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Silas de San Michel Mystery #1
The Valentine Circle
Boston, end of the Victorian era.
A string of kidnappings plagues the snow-laden city of Boston while a murderer runs amok hunting and killing the unborn babies of they city’s social elite.
A powerful group called the Valentine Society controls the city’s police department, and the people of Boston’s last hope for justice lies in the hands of a man who mysteriously washes ashore from a distant foreign land, battered and bruised.
To complicate matters, he doesn’t remember who he is or where he’s from...
Just a week after he is found unconscious aboard a cargo ship, Officer Silas de San Michel is thrust into a mysterious case dealing with the vicious killings of pregnant teenage girls. But what he doesn't know is that these young girls belong to the secret Valentine Society, an elite group of Boston socialites that have corrupted the city's top officials, unashamedly operating above the law.
With the help of his boss, the highly intelligent Inspector Belloc, and his lovely assistant, the boisterous and spirited Miss Posy Chapman, Silas embarks on a journey that takes him inside a secret world of rules and privileges, of oppressive parents and mischievous alliances.
Weighed down by the sickness of memory loss, Silas struggles to maintain his sanity as he begins to discover the darkness plaguing his own sordid past, a darkness that ultimately brings him to the brink of becoming that which he hunts, a serial killer who was raised and trained by an insidious organization known only as The Factory.
A string of kidnappings plagues the snow-laden city of Boston while a murderer runs amok hunting and killing the unborn babies of they city’s social elite.
A powerful group called the Valentine Society controls the city’s police department, and the people of Boston’s last hope for justice lies in the hands of a man who mysteriously washes ashore from a distant foreign land, battered and bruised.
To complicate matters, he doesn’t remember who he is or where he’s from...
Just a week after he is found unconscious aboard a cargo ship, Officer Silas de San Michel is thrust into a mysterious case dealing with the vicious killings of pregnant teenage girls. But what he doesn't know is that these young girls belong to the secret Valentine Society, an elite group of Boston socialites that have corrupted the city's top officials, unashamedly operating above the law.
With the help of his boss, the highly intelligent Inspector Belloc, and his lovely assistant, the boisterous and spirited Miss Posy Chapman, Silas embarks on a journey that takes him inside a secret world of rules and privileges, of oppressive parents and mischievous alliances.
Weighed down by the sickness of memory loss, Silas struggles to maintain his sanity as he begins to discover the darkness plaguing his own sordid past, a darkness that ultimately brings him to the brink of becoming that which he hunts, a serial killer who was raised and trained by an insidious organization known only as The Factory.
425 pages, Paperback
First published September 6, 2014
About the author
Reinaldo DelValle
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***Author Note: If you are interested in receiving a free ebook copy of “The Valentine Circle” in exchange for an honest review, please send me a private message or email me at: reinaldodelvalle@gmail.com.***
Born in San Juan, Puerto Rico, Reinaldo DelValle grew up in the deep south, just outside of Atlanta, GA. He holds a Bachelor of Business Administration from Kennesaw State University and a Master of Theological Studies from Spring Hill College. He has worked in the Advertising, Marketing, and Communications industries for over ten years and has taught a number of classes in philosophy and theology to adults as well as children.
When he isn't writing, he's sleeping. And when he's not sleeping, he's spending time with his family, hitting the gym, watching movies, buying overpriced one-sixth scale action figures, studying, and reading large books on philosophy and theology.
"In necesariis unitas, in dubiis libertas, in omnibus caritas."
Born in San Juan, Puerto Rico, Reinaldo DelValle grew up in the deep south, just outside of Atlanta, GA. He holds a Bachelor of Business Administration from Kennesaw State University and a Master of Theological Studies from Spring Hill College. He has worked in the Advertising, Marketing, and Communications industries for over ten years and has taught a number of classes in philosophy and theology to adults as well as children.
When he isn't writing, he's sleeping. And when he's not sleeping, he's spending time with his family, hitting the gym, watching movies, buying overpriced one-sixth scale action figures, studying, and reading large books on philosophy and theology.
"In necesariis unitas, in dubiis libertas, in omnibus caritas."
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May 20, 2015
Truly bad
The setting does not work with the time period. The main characters are 21st century people placed in a pseudo turn of the 20th century with none of the proper social moras and morals. This would not be a problem, if the plot were not relying on their position. The writing itself is somewhat stunted.
The only thing that prevents this from being rated a 1 star is the plot. The author has the potential to write great thrillers should he chose to step away from the historic or its less well researched and lazy steam punk genre.
The setting does not work with the time period. The main characters are 21st century people placed in a pseudo turn of the 20th century with none of the proper social moras and morals. This would not be a problem, if the plot were not relying on their position. The writing itself is somewhat stunted.
The only thing that prevents this from being rated a 1 star is the plot. The author has the potential to write great thrillers should he chose to step away from the historic or its less well researched and lazy steam punk genre.
April 30, 2015
Finished reading: November 4th 2015
"Asking too many questions makes it seem as if your head is just empty space. Most of the things you think you don't know, you truly do know. You just don't know you do."
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May 22, 2017
I am torn about this book. It has many good elements and I actually enjoyed reading it quite a bite. The epilogue also makes you want to know how things are going to develop with our MC Silas. On the downside, the dialogues were very wooden and some of the timeline didn't make much sense. The second part has not been released yet and I don't know if I would pick it up.
October 16, 2014
So many good elements in this story. A historical setting, a mystery spanning continents, powerful families, trained psychopaths, and the list goes on. The story really pulls all these unique elements together while still leaving so many avenues for follow up stories. Too many arcs to choose from as to which one would be best to learn more about.
Now, what doesn't work in this story. I found the characters a bit stiff, meaning they just didn't become three dimensional and take on a life of their own. What really stood out to me, though, was the misuse of language and phrasing that isn't period correct. Any time you are trying to immerse your readers in a certain time period, you have to keep it true or the reader bounces between times. Even though this story takes place wholly in a pre-1900 time period, the author inserts phrases in the story that clarifies how difficult and harsh times were back then. Again, this pulls the reader in and out of the flow of the story.
The strength of the story more than makes up for the shortcomings.
