own story and I was constantly excited to see how each persons story pushed forward. These were characters with incredibly written backstory, their own concerns and goals, and their own personalities. It's hard to pick a favourite but there's a certain character that is really excited to uncover a long-lost language and I love stories like that. I also enjoyed the character dynamics and how each POV had their own personal story. These character relationships were a definite highlight and Jordan doesn't shy away from their flaws. The different personalities offered a good flow to the story. We have the scholars, pit-fighters and politicians and each of them offered a unique insight.
Jordan's writing is easily accessible, but I was a massive fan of how deep the lore was and how we uncovered everything. There are gods, dead languages, hidden corners of the world, mysteries and everything in between. I'm really excited to see where the story goes from here and how Jordan grows as an author. The plot is an exciting one and is only just getting started. I cannot wait for book two to see where this plot is going.
This is a solid debut that I am obsessed with. I've never been more gutted to finish a book, due to the sheer enjoyment I was having. From the start of Jordan's journey until the end of Mourn not the Mortals, I have been utterly fascinated by this, and I can honestly say that it will not end there. This is dark fantasy that will keep your eyes glued to the page for all its length. This is one of those stories that takes you to a faraway land and has you invested until you snap out of that trance.
June 16, 2025
MntM is Jordan's high fantasy debut novel, and its a strong introduction into The Shattered Sphere Saga.
I think what stands out the most here is the characters. With multiple povs, and each of them perfectly written so you will for sure find your favorite. For me that one is Snare and Taren, even if I loved them all I felt like they was the one i connected most with. So I do hope we get more chapters of them in the next books.
Jordan's writing style is awesome, with how much he shows you from the world in the first book without it feeling overwhelming and hard to understand. And fully packed with lore and all that good stuff we fantasy lovers love.
If you love deep world building with many povs, this book is gonna be right up your alley. If you liked The Crimson Fire by Abel, I'm 100 % sure you are gonna like this one too.
I think what stands out the most here is the characters. With multiple povs, and each of them perfectly written so you will for sure find your favorite. For me that one is Snare and Taren, even if I loved them all I felt like they was the one i connected most with. So I do hope we get more chapters of them in the next books.
Jordan's writing style is awesome, with how much he shows you from the world in the first book without it feeling overwhelming and hard to understand. And fully packed with lore and all that good stuff we fantasy lovers love.
If you love deep world building with many povs, this book is gonna be right up your alley. If you liked The Crimson Fire by Abel, I'm 100 % sure you are gonna like this one too.
March 10, 2025
✨ ARC Book Review ✨
Thanks to Jordan Smith for the eARC of his novel Mourn Not the Mortals!
Mourn Not the Mortals is the start of a new fantasy series that has everything I look for in a fantasy novel. Told from the point of view of various characters, this novel starts the reader on an adventure across two continents and different settings.
I really enjoyed the world building in this novel and appreciated how the multiple settings were fleshed out. I also appreciated that the system of magic introduced in this story is still somewhat shrouded in mystery yet there is enough detail provided that the reader starts to understand how the magic works.
My only wish for this novel would have been more focus on the characters of Karek, Taren, and Snare since I enjoyed their chapters more than those told from Viktor and Aliss’ point of view.
If you are looking for a new fantasy series that has an old school fantasy feel and told from the point of view of multiple characters, I would strongly suggest reading this book. I can’t wait to see where this series goes!
Thanks to Jordan Smith for the eARC of his novel Mourn Not the Mortals!
Mourn Not the Mortals is the start of a new fantasy series that has everything I look for in a fantasy novel. Told from the point of view of various characters, this novel starts the reader on an adventure across two continents and different settings.
I really enjoyed the world building in this novel and appreciated how the multiple settings were fleshed out. I also appreciated that the system of magic introduced in this story is still somewhat shrouded in mystery yet there is enough detail provided that the reader starts to understand how the magic works.
My only wish for this novel would have been more focus on the characters of Karek, Taren, and Snare since I enjoyed their chapters more than those told from Viktor and Aliss’ point of view.
If you are looking for a new fantasy series that has an old school fantasy feel and told from the point of view of multiple characters, I would strongly suggest reading this book. I can’t wait to see where this series goes!
March 11, 2025
This book was so cool! It truly was a cool world to get into. I also really loved the different POVs! It’s so interesting to see Aliss go from being so devout to questioning everything she once knew. I was hooked from the very beginning with Larc and his dead master and all the secrets he needs to uncover.
May 10, 2025
Very enjoyable and would like the second book now please.
August 30, 2025
This book will transport you to another world and then send you into an eternal depression realizing everyday that our current reality is infinitely less interesting than the one Jordan created.
I cannot wait for more darkness and swearing as the series progresses.
I cannot wait for more darkness and swearing as the series progresses.
