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Breaking in Waves #1
Driftwood Deeds
When journalist Iris Ellis visits a sleepy seaside town to interview recluse screenwriter Paul Archer, he offers her insights into never acted upon fantasies of dominance and submission. Too curious to deny herself a taste of them, Iris gives herself up to Paul's gentle guidance, but when she realizes that a taste can never be enough, she must find the courage to ask for what she needs or risk losing it all.
Called a "gem for fans of BDSM romance and the perfect starting point for readers new to the genre" by RT Book Reviews, Driftwood Deeds is a novella of sexual awakening as well as consent and communication in bdsm.
Called a "gem for fans of BDSM romance and the perfect starting point for readers new to the genre" by RT Book Reviews, Driftwood Deeds is a novella of sexual awakening as well as consent and communication in bdsm.
112 pages, ebook
First published December 6, 2013
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September 30, 2014
****4,5 stars ****
I got this book as an ARC a while ago and was waiting for the right mood to kick in. I think I was exactly in the right place for this kind of reading because I really liked it. The novella is very short but absorbing and very very well written. There is no rush, no haste, everything flows naturally, no word is wasted and everything that is happening has its reason.
The story is about Iris Ellis, young journalist, who goes to small seaside town to interview reclusive and mysterious writer Paul Archer. But Paul doesn't make it quick and easy, he takes her for a walk at the seaside, wants to know her a bit more before the interview, once back at his cottage, when he is sure that what he saw in Iris might be true, he is pretty forthright with her.
"I did not ask you here because I wanted to sleep with you, but I do now."
Iris, being impressed by Paul and his personality, is curious enough to try and explore the idea of something new. Apparently, Paul is experienced in dominance and slowly but wisely introduce the world of submission to Iris. The whole story evolves in the span of 24 hours and is sexy, intense and sensual.
I liked how easily things happened, how every next scene was the result of the one before, how wisely and consequently Paul was guiding Iris. He was not forcing her to do anything against her will, although some things might have been "very new" to her. He did, sternly but calmly, showed her things and emotions that she subconsciously craved for.
"He saw that I was crying not because I was unhappy, but because he was giving me the most intense physical and emotional experience of my life, that I was happy and wanting and aching for more. And he thought it beautiful."
I am still pleasantly surprised how good this short novella was. It had BDSM elements but was not heavy on the kink. It was sublime but rough, sensual but animalistic at the same time. And in the end I was surprised how comfortable I was while reading it, though it was dealing with sub/dom connections, it was still, restrained and calm.
ARC provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
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March 31, 2017Warning
This review is for Adults Only and contains sexual language & discussion of sexual topics.
.......
Story contains descriptions of BDSM and Puppy Play.
.......
I have been broadening my reading horizons this year and for the first time in my life read a book categorized as erotica. Over the last few months I have found some really interesting books that show sex and sexual encounters in a very healthy way with no judgement, some others that did not do such a good job, and some that were downright cringeworthy.
As a proud MacHalo Group Member , I will at least try to read almost anything that sounds interesting. Even alien dino porn (don't ask LOL!) but this book surprised me.
Here's why... The blurb describes it as a "novella of sexual awakening as well as consent and communication in bdsm." I read that and thought...
This is/was a free download and a novella short so I figured why the hell not.
The story begins when Iris, the female lead, arrives in a sleepy seaside town and she meets up with the male lead, named Paul, at his home. The premise of this story is that Paul is a famous reclusive screenwriter and Iris needs to interview him for a magazine spotlight piece.
When they first meet she is nervous but he is polite & kind and suggests they take a walk on the beach to get to know each other a bit because he doesn't like to be interviewed by strangers. The author puts a great deal of care into writing this part of the story in a very detailed and almost calming manner. The first 18% of the story is quite lovely actually.
The main characters are not action hero cutouts or superhumanly gorgeous, but there is clearly some attraction and chemistry between the two so when they get back from their walk and Paul says to Iris
"I did not ask you here because I wanted to sleep with you, but I do now."
My reaction was along the lines of
After determining that this relationship is going to go beyond something professional, he began to talk Iris through a bit of what he had in mind using a movie he knew she had seen as a frame of reference.
There is a slightly awkward discussion about what parts of the movie she was curious about, but I thought this was a wonderful way to establish that not only is Iris curious about trying BDSM but she is willing to actually try it.
"Do you know what a safeword is?"
*Iris nods & has some internal monologue*
"Good. But we don't need one, today. You say stop, I'll stop what I'm doing. You say no, I won't do whatever I'm planning. You shake your head and I stop. Okay?"
*more nodding*
CONSENT!!! <- We haves it!
THANK YOU. I feel like this step is frequently skipped and making sure that both parties are going to be into it is almost an afterthought, and that's not okay.
So the story moves forward and things start to happen.
"Don't forget to breathe, Iris."
But then the things that are happening start to shift gears a bit.
Suddenly, I realized I wasn't just reading a straight up BDSM story...
Do you know what "puppy play" is?
Because I didn't.
I'll give you a hint, it's not this:
No, it's more along the lines of Paul petting Iris, asking her to retrieve things (she crawls on her hands and knees and carries the tape recorder back in her mouth - wut?), calling her a "good girl" and a "curious puppy" ... it just got a bit uncomfortable for me. Then Paul takes off Iris's panties and rubs her nose in them asking why she made them so wet...
And here's the thing. No Judgement. Seriously. That's just not my brand of kink and I didn't see anything letting me know that it was going to come into play in the story.
I almost stopped right there, but because I have a pathological need to finish all books, I continued on.
Next up we have a scene in the shower where Paul cleans Iris very thoroughly.
Um.. very descriptive quote ->
Now, to be clear, when the before mentioned "puppy play" wasn't involved, this was actually a fairly engaging little story. My only complaints aside from an unexpected surprise kink were that there was a few instances of odd phrasing such as:
"Already the set-up seemed safe and familiar but it was only later that I marveled at how easily I slipped into the part - like finding a bra that truly fits after a lifetime of wearing them a little too small.
And
"Even before his lips touched mine, our noses met and something inside of me melted, broke from it's egg a fresh and tender hatchling.
But there were also very nice and very sexy bits:
"You sound beautiful when you're aroused. I want you to hear that, your moans and cries, when you aren't so distracted by what I'm going to do to you."
And
And as long as you cling to that control, you can never truly enjoy, live, breathe, inhabit the moment you are in.
Overall, I suspect that I might try something else from this author, but I will certainly be a little more careful about which story I select.
*I would give this story two stars just for it's portrayal of consent and safe sex, but I don't feel comfortable rating it all based on my non-existent knowledge of the acts described. This could be a really inaccurate depiction for all I know so I am choosing to not provide a star rating at all.
This review is for Adults Only and contains sexual language & discussion of sexual topics.
.......
Story contains descriptions of BDSM and Puppy Play.
.......
I have been broadening my reading horizons this year and for the first time in my life read a book categorized as erotica. Over the last few months I have found some really interesting books that show sex and sexual encounters in a very healthy way with no judgement, some others that did not do such a good job, and some that were downright cringeworthy.
As a proud MacHalo Group Member , I will at least try to read almost anything that sounds interesting. Even alien dino porn (don't ask LOL!) but this book surprised me.
Here's why... The blurb describes it as a "novella of sexual awakening as well as consent and communication in bdsm." I read that and thought...
This is/was a free download and a novella short so I figured why the hell not.
The story begins when Iris, the female lead, arrives in a sleepy seaside town and she meets up with the male lead, named Paul, at his home. The premise of this story is that Paul is a famous reclusive screenwriter and Iris needs to interview him for a magazine spotlight piece.
When they first meet she is nervous but he is polite & kind and suggests they take a walk on the beach to get to know each other a bit because he doesn't like to be interviewed by strangers. The author puts a great deal of care into writing this part of the story in a very detailed and almost calming manner. The first 18% of the story is quite lovely actually.
The main characters are not action hero cutouts or superhumanly gorgeous, but there is clearly some attraction and chemistry between the two so when they get back from their walk and Paul says to Iris
"I did not ask you here because I wanted to sleep with you, but I do now."
My reaction was along the lines of
After determining that this relationship is going to go beyond something professional, he began to talk Iris through a bit of what he had in mind using a movie he knew she had seen as a frame of reference.