Now, what doesn't work in this story. I found the characters a bit stiff, meaning they just didn't become three dimensional and take on a life of their own. What really stood out to me, though, was the misuse of language and phrasing that isn't period correct. Any time you are trying to immerse your readers in a certain time period, you have to keep it true or the reader bounces between times. Even though this story takes place wholly in a pre-1900 time period, the author inserts phrases in the story that clarifies how difficult and harsh times were back then. Again, this pulls the reader in and out of the flow of the story.
The strength of the story more than makes up for the shortcomings.
February 23, 2015
The beginning of a historical murder mystery series. The
characters are vivid, well defined, interesting and engaging.
There is plenty of murder, mystery, suspense, drama and utterly
unpredictable plots with twists and turn that will keep you
captivated. The atmosphere is thick with well-sustained tension.
The story moves fast containing a lot of harsh reality.
The author weaves the past and present together effortlessly.
There is undeniable chemistry between two of the main
characters. Their bantering provides some humor throughout
the story.
Looking forward to reading many more Silas de San Michel
mysteries.
Thank you to the author for this eBook. My opinion is my own.
characters are vivid, well defined, interesting and engaging.
There is plenty of murder, mystery, suspense, drama and utterly
unpredictable plots with twists and turn that will keep you
captivated. The atmosphere is thick with well-sustained tension.
The story moves fast containing a lot of harsh reality.
The author weaves the past and present together effortlessly.
There is undeniable chemistry between two of the main
characters. Their bantering provides some humor throughout
the story.
Looking forward to reading many more Silas de San Michel
mysteries.
Thank you to the author for this eBook. My opinion is my own.
May 16, 2015
If one chooses to write historical fiction, one should familiarize oneself with the speech patterns, behavior, and colloquialisms of the period. This story is set in 1888, I am sure that in that era no one, ever, said "freaking awesome". Move the story to modern time and it would have been a much better, and more acceptable, read. The only thing that made this historical fiction is that there are no cars, the characters use horse-drawn carriages. Too many metaphors, and mixed ones at that.
An interesting mystery involving a circle of elitist rich people whose pregnant daughters, and their unborn babies, are being murdered.
An interesting mystery involving a circle of elitist rich people whose pregnant daughters, and their unborn babies, are being murdered.
October 29, 2014
This book was a mystery within a mystery. Not only are you wondering who did the crime and what the Valentine Circle is really about, but you are wondering who this mysterious main character is. I loved the multiple mystery, but there were some "mysterious" activities that I found frustrating. Mostly I felt like throwing the book at the floor every time the main character insisted on going in or out a window instead of using a door. Once or twice, when it is required, is interesting, but more than that is a bore. He's unique, the readers get that. His history tells us he is unique. We don't need such an unusual, insistent reminder. It began to feel beyond the ridiculous after a while.
Otherwise, I felt as if the plot and the characters were well thought through. It is an interesting idea that keeps you guessing in some ways. If you work out why the girls are being hurt or killed, you can start trying to work out where the main character comes from. Nothing is horribly obvious and all of it is very well planned by the author to make it make sense.
I still am not certain how I feel about the book all together. I couldn't put it down, but there wasn't any one part that stands out to me as amazing over the rest. I enjoyed the ideas and how they were put together, but I'm not certain I enjoyed how some of them were executed. I loved the concept of having the main character have amnesia and work out who he is along with us, but I felt as if I had encountered that somewhere before and for those reasons it didn't feel as unique as I had hoped it would be.
Having said all of that I honestly enjoyed my reading experience and really got into the mystery. This book is well written and was a pleasure to read. Not sure that I am intrigued enough about the characters' history or future to want to dive into another book about them, though.
Otherwise, I felt as if the plot and the characters were well thought through. It is an interesting idea that keeps you guessing in some ways. If you work out why the girls are being hurt or killed, you can start trying to work out where the main character comes from. Nothing is horribly obvious and all of it is very well planned by the author to make it make sense.
I still am not certain how I feel about the book all together. I couldn't put it down, but there wasn't any one part that stands out to me as amazing over the rest. I enjoyed the ideas and how they were put together, but I'm not certain I enjoyed how some of them were executed. I loved the concept of having the main character have amnesia and work out who he is along with us, but I felt as if I had encountered that somewhere before and for those reasons it didn't feel as unique as I had hoped it would be.
Having said all of that I honestly enjoyed my reading experience and really got into the mystery. This book is well written and was a pleasure to read. Not sure that I am intrigued enough about the characters' history or future to want to dive into another book about them, though.
April 4, 2015
The author very kindly supplied me with a copy of this in exchange for a review. I so badly wanted to like this book, but I can't get beyond page 66 (and I've tried 3 times). The writing is choppy, uneven, and juvenile. The characters aren't grabbing me, as much as I want to learn more about Silas. And now I find all that I am doing is waiting to spot the anachronisms. The book is set in 1885, yet Inspector Belloc addresses one character as "Ms. Chapman." "Ms" didn't come into use until the 1970's. Two pages later, "Ms. Chapman" intimates that she lives with her fiancé who is currently out of town. In 1885? She might have been living with someone but she would not have been that open about it. I gave up at this point.
June 18, 2015
It sounded like a good plot, especially the historical aim. It started off on a positive note but it slowly started going down and at some point the bottom fell out. A lot of dialogue was was simply moronic. The plot behind the modern was stupid and the character development was ok at best. The only character I found interesting was Belloc and he was weak at times.
Those who like a thin plot but lots of grandiose violence will probably delight in it, but as for me sorry it was a big disappointment
Those who like a thin plot but lots of grandiose violence will probably delight in it, but as for me sorry it was a big disappointment
Did Not Finish
December 12, 2021DNF - page 110 (22%)
Ah.... another victim of my Kindle Clean Out Saga
"Hello strange amnesiac that I have found on a boat! Would you like to A. pay me rent to live in my house and B. become a member of the Boston Police Department because it is always best practice to hire officers based on knowing nothing about their background, personal history, or any other elements that might lead to increased violence in this already questionably designed occupation?"
"Yes, I would love to do all of those things! :D "
If that sounds like a reasonable beginning, then by all means, read this book.
But it's full of anachronous language and action for a historical novel and some Sherlock Holmes-level cop BS that doesn't even make it to the level of Holmes' "realism." (Seriously, WHY was this historical? There was nothing historical about it.)
