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Beg for It
Coming to Crown Well was supposed to be the first step at my new start in life.
In order to survive, I hid my designation and had planned to ride under the radar until I graduated and was free to disappear with a new identity.
That was until I caught their attention.
Alphas Brooks, River and their beta, Henley.
They’re unhinged, cruel and have it out for me.
They're the sons of my father's enemies. They want blood for the tragedies he caused them.
Only, I'm nothing like my father. I want nothing to do with him or his MC. It's the reason why I'm here.
But they don't know that. They don't know a lot of things.
Like the fact I'm a Omega. Their omega.
They can't find out, if they do I don't think I'll be able to survive.
Yet at every turn, there they are.
They're not giving up. They want me in all the wrong ways.
I hate that I want them. That I crave them. If there ever was a red flag, it would be then.
Then why do I find myself giving into their possessive depravity.
They want me to beg for it, and by the time they're done with me, I don't think I'll be able to stop myself.
In order to survive, I hid my designation and had planned to ride under the radar until I graduated and was free to disappear with a new identity.
That was until I caught their attention.
Alphas Brooks, River and their beta, Henley.
They’re unhinged, cruel and have it out for me.
They're the sons of my father's enemies. They want blood for the tragedies he caused them.
Only, I'm nothing like my father. I want nothing to do with him or his MC. It's the reason why I'm here.
But they don't know that. They don't know a lot of things.
Like the fact I'm a Omega. Their omega.
They can't find out, if they do I don't think I'll be able to survive.
Yet at every turn, there they are.
They're not giving up. They want me in all the wrong ways.
I hate that I want them. That I crave them. If there ever was a red flag, it would be then.
Then why do I find myself giving into their possessive depravity.
They want me to beg for it, and by the time they're done with me, I don't think I'll be able to stop myself.
410 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 28, 2025
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June 28, 2025
2⭐️
This is an MMMM omegaverse romance (alpha, alpha, beta, omega) with hidden identities, feral behaviour, a looooot of sm*t, and some darker themes.
I do genuinely think that for a very specific kind of person, this would be a fun read. I will admit there were times when I was entertained. However, this book definitely wasn’t for me.
This book didn’t vibe for me for two reasons:
Firstly, the characters are incredibly one-note, and have absolutely no depth to them. Honestly, the two alphas had exactly the same personality, to the point where the book would have been exactly the same if one of them simply wasn’t there. In fact, River, Brooks and Lee all could have just been one guy 😂 And Camden’s whole personality seems to revolve around crying and being horny. Honestly they don’t even know each other as people, they just act aggressive and have s*x 🤷♀️
Secondly, there were so many inconsistencies that the book just had me questioning what I was reading. Like, you’re telling me some random man could tell that Camden was an omega in 5 seconds, but his literal mates couldn’t tell even when they were having s*x??? Make it make sense 😂
Anyways, this one wasn’t for me. But if you like raunchy omegaverse sm*t and are just here for a good time, you’ll probably enjoy it.
This is an MMMM omegaverse romance (alpha, alpha, beta, omega) with hidden identities, feral behaviour, a looooot of sm*t, and some darker themes.
I do genuinely think that for a very specific kind of person, this would be a fun read. I will admit there were times when I was entertained. However, this book definitely wasn’t for me.
This book didn’t vibe for me for two reasons:
Firstly, the characters are incredibly one-note, and have absolutely no depth to them. Honestly, the two alphas had exactly the same personality, to the point where the book would have been exactly the same if one of them simply wasn’t there. In fact, River, Brooks and Lee all could have just been one guy 😂 And Camden’s whole personality seems to revolve around crying and being horny. Honestly they don’t even know each other as people, they just act aggressive and have s*x 🤷♀️
Secondly, there were so many inconsistencies that the book just had me questioning what I was reading. Like, you’re telling me some random man could tell that Camden was an omega in 5 seconds, but his literal mates couldn’t tell even when they were having s*x??? Make it make sense 😂
Anyways, this one wasn’t for me. But if you like raunchy omegaverse sm*t and are just here for a good time, you’ll probably enjoy it.
October 10, 2025
Ok first of all, I may be very jaded and have forgotten what dark romance is, but this wasn't dark at all, and the reason I read it - an on-page suicide attempt - was pretty much glossed over, and MC was fine after.
Second, this was just not a well-written book, at all. Make these things make sense:
1. The MCs have no discernible personalities. Omega wants to help people; this is mentioned once and then dropped. Beta is a hardcore obsessive stalker that puts cameras everywhere. The two alphas have effectively the same personality. Why have personality when you could be having sex?
2. The whole school is terrified of these guys and the way it was written was extremely cringe rather than actually scary.
3. They're in a motorcycle club, I think? I don't think anyone mentions any rides, ever. lol.
4. Omega moves away from his abusive father to reinvent himself. He moves 30 minutes away and is shocked pikachu that he's been followed. Jfc, the US is enormous. Move further away!
5. The football game lasts about two hours. LMAO yeah...
6. "We'll kill anyone that sees you naked. Also, let's have public sex."
7. They're in a motorcycle club, which is their pack? Or just these three guys are a pack? What is the pack?? It's never really explained at all.
8. "You've been beaten within an inch of your life. Time to go to the hospital." Next scene: "Let's get cleaned up in the bath." So like, did that hospital trip happen or nah? Because I'm pretty worried about MC's obvious head injuries.
Second, this was just not a well-written book, at all. Make these things make sense:
1. The MCs have no discernible personalities. Omega wants to help people; this is mentioned once and then dropped. Beta is a hardcore obsessive stalker that puts cameras everywhere. The two alphas have effectively the same personality. Why have personality when you could be having sex?
2. The whole school is terrified of these guys and the way it was written was extremely cringe rather than actually scary.
3. They're in a motorcycle club, I think? I don't think anyone mentions any rides, ever. lol.
4. Omega moves away from his abusive father to reinvent himself. He moves 30 minutes away and is shocked pikachu that he's been followed. Jfc, the US is enormous. Move further away!
5. The football game lasts about two hours. LMAO yeah...
6. "We'll kill anyone that sees you naked. Also, let's have public sex."
7. They're in a motorcycle club, which is their pack? Or just these three guys are a pack? What is the pack?? It's never really explained at all.
8. "You've been beaten within an inch of your life. Time to go to the hospital." Next scene: "Let's get cleaned up in the bath." So like, did that hospital trip happen or nah? Because I'm pretty worried about MC's obvious head injuries.
May 18, 2025
This book ruined me in the best possible way.
It's dark. It's dirty. It's dangerously addictive.
He came to Crown Well for a second chance—a place to disappear, to survive by hiding his designation and keeping his head down until freedom was within reach. But freedom was never in the cards. Not when Brooks, River, and their calculating beta, Henley, set their sights on him.
Predators. Cruel. Obsessed.
They’re the sons of his father’s enemies, and they want retribution—blood for blood. But they don’t know the truth: he’s not his father. He wants nothing to do with the man or the MC world he came from. He's here to forget.
What they also don’t know?
He's an Omega. Their Omega.
And if they find out… he’s not sure he’ll survive it.