March 15, 2025
This is a gripping and gritty fantasy adventure in a wild and complex world with plenty of characters to root for, empathize with, question, and despise. I absolutely loved the themes of lost civilizations, dark magic, strange monsters and creatures, religious zealotry, and personal quests for meaning and emotional redemption. Plus it’s like Malazan and The Witcher met some GRRM and threw in Indiana Jones for good measure—and it’s just a fun as that all sounds. Can’t wait for more in this world, especially after an explosive end to this first book. Highly recommended.
March 13, 2025
I loved this book! As someone who does not venture into the fantasy genre very often I was worried I would be out of my element - boy was I wrong. The book had an easy to read flow to it and the characters were 🙌🏼👌🏼.
The book is told from different character perspectives, sometimes this can be a tricky approach in a book, but the author created such distinct voices for each person that it was easy to jump from one point of view to the next. I quickly had favorites and was always excited when I would get to their chapters. The world itself has so much going on and it was interesting to see all the different elements of each city at play.
I am already excitedly awaiting the second book of the series - I have so many questions I need answered. Highly recommend this book to those who love fantasy, and especially to those looking to get into the genre.
Okay - if you made it this far, here’s my absolutely biased take…the author is my brother and I am just SO proud of what he created. Every time I caught myself stressing about a storyline or leaning into a character I would stop and think about how my brother created them, from his own imagination…and now this story and these characters are “ours” to fall in love with and journey along side.
I had a front-row seat to his late-night writing sessions, witnessing the unwavering dedication it took to complete this story. Jordan has always been a magnificent storyteller, those of us who know and love him have always known this, I’m just glad the rest of you get to share in it as well. 5 stars to the brother (and author) who hangs the moon. I’m so grateful to dive into the world you created, thank you for sharing it with us ❤️
The book is told from different character perspectives, sometimes this can be a tricky approach in a book, but the author created such distinct voices for each person that it was easy to jump from one point of view to the next. I quickly had favorites and was always excited when I would get to their chapters. The world itself has so much going on and it was interesting to see all the different elements of each city at play.
I am already excitedly awaiting the second book of the series - I have so many questions I need answered. Highly recommend this book to those who love fantasy, and especially to those looking to get into the genre.
Okay - if you made it this far, here’s my absolutely biased take…the author is my brother and I am just SO proud of what he created. Every time I caught myself stressing about a storyline or leaning into a character I would stop and think about how my brother created them, from his own imagination…and now this story and these characters are “ours” to fall in love with and journey along side.
I had a front-row seat to his late-night writing sessions, witnessing the unwavering dedication it took to complete this story. Jordan has always been a magnificent storyteller, those of us who know and love him have always known this, I’m just glad the rest of you get to share in it as well. 5 stars to the brother (and author) who hangs the moon. I’m so grateful to dive into the world you created, thank you for sharing it with us ❤️
March 17, 2025
First, a big thank you to Jordan for giving/trusting me with an ARC of Mourn Not the Mortals.
Second, this book was genius! Jordan has excellent world building, a unique magic system, and a wonderful feel for each of his characters. There are multiple POVs throughout the book, and each character adds to the story wonderfully. I was truly enthralled by each character’s backstory, each personality, and each character’s relationships with other people throughout the story. This book was a wonderful debut that really showcases Jordan’s talent and has me excited to see what else he has in store for the series as well as other stories to come! Mourn Not the Mortals was a solid 4.5/5 stars, and I highly suggest you go pick it up if you’re interested in an intricate and hooking high fantasy read!
Second, this book was genius! Jordan has excellent world building, a unique magic system, and a wonderful feel for each of his characters. There are multiple POVs throughout the book, and each character adds to the story wonderfully. I was truly enthralled by each character’s backstory, each personality, and each character’s relationships with other people throughout the story. This book was a wonderful debut that really showcases Jordan’s talent and has me excited to see what else he has in store for the series as well as other stories to come! Mourn Not the Mortals was a solid 4.5/5 stars, and I highly suggest you go pick it up if you’re interested in an intricate and hooking high fantasy read!
March 7, 2025
This book is fantastic. Mourn Not the Mortals is the journey of several characters in a well thought out fantasy world. What I appreciate about this book is that the fantasy ‘magic’ mechanisms aren’t explicitly spelled out—there’s some mystery to the inner workings of it all. It definitely reminds me of GRRM’s GoT in that regard. Smith does a great job giving clear, distinctive voices to each character, adding a layer of significant depth to the overall story; and I really feel like any reader will be able to at least one of the characters. I particularly liked Larc’s chapters, but I really connected with Aliss and Karek. Without spoiling anything, the ending was definitely…. a cliffhanger, and I’m eagerly awaiting the second installment. Read this book!
March 11, 2025
Loved it! Really great book
August 10, 2025
Fantastic just read it.
August 30, 2025
I know the author, he's a swell guy. Oh yeah, the book is pretty good, too.
August 6, 2025
An excellent debut novel that rivals The First Law!
I was compelled by each character as they were introduced, and I'm glad Smith took time for us to get to know them. Hardly any POV characters actually interact with one another yet (is that a spoiler? Idk) but in their setup I can see how some might interact in the series and I can't wait for them to meet.