Also, all of the cases are about continued violence against women so we love that trope.... totally..... Yeah.....
Also, end of the Victorian era??? In 1885?????? Someone better tell Victoria, because that woman lived for another 16 years! If you want the American terms, we're actually just leading into the Gilded Age, I believe. There never really was a "Victorian" period in American history, but there are "victorian" houses because of the sharing of architectural styles.
Ah.... another victim of my Kindle Clean Out Saga
"Hello strange amnesiac that I have found on a boat! Would you like to A. pay me rent to live in my house and B. become a member of the Boston Police Department because it is always best practice to hire officers based on knowing nothing about their background, personal history, or any other elements that might lead to increased violence in this already questionably designed occupation?"
"Yes, I would love to do all of those things! :D "
If that sounds like a reasonable beginning, then by all means, read this book.
But it's full of anachronous language and action for a historical novel and some Sherlock Holmes-level cop BS that doesn't even make it to the level of Holmes' "realism." (Seriously, WHY was this historical? There was nothing historical about it.)
Also, all of the cases are about continued violence against women so we love that trope.... totally..... Yeah.....
Also, end of the Victorian era??? In 1885?????? Someone better tell Victoria, because that woman lived for another 16 years! If you want the American terms, we're actually just leading into the Gilded Age, I believe. There never really was a "Victorian" period in American history, but there are "victorian" houses because of the sharing of architectural styles.
October 3, 2019
The start of lLife
This book has the start of a great story line. By working with a small group of players it holds your interest. Anyone who reads this book will read others in the hope of finding suspense.
This book has the start of a great story line. By working with a small group of players it holds your interest. Anyone who reads this book will read others in the hope of finding suspense.
June 13, 2019
Too much evil
I was drawn in at the beginning of the story, but I couldn't finish this book. It just had too much evil.
I was drawn in at the beginning of the story, but I couldn't finish this book. It just had too much evil.
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May 6, 2020Mystery
Enjoyed the book but parts of the plot drug on to much. Would be interested in reading another f r I'm this author.
Enjoyed the book but parts of the plot drug on to much. Would be interested in reading another f r I'm this author.
June 5, 2020
Could not get into this one,tried a couple of times, but did not get very far with it
June 23, 2022
keeps you guessing
Pretty intense book. Took some pretty big leaps and bounds towards the end! Definitely kept me reading quicker and quicker.
Pretty intense book. Took some pretty big leaps and bounds towards the end! Definitely kept me reading quicker and quicker.
June 21, 2022
Nope. You can't put modern characters into a historical fiction novel. I thought this premise sounded interesting but there were too many anachronisms. The speech alone made me stop and try to remember what century we were in.
November 4, 2014
THE VALENTINE CIRCLE
By: Reinaldo DelValle
* I received a free copy of this book in exchange for a fair and honest review. *
SYNOPSIS
The story takes place in the city of Boston in the year 1885.
Silas de San Michel awakes inside the closet of a ship in Boston Harbor. He has no memory of who he is or how he came to be on that ship. He isn't even sure his name is Silas, but since it is stitched inside his clothing, he figures that must be correct.
Taken in by a Boston detective, he quickly finds himself recruited by the woefully understaffed Boston Police Department.
He becomes involved in investigating a series of strange deaths of the city's elite citizens. Pregnant young women are dying, their babies cut from their wombs.
A powerful group called the Valentine Society controls the police and what Silas doesn’t know is that the murder victims also belong to the same secret society.
As he struggles to regain his memory, he must also try to solve the murders that have already occurred and try to prevent more people from dying horrific deaths and to protect more innocent babies from falling victim to this insidious evil.
WHAT I LIKED:
This book is very well written and skillfully draws the reader in. The plot is very complex and could easily have become confusing, but author Reinaldo DelValle has managed to make the story flow seamlessly.
*Potential Spoiler Alert*
Silas meticulously builds his case against the murderer and discovers a vast conspiracy that spans several decades. The way in which each small clue is uncovered guarantees that the reader will feel the intensity of being on the trail of the killer.
When the truth about what is happening within The Valentine Circle is finally revealed, readers will be shocked and amazed.
The hints of romance between Silas and Lucy and between Silas and Posy are charmingly done.
Posy's character was one of my favorites. In the year 1888 women are seen as the property of their husbands and they are expected to be demure, to aspire only to motherhood and to do everything in their power to please their husbands. Posy is not that type of woman. She loves her job as a Boston Police Detective and her hobby is fencing. During this time period fencing was not considered appropriate for women, but Posy disregards that fact and she excels at the sport.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. There are so many elements to this book that it would give too much away for me to list all the reasons this book is so good.
The details of the lives of the pregnant girls shows a side of their world that is rarely seen. The reader will empathize with their situation rather than despise them for their opulent lifestyles. To achieve this takes an author with skill and skill is something that Reinaldo DelValle has plenty of.
The ending of this book is terrific. It gives just enough information to intrigue the reader and leave them wanting to read the next book immediately.
RATING:
I give this book a rating of 5 out of 5 stars. It is well worth reading and I have a feeling that we will be hearing a lot more from this author in the future.
This book rates up there with books such as "The DaVinci Code".
I recommend this book to readers ages 18 and up. Younger readers may be bothered by the shocking violence and brutality of the murders as well as some of the other adult oriented scenes.
I suggest to potential readers that you only begin this book when you have at least a few hours available. This book is so full of intrigue and surprises that you will not want to put it down.
'The Valentine Circle' is riveting and suspenseful and full of characters that readers will want to know more about. I hope to read more of the adventures of Silas de San Michel in the near future.
By: Reinaldo DelValle
* I received a free copy of this book in exchange for a fair and honest review. *
SYNOPSIS
The story takes place in the city of Boston in the year 1885.
Silas de San Michel awakes inside the closet of a ship in Boston Harbor. He has no memory of who he is or how he came to be on that ship. He isn't even sure his name is Silas, but since it is stitched inside his clothing, he figures that must be correct.
Taken in by a Boston detective, he quickly finds himself recruited by the woefully understaffed Boston Police Department.
He becomes involved in investigating a series of strange deaths of the city's elite citizens. Pregnant young women are dying, their babies cut from their wombs.
