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Mission X #2
The Bigger They Are
This story contains sexually explicit content in the form of really, really hot man-sex and is intended for adult readers. It may contain content that is disagreeable or distressing to some readers. It was originally published as a free read as part of the M/M Romance Group’s “Love's Landscapes” event on Goodreads.com
We met them in Mission: X— the adorable, bouncing bottom-boy and his big, bad Daddy. A romance that produces such a delicious couple is bound to be a scorcher. This is their story.
For years, Charlie kept a protective, but professional, watch over Wren. The sweet, surprisingly unspoiled, rich-kid just seemed to stumble unwittingly into trouble. But one day, called to retrieve a very drunk Wren from a college party, Charlie got far more than he bargained for when Wren— a suddenly very grown up Wren— revealed his surprising crush and his far too tempting body.
Wren lost his best friend, the only person he truly trusted, in one stupid, drunken moment of weakness. He was determined, though. He knew he hadn't imagined Charlie's physical response when he'd been pressed against him. It was just a matter of figuring out how to convince the older, bigger, stronger man— who tripped every single one of Wren's triggers— that he could be everything Charlie needed.
But a year later, Wren is losing faith, and he's beginning to spin out of control. Charlie is rapidly losing sight of the logical list of reasons he should stay away. Wren is exhibiting the needy kind of behavior that demands consequences. The Dominant in Charlie is becoming louder and more demanding by the day. A collision is inevitable. A hot, fiery explosion that will shatter everything on impact. But with a little help and a lot of luck, maybe— just maybe— they'll walk away more whole than they've ever been.
Note: This is a stand-alone prequel to Mission: X and, as such, Mission: X does not need to be read first.
We met them in Mission: X— the adorable, bouncing bottom-boy and his big, bad Daddy. A romance that produces such a delicious couple is bound to be a scorcher. This is their story.
For years, Charlie kept a protective, but professional, watch over Wren. The sweet, surprisingly unspoiled, rich-kid just seemed to stumble unwittingly into trouble. But one day, called to retrieve a very drunk Wren from a college party, Charlie got far more than he bargained for when Wren— a suddenly very grown up Wren— revealed his surprising crush and his far too tempting body.
Wren lost his best friend, the only person he truly trusted, in one stupid, drunken moment of weakness. He was determined, though. He knew he hadn't imagined Charlie's physical response when he'd been pressed against him. It was just a matter of figuring out how to convince the older, bigger, stronger man— who tripped every single one of Wren's triggers— that he could be everything Charlie needed.
But a year later, Wren is losing faith, and he's beginning to spin out of control. Charlie is rapidly losing sight of the logical list of reasons he should stay away. Wren is exhibiting the needy kind of behavior that demands consequences. The Dominant in Charlie is becoming louder and more demanding by the day. A collision is inevitable. A hot, fiery explosion that will shatter everything on impact. But with a little help and a lot of luck, maybe— just maybe— they'll walk away more whole than they've ever been.
Note: This is a stand-alone prequel to Mission: X and, as such, Mission: X does not need to be read first.
89 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 30, 2014
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Kim Alan
7 books197 followersI might be the least romantic person I know, but when I'm writing, I’m all about the happy endings and the love conquering all business. I’ll leave it to the higher talents to shock and amaze and terrorize you … or rip your heart out, if you like that sort of thing. From me, you’ll just find some good hot man lovin’ and a story that (hopefully) leaves you with a smile on your face.
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September 3, 2014
4.25 true smexy glory stars!
I was forced to remove two of the images from the original review because the review was flagged by the GR bigoted censorship machine. See below.
Some may complain that this story has too much sex.
Some.
But not me.
How could Kim Alan do the prompt image justice without a smut fest throwing a party?
Wren is 21, a former teen actor, rich, and acting out because he can't have the one man he wants: Charlie, his one-time driver and bodyguard, who still works as head of security for Wren's family.
