I have a soft spot for YA paranormal stories. This book came up in an ad in my FB feed a few weeks ago and I decided to pre-order it based on ALL the glowing 20+ reviews. Keep in mind that these weren't simple 1 sentence feedback, but paragraphs of praise; I figured they were legit and that these reviewers received advanced copies. First mistake.
Fast forward to yesterday afternoon when the book releases and it shows up on my Kindle. I've been reading some heavier non-fiction titles so I figured I could take a mental break and read this new story quickly. Ideally, it would be light reading and wouldn't require much brain power to process everything. Apparently that would prove my second mistake.
If Mean Girls married The Craft, their fugly bastard offspring would be this clusterfuck of a book.
After the unexpected death of her mother, Emily Bishop is relocated to another city by her father. There are hints of problems of fitting in at her last school, but it's never fully explained beyond kids being kids. It is also revealed that she has the ability to predict impending danger of those around her with her drawings. While there are allusions to how she predicted her mom's death, this too is not fully explained.
So far so good right? Wrong! While it piques your interest, it never really coalesces into anything tangible. Turns out the school's Queen Bee, Sarah, has been using voodoo to control everyone inn the school to do her bidding. But wait, it's not just your run of the mill Voodoo, the writer decided to throw in some side story of Salem witch burning and blood feuds that span centuries which gives Sarah the power it does. The two paranormal explanations just doesn't mix. It's like shoving peanut butter and jelly sandwiches into a turkey cavity and calling it fusion stuffing.
What's upsetting is that there was actually potential to the story and writing. Hamilton does a great job with dialogue, but her transitions and shallow explanations are insulting to the reader. And don't even get me started on the laughably ridiculous ease at which relationships are forged -- even by YA novel standards. Noah, the male protagonist and play toy/love interest of Sarah, falls heads quickly in love with Emily after about 2 to 3 interactions. To which, he can't fathom putting her in danger anymore so he rescinds his initial first chapter request for help against Sarah - since it's now TOO dangerous.
I'm surprised my eyes haven't popped out of their damn sockets from rolling my eyes so much throughout the book. I hate not finishing books and I was determined to push through the irritation until the end. Last mistake, wishful thinking that the ending and the explanation provided would make this whole horrible reading journey worthwhile.
Save your money. Listening to a nun describe the art of Kama Sutra would be more informative and comfortable than this drivel.