A powerful group called the Valentine Society controls the police and what Silas doesn’t know is that the murder victims also belong to the same secret society.
As he struggles to regain his memory, he must also try to solve the murders that have already occurred and try to prevent more people from dying horrific deaths and to protect more innocent babies from falling victim to this insidious evil.
WHAT I LIKED:
This book is very well written and skillfully draws the reader in. The plot is very complex and could easily have become confusing, but author Reinaldo DelValle has managed to make the story flow seamlessly.
*Potential Spoiler Alert*
Silas meticulously builds his case against the murderer and discovers a vast conspiracy that spans several decades. The way in which each small clue is uncovered guarantees that the reader will feel the intensity of being on the trail of the killer.
When the truth about what is happening within The Valentine Circle is finally revealed, readers will be shocked and amazed.
The hints of romance between Silas and Lucy and between Silas and Posy are charmingly done.
Posy's character was one of my favorites. In the year 1888 women are seen as the property of their husbands and they are expected to be demure, to aspire only to motherhood and to do everything in their power to please their husbands. Posy is not that type of woman. She loves her job as a Boston Police Detective and her hobby is fencing. During this time period fencing was not considered appropriate for women, but Posy disregards that fact and she excels at the sport.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. There are so many elements to this book that it would give too much away for me to list all the reasons this book is so good.
The details of the lives of the pregnant girls shows a side of their world that is rarely seen. The reader will empathize with their situation rather than despise them for their opulent lifestyles. To achieve this takes an author with skill and skill is something that Reinaldo DelValle has plenty of.
The ending of this book is terrific. It gives just enough information to intrigue the reader and leave them wanting to read the next book immediately.
RATING:
I give this book a rating of 5 out of 5 stars. It is well worth reading and I have a feeling that we will be hearing a lot more from this author in the future.
This book rates up there with books such as "The DaVinci Code".
I recommend this book to readers ages 18 and up. Younger readers may be bothered by the shocking violence and brutality of the murders as well as some of the other adult oriented scenes.
I suggest to potential readers that you only begin this book when you have at least a few hours available. This book is so full of intrigue and surprises that you will not want to put it down.
'The Valentine Circle' is riveting and suspenseful and full of characters that readers will want to know more about. I hope to read more of the adventures of Silas de San Michel in the near future.
March 5, 2015
1885, Boston Harbor Boston, MA. A homeless man stored himself on the boat from the Far East.
The Captain O’Hara had the local Boston P/D officer escort him to a homeless shelter.
Inspector Belloc (Boston P/D) said he had been stabbed. The Dr. was looking him over. Silas? He had no idea who he was or where he came from.
There was an addressed envelope in his bag; to: Silas de San Michel, from: Lucy Reilly (School of Arts, Boston, MA).
Fast forward Officer Silas de San Michel (Boston P/D), Posy Chapman (Inspector Belloc assistant, P/G, Horace lover) & Inspector Belloc (former alcoholic) are speaking with Mrs. Decamps & Mr. Decamps about their daughter Claudia Annabelle Decamps (1868-1885, 17, Catherine) who seems to have been brutally murdered.
Dominic (German shepherd) had gotten out of the house. Glenda (Reilly housekeeper) went to look for him but she was found by the pond dead.
Darcy Reilly (Catherine BFF, P/G) had been attacked. The unborn child was killed.
Officer Dalton Lahey (Boston P/D) informed the 3-member investigation team Victoria Dailey was found dead in an abandoned school in.
Andover was Officer Silas de San Michel next stop.
All the girls were P/G & members of the Valentine Society (wealthy social clique).
Lucy Reilly (sister, violin) 1st. day on as a reporter at the Boston Evening Globe.
Her 1st assignment was to interview a Civil War Veteran; Carlisle Burrows who worked at the Boston Taxidermy Co.
Officer Silas de San Michel (aka Shi) next stop is Madame Ovary’s Emporium (brothel) right next door to the orphanage. He only wanted to rent a room.
Frances Dupuys (17, P/G) & Catherine Cathy Haralson (P/G) were waiting on the B&L train to arrive.
What would Harlow Lattimer reveal to Inspector Belloc.
Who is the real Klaus Factory?
Who or what is Masayoshi?
I'm guessing the ladies love U
I did not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing this book. While I receive free books from publishers & authors, I am under no obligation to write a positive review. Only an honest one.
A very awesome book cover, great font & writing style. A very well written mysterious serial killer book. It was very easy for me to read/follow from start/finish & never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters to keep track of. This could also make great mystery serial killer movie or mini TV series. There is no doubt in my mind this is a very easy rating of 5 stars.
Thank you for the free Story Cartel; PDF book
Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
The Captain O’Hara had the local Boston P/D officer escort him to a homeless shelter.
Inspector Belloc (Boston P/D) said he had been stabbed. The Dr. was looking him over. Silas? He had no idea who he was or where he came from.
There was an addressed envelope in his bag; to: Silas de San Michel, from: Lucy Reilly (School of Arts, Boston, MA).
Fast forward Officer Silas de San Michel (Boston P/D), Posy Chapman (Inspector Belloc assistant, P/G, Horace lover) & Inspector Belloc (former alcoholic) are speaking with Mrs. Decamps & Mr. Decamps about their daughter Claudia Annabelle Decamps (1868-1885, 17, Catherine) who seems to have been brutally murdered.
Dominic (German shepherd) had gotten out of the house. Glenda (Reilly housekeeper) went to look for him but she was found by the pond dead.
Darcy Reilly (Catherine BFF, P/G) had been attacked. The unborn child was killed.
Officer Dalton Lahey (Boston P/D) informed the 3-member investigation team Victoria Dailey was found dead in an abandoned school in.
Andover was Officer Silas de San Michel next stop.
All the girls were P/G & members of the Valentine Society (wealthy social clique).
Lucy Reilly (sister, violin) 1st. day on as a reporter at the Boston Evening Globe.
Her 1st assignment was to interview a Civil War Veteran; Carlisle Burrows who worked at the Boston Taxidermy Co.
Officer Silas de San Michel (aka Shi) next stop is Madame Ovary’s Emporium (brothel) right next door to the orphanage. He only wanted to rent a room.