Yet every time he runs, they’re already there. Watching. Hunting. Waiting. What begins as punishment soon turns into something far more terrifying: desire.
This is not a love story. It’s a war of need. It’s shameful arousal tangled with hatred and heat. He wants to hate them, and gods know he tries—but his body betrays him. He craves them in all the wrong ways.
And when they demand he beg, demand he break—he does. And it feels so good it hurts.
This story is everything dark romance should be: raw, unapologetic, and dripping with primal intensity. If you’re brave enough to walk the line between torment and ecstasy, you need this book. But be warned: once you enter Crown Well, you won’t want to leave. You’ll ache for them—just like he does.
It's dark. It's dirty. It's dangerously addictive.
He came to Crown Well for a second chance—a place to disappear, to survive by hiding his designation and keeping his head down until freedom was within reach. But freedom was never in the cards. Not when Brooks, River, and their calculating beta, Henley, set their sights on him.
Predators. Cruel. Obsessed.
They’re the sons of his father’s enemies, and they want retribution—blood for blood. But they don’t know the truth: he’s not his father. He wants nothing to do with the man or the MC world he came from. He's here to forget.
What they also don’t know?
He's an Omega. Their Omega.
And if they find out… he’s not sure he’ll survive it.
Yet every time he runs, they’re already there. Watching. Hunting. Waiting. What begins as punishment soon turns into something far more terrifying: desire.
This is not a love story. It’s a war of need. It’s shameful arousal tangled with hatred and heat. He wants to hate them, and gods know he tries—but his body betrays him. He craves them in all the wrong ways.
And when they demand he beg, demand he break—he does. And it feels so good it hurts.
This story is everything dark romance should be: raw, unapologetic, and dripping with primal intensity. If you’re brave enough to walk the line between torment and ecstasy, you need this book. But be warned: once you enter Crown Well, you won’t want to leave. You’ll ache for them—just like he does.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 21, 2025
WTF WTF WTF DID I JUST READ 🙏🙏🙏🙏
HOW DOES THIS EXIST LIKE DOES THE AUTHOR JUST SIT THERE WITH A STRAIGHT FACE TYPING AWAY AT A MACBOOK WHILE SIPPING A FRAPPUCINO
HOW IS THERE AN EDITOR THAT GIVES ACTUAL FEEDBACK TO THIS
ITS NOT ENOUGH TO CLAW MY EYES OUT I NEED SOMEONE TO CATAPULT ME INTO THE SUN AND I WILL CRY REAL TEARS OF GRATITUDE WHILE I WITHER AND DIE
THIS FEELS LIKE IM SEEING THE WORLD FOR THE FIRST TIME AND EVERYTHING I ONCE KNEW AND LOVED IS A LIE
guys america is a pretty polarized nation but i think i know one very bipartisan issue that would unite the people and that is… banning omegaverse
literally sentence free speech to death i don’t even care anymore as long as this is wiped off the face of the planet
don’t 🛑 touch 🙅♀️ my 🤬 omega 🥺👉👈
when im telling you there were actual tears in my eyes while reading this and no they were not tears of joy i was on the verge of weeping of abject horror and disillusionment with humanity
when someone asks me why i don’t believe in god i will legitimately point them to this book and say no god would have allowed this to happen
this is actually sin final boss (im waiting for dante to call me back to tell me where i belong)
to the person who suggested i read this book: I WILL ACTUALLY NEVER FORGIVE YOU BRO IM ACTUALLY GOING TO BEAT YOU UP WITH MY BARE FISTS UNTIL ONE OF US DIES. WDYM THIS IS TAME AND YOUVE READ WORSE. WHEN I GET LOCKED UP IN THE SANATORIUM AND THERES A COURT CASE FOR WHY A NORMAL GIRL HAD A FULL ON PSYCHOTIC BREAK I HOPE YOU GET CONVICTED AND HAVE TO PAY MY MEDICAL BILLS FOR MY ANTIPSYCHOTICS AND SUPPORT GROUP AND THEN AFTER THAT I HOPE THEY PUT YOU IN THE MOST HIGH SECURITY PRISON ON THE PLANET AND YOU CAN NEVER RUIN ANYONES LIFE AGAIN
i could have been reading american literary classic lonesome dove but no!!!! why would i be doing that when i could be reading 300 pages of the most vile omegaverse smut known to mankind? i actually could not even read it i just had to keep scrolling because it was so awful and id scroll and scroll and look at the text and was like “oh nvm they’re still boinking!” and then keep skimming it because why was there literally no plot
for anyone curious the “plot” (please make sure you know that those are the biggest quotation marks you’ve ever seen) is that there’s an uwu femboy omega named camden who’s dad is like a gang boss or smth and his dad is homophobic and hates male omegas so camden takes like hormone blockers or smth to pretend to be a beta. so he starts as a freshman at some college and there’s like this alpha trio who immediately become obsessed with him because he’s so uwu femboy.
ok and henley (one of the trio ppl) literally has a secret security room with cctv that he stalks everyone from and a bulletin board with his victims faces and that’s completely glossed over because obviously it’s soooo attractive to be a serial creep
the rest of the book is literally just them all saying how horny they are scent matches knots heat blah blah blah and it eventually progresses to a point where it’s all just smut 😭
i thought omegaverse was just brainrot like skibidi toilet but fanfiction version and but there’s full published novels out there that some publishing house okayed and people proofread and thought this was an okay piece of media to put out into the world
an actual line from this book: “‘is that…an eight pack?’”