Charlie is older than Wren; how much is not specified, but I imagined him around Wren's brother's age, so maybe 30. Charlie is a Dom, and Wren wants to be his sub so badly. He wants his Daddy to hold him and make it all better.
Charlie has always wanted Wren, but isn't willing to cross the line from professional to personal.
When Wren goes a step too far, Charlie decides he must be punished.
*gulp*
Prepare to be aroused. VERY aroused. This lovely kink fest includes: Daddy/baby kink, licking, sucking, bondage, group play, spanking, belt whipping, a cock cage, and penetration by a very, very big cock.
Wait, I may be forgetting something....
*smirks*
This is an all-around fun story with some angst and feels, one naughty twink, one frustrated Dom, and so much smex and hotness you will need a bucket of ice water to cool down.
Go on: read it. You KNOW you want to.
I was forced to remove two of the images from the original review because the review was flagged by the GR bigoted censorship machine. See below.
Some may complain that this story has too much sex.
Some.
But not me.
How could Kim Alan do the prompt image justice without a smut fest throwing a party?
Wren is 21, a former teen actor, rich, and acting out because he can't have the one man he wants: Charlie, his one-time driver and bodyguard, who still works as head of security for Wren's family.
Charlie is older than Wren; how much is not specified, but I imagined him around Wren's brother's age, so maybe 30. Charlie is a Dom, and Wren wants to be his sub so badly. He wants his Daddy to hold him and make it all better.
Charlie has always wanted Wren, but isn't willing to cross the line from professional to personal.
When Wren goes a step too far, Charlie decides he must be punished.
*gulp*
Prepare to be aroused. VERY aroused. This lovely kink fest includes: Daddy/baby kink, licking, sucking, bondage, group play, spanking, belt whipping, a cock cage, and penetration by a very, very big cock.
Wait, I may be forgetting something....
*smirks*
This is an all-around fun story with some angst and feels, one naughty twink, one frustrated Dom, and so much smex and hotness you will need a bucket of ice water to cool down.
Go on: read it. You KNOW you want to.
July 30, 2014
I WANT A DADDY.
Well, that's basically it.
WARNING: May contain information that maybe is TOO MUCH. (TMI)
This was so hot that I was XD
That Chapter 3 was damn! So so so hot!
And the last chapter!!! God!!! Anyways it was so so so fucking hot.
A RECOMMENDED FREE HOT READ!
Great for those who like BDSM, Daddy kink, or for those who just want to feel horny. XD
:)
By the way, To whoever you are who flagged my review, I wished you gave the courtesy of TELLING ME FIRST if you found my review offensive. Not going to your momma because you saw something icky.
Face me. ;)
Well, that's basically it.
WARNING: May contain information that maybe is TOO MUCH. (TMI)
This was so hot that I was XD
That Chapter 3 was damn! So so so hot!
And the last chapter!!! God!!! Anyways it was so so so fucking hot.
A RECOMMENDED FREE HOT READ!
Great for those who like BDSM, Daddy kink, or for those who just want to feel horny. XD
The bigger they are, the harder they fall.
:)
By the way, To whoever you are who flagged my review, I wished you gave the courtesy of TELLING ME FIRST if you found my review offensive. Not going to your momma because you saw something icky.
Face me. ;)
July 22, 2016
(Give or take a couple of ages and add months but same difference)
"Normal is overrated"
Tags: BDSM, spanking, discipline, Daddy kink, age difference, size difference, first time, multiple partners, multiple orgasms, rimming, cum play
See those tags up there? This story has earned every single one of them. HARD. I'm rating this all of the damn stars. *twirls around*
DADDY KINK!!! *wiggles*
I wanted this story since reading Mission: X last year and boy did this one up the game. KimAlan (yes, I call her by one name), got smuttier and I appreciate sooooooooooooooooooooooo much!
*stares at story tags again and smirks*
Charlie and Wren, bodyguard and spoiled rich kid...also a Daddy and his boy. And that anaconda of a trouser snake. C'mon you've seen that prompt pic. It lingers on the brain.
