The most common problem I have with the series is still present here (albeit not as extreme as in previous installments), apart from the occasional “my species doth protest too much” individuals who stray from the norm every person depending on race and Kinden is defined by what they are rather than who they are; every beetle is passive, clumsy and greedy, every wasp has a hair-trigger temper and is misogynistic to boot, every mantis is nuts, every scorpion a brute, every ant is xenophobic, violent, martial and has no personality so to speak of, every fly will steal anything that’s not nailed down, every moth is a creepy luddite, every spider is a total sociopath…actually lets discuss that for a second. They seem to have this “free pass” in the eyes of the rest of the world for being these impossibly clever chess-masters when actually they’re all just sociopathic jerks who habitually try to undermine society for shits and giggles…a culture like theirs should never have developed.
The blatant racism and superiority complex every city-state/Kinden/culture has, is supposed to be portrayed as “wrong” but it’s technically not racism when every culture does indeed adhere to all the negative stereotypes about them. I’m Irish so I’m guessing if I were a character in Tchaikovsky's works I’d be the freckled, red-headed drunken catholic relief character who only existed to get herself into comic situations because of her own stupidity…and I take exception to that…I’m blonde….but I digress, this writing style makes all the various sides just as bad as each other and frankly I can’t bring myself to give a damn about any of them. The only difference between every other culture and the “supreme bad guys” the wasps, as far as I can tell is that the wasps seem to be winning. My tip? Narrow down the number of Kinden you have or stop introducing new ones and give the existing ones some depth. Although at this stage it would take another eight books because of the number of Kinden he’s introduced…
Also for a steampunk technologically-advanced world why are they so damn insular? These are people who have invented guns, trains, bombs, steam-engines, submarines and freaking aeroplanes not to mention they have bloody superpowers which is always handy…and yet it’s only since the goddam war that they seem to ever realize that there are people beyond their own borders. Like, the various races are supposed to parallel real-world cultures and yet we were invading and conquering each other like it was going out of style during a time when the height of modern technology was the goddamn compass. It’s gotten to the point where the stupidity of every collective race is getting on my nerves, they’re all so…dumb…
Stenwold started out as a promising character, a couple of books ago…but now he has become a charactiure of the cliché it looked like he was going to subvert for a while. The man has no dimension to him whatsoever, “enemy of the wasps” is pretty much his defining characteristic, that this guy is considered the smart one in his world is a little worrying. I get that he’s lost so much that his anti-wasp crusade has eroded everything that once was Stenwold Maker but we never got to see the optimistic, energetic and naive youth he once was we are only told he was once like this.
Seda got some interesting emotional depth that I wasn't expecting, we learn that she’s still ruled by her own fear, or rather her fear of fear itself, her quest for power and taking over the world is not so much rooted in pure greed but rather a desperate almost childlike wish to conquer everything so nothing can ever hurt her again. This made her surprisingly sympathetic, ya know…murderous psychopath thing aside…
Once again most of the characters strike me as supremely selfish. Is this just me? I don’t know why but they seem to have little emotional depth or else the author is just bad at creating realistic interactions between characters without it seeming forced. Except Che and Thalric who sadly don’t feature…
The book also introduces a new quartet of characters, a young mixed-bag of college students that seem to parallel the original four, although they are infinitely more likable. what can I say, I loved them. I guess I’m a sucker for the underdogs; the original four are to these lot what the cool kids are to the guys playing dungeons and dragons at the lunch-table in the dark corner at the back of the cafeteria.Their friendships seem more genuine, thrust together because they are all on the peripherals of the insular and superior-minded collegium society, as opposed to being an ensemble of clichés including the suave sexy warrior, the handsome mysterious foreigner, the awkward dork who’s not actually that awkward and a genius who is constantly overlooked, sorry but their little group seemed so damn…artificial …they’re also older, or at least not explicitly revealed to be goddamned teenagers…Looks like Tchaikovsky is picking up a few tricks after all…I hope they feature prominently in the next books, maybe at the expense of Lazlo? Sorry, the guy just annoys me...
Also the apt vs. inapt thing, the “one group can do magic one can’t” thing is cool but the complete lack of understanding it’s just…too unbelievable, (and yeah that’s saying a lot about a story set in a steampunk world inhabited by super-powered insect-human hybrids)…it’d be fine if the magicians were hiding behind a masquerade, like say a werewolf in an urban fantasy book, but they go around openly calling themselves magicians and magic clearly exists in this world…if these Kinden really are human they should be able to understand both at least nominally, I have a colleague who works in the lab with me who believes in psychics and her head hasn’t imploded at the sheer paradoxical nature of it yet, coz you know humans are a bundle of contradictions we can believe in all sorts of stupid asynchronous crap. Similarly, an inapt-Kinden should be able to open a bloody door, my dog can open doors, hell, my cat can open doors…find me a moth big enough and I bet I could train it to open doors…but then again I’ve already mentioned how dumb I find most of the characters…
But all those irritating little details which I have come to accept are part of this series aside, they are fun and easy to read, just don’t think about it too hard. The quasi deaus ex machina at the end was a bit too contrived for my liking however…