There is a slightly awkward discussion about what parts of the movie she was curious about, but I thought this was a wonderful way to establish that not only is Iris curious about trying BDSM but she is willing to actually try it.
"Do you know what a safeword is?"
*Iris nods & has some internal monologue*
"Good. But we don't need one, today. You say stop, I'll stop what I'm doing. You say no, I won't do whatever I'm planning. You shake your head and I stop. Okay?"
*more nodding*
CONSENT!!! <- We haves it!
THANK YOU. I feel like this step is frequently skipped and making sure that both parties are going to be into it is almost an afterthought, and that's not okay.
So the story moves forward and things start to happen.
"Don't forget to breathe, Iris."
But then the things that are happening start to shift gears a bit.
Suddenly, I realized I wasn't just reading a straight up BDSM story...
Do you know what "puppy play" is?
Because I didn't.
I'll give you a hint, it's not this:
No, it's more along the lines of Paul petting Iris, asking her to retrieve things (she crawls on her hands and knees and carries the tape recorder back in her mouth - wut?), calling her a "good girl" and a "curious puppy" ... it just got a bit uncomfortable for me. Then Paul takes off Iris's panties and rubs her nose in them asking why she made them so wet...
And here's the thing. No Judgement. Seriously. That's just not my brand of kink and I didn't see anything letting me know that it was going to come into play in the story.
I almost stopped right there, but because I have a pathological need to finish all books, I continued on.
Next up we have a scene in the shower where Paul cleans Iris very thoroughly.
Um.. very descriptive quote ->
Now, to be clear, when the before mentioned "puppy play" wasn't involved, this was actually a fairly engaging little story. My only complaints aside from an unexpected surprise kink were that there was a few instances of odd phrasing such as:
"Already the set-up seemed safe and familiar but it was only later that I marveled at how easily I slipped into the part - like finding a bra that truly fits after a lifetime of wearing them a little too small.
And
"Even before his lips touched mine, our noses met and something inside of me melted, broke from it's egg a fresh and tender hatchling.
But there were also very nice and very sexy bits:
"You sound beautiful when you're aroused. I want you to hear that, your moans and cries, when you aren't so distracted by what I'm going to do to you."
And
And as long as you cling to that control, you can never truly enjoy, live, breathe, inhabit the moment you are in.
Overall, I suspect that I might try something else from this author, but I will certainly be a little more careful about which story I select.
*I would give this story two stars just for it's portrayal of consent and safe sex, but I don't feel comfortable rating it all based on my non-existent knowledge of the acts described. This could be a really inaccurate depiction for all I know so I am choosing to not provide a star rating at all.
December 11, 2014
This is a contemporary BDSM erotica novella.
Synopsis
This is a story about Iris, an inexperienced young woman that has had submissive desires. She has been unable to pursue those desires until she meets Paul. Paul is an older experienced man that takes Iris on a journey of sexual discovery in a Dominant/submissive context.
The writing
The beginning was a little rough and a bit confusing, but by page twenty I was hooked. Everything about the way the story is written draws you into the environment. The descriptive detail of sight, sound, and taste are beautifully written in way that is almost poetic. I thought the writing style was very unique for this genre.
In general
The majority of this novella was very realistic. It had true to life characters in regards to the aspect of not being physically perfect. It had true to life sex scenarios, like getting messy. I also thought the BDSM elements were accurately portrayed with the emotional aftereffects some scenes can cause.
However, even though this novella contained some very insightful and true to life aspects, a few things were unrealistic to me. I thought some of the character mannerisms were repetitive. I understood some of them were to show the personality of the characters, but I think it could have been mixed-up a little more.
Overall
This novella isn't really about the characters or the story, but about the journey. I wasn't really sure how I felt about this novella until the ending. The ending is what really tied it all together for me and made this a solid four stars.
Copy provided by author. Review is my own honest thoughts & opinions.
Synopsis
This is a story about Iris, an inexperienced young woman that has had submissive desires. She has been unable to pursue those desires until she meets Paul. Paul is an older experienced man that takes Iris on a journey of sexual discovery in a Dominant/submissive context.
The writing
The beginning was a little rough and a bit confusing, but by page twenty I was hooked. Everything about the way the story is written draws you into the environment. The descriptive detail of sight, sound, and taste are beautifully written in way that is almost poetic. I thought the writing style was very unique for this genre.
In general
The majority of this novella was very realistic. It had true to life characters in regards to the aspect of not being physically perfect. It had true to life sex scenarios, like getting messy. I also thought the BDSM elements were accurately portrayed with the emotional aftereffects some scenes can cause.
However, even though this novella contained some very insightful and true to life aspects, a few things were unrealistic to me. I thought some of the character mannerisms were repetitive. I understood some of them were to show the personality of the characters, but I think it could have been mixed-up a little more.
Overall
This novella isn't really about the characters or the story, but about the journey. I wasn't really sure how I felt about this novella until the ending. The ending is what really tied it all together for me and made this a solid four stars.
Copy provided by author. Review is my own honest thoughts & opinions.
August 31, 2016
"You know what to do," he said and I felt strangely humbled by his quiet and friendly confidence."
Wow, this book was excellent! After the Prologue it did take me an extra chapter before I really got into it, but once I did ... whew! HOThotHOT book that just came out of nowhere! I know I read the blurb beforehand, but I was not expecting the great that I got out of this read.
A couple of awesomes:
-- Iris and Paul are written like real people. Insecurities and imperfect bodies and all, it's all there in print to read and embrace. That is sexy to me.
-- This is written in a phenomenal way that just flows from one scene to the next
So, this starts with Iris, a journalist, going out to a remote area where she is to interview Paul. He recognizes the desire inside of her ...
"I can see how much you want to try."
... and Iris just gets lost from there. To put everything on hold for just a little while to feel - what an incredible journey she goes on in self-discovery.
"Manipulation, sex, submission -- it still made no rational sense in my head but my body was responding to him even more"
This is a great read -- do yourself a favor and pick up a copy. :)
Provided by the Author through BDSM group TPE BAR Read2Review
Wow, this book was excellent! After the Prologue it did take me an extra chapter before I really got into it, but once I did ... whew! HOThotHOT book that just came out of nowhere! I know I read the blurb beforehand, but I was not expecting the great that I got out of this read.
A couple of awesomes:
-- Iris and Paul are written like real people. Insecurities and imperfect bodies and all, it's all there in print to read and embrace. That is sexy to me.
-- This is written in a phenomenal way that just flows from one scene to the next
So, this starts with Iris, a journalist, going out to a remote area where she is to interview Paul. He recognizes the desire inside of her ...
"I can see how much you want to try."
... and Iris just gets lost from there. To put everything on hold for just a little while to feel - what an incredible journey she goes on in self-discovery.
"Manipulation, sex, submission -- it still made no rational sense in my head but my body was responding to him even more"
This is a great read -- do yourself a favor and pick up a copy. :)
Provided by the Author through BDSM group TPE BAR Read2Review
July 11, 2014
I never know what to say about my own work, so I'll just paste what RT Book Reviews thought about it when they gave it 4.5 Stars and made it a Top Pick! They are so much nicer about me than I could be ;).
(http://www.rtbookreviews.com/book-rev...)
"This novella is a gem for fans of BDSM romance and is the perfect starting point for readers new to the genre. Iris' curiosity blossoms into a beautiful, wicked eagerness to submit with the help of Paul's patient guidance. Paul's penchant for humiliation play is a kink made even hotter by Iris' positive emotional and physical response. Although Iris and Paul's brief time together is bittersweet, the story's ending is both realistic and filled with hope.
Journalist Iris Ellis is sent to a remote costal town on assignment for an exclusive interview with screenwriter Paul Archer — a hermit who lives alone, secluding himself from society. What starts out as an interview quickly turns personal, as Paul starts questioning Iris about her sexual desires. Admittingly curious about submitting to a man, Iris loses herself in an intimate 2-day tryst with Paul. But Iris knows she must eventually leave him and return home, the question is whether or not she wants her fantasies with Paul to become part of her reality. (A HOTTER STATE, dl., $3.99)"
*Web Exclusive Review*
-- RT Book Reviews
(http://www.rtbookreviews.com/book-rev...)