now don’t ask me why camden has an eight pack because he’s never once shown to be athletic but okay we’ll go with that
i genuinely can’t put any other quotes on here because they’re so graphic and i am deleting that pdf off my phone forever
there was this one part where camden overdoses on his omega blocker pills and one of the creepy alpha guys was like… you can’t kill yourself unless i say so….. your life is mine little omega (or beta or whatever tf he thought he was)
ah yes because of course nobody would ever commit suicide if they just had an alpha daddy (i cannot believe i just wrote that sentence)
i took a practice sat after reading this and reading those passages was like feeling the sun on my face after being an exiled prisoner locked underground for millennia
honestly i should have just quit after being exposed to one chapter but it felt like i needed to show the person who suggested this stupid book (🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬) that i was strong enough to read this and not a coward but unfortunately even though i finished it, it was a pyrrhic victory
with every page i could feel my growing shame and disappointment with myself… rip to my digital footprint and my carefully curated selection of (mostly) intellectual books
i need to go do that thing rin does in poppy war where she sits in a cave and meditates for weeks without moving or i need to get baptized
virginia woolf would sniff in disgust at the sight of me and so would probably every author i’ve ever looked up to
if i were camden’s dad i’d lowkey be homophobic too because wtf you pathetic loser actually man up and stop being such an adult toddler
oh there was this one part where the alpha dudes killed camdens dad and camden was like “wow that made me so aroused 🥰” my guy could you not take this one opportunity in 300 pages to show some emotional nuance
how am i even going to rate other books if the bar is so low— this makes that awful dead poets society book look like the rosy-cheeked cherubs descending from the celestial skies or something
this book falls off the book rating scale it’s not even in the same realm as other stuff
do you think toni morrison knew what omegaverse was
i’d never really even read omegaverse before i just knew the concept and i didn’t know it could be this bad
i should have seen the title and cover and just decided to be a flat earther so i could vault straight off the side and succumb to the void without ever laying eyes on this
i was actually a soldier fighting a war while reading this can someone make veterans day but for people who survived reading a book called “beg for it”
HOW DOES THIS EXIST LIKE DOES THE AUTHOR JUST SIT THERE WITH A STRAIGHT FACE TYPING AWAY AT A MACBOOK WHILE SIPPING A FRAPPUCINO
HOW IS THERE AN EDITOR THAT GIVES ACTUAL FEEDBACK TO THIS
ITS NOT ENOUGH TO CLAW MY EYES OUT I NEED SOMEONE TO CATAPULT ME INTO THE SUN AND I WILL CRY REAL TEARS OF GRATITUDE WHILE I WITHER AND DIE
THIS FEELS LIKE IM SEEING THE WORLD FOR THE FIRST TIME AND EVERYTHING I ONCE KNEW AND LOVED IS A LIE
guys america is a pretty polarized nation but i think i know one very bipartisan issue that would unite the people and that is… banning omegaverse
literally sentence free speech to death i don’t even care anymore as long as this is wiped off the face of the planet
don’t 🛑 touch 🙅♀️ my 🤬 omega 🥺👉👈
when im telling you there were actual tears in my eyes while reading this and no they were not tears of joy i was on the verge of weeping of abject horror and disillusionment with humanity
when someone asks me why i don’t believe in god i will legitimately point them to this book and say no god would have allowed this to happen
this is actually sin final boss (im waiting for dante to call me back to tell me where i belong)
to the person who suggested i read this book: I WILL ACTUALLY NEVER FORGIVE YOU BRO IM ACTUALLY GOING TO BEAT YOU UP WITH MY BARE FISTS UNTIL ONE OF US DIES. WDYM THIS IS TAME AND YOUVE READ WORSE. WHEN I GET LOCKED UP IN THE SANATORIUM AND THERES A COURT CASE FOR WHY A NORMAL GIRL HAD A FULL ON PSYCHOTIC BREAK I HOPE YOU GET CONVICTED AND HAVE TO PAY MY MEDICAL BILLS FOR MY ANTIPSYCHOTICS AND SUPPORT GROUP AND THEN AFTER THAT I HOPE THEY PUT YOU IN THE MOST HIGH SECURITY PRISON ON THE PLANET AND YOU CAN NEVER RUIN ANYONES LIFE AGAIN
i could have been reading american literary classic lonesome dove but no!!!! why would i be doing that when i could be reading 300 pages of the most vile omegaverse smut known to mankind? i actually could not even read it i just had to keep scrolling because it was so awful and id scroll and scroll and look at the text and was like “oh nvm they’re still boinking!” and then keep skimming it because why was there literally no plot
for anyone curious the “plot” (please make sure you know that those are the biggest quotation marks you’ve ever seen) is that there’s an uwu femboy omega named camden who’s dad is like a gang boss or smth and his dad is homophobic and hates male omegas so camden takes like hormone blockers or smth to pretend to be a beta. so he starts as a freshman at some college and there’s like this alpha trio who immediately become obsessed with him because he’s so uwu femboy.
ok and henley (one of the trio ppl) literally has a secret security room with cctv that he stalks everyone from and a bulletin board with his victims faces and that’s completely glossed over because obviously it’s soooo attractive to be a serial creep
the rest of the book is literally just them all saying how horny they are scent matches knots heat blah blah blah and it eventually progresses to a point where it’s all just smut 😭
i thought omegaverse was just brainrot like skibidi toilet but fanfiction version and but there’s full published novels out there that some publishing house okayed and people proofread and thought this was an okay piece of media to put out into the world
an actual line from this book: “‘is that…an eight pack?’”
now don’t ask me why camden has an eight pack because he’s never once shown to be athletic but okay we’ll go with that
i genuinely can’t put any other quotes on here because they’re so graphic and i am deleting that pdf off my phone forever
there was this one part where camden overdoses on his omega blocker pills and one of the creepy alpha guys was like… you can’t kill yourself unless i say so….. your life is mine little omega (or beta or whatever tf he thought he was)
ah yes because of course nobody would ever commit suicide if they just had an alpha daddy (i cannot believe i just wrote that sentence)
i took a practice sat after reading this and reading those passages was like feeling the sun on my face after being an exiled prisoner locked underground for millennia
honestly i should have just quit after being exposed to one chapter but it felt like i needed to show the person who suggested this stupid book (🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬) that i was strong enough to read this and not a coward but unfortunately even though i finished it, it was a pyrrhic victory
with every page i could feel my growing shame and disappointment with myself… rip to my digital footprint and my carefully curated selection of (mostly) intellectual books
i need to go do that thing rin does in poppy war where she sits in a cave and meditates for weeks without moving or i need to get baptized
virginia woolf would sniff in disgust at the sight of me and so would probably every author i’ve ever looked up to
if i were camden’s dad i’d lowkey be homophobic too because wtf you pathetic loser actually man up and stop being such an adult toddler
oh there was this one part where the alpha dudes killed camdens dad and camden was like “wow that made me so aroused 🥰” my guy could you not take this one opportunity in 300 pages to show some emotional nuance
how am i even going to rate other books if the bar is so low— this makes that awful dead poets society book look like the rosy-cheeked cherubs descending from the celestial skies or something
this book falls off the book rating scale it’s not even in the same realm as other stuff
do you think toni morrison knew what omegaverse was
i’d never really even read omegaverse before i just knew the concept and i didn’t know it could be this bad
i should have seen the title and cover and just decided to be a flat earther so i could vault straight off the side and succumb to the void without ever laying eyes on this
i was actually a soldier fighting a war while reading this can someone make veterans day but for people who survived reading a book called “beg for it”
May 16, 2025
Beg For It, Book 1 of the new series Sinfulverse, by Alisha Williams @alishawilliamsauthor & Jenn Bullard @author_jenn_bullard. I love both authors separately, but together? Yes, please! 🥵😍 Please read the trigger warnings!
What a fabulous book about Camden, Brooks, River & Lee (Henley)! Tropes: Contemporary, Dark, Omegaverse, All Male Harem, 2 Alphas, Beta, Secret Omega, Medium Grey Content, Stalking The Omega, Found Family, Abusive Father, HEA & I can't wait for the next book in the series!
What a fabulous book about Camden, Brooks, River & Lee (Henley)! Tropes: Contemporary, Dark, Omegaverse, All Male Harem, 2 Alphas, Beta, Secret Omega, Medium Grey Content, Stalking The Omega, Found Family, Abusive Father, HEA & I can't wait for the next book in the series!
May 28, 2025
Finally found an all male omegaverse and let me say it’s definitely the most amazing book. I love the pack River, Brooks, & Henley and how much they love Camden. My heart broke for Camden and the way his life has been but I’m glad he found a pack that loves him. Such a great book.
January 5, 2026
Listen this was SO GOOD lmfao. Don't let the cover fool you. This was omegaverse at its finest.