The story felt deeply influenced by Joe Abercrombie and I'm here for it. I found myself turning pages faster and faster toward the end as each character was set on the course for what will probably be a heck of a ride in book two.
MNTM felt like the setup of an elaborate chess game that I am seated for, and the epilogue felt like a post-credit film scene that would make everyone in the theater gasp and post about breathlessly on Twitter.
I was compelled by each character as they were introduced, and I'm glad Smith took time for us to get to know them. Hardly any POV characters actually interact with one another yet (is that a spoiler? Idk) but in their setup I can see how some might interact in the series and I can't wait for them to meet.
The story felt deeply influenced by Joe Abercrombie and I'm here for it. I found myself turning pages faster and faster toward the end as each character was set on the course for what will probably be a heck of a ride in book two.
MNTM felt like the setup of an elaborate chess game that I am seated for, and the epilogue felt like a post-credit film scene that would make everyone in the theater gasp and post about breathlessly on Twitter.
March 12, 2025
I had so much fun diving into the world that Jordan Smith created. I was intimidated by the cast of characters listed in the beginning but the story revealed itself so beautifully and delicately, it was really engaging.
Smith also writes his characters with so much care and empathy. Their motivations and fears and defenses are relatable and makes each character interesting to follow.
He writes beautiful descriptions setting the scenes but doesn’t lean on flowery language that makes you want to skim through anything.
I’m really excited to dive deeper into this world and learn more about its magic. Highly recommend!
Smith also writes his characters with so much care and empathy. Their motivations and fears and defenses are relatable and makes each character interesting to follow.
He writes beautiful descriptions setting the scenes but doesn’t lean on flowery language that makes you want to skim through anything.
I’m really excited to dive deeper into this world and learn more about its magic. Highly recommend!
August 15, 2025
Wow. Jordan has outdone themselves. This book BLEW MY MIND. it was so brilliantly and beautifully written and it had me not wanting to put it down. I LOVED IT.
February 19, 2025
This is my first high-fantasy read and fortunately it wrapped me in its story the moment I opened the book.
The language is of such nature that you simply feel like it passes you to the world of the book captivating you there unable to leave the book from your hand. Every chapter has a special way to start and it keeps you in it through the whole time.
Even tho we have the point of more than two characters this is nothing to drag you down. Every character's story makes you curious to see how they will finally connect and the fact that each character is from a different part for the world adds to the bonus.
We get to see the point of every part of the land. Even the enemy land which I have not met in other books. We get to see the whole world through the eyes of those who live in those parts.
And you never know where the story leads you. I could not guess what it's gonna happen further FOR THE LIFE OF ME. I kept not trying but it was no avail because the story gave you only the details you needed to have at the moment leaving you craving for more.
Also the world building 😩 it is so complex and well done there is no downfall to it. Everything has its place and its explanation.
The only reason I rated it 4 stars instead of 5 it is because it has long chapters and for me is hard to focus this much on a chapter. At times I wished it would've ended sooner.
The language is of such nature that you simply feel like it passes you to the world of the book captivating you there unable to leave the book from your hand. Every chapter has a special way to start and it keeps you in it through the whole time.
Even tho we have the point of more than two characters this is nothing to drag you down. Every character's story makes you curious to see how they will finally connect and the fact that each character is from a different part for the world adds to the bonus.
We get to see the point of every part of the land. Even the enemy land which I have not met in other books. We get to see the whole world through the eyes of those who live in those parts.
And you never know where the story leads you. I could not guess what it's gonna happen further FOR THE LIFE OF ME. I kept not trying but it was no avail because the story gave you only the details you needed to have at the moment leaving you craving for more.
Also the world building 😩 it is so complex and well done there is no downfall to it. Everything has its place and its explanation.
The only reason I rated it 4 stars instead of 5 it is because it has long chapters and for me is hard to focus this much on a chapter. At times I wished it would've ended sooner.
February 16, 2025
There is a lot of world building and a generous amount of protagonists to keep track of, but unlike other books I have read, I did not become disgruntled or frustrated with this story. The protagonists were all equally interesting, their storyline intricate and well woven, their stories and characters sticking with me between reading and after I finished the last page.
The author has created individuals that are distinct and clear, something sorely lacking in the current fast fiction of our time.
This is a fantasy but a gritty, realistic one with dark veins and flavours of betrayal, violence and sorrow. An entire set of cultures, religions, beliefs and systems are intricately created and clearly defined, the colours and descriptions of locations drawing me in to be there in my imagination. Relationships (friendships, colleagies, fighters, family, etc) have depth and a sense of truth to them that one can recognise and relate to.
I usually don't read books in this slightly grittier fantasy genre as if written badly they are miserable confusing and boring but I honestly love this book, adore the characters (especially Viktor, hehe) and love how each one has flaws and none are impossible to believe. First time I've ever enjoyed and epilogue and prologue. Cannot wait for the continuation of the story!
Five stars for sure
The author has created individuals that are distinct and clear, something sorely lacking in the current fast fiction of our time.