"This novella is a gem for fans of BDSM romance and is the perfect starting point for readers new to the genre. Iris' curiosity blossoms into a beautiful, wicked eagerness to submit with the help of Paul's patient guidance. Paul's penchant for humiliation play is a kink made even hotter by Iris' positive emotional and physical response. Although Iris and Paul's brief time together is bittersweet, the story's ending is both realistic and filled with hope.
Journalist Iris Ellis is sent to a remote costal town on assignment for an exclusive interview with screenwriter Paul Archer — a hermit who lives alone, secluding himself from society. What starts out as an interview quickly turns personal, as Paul starts questioning Iris about her sexual desires. Admittingly curious about submitting to a man, Iris loses herself in an intimate 2-day tryst with Paul. But Iris knows she must eventually leave him and return home, the question is whether or not she wants her fantasies with Paul to become part of her reality. (A HOTTER STATE, dl., $3.99)"
*Web Exclusive Review*
-- RT Book Reviews
December 24, 2013
I have a confession to make. My name is Cheyenne and I’m an erotica writer who is not a fan of BDSM.
Of course there are exceptions (and I will be reviewing one mighty exception early next year) but for the most part, when I’m reading erotica for pleasure, I will select something else.
I chose to read “Driftwood Deeds” because I’ve read other stories by Laila Blake that I adore for the writing, the slow burn of sensuality, and the tales she weaves so expertly.
“Driftwood Deeds” is the story of Iris, a quiet, almost diffident journalist who has secured an interview with Paul, a reclusive screenwriter and maker of beautiful things. Rather than start the interview immediately, Paul takes her walking on a rocky wild beach, where the tides deposit the raw material and driftwood that he shapes into the furniture and decorations for his home. When they return to his cottage, Paul gives her a choice: when he reenters the room, if she is sitting with her laptop, he will give her an interview. If she is sitting with her hands on the table, they will get to know each other better, outside of the working relationship.
The book is a slow burn, dreamily meandering into the storyline. Paul recognizes the submissive in Iris and draws her out, one tiny test at a time until she is able to admit what she needs. It’s written as a natural progression and a very believable one. The experienced Paul is gentle with Iris, allowing her plenty of time to adapt. There’s no coercion; Iris knows she could leave at any time. But Iris stays and the story is a slow exploration of the unfurling of a complex D/S relationship. Iris’ intense emotional and physical responses draw her closer to Paul, and the story builds to a pinnacle of desire, need and complex emotions.
The setting – a semi-derelict fishing village on the coast in England that the writer says is modeled on the real-life village of Dungeness- is beautifully depicted and is as much a part of the story as Iris and Paul.
Ideal for those wanting to dip a toe into BDSM romance and erotica waters. Seasoned readers of the genre will find plenty to love.
I received an ARC of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
Of course there are exceptions (and I will be reviewing one mighty exception early next year) but for the most part, when I’m reading erotica for pleasure, I will select something else.
I chose to read “Driftwood Deeds” because I’ve read other stories by Laila Blake that I adore for the writing, the slow burn of sensuality, and the tales she weaves so expertly.
“Driftwood Deeds” is the story of Iris, a quiet, almost diffident journalist who has secured an interview with Paul, a reclusive screenwriter and maker of beautiful things. Rather than start the interview immediately, Paul takes her walking on a rocky wild beach, where the tides deposit the raw material and driftwood that he shapes into the furniture and decorations for his home. When they return to his cottage, Paul gives her a choice: when he reenters the room, if she is sitting with her laptop, he will give her an interview. If she is sitting with her hands on the table, they will get to know each other better, outside of the working relationship.
The book is a slow burn, dreamily meandering into the storyline. Paul recognizes the submissive in Iris and draws her out, one tiny test at a time until she is able to admit what she needs. It’s written as a natural progression and a very believable one. The experienced Paul is gentle with Iris, allowing her plenty of time to adapt. There’s no coercion; Iris knows she could leave at any time. But Iris stays and the story is a slow exploration of the unfurling of a complex D/S relationship. Iris’ intense emotional and physical responses draw her closer to Paul, and the story builds to a pinnacle of desire, need and complex emotions.
The setting – a semi-derelict fishing village on the coast in England that the writer says is modeled on the real-life village of Dungeness- is beautifully depicted and is as much a part of the story as Iris and Paul.
Ideal for those wanting to dip a toe into BDSM romance and erotica waters. Seasoned readers of the genre will find plenty to love.
I received an ARC of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
February 14, 2014
Driftwood Deeds
Absolutely lovely writing and story-telling, so sensual and erotic. I teared up at the fierce longing Iris felt several times. The beginning chapter titled "Now" was a perfect set-up and I was right there with Iris on that platform, irrevocably changed and at sea with emotions she was unprepared to deal with. She'd survive, but the floodgates to her submission were wide open and she was left with an aching need that for now could only be eased by Paul.
The author portrayed Iris so beautifully: every emotion that moved through her, I felt and believed. She isn't typically damaged as most women in the romance genre are. She's smart, and focused on her career as a journalist and isn't aware of the gaping hole in her life. And there is Paul, dual sided as a stern, but intuitive Dom on one hand and then as the reclusive, but kind screenwriter. I loved how each of his actions and decisions as a Dom felt authentic to his needs and not cut and paste D/s behavior. It kept this reader surprised and on her toes. Oh, and crucial to the novella was the cottage. I heard every whiny creek as they moved about the cabin. I could smell the brine of the ocean, taste the salty tang and the feel damp that permeated the air. And I could see the rough, cobbled together book shelves and rustic furniture all lovingly built by Paul.
As short as it was, it had a great beginning, a full to the brim middle, and a soft ending to land on. I highly recommend this to lovers of BDSM and those curious about this genre. There's nothing too shocking, except maybe the shower scene, which was crazily HOT. I see this is a series and I can't wait to read the next book. I'd love to see what transpires between Iris and Paul. My fingers are crossed that they get the HEA ending they deserve.
5 Stars because of the lovely writing, the strong characters, and ZERO editing issues
Genre: BDSM, romance, novella, series
Steam: HOT
Reread: YES, I already did! When I got to the resolution from the beginning, I began the book again.
Recommend: YES to BDSM readers and those curious
Standalone: Can be read as one
HEA:HFN, with potential
Absolutely lovely writing and story-telling, so sensual and erotic. I teared up at the fierce longing Iris felt several times. The beginning chapter titled "Now" was a perfect set-up and I was right there with Iris on that platform, irrevocably changed and at sea with emotions she was unprepared to deal with. She'd survive, but the floodgates to her submission were wide open and she was left with an aching need that for now could only be eased by Paul.
The author portrayed Iris so beautifully: every emotion that moved through her, I felt and believed. She isn't typically damaged as most women in the romance genre are. She's smart, and focused on her career as a journalist and isn't aware of the gaping hole in her life. And there is Paul, dual sided as a stern, but intuitive Dom on one hand and then as the reclusive, but kind screenwriter. I loved how each of his actions and decisions as a Dom felt authentic to his needs and not cut and paste D/s behavior. It kept this reader surprised and on her toes. Oh, and crucial to the novella was the cottage. I heard every whiny creek as they moved about the cabin. I could smell the brine of the ocean, taste the salty tang and the feel damp that permeated the air. And I could see the rough, cobbled together book shelves and rustic furniture all lovingly built by Paul.
As short as it was, it had a great beginning, a full to the brim middle, and a soft ending to land on. I highly recommend this to lovers of BDSM and those curious about this genre. There's nothing too shocking, except maybe the shower scene, which was crazily HOT. I see this is a series and I can't wait to read the next book. I'd love to see what transpires between Iris and Paul. My fingers are crossed that they get the HEA ending they deserve.
5 Stars because of the lovely writing, the strong characters, and ZERO editing issues
Genre: BDSM, romance, novella, series
Steam: HOT
Reread: YES, I already did! When I got to the resolution from the beginning, I began the book again.
Recommend: YES to BDSM readers and those curious
Standalone: Can be read as one
HEA:HFN, with potential
August 8, 2014
Arc received from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Cover :- 4 stars
Sex/steaminess :- 4 stars
Story line :- 5 stars
Characters :- 5 stars
Overall rating :- 4.5 stars
Personal rating :- 5 stars
Book Pairing:- M/F
Did it give me a book hangover :- Almost
Is this a review book or personal read :- Review book
Why I chose this book?