Reread January 2026: Just as fun as it was the first time. I reread this so I could read Teach Me as soon as it comes out since its in the same world.
Reread January 2026: Just as fun as it was the first time. I reread this so I could read Teach Me as soon as it comes out since its in the same world.
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August 17, 2025i can't even give it stars... what did i just read 😭😭😭 (and why was it 400 pages)
July 23, 2025
★★★¾ (3.75 stars)
This book starts at full speed and never lets up. It was my first MMMM read, and wow—it was a lot… but in the best way. The alpha/beta/omega dynamic was something I don’t normally dive into, but I genuinely enjoyed how it played out here.
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Brooks, River, and Henley – Okay, not gonna lie—these three started out as total jerks. I didn’t like how they immediately jumped to conclusions and attacked Camden based on pure assumptions. But as the story progressed, I found myself warming up to them. They’re intense, protective, and a little unhinged, but in a way that worked. I liked seeing them show remorse and try to do right by Camden—it was unexpected and refreshing.
"You are ours. No one is going to fuck with you. No one is going to hurt you. You are not alone. You are wanted. We want you. We fucking need you. Do you understand me?"
"Yes." His voice cracks. Fuck, he's crying.
Camden – I liked Camden from the start. He’s on this journey of self-discovery, trying to escape his manipulative, power-hungry father’s influence. Life keeps hitting him with blow after blow, and I genuinely felt for him—he just couldn’t catch a break. But the way he finally found comfort, safety, and love in his pack made it all worth it. Watching him let his guard down and be himself was one of the highlights for me.
‘I'm not sure where our lives will take us,
what will come tomorrow.
But as long as I have these three men with
me, I know l'll be okay.
They're my heart and soul.
My forever. My pack. Mine.’
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Random Thoughts:
• The boys… were kind of dumb at times . There’s no way it should’ve taken them that long to figure out Camden was an omega.
• I really wanted more depth when it came to Camden’s fear of his father. He arrives at college and suddenly that looming threat kind of disappears? Just wish there was more background.
• The ending felt underwhelming. With all the intensity in the last few chapters, there was no payoff—no comedown, no epilogue, just… done.
• I also wish we’d seen more about the moms who were killed. That storyline had so much potential but never fully landed.
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That said, none of these gripes ruined the book for me—they just chipped away at a potential 4+ star rating. I still really liked seeing Camden fall into step with the pack once everything was out in the open. And them building him a nest?? Literal serotonin. The book was dark, twisty, high-angst, and despite some holes, the plot kept me turning the pages.
"They're just upset you were hurt," Lee says. "Murder isn't something they typically commit unless they care."
Just your lovable psychos, at your service.
Definitely a wild ride and I’m so ready for the next books (that comes out next year by the way 🤨)
This book starts at full speed and never lets up. It was my first MMMM read, and wow—it was a lot… but in the best way. The alpha/beta/omega dynamic was something I don’t normally dive into, but I genuinely enjoyed how it played out here.
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Brooks, River, and Henley – Okay, not gonna lie—these three started out as total jerks. I didn’t like how they immediately jumped to conclusions and attacked Camden based on pure assumptions. But as the story progressed, I found myself warming up to them. They’re intense, protective, and a little unhinged, but in a way that worked. I liked seeing them show remorse and try to do right by Camden—it was unexpected and refreshing.
"You are ours. No one is going to fuck with you. No one is going to hurt you. You are not alone. You are wanted. We want you. We fucking need you. Do you understand me?"
"Yes." His voice cracks. Fuck, he's crying.
Camden – I liked Camden from the start. He’s on this journey of self-discovery, trying to escape his manipulative, power-hungry father’s influence. Life keeps hitting him with blow after blow, and I genuinely felt for him—he just couldn’t catch a break. But the way he finally found comfort, safety, and love in his pack made it all worth it. Watching him let his guard down and be himself was one of the highlights for me.
‘I'm not sure where our lives will take us,
what will come tomorrow.
But as long as I have these three men with
me, I know l'll be okay.
They're my heart and soul.
My forever. My pack. Mine.’
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Random Thoughts:
• The boys… were kind of dumb at times . There’s no way it should’ve taken them that long to figure out Camden was an omega.
• I really wanted more depth when it came to Camden’s fear of his father. He arrives at college and suddenly that looming threat kind of disappears? Just wish there was more background.
• The ending felt underwhelming. With all the intensity in the last few chapters, there was no payoff—no comedown, no epilogue, just… done.
• I also wish we’d seen more about the moms who were killed. That storyline had so much potential but never fully landed.
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That said, none of these gripes ruined the book for me—they just chipped away at a potential 4+ star rating. I still really liked seeing Camden fall into step with the pack once everything was out in the open. And them building him a nest?? Literal serotonin. The book was dark, twisty, high-angst, and despite some holes, the plot kept me turning the pages.
"They're just upset you were hurt," Lee says. "Murder isn't something they typically commit unless they care."
Just your lovable psychos, at your service.
Definitely a wild ride and I’m so ready for the next books (that comes out next year by the way 🤨)
July 7, 2025
Great bully romance with omegaverse and fated mates. I loved Camden being cared for by the pack and the 'touch him and die' trope. I can't believe the next book isn't out for so long! I need it now please...
June 6, 2025
June 2025
Kindle edition
Toss up between 3 and 4 stars. An easy read, mmmm and a strong build on Jamie/Kennedy. Two alphas, a beta in control and an omega hiding as a beta. They made a cuteish pack with River and Brooks deferring to Lee and doting on Cam. Bit of bullying/hate but wrapped up before the half way mark. The shopping scene was sweet. Lee's reaction to the scent match was a bit wtf. I'm glad Jamie stepped in. Up until the kidnapping things devolved into sex, taking a brief stop with the homophobic shitty father and continuing on after. HEA. Looking forward to the next one.
Kindle edition
Toss up between 3 and 4 stars. An easy read, mmmm and a strong build on Jamie/Kennedy. Two alphas, a beta in control and an omega hiding as a beta. They made a cuteish pack with River and Brooks deferring to Lee and doting on Cam. Bit of bullying/hate but wrapped up before the half way mark. The shopping scene was sweet. Lee's reaction to the scent match was a bit wtf. I'm glad Jamie stepped in. Up until the kidnapping things devolved into sex, taking a brief stop with the homophobic shitty father and continuing on after. HEA. Looking forward to the next one.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 29, 2025
“Are you crying right now?” he asks, squeezing his hands harder around my neck and cock. “It’s okay. You don’t have to be ashamed. We all like what we like. And you just so happen to like being a whore. Do you wanna be my toy, Camden? Do you want me to use you whenever I please? I’d bet you’d like that...”A Dark MMMM Omegaverse romance! It's got a college setting (MC too?!), sweet & psychos, Bullying, Enemies to Lovers, Mental illness/trauma rep, “secrets”, scent-matches, kinky & smutty hotness 🥵, feels... Hope, hate, curiosity, care, jealousy, rage, love... & a Well needed revenge 😈.
I had been soooo excited for this story! This hooked me in & I devoured it within 12hrs. I loved our MCs & the besties. I'd take more scenes of them being cute 🥺.