(j/k there's nothing gentlemanly in this story...*twitches*)
Wren, naughty twink that he is, keeps pushing the limits until his Daddy has to come claim and reign him in. Kinky, delicious, boner worthy and smutty deliciousness. Wren is just enough of a brat to make the story interesting and Charlie is possessive enough to make it work
And as usual, there are awesome secondary characters I'd love to know more about (Ace & Joe with a third search...Devin? I'm not making hints or anything but I'd love some writez on those guys)
And the sex in this story? Look at the tags!
Seriously:
*shudders*
Thank you to the author, the prompter (2 thumbs up) and the team for this wonderful delight of smutty romance!
P.S. KimAlan, I am not above begging for more stories, please. You need a prompt? I can give good prompt. Please more.
July 1, 2014
Smexy Daddy kink featuring a bodyguard and his boy.
This is HAWT! Like YUM-MY! Loved the punishment and arbitration by Paul for Charlie. That was wicked sweet with awesome bondage and voyeurism. This pegs the fantasy meter so gotta let a few things slide and just enjoy the ride. The rimming and cum play were particularly tasty. Frankly, the Scorch rating is what nudged this from 3.5 to 4 stars.
This is HAWT! Like YUM-MY! Loved the punishment and arbitration by Paul for Charlie. That was wicked sweet with awesome bondage and voyeurism. This pegs the fantasy meter so gotta let a few things slide and just enjoy the ride. The rimming and cum play were particularly tasty. Frankly, the Scorch rating is what nudged this from 3.5 to 4 stars.
October 15, 2014
Written October 15, 2014
3.7 Stars - Aahhh, sweet and smexy erotica!
Irresistibly tender romantic...oddly enough.
Daddy kink...
Most days NOT my cup of tea. I usually try to avoid romances with to much D/s, BDSM, kink or rough sex-club playing. ~ Then I just saw this one there in my iBook —without a clue why or when I downloaded it— and started to read.
A naughty good short unplanned break from another read. This was fun, heartwarming and yummy hot. - A kinky gem for me.
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Charlie has for years been this protective bodyguard-driver-babysitter-watch over Wren, a young sweet, surprisingly unspoiled, rich-kid. A boy who now is an audult but still just seemes to stumble unwittingly into trouble. Night, sex and drinking trouble. A young man who wants a hard hand a savior.
Charlie is in for the D/s lifestyle but promised a long time ago, his friend Devin, also his boss and Wren's dear big brother, to not touch or even 'think' about Wren in that way.
Then when this charming and beautiful "boy's" life is beginning to spin out of control doesn't big, tough "Daddy's" logical list of reasons to stay away works any longer. ~
‘Wren is exhibiting the needy kind of behavior that demands consequences. The Dominant in Charlie is becoming louder and more demanding by the day. A collision is inevitable.’
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The Bigger They Are is an erotic 100 pages freebie novella from M/M Romance Group’s
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Sometimes it is actually those things, you believe shouldn't be your thing, that's actually becomes the most fun. It's new, fresh and surprisingly interesting. In any case for you. So felt this short story to me.
I liked these character, I liked what they did and my heart felt for them. A perfect softish 'daddy-kink' glimpse for a nosey M/M reader. - Kim Alan is a writer to keep in mind.
I LIKE - a "ummm, aahhh, oohhh" - ..kind of book!!!
3.7 Stars - Aahhh, sweet and smexy erotica!
Irresistibly tender romantic...oddly enough.
Daddy kink...
Most days NOT my cup of tea. I usually try to avoid romances with to much D/s, BDSM, kink or rough sex-club playing. ~ Then I just saw this one there in my iBook —without a clue why or when I downloaded it— and started to read.
A naughty good short unplanned break from another read. This was fun, heartwarming and yummy hot. - A kinky gem for me.