I was asked by the Publisher 'A Hotter State' to review.
What I liked about this book.
* The description was amazing I could visualize everything.
* The commentary between the two was fantastic. Intelligent conversations.
* Hot and steamy although there was little sex. The scenes were still steamy.
* Paul......lets face it a man that can cook.
What I didn't like about this book.
* Not a lot, maybe a little longer I didn't want it to end.
Would I read more from this author?
Absolutely
Would I recommend this book?
Yes, erotica lovers, BDSM lovers or someone just looking for something a little different.
Cover :- 4 stars
Sex/steaminess :- 4 stars
Story line :- 5 stars
Characters :- 5 stars
Overall rating :- 4.5 stars
Personal rating :- 5 stars
Book Pairing:- M/F
Did it give me a book hangover :- Almost
Is this a review book or personal read :- Review book
Why I chose this book?
I was asked by the Publisher 'A Hotter State' to review.
What I liked about this book.
* The description was amazing I could visualize everything.
* The commentary between the two was fantastic. Intelligent conversations.
* Hot and steamy although there was little sex. The scenes were still steamy.
* Paul......lets face it a man that can cook.
What I didn't like about this book.
* Not a lot, maybe a little longer I didn't want it to end.
Would I read more from this author?
Absolutely
Would I recommend this book?
Yes, erotica lovers, BDSM lovers or someone just looking for something a little different.
February 25, 2014
Introduction into kinky sex could show up anywhere. Iris Ellis is invited by an elusive screenwriter, Paul Archer for an interview. He's known to be a difficult person to interview. Iris is surprised by how he treats her to a wonderful afternoon which transforms into a sexual interlude.
This is an enjoyable short story. It's a good Gateway to BDSM book. The BDSM is light and arousing. It's the beginning of a possible relationship with much potential. Will it go past a first date? One can only hope as Paul's sexual desires excite Iris.
From a character point of view, both characters are rather under developed. It doesn't detract from the story because they are easily relatable in this contemporary setting. The world building is also light yet it works because the focus is Iris's sexual awakening. This erotic journey is sweet. Watching her realize there is more to live than vanilla sex is enticing. I remember this feeling when I first learned about the kinky lifestyle. This story speaks to me in its innocence blooming.
Recommended for romance reader taking their first step into the sensual world of kink.
*provided by the Author through PaC Romance group
This is an enjoyable short story. It's a good Gateway to BDSM book. The BDSM is light and arousing. It's the beginning of a possible relationship with much potential. Will it go past a first date? One can only hope as Paul's sexual desires excite Iris.
From a character point of view, both characters are rather under developed. It doesn't detract from the story because they are easily relatable in this contemporary setting. The world building is also light yet it works because the focus is Iris's sexual awakening. This erotic journey is sweet. Watching her realize there is more to live than vanilla sex is enticing. I remember this feeling when I first learned about the kinky lifestyle. This story speaks to me in its innocence blooming.
Recommended for romance reader taking their first step into the sensual world of kink.
*provided by the Author through PaC Romance group
January 8, 2014
I received this book free in exchange for an honest review.
Review in two parts, first an open letter to Laila Blake, the author....then the review for everyone else.
Dear Ms. Blake,
When I read the first page of your book, "Driftwood Deeds," I was enraptured by your frankness, by the immediacy of your narrative, and by the fact that you trusted your reader to get on the bus and ride into Iris' story. I admit you took me by surprise with Iris' language, but the surprise was good; it telegraphed to me that Iris was not Anastasia, and that what was coming was going to be a different story.
When I finished the story, I was annoyed. I felt so empty and I wanted the same thing Iris did: to live in Paul's world. But, like her, I knew I had to leave it behind. You have impressed a very jaded reader, a literary fanatic whose complaints are often that books lack literary qualities. Yours has everything I could want, and you showed me that you have incredible repositories of language and narrative power. I will look for your books and I am sure you have joined the narrow list of my favorite writers in this genre.
Sincerely,
Paul
Review for everyone else:
Where to begin?
The story, in its simplest form, is about a 24 hour period when Iris meets Paul, a reclusive screenwriter that she comes to interview. Nothing about her or him matter so much as the fact that the time they spend together is only about them. I say this because it is vitally important. Laila Blake does something that E.L. James could only aspire to in her wildest dreams: she writes a story about two people and makes it about those two people, without the need for additional characters, meaningless threats, grand adventures. This is Greek drama in a very real sense. It has unity of character (two characters), place (Paul's home and the beach around it), and time (a single day).
I am the first to admit that all female writers of erotica are automatically compared to my two favorites: Casandra Zara and Malia Mallory. I would categorize Laila Blake with Malia Mallory in that they both writer strongly character-driven stories with the unities I mentioned above. Where she is like both of my other favorite female erotic writers is that she spends the necessary time to create scene and mood. There is no "quickie" in Ms. Blake's book. But where Ms. Blake goes into a category of her own is the sheer literary qualities in her narrative. Her words are like Egyptian hieroglyphs; they create word-pictures that bring the reader into the time and space.
As this is a review of an erotic novel, I would be remiss not to give a certain amount of space to the sexual aspects. Unlike some erotica, the sex was organic, a necessary part of the narrative. Be it mild to moderate bondage, spanking, domination and submission, and power exchange, it was a part of the whole, not jigsawed into the narrative. I genuinely believed Iris' responses were real, that Paul's cravings and desires were genuinely felt. The sex was subtly played, vividly described, and tastefully shared. Do I think that the 50 Shades minivan-moms would read this? Yes...some would.
If I have one complaint, and it is a small one, it is this: I want a sequel, maybe a "first anniversary" story or something to tell the reader that Iris and Paul are still exploring, still experiencing, and that she returns to that driftwood-furnished seaside home.
Review in two parts, first an open letter to Laila Blake, the author....then the review for everyone else.
Dear Ms. Blake,
When I read the first page of your book, "Driftwood Deeds," I was enraptured by your frankness, by the immediacy of your narrative, and by the fact that you trusted your reader to get on the bus and ride into Iris' story. I admit you took me by surprise with Iris' language, but the surprise was good; it telegraphed to me that Iris was not Anastasia, and that what was coming was going to be a different story.
When I finished the story, I was annoyed. I felt so empty and I wanted the same thing Iris did: to live in Paul's world. But, like her, I knew I had to leave it behind. You have impressed a very jaded reader, a literary fanatic whose complaints are often that books lack literary qualities. Yours has everything I could want, and you showed me that you have incredible repositories of language and narrative power. I will look for your books and I am sure you have joined the narrow list of my favorite writers in this genre.
Sincerely,
Paul
Review for everyone else:
Where to begin?
The story, in its simplest form, is about a 24 hour period when Iris meets Paul, a reclusive screenwriter that she comes to interview. Nothing about her or him matter so much as the fact that the time they spend together is only about them. I say this because it is vitally important. Laila Blake does something that E.L. James could only aspire to in her wildest dreams: she writes a story about two people and makes it about those two people, without the need for additional characters, meaningless threats, grand adventures. This is Greek drama in a very real sense. It has unity of character (two characters), place (Paul's home and the beach around it), and time (a single day).
I am the first to admit that all female writers of erotica are automatically compared to my two favorites: Casandra Zara and Malia Mallory. I would categorize Laila Blake with Malia Mallory in that they both writer strongly character-driven stories with the unities I mentioned above. Where she is like both of my other favorite female erotic writers is that she spends the necessary time to create scene and mood. There is no "quickie" in Ms. Blake's book. But where Ms. Blake goes into a category of her own is the sheer literary qualities in her narrative. Her words are like Egyptian hieroglyphs; they create word-pictures that bring the reader into the time and space.
As this is a review of an erotic novel, I would be remiss not to give a certain amount of space to the sexual aspects. Unlike some erotica, the sex was organic, a necessary part of the narrative. Be it mild to moderate bondage, spanking, domination and submission, and power exchange, it was a part of the whole, not jigsawed into the narrative. I genuinely believed Iris' responses were real, that Paul's cravings and desires were genuinely felt. The sex was subtly played, vividly described, and tastefully shared. Do I think that the 50 Shades minivan-moms would read this? Yes...some would.