Camden is a gay, male omega. 2 thinks his mob-boss of a father hates. C finally gets the chance to leave his shadow by going to college, but had he exchanged 1 monster for 3? C's traumatized, cautious, shy, very sweet. C hides his true self 🥺.
The pack who got enamored by their dads' enemy's son... Henley is a beta, protective, easily obsessed, patient & a planner. The alphas: River is impatient & wild. Brooks is a football player, charismatic A-hole with anger issues. They're all psychos with dark desires 😅.
It started with Bullying, hiding & secrets... The tension gets exciting, depraved & sooo hot! I love that they're all together. It's like a cats-mouse game. & OMFG, the hurt, angst, feels — yes! Omg... It ends with love & revenge 😈. I was so happy to see torturing bad guy(s) on page (it'd been too long for me 🤣).
I loved Prof Kennedy & Jamie! Besties came in clutch 🥰 (not on times they mysteriously disappeared tho 🤨). C & H got most character development. The Alphas did feel quite same in few scenes 😬🤔. C was so scared of em, I think a early flashback will've helped solidify the "why" of his reactions. Nevertheless, I still hated his dad 😤 & C broke my heart 😭.
The climax made me realize their dads are MC bosses 🤣 (I thought it was like mafia lol). These 4, man they can be such idiots sometimes! Ugh 😅😤. When they all get together, they're so cute 🥰 tho. The mild-kinks are hella hot! Heat 🥵 & chase 😍.
I think Cam gotta go to therapy. Pack did help, but he's grown dependent. I know, I won't irl but it's fiction 😅. Any typos/inconsistencies said to be corrected in live-version. We sadly didn't get epilogue but we'll see more of our cuties so that's cool 😊. I'm excited for more in this series!
Story Ratings:
POV: 1st person, Multiple POVs
1) Enjoyed? —> Yeah, hooked! 5/5
2) The Characters: 4.75/5
3) Top feels: 😁🤨☺️😅🥺😤😥😍😳😈🥵😬😩😡😗😭🥰🙄👏
4) Steamy scenes: 5/5
5) Levels: Cute+Swoon: 4/5
Angst: 3.75/5
Dark: 3.5/5
6) Creativity + world: 4.5/5
7) Plot arc: (College, Bully, Scent match, MC) 4.5/5
8) Writing style + pace: 4.5/5
August 15, 2025
What a wild ride! I loved every sweet and depraved second of this book.
Camden is a male omega hiding that fact from the world. He just wants to attend college to get an education that will hopefully get him out from under the thumb of his waste-of-space father. Unfortunately for him he gets put on the radar of the three guys that rule the school. On day one of all days, because of course it was.
Much bullying occurs and it is delicious. I say this because once some truths are revealed, it comes back to bite our beloved psychos in the derrière. I love a good groveling arc, and this sets that up beautifully.
While there are absolutely dark elements, I’m not sure I would consider this to be a particularly dark book, I do give it a decently high rating on the dark scale due to the nature of those dark elements. With over 500 pages, the dark parts are offset by sweet, funny, obsessively psycho stalking and other things that had me flipping pages like a mad woman to see what was in store for our lovely quartet. So I definitely recommend giving it a read if you like unhinged alphas/beta, sweet but hiding in plain sight omegas, and the gamut of feels.
Dark Scale rating: 6.5 for violence, bullying, attempted self unaliving, attempted SA, stalking, kidnapping, abuse, graphic torture (well deserved mind you), and mental health issues. There may be others, but these are the ones that come to mind.
Camden is a male omega hiding that fact from the world. He just wants to attend college to get an education that will hopefully get him out from under the thumb of his waste-of-space father. Unfortunately for him he gets put on the radar of the three guys that rule the school. On day one of all days, because of course it was.
Much bullying occurs and it is delicious. I say this because once some truths are revealed, it comes back to bite our beloved psychos in the derrière. I love a good groveling arc, and this sets that up beautifully.
While there are absolutely dark elements, I’m not sure I would consider this to be a particularly dark book, I do give it a decently high rating on the dark scale due to the nature of those dark elements. With over 500 pages, the dark parts are offset by sweet, funny, obsessively psycho stalking and other things that had me flipping pages like a mad woman to see what was in store for our lovely quartet. So I definitely recommend giving it a read if you like unhinged alphas/beta, sweet but hiding in plain sight omegas, and the gamut of feels.
Dark Scale rating: 6.5 for violence, bullying, attempted self unaliving, attempted SA, stalking, kidnapping, abuse, graphic torture (well deserved mind you), and mental health issues. There may be others, but these are the ones that come to mind.
May 29, 2025
This book is dark and unhinged and I absolutely loved it. These two authors together created the most amazing, raw, wild, and unhinged characters. We start out with bully romance vibes and…well let’s just say there is so much more to these characters than you could ever expect.
I was expecting emotional moments and big feelings (and yes, there are some very emotional scenes) but there are also some very funny and sweet scenes too. There are these great really silly moments that had me smiling. This book is one giant amazing emotional roller coaster 🎢
Oh sweet Cam, he has had to hide his omega designation. When he realizes he is scent matched to River, Brooks, and their beta, Henley it is NOT smooth sailing. They are cruel and dangerous and have a connection to his father.
But maybe…just maybe this the pack Cam needs…
Also, there’s a flame thrower…such a satisfying flame thrower 😉
✨What To Expect:
😈Dark Omegaverse
🪢 MMMM
⁉️Scent Matches
❤️🔥OTT Possessive Alphas
🎭Hidden Omega
🖤Touch Him & 💀
😵💫Miscommunication
💖Mental Health Rep
🧲Forced Proximity
🔥There’s A Flame Thrower
I was expecting emotional moments and big feelings (and yes, there are some very emotional scenes) but there are also some very funny and sweet scenes too. There are these great really silly moments that had me smiling. This book is one giant amazing emotional roller coaster 🎢
Oh sweet Cam, he has had to hide his omega designation. When he realizes he is scent matched to River, Brooks, and their beta, Henley it is NOT smooth sailing. They are cruel and dangerous and have a connection to his father.
But maybe…just maybe this the pack Cam needs…
Also, there’s a flame thrower…such a satisfying flame thrower 😉
✨What To Expect:
😈Dark Omegaverse
🪢 MMMM
⁉️Scent Matches
❤️🔥OTT Possessive Alphas
🎭Hidden Omega
🖤Touch Him & 💀
😵💫Miscommunication
💖Mental Health Rep
🧲Forced Proximity
🔥There’s A Flame Thrower
May 29, 2025
Beg For It - Alisha Williams & Jenn Bullard
5⭐️10/10 Must read of 2025
* MMMM
* Dark omegaverse
* Omega pretending to be a beta
* Miscommunication
* Possessive MCs
* Crazy and obsessed beta
* Enemies to lovers
This is hands down one of the best books of 2025, once I started I couldn’t put it down. Cam is an omega in hiding just trying to survive a horrible life where his designation means death. Henley (Lee), River and Brooks are the sons of Cam’s fathers rival motorcycle club who want nothing more than to break cam for his fathers sins, but what will happen when they find out they are wrong about everything. Will Cam survive his past? Will he survive himself? Will Cam and his men get the happy ever after they deserve?