This is a fantasy but a gritty, realistic one with dark veins and flavours of betrayal, violence and sorrow. An entire set of cultures, religions, beliefs and systems are intricately created and clearly defined, the colours and descriptions of locations drawing me in to be there in my imagination. Relationships (friendships, colleagies, fighters, family, etc) have depth and a sense of truth to them that one can recognise and relate to.
I usually don't read books in this slightly grittier fantasy genre as if written badly they are miserable confusing and boring but I honestly love this book, adore the characters (especially Viktor, hehe) and love how each one has flaws and none are impossible to believe. First time I've ever enjoyed and epilogue and prologue. Cannot wait for the continuation of the story!
Five stars for sure
August 9, 2025
I was privileged to receive this book as an ARC read via Bookfunnel. The novel's intriguing title and the promises of revealing lost history, a Faustian bargain, and a conflict between belief and doubt drew me in.
The book is well-written with plenty of intrigue and action - fight scenes, otherworldly horrors, cloak and dagger conspiracies, mysterious powers, and a smidgen of romance.
The plot follows several characters on their individual journeys:
- A highborn, but inexperienced officer, Aliss Cistalion, is placed in charge of a squad of battle-weary soldiers on an expedition into the heart of enemy territory. Though capable of looking after herself, this is the first mission she has been in charge of. Fortunately, she has a trusted friend as her second-in-command. But is that a help or a hindrance?
- Prize-fighter Viktor Pryton, hates his job, his boss and living in the squalid Hollows. Despite his alcohol addiction, he is a capable and valuable fighter, and - no matter how much he tries not to care - he has friends. For their sakes as much as his own, he tries to get out from under the thumb of the slumlord he is bound to.
- Together with his Initiate, disgraced linguist historian, Karek Albright, travels to hide from his own past whilst trying to uncover that of the world at large. Their lives take a dramatic turn when the mysterious and frightening Protectorate blackmails Karek into assisting them in deciphering the secrets of an ancient artefact.
- Snare is an Adept (a kind of magical warrior nun) of the Protectorate, tasked with retrieving children cast out by their communities for their innate magic. The child Snare is sent to retrieve is Linnet, but against protocol she is persuaded to take young Taren too. Both appear to have similar mysterious powers to Snare’s. The Protectorate’s actions though don't appear to be motivated by benevolence towards gifted children, but by a mysterious and malevolent agenda.
Despite a large cast, and a plot that jumps around from one character to the other, similar to the Game of Thrones books, I could easily differentiate the main characters. I struggled a bit with some of the minor ones, especially in the squad of soldiers, but overall, I could follow the subplots of each group of characters.
If you like multiple POVs with characters from all walks of life, a variety of cultures that aren’t just quasi-mediaeval kingdoms, and you love lengthy sagas that take time to unveil their gruesome secrets, The Shattered Sphere Saga is a good choice. It sits well next to the likes of, say, Tad Williams’ series The Witchwood Crown, etc.
My only minus point, and given how popular voluminous fantasy series are, this may be a me-thing, was that the book felt like a first chapter rather than a novel in its own right. There is nothing wrong with the writing - the characters and the world-building are great - but I was a little disappointed this book seemed to be mostly set up. This lessened my enjoyment, but I admit it's a matter of taste.
The book is well-written with plenty of intrigue and action - fight scenes, otherworldly horrors, cloak and dagger conspiracies, mysterious powers, and a smidgen of romance.
The plot follows several characters on their individual journeys:
- A highborn, but inexperienced officer, Aliss Cistalion, is placed in charge of a squad of battle-weary soldiers on an expedition into the heart of enemy territory. Though capable of looking after herself, this is the first mission she has been in charge of. Fortunately, she has a trusted friend as her second-in-command. But is that a help or a hindrance?
- Prize-fighter Viktor Pryton, hates his job, his boss and living in the squalid Hollows. Despite his alcohol addiction, he is a capable and valuable fighter, and - no matter how much he tries not to care - he has friends. For their sakes as much as his own, he tries to get out from under the thumb of the slumlord he is bound to.
- Together with his Initiate, disgraced linguist historian, Karek Albright, travels to hide from his own past whilst trying to uncover that of the world at large. Their lives take a dramatic turn when the mysterious and frightening Protectorate blackmails Karek into assisting them in deciphering the secrets of an ancient artefact.
- Snare is an Adept (a kind of magical warrior nun) of the Protectorate, tasked with retrieving children cast out by their communities for their innate magic. The child Snare is sent to retrieve is Linnet, but against protocol she is persuaded to take young Taren too. Both appear to have similar mysterious powers to Snare’s. The Protectorate’s actions though don't appear to be motivated by benevolence towards gifted children, but by a mysterious and malevolent agenda.
Despite a large cast, and a plot that jumps around from one character to the other, similar to the Game of Thrones books, I could easily differentiate the main characters. I struggled a bit with some of the minor ones, especially in the squad of soldiers, but overall, I could follow the subplots of each group of characters.