If I have one complaint, and it is a small one, it is this: I want a sequel, maybe a "first anniversary" story or something to tell the reader that Iris and Paul are still exploring, still experiencing, and that she returns to that driftwood-furnished seaside home.
December 27, 2022
Author Laila Blake writes character-driven love stories in a variety of genres. In her latest novella, Driftwood Deeds, the focus is on a budding BDSM-style romance between a female journalist with latent submissive tendencies and a middle-age screenwriter. Unique about this story are both its broad appeal to BDSM fiction aficionados and its accessibility to readers not particularly drawn to impact play or bondage.
The characters in this book are not involved in hardcore BDSM activities or the leather scene in general. Theirs is a more private and organic lifestyle that mirrors somewhat a large contingent of people who incorporate some variation of total power exchange into their sexual relationships.
As is often the case in real life, their relationship developed spontaneously when the couple were brought together for the first time through their work. Iris writes about movies and the people involved in making them, and Paul writes successful screenplays. She visits his remote seaside home to interview him and during the getting to know one another stage it becomes apparent that they have similar tastes and interests and, more importantly, a mutual sexual attraction.
Iris has held a long-time secret interest in sexual submission, despite being a modern feminist, but never had the opportunity to explore it before. And Paul is a self-taught dominant who struggled at coming to grips with his natural inclinations that at first blush seemed to him to be too much like sexual abuse. The sexual scenarios depicted between them are well-developed, sensual and delightfully erotic. They have the feel of realistic liaisons as opposed to the bigger-than-life intense encounters often found in BDSM erotica.
The impact play and bondage elements in this book should appeal to readers with a taste for kink, yet they aren’t extreme enough to turn off most erotica fans with more genteel sensibilities. Personally, I was thankful that even though the author provides ample back-story, she does not delve into pseudo-psychological motivations relative to past drama in either of the characters’ lives. This is simply a well-written BDSM-themed story without literary pretensions.
Reviewed by Jim Lyon
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The characters in this book are not involved in hardcore BDSM activities or the leather scene in general. Theirs is a more private and organic lifestyle that mirrors somewhat a large contingent of people who incorporate some variation of total power exchange into their sexual relationships.
As is often the case in real life, their relationship developed spontaneously when the couple were brought together for the first time through their work. Iris writes about movies and the people involved in making them, and Paul writes successful screenplays. She visits his remote seaside home to interview him and during the getting to know one another stage it becomes apparent that they have similar tastes and interests and, more importantly, a mutual sexual attraction.
Iris has held a long-time secret interest in sexual submission, despite being a modern feminist, but never had the opportunity to explore it before. And Paul is a self-taught dominant who struggled at coming to grips with his natural inclinations that at first blush seemed to him to be too much like sexual abuse. The sexual scenarios depicted between them are well-developed, sensual and delightfully erotic. They have the feel of realistic liaisons as opposed to the bigger-than-life intense encounters often found in BDSM erotica.
The impact play and bondage elements in this book should appeal to readers with a taste for kink, yet they aren’t extreme enough to turn off most erotica fans with more genteel sensibilities. Personally, I was thankful that even though the author provides ample back-story, she does not delve into pseudo-psychological motivations relative to past drama in either of the characters’ lives. This is simply a well-written BDSM-themed story without literary pretensions.
Reviewed by Jim Lyon
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December 10, 2013
Iris is a very sweet and innocent heroine. We don't get to know much about her background, and I perhaps would have liked to know a little more. She seems very young, lacking experience and self-knowledge. We get hints that she has questioned her sexuality in the past, but know that her experience with Paul is her first real taste of BDSM. Her sexual and emotional naivety is a blessing in this story, however, as I think most readers will appreciate and relate to her story of self discovery on some level.
I didn't quite know what to make of Paul. By contrast to Iris' apparent youth and inexperience, he almost seemed too knowing. This was certainly ideal for the narrative of their developing relationship between older, teaching dom and younger, learning sub. He taught Iris with understanding and compassion, but I got the sense that he was almost too perfect in Iris' eyes. I think in another novella, I would have liked to see a little more sign of vulnerability in Paul. However, there was something about this depicted perfect and understanding teacher, and the resultant uncertainty felt as a reader, that truly captured the snapshot of a sexual awakening in Driftwood Deeds.
In many ways, this novella is an erotic coming of age novel, with everything that such a coming of age must entail, from the rejection of innocence, even as it is so prized, to the realization that this is a transition which is both dangerous and uncertain, and yet, by definition, transitory (though this story does have a happy-for-now ending). The journey of self discovery for Iris requires a guide who she understandably puts on a pedestal, but it is also colored by a questioning sadness for what has been left behind, even as it opens up new opportunities and brighter more fulfilling futures.
Laila Blake's writing is uniquely beautiful. She describes the tangible surrounds with an intricacy that throws into sharp relief the intensity of Iris' experiences with Paul. What I enjoyed most about this novel, however, was its powerful honesty and genuineness.
Driftwood Deeds is a heartfelt novella that I would recommend to anyone seeking an erotic tale with emotional depth.
I didn't quite know what to make of Paul. By contrast to Iris' apparent youth and inexperience, he almost seemed too knowing. This was certainly ideal for the narrative of their developing relationship between older, teaching dom and younger, learning sub. He taught Iris with understanding and compassion, but I got the sense that he was almost too perfect in Iris' eyes. I think in another novella, I would have liked to see a little more sign of vulnerability in Paul. However, there was something about this depicted perfect and understanding teacher, and the resultant uncertainty felt as a reader, that truly captured the snapshot of a sexual awakening in Driftwood Deeds.
In many ways, this novella is an erotic coming of age novel, with everything that such a coming of age must entail, from the rejection of innocence, even as it is so prized, to the realization that this is a transition which is both dangerous and uncertain, and yet, by definition, transitory (though this story does have a happy-for-now ending). The journey of self discovery for Iris requires a guide who she understandably puts on a pedestal, but it is also colored by a questioning sadness for what has been left behind, even as it opens up new opportunities and brighter more fulfilling futures.
Laila Blake's writing is uniquely beautiful. She describes the tangible surrounds with an intricacy that throws into sharp relief the intensity of Iris' experiences with Paul. What I enjoyed most about this novel, however, was its powerful honesty and genuineness.
Driftwood Deeds is a heartfelt novella that I would recommend to anyone seeking an erotic tale with emotional depth.
February 13, 2014
Wow, that came out of nowhere. This was one hot little novella. I read the prologue and thought, ok, what's this about and almost didn't buy it. But hot, hot, hot damn this was wonderful. The writing was sensual, visual and oh so well done. The description of the sleepy fishing village conjures up images that you can just see. Iris visits Paul to interview him for an article. After a walk and a conversation, they pick up on vibes from each other and then it's on from there! Iris and Paul - though you don't know much about them, you get a pretty good sense of them. Paul's dominance is the subtle type - not over the top. Iris' submissiveness is a somewhat more obvious and you can feel her surprise at her enjoyment of what Paul does to her. When he calls her "puppy" you just swoon. There isn't a true cliffie but I understand that we will see more of Iris and Paul. I will definitely stalk this author to find more of her work!! Truly 5 stars!!
January 1, 2014
I was intrigued by the line, "...the perfect starting point for readers new to the genre..." What did I have to lose? Nothing at all! I gained a whole new world into BDSM that I had NO idea existed! Well yeah, I knew it was there, but what I'm saying is, Ms Blake offered up a new world into it.
Driftwood Deeds offers up Iris's point of view in the events that took place in Paul's 'driftwood' home. He offers up something she possibly can't deny and soon realizes, this is part of who she is.
I felt for Iris. I held my breath for her and at the end, I had tears. I was speechless and for me, that is saying a LOT! If it were possible to give a book 10 stars I would!! Unfortunately, Amazon only goes up to 5 (secretly boos them).
Driftwood Deeds offers up Iris's point of view in the events that took place in Paul's 'driftwood' home. He offers up something she possibly can't deny and soon realizes, this is part of who she is.
I felt for Iris. I held my breath for her and at the end, I had tears. I was speechless and for me, that is saying a LOT! If it were possible to give a book 10 stars I would!! Unfortunately, Amazon only goes up to 5 (secretly boos them).