Frances Dupuys (17, P/G) & Catherine Cathy Haralson (P/G) were waiting on the B&L train to arrive.
What would Harlow Lattimer reveal to Inspector Belloc.
Who is the real Klaus Factory?
Who or what is Masayoshi?
I'm guessing the ladies love U
I did not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing this book. While I receive free books from publishers & authors, I am under no obligation to write a positive review. Only an honest one.
A very awesome book cover, great font & writing style. A very well written mysterious serial killer book. It was very easy for me to read/follow from start/finish & never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters to keep track of. This could also make great mystery serial killer movie or mini TV series. There is no doubt in my mind this is a very easy rating of 5 stars.
Thank you for the free Story Cartel; PDF book
Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
November 4, 2014
This is a very interesting but definitely different story. The basic storyline is not so unusual. The main character, Silas, and his partners Belloc and Posy, and how they work together to solve this mystery are the unusual parts of the story. I am not sure, after reading it, whether I truly enjoyed it or not. Silas is an unusual main character. He is sort of a cross between romantic hero/lover, Superman, Spiderman and a few other super heroes. He arrives in Boston with amnesia, and is taken in and hired by a city Inspector, Belloc. Belloc and his assistant, Posy, are trying to solve a mystery. A young pregnant girl and her unborn baby from a rich family has been killed. Efforts to figure out what happened are stymied by the city police, who are “in the pocket” of a rich cabal type organization, who control most of the city. Naturally, this group do not want any “dirty laundry” aired for all to see. Things go from bad to worse, when other young pregnant girls and their babies are killed. Belloc, Posy and Silas uncover a diabolic group who seem to be running things in the city, to include the murders, and no one wants to stand up to stop them—except this trio. Meanwhile, Silas, who suffers from amnesia from the start, is gradually getting glimpses of his past life and his memory is slowly returning.
This hero has a lot of mystery in his background as well as a lot of Far Eastern mysticism and philosophy. I was intrigued by the main character Silas. As I said, he is a good mixture of many of today’s super heroes. However, the author has managed to craft this character so that his antics do not really seem all that far-fetched and his humanness comes through. I was intrigued by the creativity the author showed in this character. Kudos to the author for that. I also found the character of Belloc interesting. Both he and Posy were well crafted and developed, though I found myself not always liking Posy. Sometimes, I wanted to stop and shake some sense into her. There is also an element of attraction between Silas and Posy that lent a romantic element to the story.
This is, as I said, an interesting story. What makes is stand out is the character Silas. I am sure we will see more of Silas as the series continues. This book the author lays a solid groundwork for other, follow-ons. I think anyone who is looking for a good mystery, with some intriguing twists and turns as well as an unusual lead character will find this book quite interesting. I know I did. I received this from Library Thing to read and to provide an honest review.
This hero has a lot of mystery in his background as well as a lot of Far Eastern mysticism and philosophy. I was intrigued by the main character Silas. As I said, he is a good mixture of many of today’s super heroes. However, the author has managed to craft this character so that his antics do not really seem all that far-fetched and his humanness comes through. I was intrigued by the creativity the author showed in this character. Kudos to the author for that. I also found the character of Belloc interesting. Both he and Posy were well crafted and developed, though I found myself not always liking Posy. Sometimes, I wanted to stop and shake some sense into her. There is also an element of attraction between Silas and Posy that lent a romantic element to the story.
This is, as I said, an interesting story. What makes is stand out is the character Silas. I am sure we will see more of Silas as the series continues. This book the author lays a solid groundwork for other, follow-ons. I think anyone who is looking for a good mystery, with some intriguing twists and turns as well as an unusual lead character will find this book quite interesting. I know I did. I received this from Library Thing to read and to provide an honest review.
October 28, 2014
While reading this book, I felt like I was in one of those crime/forensic shows like CSI: Miami or Criminal Minds. Yes I must agree! It was a like Criminal Minds in book form! Such brilliant and superb language, plus the mystery was well thought out.
When someone says Criminal Minds, this is how I react: :D
Very Happy
I really don't know what I loved more about this book- the mystery and suspense or the character development? The characters were just so involved with one another and even though we have our main character, who doesn't remember anything about himself, he soon learns that hes more capable than he ever thought he was. In the beginning of the book we don't get much of his past life, but I can dub that he was probably a forensic scientist or a P.I. based on how much he knew about the crime scenes.
A string of teenage girls are being horribly killed off by a sick psychopath. Now I would love to reveal the whole plot of this murderer's reason for killing but this is, once again, a spoiler-free review. And I've been having so much trouble lately with connecting to characters, but it was pretty much settled out for me in this book. In the story we are introduced to Silas, Posy, and Belloc, who are the three detectives working on this case. I think the author wanted to stress the forensic aspects of the story and put us in their shoes for a reason. If you've ever dreamed of going into a profession for forensics, this is the perfect book for you to be inside the head of a crime scene detective all the way from beginning to the end. It's literally that invigorating and action-packed!
Most likely when you read this book, you'll start to feel like you're watching a movie. It's actually incredible because I've never actually really experienced that before with a book. The book took one of my favorite things, which is violence and murder, and completely took on a new turn. I think it's safe to safe that this book was a cross between Criminal Minds and Hannibal. I don't really think I've gathered my overall thoughts about this book, however I can come to one conclusion: I thoroughly enjoyed the read :D
When someone says Criminal Minds, this is how I react: :D
Very Happy
I really don't know what I loved more about this book- the mystery and suspense or the character development? The characters were just so involved with one another and even though we have our main character, who doesn't remember anything about himself, he soon learns that hes more capable than he ever thought he was. In the beginning of the book we don't get much of his past life, but I can dub that he was probably a forensic scientist or a P.I. based on how much he knew about the crime scenes.
A string of teenage girls are being horribly killed off by a sick psychopath. Now I would love to reveal the whole plot of this murderer's reason for killing but this is, once again, a spoiler-free review. And I've been having so much trouble lately with connecting to characters, but it was pretty much settled out for me in this book. In the story we are introduced to Silas, Posy, and Belloc, who are the three detectives working on this case. I think the author wanted to stress the forensic aspects of the story and put us in their shoes for a reason. If you've ever dreamed of going into a profession for forensics, this is the perfect book for you to be inside the head of a crime scene detective all the way from beginning to the end. It's literally that invigorating and action-packed!