Please check your TW/CW your mental health matters 🥰
5⭐️10/10 Must read of 2025
* MMMM
* Dark omegaverse
* Omega pretending to be a beta
* Miscommunication
* Possessive MCs
* Crazy and obsessed beta
* Enemies to lovers
This is hands down one of the best books of 2025, once I started I couldn’t put it down. Cam is an omega in hiding just trying to survive a horrible life where his designation means death. Henley (Lee), River and Brooks are the sons of Cam’s fathers rival motorcycle club who want nothing more than to break cam for his fathers sins, but what will happen when they find out they are wrong about everything. Will Cam survive his past? Will he survive himself? Will Cam and his men get the happy ever after they deserve?
Please check your TW/CW your mental health matters 🥰
August 13, 2025
This book was a fast paced omegaverse with a HEA.
it follows Camden our omega and his two scent matched alphas and their beta. the story starts off as a bully romance and turns into a pack dynamic about half way through. Camdens dad runs a rival gang to the three other pack members and they first think he’s out to get them while Cam is trying his best to hide who he is, an omega pretending to be a beta to get through school to get away from his dad and his horrible gang.
the writing style of this book was easy to digest and flowed pretty well. There were a couple times I was like wait who’s pov am I in again but other than that I liked the story. I’m excited for the next one in the series following different characters. the vibes were on point thought so i enjoyed this.
it follows Camden our omega and his two scent matched alphas and their beta. the story starts off as a bully romance and turns into a pack dynamic about half way through. Camdens dad runs a rival gang to the three other pack members and they first think he’s out to get them while Cam is trying his best to hide who he is, an omega pretending to be a beta to get through school to get away from his dad and his horrible gang.
the writing style of this book was easy to digest and flowed pretty well. There were a couple times I was like wait who’s pov am I in again but other than that I liked the story. I’m excited for the next one in the series following different characters. the vibes were on point thought so i enjoyed this.
May 16, 2025
Camden, Henley, River, + Brooks
-dark romance
-mmmm omegaverse
-hidden omega
-enemies to lovers
-miscommunication
i loveeee omegaverse & i love mm...& soooo throwing in a harem of boys with knots & heats?? YESSSS PLEASEEEE!! this one was so great too with camden hiding his designation because of the nature of his relations to the guys & them being complete dicks! which made for an incredibly HAWWTTT ride!!
-dark romance
-mmmm omegaverse
-hidden omega
-enemies to lovers
-miscommunication
i loveeee omegaverse & i love mm...& soooo throwing in a harem of boys with knots & heats?? YESSSS PLEASEEEE!! this one was so great too with camden hiding his designation because of the nature of his relations to the guys & them being complete dicks! which made for an incredibly HAWWTTT ride!!
June 2, 2025
Amazing! Love this author combo!!
So MM isn’t normally my jam cos it never really hooks me but this did. I couldn’t wait to jump back in every time I needed to put the book down!
It’s a bloody good emotional rollercoaster, dark and unhinged with some amazing light hearted stuff that got me smiling.
Perfectly crafted ending too. Definitely worth a read!
So MM isn’t normally my jam cos it never really hooks me but this did. I couldn’t wait to jump back in every time I needed to put the book down!
It’s a bloody good emotional rollercoaster, dark and unhinged with some amazing light hearted stuff that got me smiling.
Perfectly crafted ending too. Definitely worth a read!
June 14, 2025
Definitely sinful
I love the omega verse and this was a good take one it. The dark
pack adding in the new omega. Could use more of the club side and less of the football side but I guess its a college story. It did build the characters and the world, and give just enough for the next story.
I love the omega verse and this was a good take one it. The dark
pack adding in the new omega. Could use more of the club side and less of the football side but I guess its a college story. It did build the characters and the world, and give just enough for the next story.
May 28, 2025
A MMMM omegaverse that has hot chemistry with secrets and a twisted plot, that will tear you apart. The story will captivate you from the very beginning and hold you firmly until the very end.
July 16, 2025
2⭐️
UNHINGED BEHAVIOR Lordy lordt! This shit just got more and more unreasonable and unhinged the longer it went. And sometimes I can be down with that - however in this case I just could not deallll. The characters were not lovable or endearing enough to overcome all the other shit they were doing or having done to them. I just straight up feel bad for Camden. He’s really just a victim in all of this and his “pack” is fucked up and despite how many times they acknowledge that fact, it still doesn’t make it ok. This book wasn’t good. I’d go so far as to say it’s a badly written book with troubling characters and not a whole lot of redeeming qualities. This doesn’t stick to the rules it’s set out for itself, inconsistent af. It’s insanely OTT at some points, rather stupid at other points, crazy violent but in the most weirdly casual way, horny to the max, explains away what was essentially boiled down to a sexual assault as “ok” because they “could tell he really wanted it by his eyes and that he was hard”… and just overall nonsensical. BUT somehow someway I still really wanted to know what was going to happen to these fuckers. So yeah I finished it - kinda regret it because it was so terrible but also will want to read the 2nd book when it comes out so I can see what kind of random bullshit they cobble together to explain Jamie and Dr Kennedy’s situation. A particularly funny moment (that I think was supposed to be tense and serious) was when Cam’s heat hit and in his daze he catches the boys showing up in a huff and then Jamie and Dr Kennedy show and then the boys fighting over some stupid shit and a gun gets pulled because why the heck not like LOL what?! Truly wackadoo shit. I don’t recommend this tbh but I understand why some would get drawn in.
UNHINGED BEHAVIOR Lordy lordt! This shit just got more and more unreasonable and unhinged the longer it went. And sometimes I can be down with that - however in this case I just could not deallll. The characters were not lovable or endearing enough to overcome all the other shit they were doing or having done to them. I just straight up feel bad for Camden. He’s really just a victim in all of this and his “pack” is fucked up and despite how many times they acknowledge that fact, it still doesn’t make it ok. This book wasn’t good. I’d go so far as to say it’s a badly written book with troubling characters and not a whole lot of redeeming qualities. This doesn’t stick to the rules it’s set out for itself, inconsistent af. It’s insanely OTT at some points, rather stupid at other points, crazy violent but in the most weirdly casual way, horny to the max, explains away what was essentially boiled down to a sexual assault as “ok” because they “could tell he really wanted it by his eyes and that he was hard”… and just overall nonsensical. BUT somehow someway I still really wanted to know what was going to happen to these fuckers. So yeah I finished it - kinda regret it because it was so terrible but also will want to read the 2nd book when it comes out so I can see what kind of random bullshit they cobble together to explain Jamie and Dr Kennedy’s situation. A particularly funny moment (that I think was supposed to be tense and serious) was when Cam’s heat hit and in his daze he catches the boys showing up in a huff and then Jamie and Dr Kennedy show and then the boys fighting over some stupid shit and a gun gets pulled because why the heck not like LOL what?! Truly wackadoo shit. I don’t recommend this tbh but I understand why some would get drawn in.
August 9, 2025
Look, this was my re-read, and if I thought that the first time I loved this book... well, I was right, but also wrong because I am obsessed.