November 9, 2014
i'm so glad this was the book of the month! i really enjoyed it!
it was a soft and romantic bdsm story. heavy on the romance.
it seemed like an older, long ago time and setting, but wasn't. i think that gentle setting added to the romantic feeling of the story.
in contrast, some of the "edgier" bdsm elements definitely set the story in the kink category.
i'm excited to go into the next book in the series to see where Paul and Iris take it .
it was a soft and romantic bdsm story. heavy on the romance.
it seemed like an older, long ago time and setting, but wasn't. i think that gentle setting added to the romantic feeling of the story.
in contrast, some of the "edgier" bdsm elements definitely set the story in the kink category.
i'm excited to go into the next book in the series to see where Paul and Iris take it .
March 12, 2014
*This book was provided through the PAC Romance Group in exchange for an honest review.
Wow! What can I say? I usually tend toward longer books, but this novella did not disappoint. Laila has a way with words. I felt like she was painting pictures for me, and the descriptions were vivid, decadent, and used all five of my senses. I was mesmerized from the first chapter.
It was so easy to feel the emotion of the main character, Iris. From the beginning, you know that she's come to this small seaside town to interview a reclusive screenwriter, but Paul is far from what she expected, and her visit turns into something so much more than a simple interview. Instead, she follows Paul on a journey of self-discovery. It's provocative and intense, and as the hours pass, Iris lets down her shields, opening herself to honest introspection.
And the story from start to finish is H-O-T, hot! It's edgy, pushing limits, and making Fifty Shades seem like a poor substitute. Laila doesn't just write the stereotypical book with erotic undertones or BDSM scenes. There was so much more substance playing under the surface.
Driftwood Deeds definitely isn't something I would have typically picked from the shelf, but I'm glad I did, and I would absolutely recommend it to those who like their books steamy, but with a little more depth. Great read!
Wow! What can I say? I usually tend toward longer books, but this novella did not disappoint. Laila has a way with words. I felt like she was painting pictures for me, and the descriptions were vivid, decadent, and used all five of my senses. I was mesmerized from the first chapter.
It was so easy to feel the emotion of the main character, Iris. From the beginning, you know that she's come to this small seaside town to interview a reclusive screenwriter, but Paul is far from what she expected, and her visit turns into something so much more than a simple interview. Instead, she follows Paul on a journey of self-discovery. It's provocative and intense, and as the hours pass, Iris lets down her shields, opening herself to honest introspection.
And the story from start to finish is H-O-T, hot! It's edgy, pushing limits, and making Fifty Shades seem like a poor substitute. Laila doesn't just write the stereotypical book with erotic undertones or BDSM scenes. There was so much more substance playing under the surface.
Driftwood Deeds definitely isn't something I would have typically picked from the shelf, but I'm glad I did, and I would absolutely recommend it to those who like their books steamy, but with a little more depth. Great read!
January 16, 2015
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This was an okay story, but I did have a couple of issues with it.
The first thing that put me off a little was the use of the ‘c’ word, this is a personal thing, I just really don’t like that word, and it appeared in this book a lot. I hoped that I’d maybe be a bit immune to it by the end of the book, but I wasn’t.
The second thing that put me off a bit was the male lead character; I just didn’t like him, and he didn’t excite me. The way he suddenly turned around and said he wanted to sleep with the female lead didn’t have the same effect on me as it did on her, because I just didn’t like the bloke. I’d have been out of there so fast! Then when he started dominating her, I just didn’t like him! He wasn’t sexy, he wasn’t flirty, and he was certainly no Christian Grey. The way he called her a ‘puppy’ irritated me too. She’s a person, not a dog.
Otherwise the story was okay, there wasn’t anything horrible about it, and it was fairly well written; I just didn’t like the ‘c’ word and the male lead character.
5 out of 10.
This was an okay story, but I did have a couple of issues with it.
The first thing that put me off a little was the use of the ‘c’ word, this is a personal thing, I just really don’t like that word, and it appeared in this book a lot. I hoped that I’d maybe be a bit immune to it by the end of the book, but I wasn’t.
The second thing that put me off a bit was the male lead character; I just didn’t like him, and he didn’t excite me. The way he suddenly turned around and said he wanted to sleep with the female lead didn’t have the same effect on me as it did on her, because I just didn’t like the bloke. I’d have been out of there so fast! Then when he started dominating her, I just didn’t like him! He wasn’t sexy, he wasn’t flirty, and he was certainly no Christian Grey. The way he called her a ‘puppy’ irritated me too. She’s a person, not a dog.
Otherwise the story was okay, there wasn’t anything horrible about it, and it was fairly well written; I just didn’t like the ‘c’ word and the male lead character.
5 out of 10.
February 24, 2014
Driftwood Deeds, by Laila Blake, was sent to me for an honest review. I thank the author for providing me with a most memorable and pleasurable task. Ms. Blake’s writing is mesmerizing and so very sensual. She is a master at setting a scene and the mood.
The story’s premise: a reporter arriving for an interview with a reclusive writer at his home in a sleepy seaside town. Upon meeting, the protagonists are drawn to one another and the story actually depicts the blossoming of their relationship. The author described their conversation and actions so vividly that the reader felt she was right there with them. The dialog between the protagonists was amazingly intelligent and open. There was emotional depth to their characters.
The novella was intense, emotional, and beautifully written. I loved it from cover to cover.
The story’s premise: a reporter arriving for an interview with a reclusive writer at his home in a sleepy seaside town. Upon meeting, the protagonists are drawn to one another and the story actually depicts the blossoming of their relationship. The author described their conversation and actions so vividly that the reader felt she was right there with them. The dialog between the protagonists was amazingly intelligent and open. There was emotional depth to their characters.
The novella was intense, emotional, and beautifully written. I loved it from cover to cover.
September 2, 2014
I picked this one up after reading another friend's review of it, so I knew what to expect from it, though I found as I was reading it that it wasn't really what I expected. I think I expected something more explicit, a little more hardcore on the BDSM, and while it does get quite explicit in places the overall tone is much more sensual than overly erotic. And the writing here is very sensual indeed with the author doing a superb job of conveying every detail of scenery and sensation from the smell of the sea as they walk along the beach to the more intimate skin-on-skin sensations as the two main characters come together.
See my full review at Random Book Musings
See my full review at Random Book Musings
February 25, 2014
It took me a while to get into this book at the start..i would say about a quarter into the book, before I could relate to the characters and could work out where the story was taking me, but after that wow. I loved the story. It just took off for me after that. I would give this 4.5 stars if I could dropping half just because of its start.
I would love to read more by this author...Its a bit short for me, but would love to read more.
I love the sexual chemistry between these two characters and the reclusiveness of Paul, a man who's taken himself away from it all, but can be his true self in his own home--Fantastic
I would love to read more by this author...Its a bit short for me, but would love to read more.
I love the sexual chemistry between these two characters and the reclusiveness of Paul, a man who's taken himself away from it all, but can be his true self in his own home--Fantastic
February 26, 2014
Book provided by the author.
I thought this was a well written hot little read.
The plot, though short, was exciting and held my attention from start to finish.
The characters were interesting, although I would have liked more time to see them develop.
This is the first book I've read by this author and I'm looking forward to reading more.
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I thought this was a well written hot little read.
The plot, though short, was exciting and held my attention from start to finish.
The characters were interesting, although I would have liked more time to see them develop.
This is the first book I've read by this author and I'm looking forward to reading more.
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February 28, 2015
This was a read for the person that enjoys imagery. The pleasant, erotic words flowed off the page into your mind like the ocean tides. It's a quick hard story, a bit tearful for a "first timer" and it makes you want to live in that world for just a short brief time.
September 5, 2016
Free on Amazon .
Fun short read. Not too heavy or dark. Nice escape from the over done character types, settings, plots we run into.
Made me thirsty for hot tea.
Fun short read. Not too heavy or dark. Nice escape from the over done character types, settings, plots we run into.
Made me thirsty for hot tea.
December 11, 2014
This is the first story of Laila Blake's that I've read and have to say it was an enjoyable BDSM themed easy going, relaxing read.
It starts with female character Iris sitting in a station, and gives the impression of a need to get away, of a person in some turmoil, but also leaving someone she seemed to like or love...something has occurred for her to leave and so I read on.