Most likely when you read this book, you'll start to feel like you're watching a movie. It's actually incredible because I've never actually really experienced that before with a book. The book took one of my favorite things, which is violence and murder, and completely took on a new turn. I think it's safe to safe that this book was a cross between Criminal Minds and Hannibal. I don't really think I've gathered my overall thoughts about this book, however I can come to one conclusion: I thoroughly enjoyed the read :D
January 24, 2015
Mysteries, gore, murde
This is a long story, and although interesting and different, there are aspects of it that are too drawn out and do not move the story forward. Basically, a man appears on a freighter in Boston Harbor in the late 1800’s, suffering from amnesia, but has vague memories of Japan and a Japanese master who teaches him the philosophy of the East. Due to a shortage on the Boston Police Department, he is hired by Inspector Belloc, with a female assistant Posy Chapman, and Dalton. Because he is an amnesiac, he assume the name of Silas because it is sewed in some of his clothing, but he has unusual talents. He can climb in and out of windows, up the sides of buildings, can sense people who are unseen, and owns special Japanese weapons that he found among his belongings. This is why Belloc hired him.
The plot takes up when Belloc is trying to discover who is attacking teenage girls, whose parents are members of the Valentine Circle, an elitist group in Boston. The unusual aspect of this is that each of six daughters of the Circle are pregnant and are being attacked one by one, and the fetus cut out of their stomachs. In some cases it kills them. In others it causes physical and emotional damage. The parents of these girls seem unconcerned. Then the plot goes into great details attempting to find the assailant, capture him and solve the crimes, except that the Valentine Circle has control of the top brass of Boston’s police department, who use every method to hinder Belloc in this investigations.
The story is full of gory attacks, unusual very dark characters, some of the philosophy of Japan, and almost becomes too much of those aspects. Because of the repetition of the attacks and pain and anguish involved, it makes the story seem extremely long. Yet it does have an interesting, unusual plot and a twist to the ending, which is unforeseen. For readers who like dark mysteries, it is a good book for you.
I was given a complimentary copy of the e-book for an honest review.
This is a long story, and although interesting and different, there are aspects of it that are too drawn out and do not move the story forward. Basically, a man appears on a freighter in Boston Harbor in the late 1800’s, suffering from amnesia, but has vague memories of Japan and a Japanese master who teaches him the philosophy of the East. Due to a shortage on the Boston Police Department, he is hired by Inspector Belloc, with a female assistant Posy Chapman, and Dalton. Because he is an amnesiac, he assume the name of Silas because it is sewed in some of his clothing, but he has unusual talents. He can climb in and out of windows, up the sides of buildings, can sense people who are unseen, and owns special Japanese weapons that he found among his belongings. This is why Belloc hired him.
The plot takes up when Belloc is trying to discover who is attacking teenage girls, whose parents are members of the Valentine Circle, an elitist group in Boston. The unusual aspect of this is that each of six daughters of the Circle are pregnant and are being attacked one by one, and the fetus cut out of their stomachs. In some cases it kills them. In others it causes physical and emotional damage. The parents of these girls seem unconcerned. Then the plot goes into great details attempting to find the assailant, capture him and solve the crimes, except that the Valentine Circle has control of the top brass of Boston’s police department, who use every method to hinder Belloc in this investigations.
The story is full of gory attacks, unusual very dark characters, some of the philosophy of Japan, and almost becomes too much of those aspects. Because of the repetition of the attacks and pain and anguish involved, it makes the story seem extremely long. Yet it does have an interesting, unusual plot and a twist to the ending, which is unforeseen. For readers who like dark mysteries, it is a good book for you.
I was given a complimentary copy of the e-book for an honest review.
August 14, 2015
I want to like this book more than I actually do. At first I thought this was really good but as I read on these little things just started to spring out at me and just... well, it got to the point where I couldn't overlook them anymore.
The first chapter of this I thought was interesting (actually it may have been a prologue...) - basically the introduction to Silas, it felt different and I was really intrigued. The first chapter was good as well - but then Posy was introduced and she just rubbed me the wrong way. I don't know if the author intended to write her that way (I get the impression that she will be a love interest for Silas so I doubt it) but man, I would have liked this book so much better if it hadn't been for her.
It is also thanks to her I noticed my second niggle with the book - the dialogue between characters at times seemed juvenile (and I am not just talking about the very childish arguments between Posy and Silas). Once I noticed that, I also noticed that sometimes in the action scenes the writing quality just... wasn't that good.
That said, the plot was good. I was interested in Silas and who he actually was - Lucy I found somewhat interesting as well but definitely under-utilised in my opinion. The Valentine Circle wasn't that new a concept but I thought it well utilised. The Mr Factories were again an older kinda idea but ... I liked how they were used. I would have preferred some more backstory on the evil twins, as well as the countess (I am really not sure how exactly they fit into this) but this is part of a series so who knows?
Now, I make no secret that I am not a fan of first books that make you have to read the next ones to get a decent conclusion. This book... just about manages to not irritate me.
I am pretty sure this is one of the books that I 'bought' (aka got free from Amazon) on a whim so I really don't know if I would seek out others in the series, but if I found other books by this author on my Kindle I wouldn't be unhappy.
The first chapter of this I thought was interesting (actually it may have been a prologue...) - basically the introduction to Silas, it felt different and I was really intrigued. The first chapter was good as well - but then Posy was introduced and she just rubbed me the wrong way. I don't know if the author intended to write her that way (I get the impression that she will be a love interest for Silas so I doubt it) but man, I would have liked this book so much better if it hadn't been for her.
It is also thanks to her I noticed my second niggle with the book - the dialogue between characters at times seemed juvenile (and I am not just talking about the very childish arguments between Posy and Silas). Once I noticed that, I also noticed that sometimes in the action scenes the writing quality just... wasn't that good.
That said, the plot was good. I was interested in Silas and who he actually was - Lucy I found somewhat interesting as well but definitely under-utilised in my opinion. The Valentine Circle wasn't that new a concept but I thought it well utilised. The Mr Factories were again an older kinda idea but ... I liked how they were used. I would have preferred some more backstory on the evil twins, as well as the countess (I am really not sure how exactly they fit into this) but this is part of a series so who knows?