If you like multiple POVs with characters from all walks of life, a variety of cultures that aren’t just quasi-mediaeval kingdoms, and you love lengthy sagas that take time to unveil their gruesome secrets, The Shattered Sphere Saga is a good choice. It sits well next to the likes of, say, Tad Williams’ series The Witchwood Crown, etc.
My only minus point, and given how popular voluminous fantasy series are, this may be a me-thing, was that the book felt like a first chapter rather than a novel in its own right. There is nothing wrong with the writing - the characters and the world-building are great - but I was a little disappointed this book seemed to be mostly set up. This lessened my enjoyment, but I admit it's a matter of taste.
March 17, 2025
This was an epic tale, and dark and gritty world of lore, complex characters, and unique powers.
You experience multiple pov as you explore the diverse characters and follow them on their quests, or journeys of growth. They each have unique abilities or desires, fueled by ambition, knowledge, devotion or power, and it blends religion, magic and culture well.
I enjoyed all the elements of political intrigue and duty, the responsibilities of leadership, and the mystery of what darkness lies in the beyond.
I think Aliss, Taren and Snare are my favourite characters so far, but I enjoyed learning about them all, and I am definitely curious to learn more about Larc.
Although there are a lot of characters, it's easy to keep track of them all by their distinct personalities or missions, and the gritty storyline keeps you intrigued, especially with the ending.
If you like the vibes of GoT, The Witcher and Shadow and Bone, this is for you.
⚔️ "We share the same destination even if we walk seperate paths"
⚔️ "You have devotion in it's purest form. That is the characteristic of a leader I need for what I am about to charge you with"
⚔️ "You're not cursed, and you're certainly not demons. What they call an Affliction, we adepts call the Talent"
⚔️ "All those who wish to lead must take that first step. It's every subsequent step that determines if you are suited for the task"
You experience multiple pov as you explore the diverse characters and follow them on their quests, or journeys of growth. They each have unique abilities or desires, fueled by ambition, knowledge, devotion or power, and it blends religion, magic and culture well.
I enjoyed all the elements of political intrigue and duty, the responsibilities of leadership, and the mystery of what darkness lies in the beyond.
I think Aliss, Taren and Snare are my favourite characters so far, but I enjoyed learning about them all, and I am definitely curious to learn more about Larc.
Although there are a lot of characters, it's easy to keep track of them all by their distinct personalities or missions, and the gritty storyline keeps you intrigued, especially with the ending.
If you like the vibes of GoT, The Witcher and Shadow and Bone, this is for you.
⚔️ "We share the same destination even if we walk seperate paths"
⚔️ "You have devotion in it's purest form. That is the characteristic of a leader I need for what I am about to charge you with"
⚔️ "You're not cursed, and you're certainly not demons. What they call an Affliction, we adepts call the Talent"
⚔️ "All those who wish to lead must take that first step. It's every subsequent step that determines if you are suited for the task"
December 19, 2025
Book review
Author name: Jordan Smith
Name of book: Mourn not the morals
Genre of book: High fantasy/ dark fantasy
Elaina Wall
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If you’re tired of standard "save the world" tropes, Mourn Not the Mortals is the breath of fresh air you’ve been waiting for. Jordan Smith weaves a tale that is as much a philosophical inquiry as it is a fantasy epic.
With prose that echoes the atmospheric depth of Circe, Smith explores the intersection of the divine and the decaying. It’s a story about the bravery it takes to be fragile in a world of immortals. Perfect for fans of lyrical writing, intricate magic systems, and characters that stay with you long after the final page is turned.
also, Jordan Smith challenges the fundamental hunger for immortality. The narrative's strength lies in its liminality—the space between the old gods and the new world. Smith’s greatest achievement here is the pacing; while some may find the first act deliberate, it serves to ground the reader in the protagonist's profound sense of "time running out."
Author name: Jordan Smith
Name of book: Mourn not the morals
Genre of book: High fantasy/ dark fantasy
Elaina Wall
#bookloungereviewteam
If you’re tired of standard "save the world" tropes, Mourn Not the Mortals is the breath of fresh air you’ve been waiting for. Jordan Smith weaves a tale that is as much a philosophical inquiry as it is a fantasy epic.
With prose that echoes the atmospheric depth of Circe, Smith explores the intersection of the divine and the decaying. It’s a story about the bravery it takes to be fragile in a world of immortals. Perfect for fans of lyrical writing, intricate magic systems, and characters that stay with you long after the final page is turned.
also, Jordan Smith challenges the fundamental hunger for immortality. The narrative's strength lies in its liminality—the space between the old gods and the new world. Smith’s greatest achievement here is the pacing; while some may find the first act deliberate, it serves to ground the reader in the protagonist's profound sense of "time running out."
May 11, 2025
4.5
It's giving Joe Abercrombie level grimdark realness but if Abercrombie were better at world building! (no shade Mr. Abercrombie I love you)
Honestly that's all I would need to read in order to be convinced to read this book! You know when you're reading a fantasy book and you get confused because the author is throwing all of these places and things at you that just don't make sense yet? Jordan Smith does such a fantastic job NOT doing that, he really eases you into the world. Truly the world building in this book is TOP NOTCH and kept me enthralled from beginning to end.