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Charlie has for years been this protective bodyguard-driver-babysitter-watch over Wren, a young sweet, surprisingly unspoiled, rich-kid. A boy who now is an audult but still just seemes to stumble unwittingly into trouble. Night, sex and drinking trouble. A young man who wants a hard hand a savior.
Charlie is in for the D/s lifestyle but promised a long time ago, his friend Devin, also his boss and Wren's dear big brother, to not touch or even 'think' about Wren in that way.
Then when this charming and beautiful "boy's" life is beginning to spin out of control doesn't big, tough "Daddy's" logical list of reasons to stay away works any longer. ~
‘Wren is exhibiting the needy kind of behavior that demands consequences. The Dominant in Charlie is becoming louder and more demanding by the day. A collision is inevitable.’
‘He loved being dwarfed by the massive bulk of a much larger man. He loved being held down by someone who could crush him. He loved it. With the strangers, it was the added threat that contributed to the thrill. But with Charlie, it was being protected and possessed and for some reason, knowing the amount of control and restraint that it took for a beast-sized man to be gentle… Wren sighed. He was lost.’
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The Bigger They Are is an erotic 100 pages freebie novella from M/M Romance Group’s
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Sometimes it is actually those things, you believe shouldn't be your thing, that's actually becomes the most fun. It's new, fresh and surprisingly interesting. In any case for you. So felt this short story to me.
I liked these character, I liked what they did and my heart felt for them. A perfect softish 'daddy-kink' glimpse for a nosey M/M reader. - Kim Alan is a writer to keep in mind.
I LIKE - a "ummm, aahhh, oohhh" - ..kind of book!!!
September 10, 2014
This was so damn hot!
A sexy twink and a hot leather bear (with a massive cock) get together and have some hot sexy times-and some sweet ones too.
And that scene in the club - hot damn! I know, I said that already but it bears repeating.
A sexy twink and a hot leather bear (with a massive cock) get together and have some hot sexy times-and some sweet ones too.
And that scene in the club - hot damn! I know, I said that already but it bears repeating.
July 3, 2014
So, Jory and Sam... Um, I mean, big bad bodyguard Dom Charlie and l'il twinky submissive Richie Rich Wren (Wren? Really?) are the focus of this BDSM story, and it is chock full of the usual alpha male vs twink tropes:
Huge rippling muscles? Check.
Lots o' blushing, wriggling and whimpering? Check.
Growling and snarling? Check.
Bratty behavior? Check.
Possessive behavior? Check.
Giggling grown man? Check.
A HUGE, ? Of course!!
I could go on, but I'm sure you get the picture. There's even some Daddy kink to go along with all of the sexual shenanigans, some of which I had a hard time picturing because I couldn't tell if they were standing, sitting, kneeling or what. I'm normally all for those types of shenanigans (as long as they make sense) but this time I was a bit bored.
The BDSM also did nothing for me in this one, and to be honest I'm starting to dread seeing that tag show up in these Love's Landscapes stories. There's just way too much of it for my taste, even though I normally love it if done well. I guess that those are the operative words: If done well.
For me this BDSM story was just alright. Too many "baby"s and "Daddy"s and the aforementioned tropes and issues caused me to start speed reading/skimming from the middle almost all the way to the end, until I lost interest.
Sorry. Jory and Sam are really the only Jory and Sam that I can take. But hey, if what I just wrote floats your boat then you'll probably love it.
Edited to add: If I read the phrase "tight heat", or any variation thereof, ONE MORE TIME I might scream.
Huge rippling muscles? Check.
Lots o' blushing, wriggling and whimpering? Check.
Growling and snarling? Check.
Bratty behavior? Check.
Possessive behavior? Check.
Giggling grown man? Check.
A HUGE, ? Of course!!
I could go on, but I'm sure you get the picture. There's even some Daddy kink to go along with all of the sexual shenanigans, some of which I had a hard time picturing because I couldn't tell if they were standing, sitting, kneeling or what. I'm normally all for those types of shenanigans (as long as they make sense) but this time I was a bit bored.