Now, I make no secret that I am not a fan of first books that make you have to read the next ones to get a decent conclusion. This book... just about manages to not irritate me.
I am pretty sure this is one of the books that I 'bought' (aka got free from Amazon) on a whim so I really don't know if I would seek out others in the series, but if I found other books by this author on my Kindle I wouldn't be unhappy.
January 31, 2015
I received an advance reader copy of this book for my unbiased review of this book.
While the synopsis sounded intriguing and piqued my interest, the story itself was not quite as interesting. Once I had started reading, I knew that if I didn't finish the book in one sitting that I wouldn't want to pick up where I left off.
For the first half of the book, I had a hard time following some of the conversations and/or story progression. Some of it was because of the author, whether due to his writing style or lack of details, I'm unsure. The rest was because I wasn't sucked into the story and not as focused in my reading. Spent a great deal of time having to go back and reread passages to figure out who was saying what or having scenes that didn't quite make sense as explained by the author. Without giving anything away, the first murder was such a scene. Hours later I'm still scratching my head trying to puzzle his description of it out.
I can't remember when the turning point in the book was, but there came a time when I stopped looking to see how much I had left to read and actually got pulled into the story enough to make it somewhat enjoyable. Although considered 'minor' characters, I think the author did a much better job of making them real to you than he did with the 'main' characters. I enjoyed my time spent with them and eagerly awaited what might be in store for them next. Even the epilogue left me with a "Oh! Hey now, what's going on here?" kind of moment.
As much as I'm curious about the questions left from the epilogue and the search for answers to that mystery, at this point in time I'm undecided as to whether I'll read the second novel in the series.
While the synopsis sounded intriguing and piqued my interest, the story itself was not quite as interesting. Once I had started reading, I knew that if I didn't finish the book in one sitting that I wouldn't want to pick up where I left off.
For the first half of the book, I had a hard time following some of the conversations and/or story progression. Some of it was because of the author, whether due to his writing style or lack of details, I'm unsure. The rest was because I wasn't sucked into the story and not as focused in my reading. Spent a great deal of time having to go back and reread passages to figure out who was saying what or having scenes that didn't quite make sense as explained by the author. Without giving anything away, the first murder was such a scene. Hours later I'm still scratching my head trying to puzzle his description of it out.
I can't remember when the turning point in the book was, but there came a time when I stopped looking to see how much I had left to read and actually got pulled into the story enough to make it somewhat enjoyable. Although considered 'minor' characters, I think the author did a much better job of making them real to you than he did with the 'main' characters. I enjoyed my time spent with them and eagerly awaited what might be in store for them next. Even the epilogue left me with a "Oh! Hey now, what's going on here?" kind of moment.
As much as I'm curious about the questions left from the epilogue and the search for answers to that mystery, at this point in time I'm undecided as to whether I'll read the second novel in the series.
February 19, 2017
A mystery set in Boston in the 1800's
February 24, 2015
As soon as I read the blurb for this book I knew I had to read it! I am so glad I did.
Superbly dark, mysterious and suspenseful. I was glued to this book for a full weekend. It is cleverly written and is set up nicely for a whole series.
With kidnappings, murders, beatings etc the author is certainly not afraid to let terrible things happen to his characters but at the same time it allows for some nasty, karma enduced come-uppance for the villains. The darkness in the novel is balanced out with some comedic elements namely the banter between Silas and Posy.
The myriad layers of mystery surrounding Silas only deepens as the story unfolds. We are only privy to glimpses of his past, as is Silas in the moments he experiences flash backs. Silas is a great character. I love the mystery surrounding him, and with his special ninja style skills, he is a force to be reckoned with.
Posy is another favourite character. She may get herself into some sticky situations and get a knocked about a bit but she is no damsel in distress. She always comes back fighting and is not afraid to put herself in harms way to protect her friends.
It will be interesting to see how Silas and Posy's relationship develops but I hope the author keeps the 'will they/won't they' suspense going. Their little arguments and jealousies make good reading.
I'll certainly be reading 'The Charleston Rose' when it comes out.
Superbly dark, mysterious and suspenseful. I was glued to this book for a full weekend. It is cleverly written and is set up nicely for a whole series.
With kidnappings, murders, beatings etc the author is certainly not afraid to let terrible things happen to his characters but at the same time it allows for some nasty, karma enduced come-uppance for the villains. The darkness in the novel is balanced out with some comedic elements namely the banter between Silas and Posy.
The myriad layers of mystery surrounding Silas only deepens as the story unfolds. We are only privy to glimpses of his past, as is Silas in the moments he experiences flash backs. Silas is a great character. I love the mystery surrounding him, and with his special ninja style skills, he is a force to be reckoned with.
Posy is another favourite character. She may get herself into some sticky situations and get a knocked about a bit but she is no damsel in distress. She always comes back fighting and is not afraid to put herself in harms way to protect her friends.
It will be interesting to see how Silas and Posy's relationship develops but I hope the author keeps the 'will they/won't they' suspense going. Their little arguments and jealousies make good reading.
I'll certainly be reading 'The Charleston Rose' when it comes out.
October 7, 2014
A Silas de San Michel Mystery.
I received this book in exchange for an honest review. I am happy to say I loved it.
The story is set in Boston in 1885. When police methods were very different.
A badly wounded man is found on board a ship that has just arrived from Japan. He has no memory of who he is or how he was injured. Once he healed,, still without his memories, he is offered a job on the police force. His boss is Belloc, he investigates murders. The other investigator is a woman called Posy.
Someone is killing unborn babies, and they don't care if the mother's survive or not. The problem for Belloc , Silas and Posy is the mothers are all from the uppercrust society and they are not allowed to question them. They even have problems getting to see the crime scenes.
Silas is also finding he is very good at the work and has some unusual abilities.
Posy is also an unusual woman for that era. Apart from her job, she wears pants, can shoot a gun and likes to fence.
The characters are great, full of hidden depth and humour.
There are some very viscous murders and a lot of violence.
A marvellous historical murder mystery. I look forward to the next story in what is going to be a very good series.