Also the characters are so good and the women are written SO WELL. Justice for Taren!!!
**potential hint at a spoiler
He is also not afraid to kill characters and that's something that I really admire. My mouth was actually hanging open at one point because of this very thing.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and CANNOT WAIT for the second book (and half!!).
It's giving Joe Abercrombie level grimdark realness but if Abercrombie were better at world building! (no shade Mr. Abercrombie I love you)
Honestly that's all I would need to read in order to be convinced to read this book! You know when you're reading a fantasy book and you get confused because the author is throwing all of these places and things at you that just don't make sense yet? Jordan Smith does such a fantastic job NOT doing that, he really eases you into the world. Truly the world building in this book is TOP NOTCH and kept me enthralled from beginning to end.
Also the characters are so good and the women are written SO WELL. Justice for Taren!!!
**potential hint at a spoiler
He is also not afraid to kill characters and that's something that I really admire. My mouth was actually hanging open at one point because of this very thing.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and CANNOT WAIT for the second book (and half!!).
October 21, 2025
Mourn Not the Mortals by Jordan Smith
Trigger warnings: scenes of violence, death, guilt, religious and ideological conflict
Rating: 4/5
Genre: epic fantasy
Mourn Not the Mortals is a richly imagined entry into the Shattered Sphere Saga that rewards patient readers with compelling character arcs and a layered world. It took me a few chapters to fully immerse myself in the story, but once the pieces began to fall into place, I was hooked.
Jordan Smith crafts a high fantasy tale filled with ancient relics, political intrigue, and a protagonist—Aliss Cistalion—whose journey from sheltered servant to expedition leader is both believable and inspiring. At times, the narrative jumps between characters and perspectives, which can be a bit disorienting, especially early on. However, the payoff is worth it: the character development is strong across the board, and each figure adds depth to the overarching conflict between the Empire and the Protectorate.
If you're a fan of epic fantasy with a slow burn and thoughtful world-building, this book is well worth your time.
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May 23, 2025
I was fortunate enough to receive an ARC copy of this fantastic new epic fantasy novel, written with all the prose of a true classic. The world building is incredible well done and in depth, with every little detail being thought out and explored through the characters. The multiple POV really allows the story to develop, and the reader can start to piece together the bigger plot from all angles. The characters themselves are all detailed and have their own motives and flaws making them incredible realistic. While the plot is not fast moving, it still keeps you gripped from the very start
February 20, 2025
🌟 ARC review 🌟
Mourn not the mortals… but I will mourn having finished this book.
Jordan Smith has created a high fantasy world which is I cannot imagine will leave people disappointed. The storytelling is gripping, leaving the reader to get to sit with the characters and become invested in their story.
This book contains multiple POVs, reminiscent of GoT where we can see paths come together on the page or in the future. The POVs are also diverse, adding to the GoT parallels.
However, I put down GoT pretty early on due to some lofty language and lengthy descriptions akin to Tolkien. But this book made me read on after the first chapter. Its language is accessible, elaborate and at times intricate. It is clear that the author has taken care of his work and the style of a fantasy novel in this particular genre.
I totally recommended it to my fiancé, because he can’t seem to get into reading unless it is lore-heavy fantasy. And even though this doesn’t read as lore-heavy, the work is setting up an interesting network of cultures and traditions as well as a magic system that still eludes me.
When reading the prologue, I was utterly confused. After reading the first chapter, I was invested. After reading a few more chapters I wanted to know everything. Certain characters will resonate more with different readers, which I think is an absolute selling point for this book. There is a character for everyone to enjoy, and yet it is all balanced enough for the reader not be confused or disappointed.
The ending came a little more abrupt and I am left with some burning questions. The epilogue answered questions I didn’t know I had, but did little to quiet my mind on the trajectory of some of my believed characters.
This read felt like a breath of fresh air after reading some popular books. The writing is relaxed, words chosen wisely and deliberately. If you enjoy fantasy books and the art of world-building, please give this a go. It deserves all the attention it can get. I will not be surprised if this will end up being the next big fantasy series that hits the charts and takes online media by storm.
Go put it on your shelves!
Mourn not the mortals… but I will mourn having finished this book.
Jordan Smith has created a high fantasy world which is I cannot imagine will leave people disappointed. The storytelling is gripping, leaving the reader to get to sit with the characters and become invested in their story.
This book contains multiple POVs, reminiscent of GoT where we can see paths come together on the page or in the future. The POVs are also diverse, adding to the GoT parallels.
However, I put down GoT pretty early on due to some lofty language and lengthy descriptions akin to Tolkien. But this book made me read on after the first chapter. Its language is accessible, elaborate and at times intricate. It is clear that the author has taken care of his work and the style of a fantasy novel in this particular genre.