The first time I finished this book, I felt the need to go back to page one and start it all over again. I didn't, but... guess what? The same thing happened just now. I have this itch to just go back to page one whenever I finish this book, apparently. It is THAT good. At least for me, it is. God... I love these four.
I don't even know what exactly makes me this f_eral for this book. I swear. It has something between those pages cuz otherwise I can't even explain how I can't stop thinking about them.
This book has everything my twisted heart desires: four hawt men, it is DARK, omegaverse, A/B/O, fated mates, smut, hawt smut to be precise...and dubious sometimes, music to my ears... and it also has a good plot.
The dynamic of this relationship is ABSOLUTE PERFECTION. I'm telling you, I am a wh○r3 for dynamics in a poly relationship, and dang, if this one doesn't deliver big time. The authors did a fantastic job. Bravo.
I won't talk about the plot because I don't want to spoil it, but if you are into dark romance books with poly relationships, then this book is for you.
I can't even gather my scrambled thoughts properly to write a review that makes sense. This is how obsessed I am.
I know for a fact that this is definitely NOT gonna be my last read of this book. I just can't seem to be able to move on from these four... I can't. Ah... and the next book? God, I can't have that in my hands soon enough. I CANNOT WAIT.
Gazillion stars for my twisted pack, my boys, my loves, my heart. I'll be back for you, don't worry. Maybe next time, I can actually add something useful to this review. hahaha.
The first time I finished this book, I felt the need to go back to page one and start it all over again. I didn't, but... guess what? The same thing happened just now. I have this itch to just go back to page one whenever I finish this book, apparently. It is THAT good. At least for me, it is. God... I love these four.
I don't even know what exactly makes me this f_eral for this book. I swear. It has something between those pages cuz otherwise I can't even explain how I can't stop thinking about them.
This book has everything my twisted heart desires: four hawt men, it is DARK, omegaverse, A/B/O, fated mates, smut, hawt smut to be precise...and dubious sometimes, music to my ears... and it also has a good plot.
The dynamic of this relationship is ABSOLUTE PERFECTION. I'm telling you, I am a wh○r3 for dynamics in a poly relationship, and dang, if this one doesn't deliver big time. The authors did a fantastic job. Bravo.
I won't talk about the plot because I don't want to spoil it, but if you are into dark romance books with poly relationships, then this book is for you.
I can't even gather my scrambled thoughts properly to write a review that makes sense. This is how obsessed I am.
I know for a fact that this is definitely NOT gonna be my last read of this book. I just can't seem to be able to move on from these four... I can't. Ah... and the next book? God, I can't have that in my hands soon enough. I CANNOT WAIT.
Gazillion stars for my twisted pack, my boys, my loves, my heart. I'll be back for you, don't worry. Maybe next time, I can actually add something useful to this review. hahaha.
May 29, 2025
I almost rated it two stars but I realized I wasn't totally mad about reading it so I guess it deserves 3. This is like 90% boning 10% plot. How are these guys passing their classes? There were so many little plot directions that went absolutely fucking nowhere. Like the fact that they own a sex club but they never went? The one time they closed it didn't count. I feel like...you could have just had a sex dungeon in your house. Why a sex club, when even Cam, an actual employee, doesn't know it's a sex club???? Just so many little things like that. Flimsy reasoning for Brooks and River to not figure out Cam was an omega. Also it took forever for Cam's dad to be actually involved in the story?? And WHY did the three dudey dudes think it was okay to spontaneously hunt Cam down with masks when there are actual people hunting him? And why tf was literally everything anyone did Cam's 13th reason?? I get he is slightly paranoid but he was kind of a drama queen. Also Cam seemed to lose any personality he had after he got dicked down. Brooks and River were boring AF. I liked Henley. Although I was waiting for Henley to wear a Henley (in like 90% of MM romance someone is wearing a Henley for some reason) but I am disappointed it didn't happen. And yet again another weird plot point that was never explored, it's heavily hinted he has OCD (unless I read that wrong) but like...just forgotten about eventually? I have OCD and I was a lil excited for some rep but it was just the sexy kind of OCD where he was bothered that a picture he trimmed perfectly got ripped. Okay last thing THERE SHOULD HAVE BEEN MORE BULLYING. They jerked him off once, stared at him meanly for a bit, and then absolutely folded.
All this doesn't matter because it's literally just porn.
All this doesn't matter because it's literally just porn.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 7, 2025
Yeah, I should’ve DNF’d this one. I should’ve. I didn’t somehow, but I definitely should’ve. I skimmed through the literal like last 20%.
May 28, 2025
Holy dark and depraved this story was full throttle from beginning to end with no chance to breathe and I loved every minute of it!
Brooks, River and Henley are jerks- and I use that term in place for other words that I really want to use for them but can't because the internet won't like that. They rule the school and have everyone cowering in their wake. So when they set their eyes on Camden, all bets are off that he is going to be left unscathed.
All Camden wants is to be free of his father and live his life the way he wants to, despite hiding who he truly is. Starting Crown Well was supposed to be his chance to do so. Fate is funny though and gives him scent matches who are out to make his life miserable and a beta who knows all his dirty secrets. Will Cam be able to survive Brooks, River and Henley or is he doomed to watch his world crumble at the hands of their pack?
I loved this story right from the beginning. There was something about Cam that drew me in and made me super invested in his self discovery and path to loving himself, something that I certainly can relate to (although not on that extreme of a level). I loved that in the beginning, he was the only one who really knew about who Brooks, River and Henley were to him, which at times made reading their torment of him a little hard, but I loved that when everything was finally out in the open, the remorse those three showed him (in the only way they really knew how to). Their chemistry together as a pack was delicious and set my skin on fire making me want more and more as time went on. It was really fun to see them all interact with each other, being pulled towards Cam as their center without truly knowing why they were all feeling that way. I also really enjoyed getting to see them all overcome the trauma of their pasts. Cam having to hide himself from his father was heartbreaking and the boys grappling with the losses of their mothers at the hands of Cam's father could not have been easy so I really enjoyed seeing them put those differences and feelings aside and really give their pack a chance.
My only complaint, and it is a small one, is that I would have loved to see more of the tension between Cam and his father when Cam's secrets are finally out in the open. I think that would have added another layer to the story and I would have loved to see just how feral these men could have gotten trying to get to him with a bit more of that storyline being dragged out. Other than that, this was a fantastic read and I can't wait for the next part of this world because I need to know what is going on with Jamie and the Professor. Something tells me that may be even better than this one!
Brooks, River and Henley are jerks- and I use that term in place for other words that I really want to use for them but can't because the internet won't like that. They rule the school and have everyone cowering in their wake. So when they set their eyes on Camden, all bets are off that he is going to be left unscathed.
All Camden wants is to be free of his father and live his life the way he wants to, despite hiding who he truly is. Starting Crown Well was supposed to be his chance to do so. Fate is funny though and gives him scent matches who are out to make his life miserable and a beta who knows all his dirty secrets. Will Cam be able to survive Brooks, River and Henley or is he doomed to watch his world crumble at the hands of their pack?
