Be a Good Girl and Choke on this D*ck

by K.L. Donn

Hael River has no idea what’s coming for her.
The sins she’s going to pay for.

Her father is to blame.

But I’ll take her hate if it means I can bask in her light.

I’m not a nice man.
Not even a tolerable one.
When my employee’s threaten to quit, I do nothing to stop them.

After they see what her presence does to me, though, they fight to turn her hate into love.

Can a woman like Hael ever love a man like me?
I doubt it, but I’m still going to stake my claim.

As my assistant It’s about damn time Dark Ruelle gets what’s coming to him.

Genres: Novella, Smut, Dark

186 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 28, 2025

About the author

Krystal writes as USA Today Bestselling Author KL Donn. Born and raised in Alberta, Canada, she has over 50 published books in differing romance genres. She enjoys making her readers cry as they go on a deep journey of love and loss through each book.

Experiencing her own insta-love at 17, Krystal has been with her husband for 18 years and they share 4 beautiful children together.
 
Fun facts about KL:
Perpetual romantic.
Coffee addict.
Sarcasm lover.
Give her an action flick over a romance. But a romance book over action. She’s weird like that.
Did she mention coffee addict?
Closet shopaholic.
Beach lover.
Coffee addict, it bears repeating. Again.
Husband obsessed. Hers that is, you can keep yours.
Mom of 6, well 7 if you count the husband. Oh and 2 of those are a cat & dog, that are confused about their species.

Reviews

[Blue]

Nope. The FMC’s mom is someone the MMC loved.

[april ♡ probably reading smut - safety reviews · Rating 4 out of 5]

5/5 🔥 If you see this… no you didn’t. But dayummm. Virgin heroine, stalker hero, daddy kink galore- my kind of kinky novella. 🤭

[Kiki · Rating 5 out of 5]

ignore this title 🥴pure delectable smut,

[Sarah Marie · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was such a great addition to the series!

I have been so interested Dark Ruelle after the small glimpses that we’ve gotten of him throughout KL Donn’s other books. And the wait was absolutely worth it.

Hael is sweet and feisty and the perfect KL Donn FMC. As often as she was self assured, she was also worried that she was a little much. That her wants were too dark, that her needs were too much. But Dark refuses to give her anything but was she wants deep in her soul.

Dark is possessive, over the top, and absolute perfection. He was the perfect match for Hael, and I loved watching him love her. He does it with intent and purpose, and making sure that she loves herself and all her desires as much as he does. He is absolutely one of my favorite KL Donn MMC’s of all time.

An asbolute perfect addition to my KL Donn Library section and great read just in time for spooky season!!

[Francheska · Rating 5 out of 5]

BAD MEN POSSESSING GOOD GIRLS BOOK 3 🥵 🥵

Dark & his sweet pea , Hael ❤️

It starts with a dark and twisted sense of revenge , morphs into an even more powerful obsession with the innocent and submissive creature that is Hael… her father is his enemy ,but she is his forever !

V FMC
STALKER
KIDNAPPING
BSDM
AGE GAP
DADDY KINK
NOVELLA

[Toni Mathews · Rating 4 out of 5]

I just finished “Be a Good Girl and Choke on This Dick” by K.L. Donn, the third scorching entry in her Bad Men Possessing Good Girls series, and it’s another dose of unfiltered taboo heat that dives deep into dark romance territory.  This one follows Hael, a brooding, obsessive alpha with a daddy kink edge, who fixates on his “sweetpea”, a vulnerable young woman caught in his web of possession and control, blending stalker vibes with captive elements that ramp up the intensity.  The plot explodes with forbidden desire, power imbalances, and steamy scenes that explore dominance, submission, and that signature age-gap dynamic, all wrapped in a quick, addictive narrative.  Donn keeps the writing raw and engaging, delivering emotional layers amid the filth, though it might skim on world-building for a deeper dive into backstories. If you’re here for filthy, morally gray heroes and high-spice novellas that don’t apologize, this delivers. I’d give it 4 out of 5 stars for keeping the series’ guilty thrill alive.