I totally recommended it to my fiancé, because he can’t seem to get into reading unless it is lore-heavy fantasy. And even though this doesn’t read as lore-heavy, the work is setting up an interesting network of cultures and traditions as well as a magic system that still eludes me.
When reading the prologue, I was utterly confused. After reading the first chapter, I was invested. After reading a few more chapters I wanted to know everything. Certain characters will resonate more with different readers, which I think is an absolute selling point for this book. There is a character for everyone to enjoy, and yet it is all balanced enough for the reader not be confused or disappointed.
The ending came a little more abrupt and I am left with some burning questions. The epilogue answered questions I didn’t know I had, but did little to quiet my mind on the trajectory of some of my believed characters.
This read felt like a breath of fresh air after reading some popular books. The writing is relaxed, words chosen wisely and deliberately. If you enjoy fantasy books and the art of world-building, please give this a go. It deserves all the attention it can get. I will not be surprised if this will end up being the next big fantasy series that hits the charts and takes online media by storm.
Go put it on your shelves!
February 24, 2025
Jordan Smith's debut novel, Mourn Not the Mortals is a fantastic and compelling new entry into the epic fantasy genre. Smith's voice is reminiscent of the classic fantasies such as Robert Jordan and Stephen Lawhead, but his in-depth worldbuilding and robust cast of characters breathe fresh life into the familiar tropes and elements.
The world of Mourn Not the Mortals is dark and gritty -- to the point where I would almost classify this as a grimdark fantasy. Very few good things actually happen over the course of the book, and as the plot unfolds and the tension increases, it seems impossible to imagine a happy ending for our characters. Smith isn't afraid to kill his darlings, and nor is he afraid to put them through hell and back, but that's what makes me want to keep reading.
Sometimes, stories with multiple POVs fail to give a unique voice to each character. That isn't the case in Mourn Not the Mortals. Karek, Aliss, Viktor, and Snare all stand out from another. Their goals, desires, needs, and personalities are distinct and help drive the plot forward; the few moments when their paths cross had me giddy with excitement, and I hope to see more interaction between the primary cast in the next.
Overall, this book was an absolute pleasure to read and I'm so grateful to Jordan for allowing me the chance to be an ARC reviewer! From his writing, you can tell he's an avid fantasy reader. He does an excellent job of breaking up the action with slower moments of introspection, and there was never a scene or moment that fell dull or unnecessary. The ending is a little abrupt, but it's a great setup for the next book and I cannot wait to see where the author takes these characters next.
The world of Mourn Not the Mortals is dark and gritty -- to the point where I would almost classify this as a grimdark fantasy. Very few good things actually happen over the course of the book, and as the plot unfolds and the tension increases, it seems impossible to imagine a happy ending for our characters. Smith isn't afraid to kill his darlings, and nor is he afraid to put them through hell and back, but that's what makes me want to keep reading.
Sometimes, stories with multiple POVs fail to give a unique voice to each character. That isn't the case in Mourn Not the Mortals. Karek, Aliss, Viktor, and Snare all stand out from another. Their goals, desires, needs, and personalities are distinct and help drive the plot forward; the few moments when their paths cross had me giddy with excitement, and I hope to see more interaction between the primary cast in the next.
Overall, this book was an absolute pleasure to read and I'm so grateful to Jordan for allowing me the chance to be an ARC reviewer! From his writing, you can tell he's an avid fantasy reader. He does an excellent job of breaking up the action with slower moments of introspection, and there was never a scene or moment that fell dull or unnecessary. The ending is a little abrupt, but it's a great setup for the next book and I cannot wait to see where the author takes these characters next.
September 15, 2025
There's a lot to like in this book, there really is. I love the multiple POVs from opposing sides. I enjoyed the different factions Adepts, Aspirants, scholars. Those are just really cool concepts for me as an epic fantasy fan. The magic system (the Talent for the Adepts) was really neat, where people can do different things like walk through walls, turn invisible, and such. It's a lot of fun.
The characters were well done, I'd say Snare was my favorite because I loved a hardened warrior/mage type showcase a soft spot that bucks the rigid process of their sect. Aliss was interesting, I like when characters are thrust into leadership roles and drama ensues because of their inexperience. Plus her romance with her second in command dude was nicely done. Taren the young boy with the Talent was good but we didn't get a ton of him, although I think some wicked stuff is in his future.
This was a very good book, one that I was really invested in, but the reason why I am only giving 4 stars is because this book didn't have a clear resolution. It reads like the first part of a larger story (which was confirmed by the author in a message at the back, that the story is split in two). This is strictly personal taste, I prefer each book in a series to have some sort of plot resolution, and I didn't get one here. For most of the story, I wasn't exactly sure where things were going. Again, totally engrossed in the story and will definitely read the next one!
The characters were well done, I'd say Snare was my favorite because I loved a hardened warrior/mage type showcase a soft spot that bucks the rigid process of their sect. Aliss was interesting, I like when characters are thrust into leadership roles and drama ensues because of their inexperience. Plus her romance with her second in command dude was nicely done. Taren the young boy with the Talent was good but we didn't get a ton of him, although I think some wicked stuff is in his future.