The BDSM also did nothing for me in this one, and to be honest I'm starting to dread seeing that tag show up in these Love's Landscapes stories. There's just way too much of it for my taste, even though I normally love it if done well. I guess that those are the operative words: If done well.
For me this BDSM story was just alright. Too many "baby"s and "Daddy"s and the aforementioned tropes and issues caused me to start speed reading/skimming from the middle almost all the way to the end, until I lost interest.
Sorry. Jory and Sam are really the only Jory and Sam that I can take. But hey, if what I just wrote floats your boat then you'll probably love it.
Edited to add: If I read the phrase "tight heat", or any variation thereof, ONE MORE TIME I might scream.
July 6, 2014
Welp, it's official. Portlandia has reached profound truth status.
All this grizzly bear, Charlie, needed was his little bird, Wren.
All together now… D'awwwwwwww
I've said it before, but I'll say it again. Bears and twinks go together like PB&J.
Wren is on the bratty side and yet another card carrying member of the anal V-card club. I'm noticing a trend here. Little bird has a pretty fierce Daddy kink working for Charlie, too. There's a lot to like about these two, but what I liked best was the way Charlie cared for Wren-insisting they go slowly, withholding his own needs to ensure Wren didn't hurt himself in a frenzy and the showering.
*growls* Oh yeah! The growling too!
Quite an enjoyable read and a great addition to the LL event. I think I like this author, but will you please give me a Jay story and maybe Devin too? Pretty please with sugar on top?
All this grizzly bear, Charlie, needed was his little bird, Wren.
All together now… D'awwwwwwww
He relaxed completely, submitting to Charlie's unconscious bondage. He sighed deeply, ecstatic and safe and content to hibernate in his bear trap.
I've said it before, but I'll say it again. Bears and twinks go together like PB&J.
Wren is on the bratty side and yet another card carrying member of the anal V-card club. I'm noticing a trend here. Little bird has a pretty fierce Daddy kink working for Charlie, too. There's a lot to like about these two, but what I liked best was the way Charlie cared for Wren-insisting they go slowly, withholding his own needs to ensure Wren didn't hurt himself in a frenzy and the showering.
*growls* Oh yeah! The growling too!
Quite an enjoyable read and a great addition to the LL event. I think I like this author, but will you please give me a Jay story and maybe Devin too? Pretty please with sugar on top?
September 26, 2015
4.5 stars
Growly possessive Dom + cutie patootie twink sub indulging in Daddy kink. Throw in some hands free coming, after spanking cuddling, neck nuzzling/biting, and cum play, and you get 4.5 stars from me!!!
Side note:
The energy/virility of these men is commendable, if a little unrealistic. I'll take it, though :)
Growly possessive Dom + cutie patootie twink sub indulging in Daddy kink. Throw in some hands free coming, after spanking cuddling, neck nuzzling/biting, and cum play, and you get 4.5 stars from me!!!
Side note:
The energy/virility of these men is commendable, if a little unrealistic. I'll take it, though :)
June 30, 2014
Free from the M/M Romance Group's Love's Landscapes Event of 2014.
Highly emotional D/s story involving a young man and his driver, who becomes his "Daddy" as they finally figure it out and begin their life together, collar, lock and key included. The writing is explicit, but also shows the emotional connection between the two main characters extremely well, and includes a scene that really showcases how strongly these two are connected.
Very nicely done!
Highly emotional D/s story involving a young man and his driver, who becomes his "Daddy" as they finally figure it out and begin their life together, collar, lock and key included. The writing is explicit, but also shows the emotional connection between the two main characters extremely well, and includes a scene that really showcases how strongly these two are connected.
Very nicely done!
July 1, 2014
*4.5*
Oh, wow...That photo drew me in like a moth to a flame, and I was NOT disappointed. I could not tear myself away one minute from this very hot story.
Ok, it was not perfect, there were a lot of shy smiles, purring, and fluttering (but not related to
assholes...) going on, and I got a bit annoyed since I prefer growls, stone hard faces and other similar descriptions.