Enter Paul, who appears to live a semi reclusive life away from what could be a celebrity life spurned, as he is a film director. Although no specific age is given it is obvious there's a considerable age difference, and my impressions are he is in his forties, whilst Iris, who is a journalist after an interview with him, is probably in her early twenties, not a virgin but not in any way experienced in any form of BDSM play or role.
Paul has seen something in her writing, both her asking for an interview and previous work done that he's researched, and from this he suspects she has a submissive side.
There's something in this driftwood theme, almost analogies, rough but smooth items of driftwood in the small house, things well worn and used links me to Paul, in fact, to both of them and the BDSM introduction she is embarking on with him as guide. Paul is comfortable in his experienced dominant role. Iris as she experiences submission through Paul is coming to understand it is right for her, at times it may hurt but for her it feels right...an awakening of her needs.
The puppy play between them where he treats her as a young puppy that needs guidance, some discipline and praise and reward...love the added dimension. It is playful, not threatening but he is in a way saying not long term or serious, but I'm your trainer, and again has analogy in these roles.
I'm reflecting on her being at the station and how I hoped she wasn't hurt from her introduction to BDSM with an older man.
For many it doesn't auger well for long term relationships, but I think Iris would be very upset in a one night or weekend stand so to speak.
I see there is a follow up story and I want to read on and see where Laila Blake takes her characters and their relationship. It ends just as I was getting to like these two characters and enjoying her embarkation into BDSM.
Well written, and just four stars from me.
Thanks to BDSM group and April Marie for this BOM read.
It starts with female character Iris sitting in a station, and gives the impression of a need to get away, of a person in some turmoil, but also leaving someone she seemed to like or love...something has occurred for her to leave and so I read on.
Enter Paul, who appears to live a semi reclusive life away from what could be a celebrity life spurned, as he is a film director. Although no specific age is given it is obvious there's a considerable age difference, and my impressions are he is in his forties, whilst Iris, who is a journalist after an interview with him, is probably in her early twenties, not a virgin but not in any way experienced in any form of BDSM play or role.
Paul has seen something in her writing, both her asking for an interview and previous work done that he's researched, and from this he suspects she has a submissive side.
There's something in this driftwood theme, almost analogies, rough but smooth items of driftwood in the small house, things well worn and used links me to Paul, in fact, to both of them and the BDSM introduction she is embarking on with him as guide. Paul is comfortable in his experienced dominant role. Iris as she experiences submission through Paul is coming to understand it is right for her, at times it may hurt but for her it feels right...an awakening of her needs.
The puppy play between them where he treats her as a young puppy that needs guidance, some discipline and praise and reward...love the added dimension. It is playful, not threatening but he is in a way saying not long term or serious, but I'm your trainer, and again has analogy in these roles.
I'm reflecting on her being at the station and how I hoped she wasn't hurt from her introduction to BDSM with an older man.
For many it doesn't auger well for long term relationships, but I think Iris would be very upset in a one night or weekend stand so to speak.
I see there is a follow up story and I want to read on and see where Laila Blake takes her characters and their relationship. It ends just as I was getting to like these two characters and enjoying her embarkation into BDSM.
Well written, and just four stars from me.
Thanks to BDSM group and April Marie for this BOM read.
January 3, 2014
Writing Style:
Laila Blake could write a to-do manual and I'm positive it would take my breath away. She is a phenomenal writer that can switch between genres effortlessly. My favorite aspect of her writing is her ability to express the emotions of her various characters. You can feel their joy, sadness, anger, confusion... it's like having a front role seat in their mind and seeing everything through their eyes. Laila Blake is a natural story teller that will take you on a journey you will never forget.
My opinion:
Driftwood Deeds is the second full exotic novel I've read but the first I've reviewed. Driftwood Deeds is a novella is for those of us curious about or new to BDSM. It caught my attention because it deals with BDSM and D/s. I have always found the idea behind BDSM completely intriguing yet very confusing. I've never understood how someone could be submissive, the dominance I can understand, but submissive? I was hoping this novel would help me understand and I am delighted to say that it did!
Iris Ellis is submissive, Paul Archer is dominate. Iris is much like me, curious but inexperienced. Paul however is extremely experienced. In a way he introduces Iris to the BDSM lifestyle. He does it in the most respectful way imaginable and eludes kindness frequently. He corrects Iris a few times and gives her tips on how to "let go". His gentle, yet stern nature truly will grow on you. I think he makes the perfect teacher and Iris the perfect student. They quickly form a trusting and loving relationship.
My favorite aspect of this novel was how Iris and Paul open up to each other. They both express their feelings on why they like being dominate/submissive. This novella isn't just about sex; it's about a state of mind. A state of feeling free and refreshed through pleasure mixed with a bit of pain. It's about trust, respect, and experimentation. It's actually quite a beautiful read.
I adore the ending. I wanted to shout for joy. Do a happy dance. I won't share what happens, but let's just say it doesn't disappoint. Driftwood Deeds has made me want to read more books that fall into this category... lucky for me Laila Blake has written more erotica. (Promoting at its finest. hehe)
Laila Blake could write a to-do manual and I'm positive it would take my breath away. She is a phenomenal writer that can switch between genres effortlessly. My favorite aspect of her writing is her ability to express the emotions of her various characters. You can feel their joy, sadness, anger, confusion... it's like having a front role seat in their mind and seeing everything through their eyes. Laila Blake is a natural story teller that will take you on a journey you will never forget.
My opinion:
Driftwood Deeds is the second full exotic novel I've read but the first I've reviewed. Driftwood Deeds is a novella is for those of us curious about or new to BDSM. It caught my attention because it deals with BDSM and D/s. I have always found the idea behind BDSM completely intriguing yet very confusing. I've never understood how someone could be submissive, the dominance I can understand, but submissive? I was hoping this novel would help me understand and I am delighted to say that it did!
Iris Ellis is submissive, Paul Archer is dominate. Iris is much like me, curious but inexperienced. Paul however is extremely experienced. In a way he introduces Iris to the BDSM lifestyle. He does it in the most respectful way imaginable and eludes kindness frequently. He corrects Iris a few times and gives her tips on how to "let go". His gentle, yet stern nature truly will grow on you. I think he makes the perfect teacher and Iris the perfect student. They quickly form a trusting and loving relationship.
My favorite aspect of this novel was how Iris and Paul open up to each other. They both express their feelings on why they like being dominate/submissive. This novella isn't just about sex; it's about a state of mind. A state of feeling free and refreshed through pleasure mixed with a bit of pain. It's about trust, respect, and experimentation. It's actually quite a beautiful read.
I adore the ending. I wanted to shout for joy. Do a happy dance. I won't share what happens, but let's just say it doesn't disappoint. Driftwood Deeds has made me want to read more books that fall into this category... lucky for me Laila Blake has written more erotica. (Promoting at its finest. hehe)
December 31, 2016
Since I have never read anything by Laila Blake before, I was excited to read Driftwood Deeds and discover a new author. I have to say that I enjoyed Laila Blake’s descriptive style of writing. Her characters are more natural and “true to life” based. It was a nice change from the “beyond beautiful” characters that I always read about. Don’t get me wrong, Paul and Iris are pretty, just not all rock hard, perfect body, pretty. Paul and Iris’s beauty was described as real and uncluttered.
I really liked Paul. I mean, I really liked him. Watching him through Iris’s point of view was a fun experience. He was engulfed in character traits that I found attractive. Their communication with each other was comforting.
The story was good but was a little choppy in the beginning and first few chapters. Also, a significant moment in the story line is based around a movie and although I understood the reference, if you have not seen the movie, one would be lost. The movie reference needed to be explained a little more for anyone that had not seen it. Also, the pet references were justified but a little extreme for my tastes.
Driftwood Deeds was a fast and enjoyable read. In the short time with Paul and Iris, I felt connected. Being erotica fiction, the sex was hot but based on a consensual BDSM relationship. The novella left no cliff hangers and was a complete standalone story. I look forward to reading more from Laila Blake.
DRIFTWOOD DEEDS gets 3 out of 5 Platypires. Texas Hugs and Happy Reading!!!
I really liked Paul. I mean, I really liked him. Watching him through Iris’s point of view was a fun experience. He was engulfed in character traits that I found attractive. Their communication with each other was comforting.
The story was good but was a little choppy in the beginning and first few chapters. Also, a significant moment in the story line is based around a movie and although I understood the reference, if you have not seen the movie, one would be lost. The movie reference needed to be explained a little more for anyone that had not seen it. Also, the pet references were justified but a little extreme for my tastes.