This was a very good book, one that I was really invested in, but the reason why I am only giving 4 stars is because this book didn't have a clear resolution. It reads like the first part of a larger story (which was confirmed by the author in a message at the back, that the story is split in two). This is strictly personal taste, I prefer each book in a series to have some sort of plot resolution, and I didn't get one here. For most of the story, I wasn't exactly sure where things were going. Again, totally engrossed in the story and will definitely read the next one!
August 28, 2025
Mourn Not the Mortals by Jordan Smith
🧱 Lost lands
🧱 Long-hated enemies
🧱 An untried commander
🧱 Rumored relics
🧱 Not a romance (no spice)
Genre: Fantasy
All that remains of an otherworldly race are the forgotten relics and ruins of an ancient age, now coveted by kingdoms...
Okay, so take this review with a little grain of salt. This book is a bit darker than what I usually read but really the only reason I don't plan on continuing the series is because it has too much strong language for my taste. Obviously that's just personal preference. Other than that this is an intriguing start to what promises to be a long and detailed series. This book has several main characters none of which seems to take precedence over the others. My favorite storylines were Taren and Snare's ad my least favorite were Aliss' and Viktor's. I was rather expecting the characters' paths to cross at some pont but I guess that's for future books. It did feel a bit like reading the first quarter of four or five books rather than one cohesive novel. I was left on several cliffhangers and am particularly worried about Taren!
Book 1 in the Shattered Spheres series
Opening line: "Try as he might, Larc Garess could not get used to the stink of a dead body."
🧱 Lost lands
🧱 Long-hated enemies
🧱 An untried commander
🧱 Rumored relics
🧱 Not a romance (no spice)
Genre: Fantasy
All that remains of an otherworldly race are the forgotten relics and ruins of an ancient age, now coveted by kingdoms...
Okay, so take this review with a little grain of salt. This book is a bit darker than what I usually read but really the only reason I don't plan on continuing the series is because it has too much strong language for my taste. Obviously that's just personal preference. Other than that this is an intriguing start to what promises to be a long and detailed series. This book has several main characters none of which seems to take precedence over the others. My favorite storylines were Taren and Snare's ad my least favorite were Aliss' and Viktor's. I was rather expecting the characters' paths to cross at some pont but I guess that's for future books. It did feel a bit like reading the first quarter of four or five books rather than one cohesive novel. I was left on several cliffhangers and am particularly worried about Taren!
Book 1 in the Shattered Spheres series
Opening line: "Try as he might, Larc Garess could not get used to the stink of a dead body."
July 22, 2025
Mourn Not the Mortals completely blew me away. The world is gritty and beautifully layered, with this eerie, lived-in feel that made it so easy to get lost in. Every faction, every setting—from the decaying halls of Luviatra to the raw chaos of the Hollows—felt so real and vivid.
The characters are unforgettable. I loved how different they were—Aliss with her inner conflict and quiet strength, and Viktor, who’s rough and reckless but surprisingly loyal. And Larc? Creepy, fascinating, and the perfect wild card. Their stories are so different but all feel deeply connected.
This book is dark, smart, and full of emotion. The writing is sharp but never overdone, and it knows exactly when to slow down and when to punch you in the gut. I kept thinking about it even when I wasn’t reading.
If you love complex characters, morally gray choices, and immersive fantasy, I seriously can’t recommend this enough.
The characters are unforgettable. I loved how different they were—Aliss with her inner conflict and quiet strength, and Viktor, who’s rough and reckless but surprisingly loyal. And Larc? Creepy, fascinating, and the perfect wild card. Their stories are so different but all feel deeply connected.
This book is dark, smart, and full of emotion. The writing is sharp but never overdone, and it knows exactly when to slow down and when to punch you in the gut. I kept thinking about it even when I wasn’t reading.
If you love complex characters, morally gray choices, and immersive fantasy, I seriously can’t recommend this enough.
March 13, 2025
Mourn not the Mortals is a smashing debut novel from Jordan Smith. I was lucky enough to receive an ARC of his book and read through it fairly quickly, not wanting to put it down.
I’m very picky about the fantasy books I bother to finish and this is one that I did and enjoyed most every moment of my time reading it. The book has several different characters to follow and all feel very fleshed out, different from each other, and given time to grow and have their own arcs. Alongside the characters, the world and its history and lore felt nicely described and illustrative.
My only minor complaint is that it took a little time to get going with some of its plot lines. I remain excited about where the story shall go from here!
I’m very picky about the fantasy books I bother to finish and this is one that I did and enjoyed most every moment of my time reading it. The book has several different characters to follow and all feel very fleshed out, different from each other, and given time to grow and have their own arcs. Alongside the characters, the world and its history and lore felt nicely described and illustrative.
My only minor complaint is that it took a little time to get going with some of its plot lines. I remain excited about where the story shall go from here!
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