But I got used to it quickly, oh so quickly, and the story sucked me in. It was so sweet following the two guys' thoughts and needs, and how I like stories with older brother/younger brother/Older brother's friend.
But the best part was, not surprisingly, Charlie's dick. And of course the long, lusty, smutty, precum-filled sex scenes.
Now I'm off to take a very long, and very cold shower.
After that, Mission: X.
October 13, 2015
Well this certainly satisfied my daddy kink craving! I pretty much agree with everything every other review has said... prepare to be extremely aroused!!! There is ALOT of ass play and possessive daddy dominating and just a tad of humilation/tormented emotions. All rather delicious really.
There was a build up to this relationship, which was good and once they got together it was pretty much all sex *shrugs*, but who cares :-D
Not a 5 star though because the reasons Charlie wasn't with Wren sooner confused me a bit.
Oh and it's free, so YAY!
There was a build up to this relationship, which was good and once they got together it was pretty much all sex *shrugs*, but who cares :-D
Not a 5 star though because the reasons Charlie wasn't with Wren sooner confused me a bit.
Oh and it's free, so YAY!
unfortunately-abandoned
August 7, 2014S.O.S
Someone come and rescue me. In my inflatable dingy, I'm lost in a sea of spermy cheese and I have no clue what's going on. My coordinates are; page 26, third sentence.
Therese, I'll buy you chocolate? *puppy eyes*
Someone come and rescue me. In my inflatable dingy, I'm lost in a sea of spermy cheese and I have no clue what's going on. My coordinates are; page 26, third sentence.
Therese, I'll buy you chocolate? *puppy eyes*
January 12, 2017
So yeah, this is like all kinds of hot. Part of the Love Landscapes, if you never investigate the pic's for it I encourage you to do so for this. It made me blush and I was pretty sure GR had cured me of that.
Not a huge fan of the 'Daddy' thing but it did start to sit easier with me as the story went on, by the end I just wanted Charlie and Wren to have a HEA. It worked.
This is so worth a read. Loves Landscapes is amazing. This is free and so why not have a look? Do it. ;)
July 9, 2014
Well, what the fuck can I say? That was fucking hot. And sweet. And actually has two characters very well drawn in a short amount of time.
I don't normally like or read the daddy kink, but I was able to move past that here. Wren and Charlie are really kind of wonderful and I found myself wanting more of them when I finished reading.
I liked Paul and Quinn, too. And there was even a fun, small twist.
Hot, fun and I liked the way a "first" was handled.
Yup, y'all need to read this'n.
I don't normally like or read the daddy kink, but I was able to move past that here. Wren and Charlie are really kind of wonderful and I found myself wanting more of them when I finished reading.
I liked Paul and Quinn, too. And there was even a fun, small twist.
Hot, fun and I liked the way a "first" was handled.
Yup, y'all need to read this'n.
September 3, 2014
3.5 Daddy Stars
So sweet...!
I had the plan to make a longer review. But since there are so many great reviews about it and I don't have much more to add, I'll keep it like this.
The GIF is summing it up quite correctly!
July 4, 2014
I want to be Charlie's little bird. That's all!
June 7, 2017
This was my first foray into daddy kink and I wasn't disappointed - because despite that (or because of it) it had a lot of tenderness intermixed with a lot of hot!
July 1, 2014
So hot and just wow. Loved it.
August 21, 2021
I dunno, I didn't feel like Charlie was all that much of a Dom honestly. I thought he was a push over. But the sex was hot :P and it was free
October 24, 2014
OHMYGOD how is this possible! Holy Ow. I mean YUM. I mean OW! NSFW
Offered for FREE from the M/M Romance Group's Love's Landscapes event. Thank you too all the amazing authors who participated!
