I love reading dark romances, so when I saw this one at the top of Amazon’s charts, I had to pick it up. Sadly, I was beyond disappointed.
Bethany lives in a “prison.” This is really a loose term. She’s rich so she’s expected to dress and act a certain way. At this point I started to dislike her. She’s in this life, yet she judges her best friend for dressing the way her parents expect her to. Not a very good friend. Also, Bethany starts her whining at this point. She never stops.
Abe is a bodyguard for Bethany’s father. He calls himself sadistic, but really, I didn’t get it. Never once did I get an example of it. I mean really, just calling yourself something doesn’t make it true. In his first POV, we get told over and over about how he’s such a bastard, an asshole, and how he’s evil. But like I said, it never explains what he’s done.
Abe kidnaps Bethany because he’s in love with her and wants her to live her real life. When Bethany first wakes up, she thinks about Abe. She’s seen him around, but never thought much beyond that. And cue the insta-lust. Because, really, we all get kidnapped and can’t help thinking about how sexy our captors are. The relationship never gets any better. Beyond looks, Abe must have low standards when it comes to women because other than Bethany pouting, she has zero personality.
Can you tell I thought Bethany was awful yet?
As Bethany stays with Abe over the course of a week, she spends more time thinking about how horrible her and how sexy Abe is than actually trying to get out. I mean really, she gives him a blowjob willingly! Like the second day! Bite that dick off!
In the end Bethany realizes that living with a kidnapper is better than having your life dictated. While I can see this working, Bethany and Abe have zero chemistry. They never speak other than Abe repeating how Bethany is his and her denying it. The relationship is so forced and ridiculous. On top of that, the author tacked on an epilogue that was just laughable. No point, no depth. Just there to drag out the book some more.
There were enough typos too. Not every word, but enough to pull me out of the story. The second word is a typo. How much was this edited? And the sex scene was off too. I’m sorry but anal sex is painful without lube. This idea of using a woman’s fluids as lube is stupid. You need something or else it will hurt, and the fact that they sex rough anal sex without lube shows just how little the author knows about the subject. There is no BDSM either. Tying a girl to your bed is not BDSM. Kinky sex, maybe, but not BDSM.
The only positive I can say is that this book presents a good idea of what dark romances shouldn’t be. Shallow. Vacant. Boring. At times painful to read.
Math equations are more entertaining.