Driftwood Deeds was a fast and enjoyable read. In the short time with Paul and Iris, I felt connected. Being erotica fiction, the sex was hot but based on a consensual BDSM relationship. The novella left no cliff hangers and was a complete standalone story. I look forward to reading more from Laila Blake.
DRIFTWOOD DEEDS gets 3 out of 5 Platypires. Texas Hugs and Happy Reading!!!
January 19, 2014
4 Stars!!
Arc received from the author in exchange for an honest review.
"My hair blows into his and for a moment we are truly alone behind a curtain of fluttering brown. His lips meet mine even though the train is nowhere to be seen and I feel tears pool in my eyes. It feels like the first time, no wine, no reason, just to kiss and to feel close to each other."
Iris Ellis is a young journalist who visits a seaside town to interview screenwriter Paul Archer. Before Iris can even start the interview chemistry between her and Paul spark.
**Driftwood Deeds is a hot BDSM novella that is 82 pages long.**
Let me start off by saying that I really liked this novella. It was for sure different from the other short story erotica, in a good way. I liked how well written it was and how there was no rushed feeling that I usually get with novellas. It had nice sensory detail which can be lost in books like this one.
I liked the characters too. Paul Archer is not your typical dominant with washboard abs. Paul is older than Iris and it wasn’t a big deal to either characters. Iris was honest with herself about her feelings, and in other books you don’t see that very often.
The ONLY issue I found was that whole sudden love thing. It just makes it seem a little unrealistic. Otherwise this book would have been 5 stars for me.
I recommend this book for those who like BDSM, novellas, and age differences.
Arc received from the author in exchange for an honest review.
"My hair blows into his and for a moment we are truly alone behind a curtain of fluttering brown. His lips meet mine even though the train is nowhere to be seen and I feel tears pool in my eyes. It feels like the first time, no wine, no reason, just to kiss and to feel close to each other."
Iris Ellis is a young journalist who visits a seaside town to interview screenwriter Paul Archer. Before Iris can even start the interview chemistry between her and Paul spark.
**Driftwood Deeds is a hot BDSM novella that is 82 pages long.**
Let me start off by saying that I really liked this novella. It was for sure different from the other short story erotica, in a good way. I liked how well written it was and how there was no rushed feeling that I usually get with novellas. It had nice sensory detail which can be lost in books like this one.
I liked the characters too. Paul Archer is not your typical dominant with washboard abs. Paul is older than Iris and it wasn’t a big deal to either characters. Iris was honest with herself about her feelings, and in other books you don’t see that very often.
The ONLY issue I found was that whole sudden love thing. It just makes it seem a little unrealistic. Otherwise this book would have been 5 stars for me.
I recommend this book for those who like BDSM, novellas, and age differences.
August 30, 2015
Reviewed by Victoria
Book provided by the author
Originally posted at Romancing the Book
Driftwood Deeds is the first book in the Breaking in Waves series by Laila Blake. I chose this book because I have not read this author before and after reading the summery, this book looked very interesting.
Iris Ellis is a journalist in town to interview Paul Archer. There is a connection between Iris and Paul that it seemed neither expected. Therefore, it was not unexpected that Paul wanted to explore it if Iris wished. Iris is a shy submissive and its apparent in everything she does.
Paul Archer is a screen writer and rather secluded. He is a Dom and sees that Iris is a submissive and tries to draw it out and have her embrace it. I loved that Paul let Iris make the ultimate decision. The sex scenes were blistering and loved that Paul slowly introduced Iris into a D/s relationship.
I would have liked more background as to why Iris is interviewing Paul. That seemed glossed over and not really addressed. I wonder if in future books in the series this will be made known. The other issue I had was the ending seemed incomplete. The characters were very mysterious and the author does not go into much detail of the characters. The author does a good job of drawing you into the story. I read this book in one sitting. Overall, this was a good book.
Book provided by the author
Originally posted at Romancing the Book
Driftwood Deeds is the first book in the Breaking in Waves series by Laila Blake. I chose this book because I have not read this author before and after reading the summery, this book looked very interesting.
Iris Ellis is a journalist in town to interview Paul Archer. There is a connection between Iris and Paul that it seemed neither expected. Therefore, it was not unexpected that Paul wanted to explore it if Iris wished. Iris is a shy submissive and its apparent in everything she does.
Paul Archer is a screen writer and rather secluded. He is a Dom and sees that Iris is a submissive and tries to draw it out and have her embrace it. I loved that Paul let Iris make the ultimate decision. The sex scenes were blistering and loved that Paul slowly introduced Iris into a D/s relationship.
I would have liked more background as to why Iris is interviewing Paul. That seemed glossed over and not really addressed. I wonder if in future books in the series this will be made known. The other issue I had was the ending seemed incomplete. The characters were very mysterious and the author does not go into much detail of the characters. The author does a good job of drawing you into the story. I read this book in one sitting. Overall, this was a good book.
January 28, 2014
This is a great little story and at times the writing is positively lyrical. The author has tackled a difficult subject with flair. For those who are curious about why people are attracted to power trading sexual games, these characters provide an intriguing glimpse. Not everyone responds exactly the same way to the same situation or stimuli, of course, but this is a realistic response and the characters are both sympathetic. There are a few minor mistakes in the writing, but so small that most readers will either not notice or will fail to have their appreciation diminished.
The only suggestion I would make to a reader is to skip the opening chapter, which is out of place chronologically. There seems to be a trend for writers doing this--putting the last or penultimate chapter first--but in my opinion it's almost always a mistake. Why tell us the ending of the story before we start? Sure, it works at times...remember Agatha Christie's "And Then There Were None"? But I think it spoils the arc of the story here, so consider saving it for just before the final chapter.
Either way, however, this is a good read, whether the reader is already an aficionado of the lifestyle or simply curious about it.
I received this book for free through LibraryThing.
The only suggestion I would make to a reader is to skip the opening chapter, which is out of place chronologically. There seems to be a trend for writers doing this--putting the last or penultimate chapter first--but in my opinion it's almost always a mistake. Why tell us the ending of the story before we start? Sure, it works at times...remember Agatha Christie's "And Then There Were None"? But I think it spoils the arc of the story here, so consider saving it for just before the final chapter.
Either way, however, this is a good read, whether the reader is already an aficionado of the lifestyle or simply curious about it.
I received this book for free through LibraryThing.
February 20, 2014
Phew "it's getting hot in here so take off all your clothes" but don't forget the belt or rope!!! What a book!
I'll admit I've read very few of these kind of books 50 shades and the crossfire novels to name a couple, I must say that I found this book just as thrilling to read. It was a little short for my liking but I think thats just my kinky mind hehe!
The author wrote it brilliantly and one of the things I loved was that it wasn't based on a gorgeous millionaire who would melt anyone's panties! It was about two people who are `normal` they have imperfections, they don't work out or have a solid six pac, they ate you run of the mill kinda people.
I think the author captures the reader within the prologue. Once you start reading you can't stop and its not that you have a choice when you have 100 things to do, I found my self "oh I'll read until the next page" " oh I'll put it down when I get after this bit" before long I had read it and wanted more.
I will certainly be looking at the authors other books and would recommend thus book!
Thanks it was a great read!!!
I was given this book to provide an honest review from the paranormal,fantasy, dystopia and romance writers and reviews goodreads group
I'll admit I've read very few of these kind of books 50 shades and the crossfire novels to name a couple, I must say that I found this book just as thrilling to read. It was a little short for my liking but I think thats just my kinky mind hehe!
The author wrote it brilliantly and one of the things I loved was that it wasn't based on a gorgeous millionaire who would melt anyone's panties! It was about two people who are `normal` they have imperfections, they don't work out or have a solid six pac, they ate you run of the mill kinda people.
I think the author captures the reader within the prologue. Once you start reading you can't stop and its not that you have a choice when you have 100 things to do, I found my self "oh I'll read until the next page" " oh I'll put it down when I get after this bit" before long I had read it and wanted more.
I will certainly be looking at the authors other books and would recommend thus book!
Thanks it was a great read!!!
I was given this book to provide an honest review from the paranormal,fantasy, dystopia and romance writers and reviews goodreads group
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