Well wasn't that just lovely. I mean, smexy. I mean, sweet. I mean, hot as all fuck. Poor little Wren. And lucky fucking Wren! That scene at the club... excuse me, I need a moment. Holy hotness! The story didn't fit the prompt photo exactly, Wren was a twink with curly locks as opposed to the muscly crew-cutted guy you see in the pic. Bit whatevs, artistic license. I don't give a fuck. Great little story.
And FYI, apparently this is sort of a prequel to last years events' Mission: X (don't need to read both, but Wren and Charlie appear together in a club in Mission: X)
Offered for FREE from the M/M Romance Group's Love's Landscapes event. Thank you too all the amazing authors who participated!
Well wasn't that just lovely. I mean, smexy. I mean, sweet. I mean, hot as all fuck. Poor little Wren. And lucky fucking Wren! That scene at the club... excuse me, I need a moment. Holy hotness! The story didn't fit the prompt photo exactly, Wren was a twink with curly locks as opposed to the muscly crew-cutted guy you see in the pic. Bit whatevs, artistic license. I don't give a fuck. Great little story.
And FYI, apparently this is sort of a prequel to last years events' Mission: X (don't need to read both, but Wren and Charlie appear together in a club in Mission: X)
January 25, 2018
Hot little prequel to Mission: X
This tells the story of how Wren and Charlie, who Xander encounters in Mission: X, came to be.
It's short, but hot, and has a lot of emotions for a novella as it explores Wren's rebellions while he tries to get Charlie's attention.
When they do finally sort out their feelings, there's a beautifully sexy first encounter which is full of heated emotion.
This tells the story of how Wren and Charlie, who Xander encounters in Mission: X, came to be.
It's short, but hot, and has a lot of emotions for a novella as it explores Wren's rebellions while he tries to get Charlie's attention.
When they do finally sort out their feelings, there's a beautifully sexy first encounter which is full of heated emotion.
March 26, 2015
Ummm... Well... *cough* That was pure, smutty goodness.
As always, my thanks to the author for participating in the Love's Landscapes event and for all of the behind-the-scenes work that editors, beta readers, and the MM Group Mods put into making this FREE event a massive success!
As always, my thanks to the author for participating in the Love's Landscapes event and for all of the behind-the-scenes work that editors, beta readers, and the MM Group Mods put into making this FREE event a massive success!
July 2, 2014
This book is H-A-W-T! Like smoking. Seriously, I think this is the first book that made me think "Damn I must be doing this sex thing all wrong." Lol
July 1, 2014
What a hot way to start the day.
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August 9, 2016I loved this author`s last year's, very romantic and very warm contribution, so maybe my hopes were set too high.
This essentially is one long sex-scene, porn without much plot and without, I'm afraid, much soul. Nor did I find it erotic, especially as the BDSM was haphazard--sometimes okay, oftentimes failing in either content, intent or consent--and the sex was somewhat clichéd.
It filled the prompt though, the prose was adequate and the SPaG okay. On top it is free, so the general take is "okay".
This essentially is one long sex-scene, porn without much plot and without, I'm afraid, much soul. Nor did I find it erotic, especially as the BDSM was haphazard--sometimes okay, oftentimes failing in either content, intent or consent--and the sex was somewhat clichéd.
It filled the prompt though, the prose was adequate and the SPaG okay. On top it is free, so the general take is "okay".
January 1, 2015
★★★★☆
Wren has been misbehaving to get Charlie's attention. He's got Charlie's attention but Charlie is holding back until the last straw and he needs to show his boy who his Daddy is. My kind of smexy! Thanks Alvin for bringing it to my attention with your review!
Off to read more from this author.
Wren has been misbehaving to get Charlie's attention. He's got Charlie's attention but Charlie is holding back until the last straw and he needs to show his boy who his Daddy is. My kind of smexy! Thanks Alvin for bringing it to my attention with your review!
Off to read more from this author.
July 2, 2014
A panting, one handed read....
September 4, 2014
Incandescentt Daddy kink!!!
June 1, 2016
It started out well... But then I felt a bit... I don't know... Weird...:/
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