January 25, 2015
What a book! I don't know where to start. I love the way DelValle brings this dangerous mystery alive with characters we're rooting for up against villains we're really terrified of.
I've read that a reviewer thought our hero's constant use of the window instead of a door was irritating -- but I personally found it entertaining, "Oh yup, Silas' gone out the window again."
I'm not one for too much violence and these were vicious crimes to be sure - but as long as I wasn't reading The Valentine Circle during a meal I could handle it. I discovered that fact while reading at lunch as I got to the second crime scene. Woah! I had to take a break from reading and just enjoy glancing about the crowded cafe. Having downloaded this book onto my iPhone, I was happy I couldn't put it down...because I didn't have to.
At first I expected the writing and dialogue to be stilted late 1880s vernacular, but was happy to find that Reinaldo found a style that worked for today's readers. I wasn't sure about some of the science, but I checked out caesarian sections and learned that they did indeed performed back then.
All in all, I look to be entertained by a book. I look to be surprised and satisfied by a mystery. The Valentine delivered both!
Anna
I've read that a reviewer thought our hero's constant use of the window instead of a door was irritating -- but I personally found it entertaining, "Oh yup, Silas' gone out the window again."
I'm not one for too much violence and these were vicious crimes to be sure - but as long as I wasn't reading The Valentine Circle during a meal I could handle it. I discovered that fact while reading at lunch as I got to the second crime scene. Woah! I had to take a break from reading and just enjoy glancing about the crowded cafe. Having downloaded this book onto my iPhone, I was happy I couldn't put it down...because I didn't have to.
At first I expected the writing and dialogue to be stilted late 1880s vernacular, but was happy to find that Reinaldo found a style that worked for today's readers. I wasn't sure about some of the science, but I checked out caesarian sections and learned that they did indeed performed back then.
All in all, I look to be entertained by a book. I look to be surprised and satisfied by a mystery. The Valentine delivered both!
Anna
March 7, 2015
* I received a free copy of this book in exchange for a fair and honest review. *
This story takes place in Boston just after the Civil War. The beginning of the book leads you to believe it is about kidnappings of boys, but then a man mysteriously is found aboard a cargo ship battered and bruised. The man does not remember who he is or where he is from, but somehow, Inspector Belloc of the Boston police, decide he should work with him to solve the murders and/or assaults of pregnant women. The women are all daughters of the elite "Valentine Society" who appear to have the Boston police department in their pockets. Officer Silas de San Michel discovers he has hidden talents and becomes an integral part of the investigating team along with Posy Chapman. Mysterious men are responsible for the killing of the unborn babies as well as other murders and are identified as coming from "The Factory". This book seems to be a cross between a thriller, crime investigation and a little romance. There are many twists and turns in the story and there is more to come from "The Factory" and Officer Silas de San Michel.
This story takes place in Boston just after the Civil War. The beginning of the book leads you to believe it is about kidnappings of boys, but then a man mysteriously is found aboard a cargo ship battered and bruised. The man does not remember who he is or where he is from, but somehow, Inspector Belloc of the Boston police, decide he should work with him to solve the murders and/or assaults of pregnant women. The women are all daughters of the elite "Valentine Society" who appear to have the Boston police department in their pockets. Officer Silas de San Michel discovers he has hidden talents and becomes an integral part of the investigating team along with Posy Chapman. Mysterious men are responsible for the killing of the unborn babies as well as other murders and are identified as coming from "The Factory". This book seems to be a cross between a thriller, crime investigation and a little romance. There are many twists and turns in the story and there is more to come from "The Factory" and Officer Silas de San Michel.
March 3, 2015
I received a free copy in return for a review.
Overall, this was a well-done mystery. There's actually a couple of mysteries intertwined, so you discover plenty as you go along while also raising new questions. Structure and pacing were well done. The characters were memorable and fully developed. There were a lot of long suspenseful scenes. It is set up for sequels, but it's a complete story on its own, and the setup for more isn't forced. The writing felt professional/experienced most of the time. The villain(s) are really creepy and sadistic, as are their crimes. So this is not for those who only like light mysteries or are extra sensitive or tender-hearted.
To be picky, there are some words and phrases that I don't think were used in that time period. Most editing errors were confined to commas. "Towards" was used instead of "toward" (English vs. American preference) when the rest of the writing followed American usage. "That" was used instead of "who" in most cases.
Overall, this was a well-done mystery. There's actually a couple of mysteries intertwined, so you discover plenty as you go along while also raising new questions. Structure and pacing were well done. The characters were memorable and fully developed. There were a lot of long suspenseful scenes. It is set up for sequels, but it's a complete story on its own, and the setup for more isn't forced. The writing felt professional/experienced most of the time. The villain(s) are really creepy and sadistic, as are their crimes. So this is not for those who only like light mysteries or are extra sensitive or tender-hearted.
To be picky, there are some words and phrases that I don't think were used in that time period. Most editing errors were confined to commas. "Towards" was used instead of "toward" (English vs. American preference) when the rest of the writing followed American usage. "That" was used instead of "who" in most cases.
August 28, 2015
Be My Valentine?
I scarcely know where to begin, actually, which is quite unusual for me in composing a book review. The five star rating was a given on many levels, all of which were rather easy to figure. The fact that I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys this genre goes without saying but I feel this particulate title could easily fall under different headings. I found romance, suspense, drama, humor, psychological thrill, history, mystery, darkness almost mystical, certainly legalistic and detective worthy, with a hint of wolves and vampires. This was a mixed bag of a read not quite like anything I have experienced as a life long avid reader. And then of course, a cliffhanger!! Read the book, it's all there and did I mention, a page turner? Additionally, the character development and relationship building was brilliant!
I scarcely know where to begin, actually, which is quite unusual for me in composing a book review. The five star rating was a given on many levels, all of which were rather easy to figure. The fact that I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys this genre goes without saying but I feel this particulate title could easily fall under different headings. I found romance, suspense, drama, humor, psychological thrill, history, mystery, darkness almost mystical, certainly legalistic and detective worthy, with a hint of wolves and vampires. This was a mixed bag of a read not quite like anything I have experienced as a life long avid reader. And then of course, a cliffhanger!! Read the book, it's all there and did I mention, a page turner? Additionally, the character development and relationship building was brilliant!
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