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50 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 28, 2012
Like some of my other favorite authors, I think I grade my girl Margaret on a curve. This was probably not my favorite thing she's ever written. It's still a great story, and I think once the final chapter of the trilogy is complete, it might hang together better as a whole. But as a follow-up to I'm Starved for You, it was kind of a disappointment.
I loved I'm Starved for You as a one-off, which I think is what it was intended to be. Atwood has a true gift for world-building; she can do in a few pages what other authors are incapable of doing in an entire series. I'm Starved for You introduced as to the world of Consilience (cons + resilience) and the prison Positron. Atwood skillfully weaves a full backstory for the experiment's creation in just a few paragraphs (we see a flashback to protagonist Stan joining the experiment). Stan spends the entirety of the story obsessing about a note he found on the floor, imagining the beautiful "Jasmine" who sent it. In the final paragraphs, he learns that Jasmine is his own wife, Charmaine, carrying on an affair with "Max," the alternate who lives in their house while he and Charmaine serve their month inside Positron. At the end of the story, Max's wife Jocelyn, intercepts Stan before he can leave for Positron and breaks the news that there is no Jasmine, that Max is actually Phil, her husband, and that she has access to the computer codes to switch his identity with Phil's. As far as Consilience is concerned, Stan is Phil and Phil is Stan.
That's where we leave off, on a perfect Atwoodian clincher, "I switched the lockers too, yours is the red one now." (Stan has been obsessed with "alpha male" Max's red locker and what it symbolizes to him). Although I loved the story, I didn't necessarily think it needed a follow-up. Apparently someone did -- there's talk of turning Positron into a TV series, but whoever Atwood is in talks with wanted more story. Thus, Choke Collar. I think it's an interesting experiment, and I loved Atwood's comparison to 19th century writers publishing serialized novels in the newspaper -- this is the 21st century version. I also like that she's not just chopping up a pre-existing novel into three parts. She wrote Choke Collar after I'm Starved for You had been both published and reviewed, and it still working on the finale, Moppet Shop.
In some ways, this feels like a placeholder between parts one and three. Stan spends the entirety of the novel out of the prison, living with Jocelyn and reenacting Charmaine and Phil's various sexcapades. His resentment grows, but knowing that Jocelyn is in Surveillance and could literally make him disappear keeps Stan from acting too rashly. Charmaine, on the other hand, is still in prison -- a glitch in the system is saying that she's not who she claims to be, and Charmaine is briefly stripped of her position as Medical Supervisor. Her primary job had been to administer lethal injections, but she's demoted to laundry folding. I've always loved Atwood's cautionary tales about reliance on technology. We absolutely live in an age where a few clicks of the mouse can make it appear that you are not, in fact, who you claim to be. And in Consilience, they have to trust the computers, not the humans. So Charmaine stays in prison, fearing that her affair has been found out.
Most of the story felt like a holding pattern -- I sincerely hope Atwood herself is not responsible for marketing this story as "steamy." I'm not reading Margaret Atwood for the sex, and it felt like that was supposed to be the major draw of this installment. It isn't until the final pages (percent? I read this on my Kindle) that the intrigue finally kicks in -- all of this has been a set-up by Jocelyn and Phil to get someone outside of Consilience. Phil deliberately began his affair with Charmaine, knowing Stan would find out, and Jocelyn subjected him to her sexcapades knowing it would breed resentment and make him want to lash out against her. At the end of the story, Charmaine has been restored to her medical position, and her next injection candidate is none other than Stan. Except he won't really be dead -- this is an excuse to get him on the outside. Like all utopias, Consilience isn't working, and Jocelyn and co. want someone on the outside to show the cracks in the system. There are hints that the darker side of Consilience has something to do with organ harvesting, and I'm guessing that's what can be found in the Moppet Shop.
Again, I think once all three parts are written, this middle chapter will hang together better as part of the whole story. I'm interested in the world and invested in the characters, so I'm anxious to see where the final chapter takes them.
However, I really wish she would hurry up and write the final sequel to Oryx and Crake already. I swear that series is supposed to be a trilogy and I have been waiting patiently for the final volume for too long!