[Megan Carbajal · Rating 5 out of 5]

BAGGACOTD is book 3 in the Bad Men Possessing Good Girls series and man did it not disappoint! Dark and Hael's Story is anything but a meet cute. It is a steamy hot stalker romance where its suppose to be about revenge because she is the daughter of his enemy but the moment he lays eyes on Hael he knows that she is his and will stop at nothing to make sure that he has her. He may be a obsessive, possessive walking red flag to most people "even to her thinking he is a psycho stalker" but he does everything for her to ensure that she is his and only his and he is only hers. If you haven't read it you are in for a wild ride between Dark and Hael.

Tropes:
Mine, Never Let Me Go, Daddy Kink, Revenge obsession, BDSM elements/Play, Size difference, sexy degradation, choking.

SPICE RATING: 4-4.5

[Lynne Garlick · Rating 5 out of 5]

Stick a fork in me because I am done!! The Queen has done it again! Giving us all things taboo, hot as fire, whilst evoking every single FEEL!!
You may have met Dark before, if you haven’t? *rubs hands together, you are in for a treat!! He is the epitome of dark (pardon the pun), obsessive, possessive alpha once he lays eyes on Hael. All previous ideas he may of had, flip completely and makes him reassess.
His new plans are set in motion and nothing will deter him from reaching the ultimate goal. What that is, well! Buckle up Buttercup!! And be prepared to hand over your heart and all your feels!!!

[Tanisha May · Rating 5 out of 5]

absolutely hot!

An amazing smut filled quickie! His wanted her since he first saw her, at first for revenge then to truly be his! Obsessed is an understatement. Red flag? His a walking red flag for sure!

Dark- deliciously built, and pierced 😉, loves his mask and is 100% a stalker! He would do anything to keep her safe and show her she is his and only his. Has trained from her smutty collections.

Hael- briefly introduced in book one is absolutely beautiful and sweet, the grumpy man’s sunshine, shy and innocent (apart from smut loving). Hesitant at first but shows she’s a bratty submissive for her one and only daddy!

Definitely recommend

[Karen Wright · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hot! Hot! Hot! I couldn’t get enough of this book! From beginning to end, K.L Donn delivered a spectacular book!

She’s the daughter of his enemy, and he’s bound and determined to make her his. Why is the question? Wait til you find out. Let’s put it this way, she’s in for a ride. Dark is mysterious and won’t reveal his face to Hael. Will he ever? In the end, will Hael and Dark have a happily ever after?

If you are into some steamy scenes, this is the book for you. You won’t be disappointed.

[MoonLit Muse · Rating 4 out of 5]

Before beginning to read this book, you have to suspend reality and just decide to go along with everything that happens in this book. There is a lot of non-consent that is in a grey area of not falling into CNC, because there is no prior discussion with the FMC, but without revealing too much, it does actually work out (major grey area). I really loved the masked Daddy aspect of this read and the pairing was perfect. I loved all the spice, but hated the MMC real name (again if you suspend reality it works). It's a good short read and I have loved this series so far.

[maysen matthews · Rating 5 out of 5]

Dark, Dirty, Delicious!

Daddy Dark was just like his proclaims— dark, dirty, and delicious!

What starts as a revenge plot against the man who stole the woman he once cared about, soon becomes unadulterated obsession.

Hael is a quiet, reserved girl who finds her stalker equal parts frightening and alluring. Soon she falls under his spell and isn’t afraid to go feral for Daddy.

All things dirty and decadent, Dark and Hael’s book did not disappoint!

[Linda Diamond · Rating 5 out of 5]

Holy hotness!!

Hael and Dark!
I'm just going to be honest and say I am loving this series. I'm thinking this one just might be my favorite. But I said that about the last one. In all seriousness this really was an awesome book! Yeah he's a stalker but he's fulfilling all her fantasies. Damn what a man, holy hotness!! Great characters and an excellent story! I'm definitely looking forward to reading the next one!! Love it!

[Kristie Bird · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is book 3 in the series but the first one that I have read. I wasn’t sure what to expect since it is my first KL Donn book. All I can say is wow, this one is hot and steamy. Now obviously I knew just by the title it was going to be naughty and let me tell you it delivered! It is totally worth the read and I am planning on reading the first two in the series while waiting for the fourth one.

[Chickys Kitchen · Rating 5 out of 5]

I have been waiting for Dark and Haels story! First off, who doesn't love a man who uses your reading preferences as a guild to winning you over. Well unless you read dark romance like me and then it could get crazy...or would it 😏 I love me a good stalker/obsession novella! Quick great read. Always the right amount of dark in KL Donn books.

POV-duel.
Characters-🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Spice-🌶🌶🌶🌶

[Nina · Rating 5 out of 5]

ALL THE SPICE!

Dark knows what he wants and he’s going to take it. What he wants is Hael. And he isn’t going to even let her stand in his way. Nothing is off the table when it comes to making Hael his and he’ll unapologetically play dirty. Hael is sweet where it counts (to Dark) but also has a bit of a backbone. I enjoyed watching her stand up to Dark.

I never think KL can make a more possessive man and every time she releases a book she proves me wrong. This book has all the spice, kinks, and obsessive behavior you want in your spicy reads.

[Rima-Chan · Rating 5 out of 5]

Damn. I liked the previous books, but this one definitely is the best so far! 😍 Absolute deliciously filthy insta love with her mysterious and domineering stalker, yet still also lovingly sweet.
I absolutely adore Hael and her Daddy and can't get enough of them both!
I can't wait for more delicious releases of this series 😊📚

[Amanda M · Rating 5 out of 5]

I am thoroughly impressed with this book. From the very beginning it captured my attention. The storyline is intriguing. And the spice be spicing in this. Loved Dark and Hazel these two characters are just perfection. It's a quick and delightful read.

[Malini · Rating 5 out of 5]

Someone's watching...by MeemsAngel82

Oh and MY. Whew. This was one of my first books by our author and I have to say she knows how to bring on the heat! The writing is great, steamy and these two with their back and forth had me so entertained as I wondered just how this all would play out? Expect a stalker-ish good time with a h who probably didn't even know she had it in her...

He wanted her and he'll have her. She isn't going to be sorry...

Ok, the steam is so good. The chemistry and my brain wanting to know just how this is going to go down had me so entertained. This was something else but do not read at work, lol! These two have some intense moments and finally are together. Is it necessarily sane at times? Hey, this was a good time and his stalkerish ways were leaving our h guessing in the very best of ways. I had such a good time and volunteer to leave this review. I got this ARC copy from Bookfunnel from the author and enjoyed myself so much. In private. This was actually perfect for this time of the year. I am going back to check out the other books in this series! I wish I had read them in order, ugh, but I enjoyed my book regardless and am wondering what's next?!

[Angela · Rating 4 out of 5]

It's been quite a while since I read a KL story and I had forgotten just how spicy/sexy/dark she can be! Hael may seem to be one way on the outside, but her inner desires are absolutely the opposite. And Dark's obsessive/possessive nature really plays for her needs.

[Patricia Howard · Rating 5 out of 5]

om my I loved this book. never imagined myself liking the Daddy style because I'm not a submissive or so I thought.
Two thumbs up. This is an awesome book.
I love the way that the plot changes into something more as the story goes on. I've got to go back and read the books before this one.

[Michele Del Rey · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow, Wow, Wow!!!! This book was amazing from the first page. I could not put this book down nor did I want to. Everything about this book was heart pounding and had me turning the pages quickly. I actually read this book three times in a row and learned something new every time.

[Terri · Rating 4 out of 5]

Daddy Dark & Hael are HAUT!!! I mean I love this book. It’s crazy it’s low drama but the book is built on it. Dark wanted Hael for revenge but ends up falling for her when he sees her. From there it is pure obsess!on and sműt. This is for sure a one hand read so grab your water and stay hydrated!

[Shanna · Rating 5 out of 5]

Short and Steamy

A quick read that's full of spice. It's kind of on the dark side, so check the trigger warnings. The H and h have a twisted story. This is a new to me author and I look forward to reading more from them.

[Carolyn Spence · Rating 5 out of 5]

One hot and STEAMY book! Something clicks between Dark and Hael when they finally meet, and they are two peas in a pod. Definitely an over the top book to read and it gave me a thrill to read it.

[Heather Dee · Rating 5 out of 5]

Oh my gosh this book was absolutely amazing and so naughty I loved every minute of it 😍 😋 ❤️

[Amber Pickerill · Rating 5 out of 5]

It started as revenge, but turned into an obsession. It's a quick and very spicy read. I hope we continue with more in this series.

[Sarah · Rating 5 out of 5]

Med burn

[Robin · Rating 4 out of 5]

Dark & Hael

Taking stalker to the next level! And then taking care of her in all the best ways. Very steamy, kind of dark, very good.

[LastNightInVegas · Rating 3 out of 5]

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