I loved this story right from the beginning. There was something about Cam that drew me in and made me super invested in his self discovery and path to loving himself, something that I certainly can relate to (although not on that extreme of a level). I loved that in the beginning, he was the only one who really knew about who Brooks, River and Henley were to him, which at times made reading their torment of him a little hard, but I loved that when everything was finally out in the open, the remorse those three showed him (in the only way they really knew how to). Their chemistry together as a pack was delicious and set my skin on fire making me want more and more as time went on. It was really fun to see them all interact with each other, being pulled towards Cam as their center without truly knowing why they were all feeling that way. I also really enjoyed getting to see them all overcome the trauma of their pasts. Cam having to hide himself from his father was heartbreaking and the boys grappling with the losses of their mothers at the hands of Cam's father could not have been easy so I really enjoyed seeing them put those differences and feelings aside and really give their pack a chance.
My only complaint, and it is a small one, is that I would have loved to see more of the tension between Cam and his father when Cam's secrets are finally out in the open. I think that would have added another layer to the story and I would have loved to see just how feral these men could have gotten trying to get to him with a bit more of that storyline being dragged out. Other than that, this was a fantastic read and I can't wait for the next part of this world because I need to know what is going on with Jamie and the Professor. Something tells me that may be even better than this one!
June 3, 2025
Good, but could be improved.
It’s hard for me to find gay omegaverse novels that feature packs. Maybe I’m not looking in the right place, but it seems a lot less common than packs that feature at least one woman. So, I was really looking forward to this coming out! By and large, it did not disappoint!
There were a few things that bugged me, but nothing really about the bones of the story. Mostly, it’s things that could have been helped by a strong group of beta readers. Here’s a few of the most glaring issues:
•I know there are two different authors, and, if I had to guess, it seems like one of them uses “coming” as a verb and the other uses “cumming”. I’ve always understood “coming” to be the action and “cum” to be the, um, result, I guess? Cum is the noun, as I’ve always understood it, but I’ve seen it both ways and can usually look past it, but that’s harder to do when both versions of the verb are used in the same book.
•For a story that features two rival motorcycle clubs, there’s hardly any motorcycles. The main characters don’t actually even interact with one until the 86% mark.
•Anyone who owns a sex/kink club and doesn’t at least have a brief conversation about limits and safe words seems sus.
•Camden’s fear of his dad seems a little hard to visualize because we don’t even meet him, in any way, until the very end of the book. His only son and heir is away at college and he never checks in? Even to threaten or keep Cam under his thumb? The threat of his father would have felt more real if we’d had a few menacing phone calls or something.
•There’s an incident where Lee’s hidden cameras would have come in real handy to catch the person who messed with Camden’s room, but they’re never checked for some reason? Knowing who did it would have saved everyone a lot of heartache, so the fact that they’re never even checked feels like a plot hole that feels out of character for Lee or either of the alphas. If they’d been disabled somehow, that would’ve been believable.
•In one earlier scene, the alphas can feel Camden’s distress through their bond, but in a later scene, where Cam is objectively much more stressed, the alphas just feel, like, heartburn? One is rubbing his chest and that’s it?
•The ending is so abrupt it feels like running into a brick wall. The big “thing” happens and then in the next chapter the book ends. No comedown, no epilogue, no real resolution.
None of this is to say that the book isn’t good. It is! The spicy scenes were very hot! But, it could’ve been more satisfying with a bit of a cleanup from beta readers. Still, I’m looking forward to the next one!
It’s hard for me to find gay omegaverse novels that feature packs. Maybe I’m not looking in the right place, but it seems a lot less common than packs that feature at least one woman. So, I was really looking forward to this coming out! By and large, it did not disappoint!
There were a few things that bugged me, but nothing really about the bones of the story. Mostly, it’s things that could have been helped by a strong group of beta readers. Here’s a few of the most glaring issues:
•I know there are two different authors, and, if I had to guess, it seems like one of them uses “coming” as a verb and the other uses “cumming”. I’ve always understood “coming” to be the action and “cum” to be the, um, result, I guess? Cum is the noun, as I’ve always understood it, but I’ve seen it both ways and can usually look past it, but that’s harder to do when both versions of the verb are used in the same book.
•For a story that features two rival motorcycle clubs, there’s hardly any motorcycles. The main characters don’t actually even interact with one until the 86% mark.
•Anyone who owns a sex/kink club and doesn’t at least have a brief conversation about limits and safe words seems sus.
•Camden’s fear of his dad seems a little hard to visualize because we don’t even meet him, in any way, until the very end of the book. His only son and heir is away at college and he never checks in? Even to threaten or keep Cam under his thumb? The threat of his father would have felt more real if we’d had a few menacing phone calls or something.
•There’s an incident where Lee’s hidden cameras would have come in real handy to catch the person who messed with Camden’s room, but they’re never checked for some reason? Knowing who did it would have saved everyone a lot of heartache, so the fact that they’re never even checked feels like a plot hole that feels out of character for Lee or either of the alphas. If they’d been disabled somehow, that would’ve been believable.
•In one earlier scene, the alphas can feel Camden’s distress through their bond, but in a later scene, where Cam is objectively much more stressed, the alphas just feel, like, heartburn? One is rubbing his chest and that’s it?
•The ending is so abrupt it feels like running into a brick wall. The big “thing” happens and then in the next chapter the book ends. No comedown, no epilogue, no real resolution.
None of this is to say that the book isn’t good. It is! The spicy scenes were very hot! But, it could’ve been more satisfying with a bit of a cleanup from beta readers. Still, I’m looking forward to the next one!
August 17, 2025
After briefly reading a couple reviews for this book, I was excited to dive into reading this over the weekend. This was my introduction into the world of omegaverse and, I must say, I feel underwhelmed.
The story centers around Camden, an omega who is trying to hide his identity and escape his father by going off to college. Here, he meets two alphas, River and Brooks, and a Beta, Henley, who are in a pack and whose families are rivals to his fathers' MC club. To further Camden's stress and anxiety, he discovers that these rivals are his scent match.
The idea behind the book, as well as an MM poly story, both excited me since I've not read anything like that before. However, that's where my excitement pretty much ended. My reasonings:
1) The story feels underdeveloped. The rival criminal families seem to be the reason this is labeled as a "dark romance", but are only briefly touched upon. When they are discussed, matters seem to be resolved quickly and with ease. This not only lacks believability, but also seems like an area where further exploration may have added more depth to the story.
2) The two alphas seem like the same person. The only differentiation I gathered was that River is covered in tattoos and Brooks plays on the football team. Everything else about this is pretty much identical, which had me flipping back pages to remind myself which POV was being read. Side characters like Mr. Kennedy and Jamie offered more complexity.
3) Similar to reason #1... the plot is severely lacking. If I were to guess, at least 60% of the books is just smut. I enjoy smut and spice as much as the next person, but i found myself constantly sitting the book down because there were times when I was hoping for just SOME plot to shine through.
4) The book could have used further editing. I came across multiple errors that, while not a hinderance to the story, left me distracted. A few examples include:
Gently covering Camden backup with his many blankets... (back up)
"He doesn't know," he moans weekly, gasping for air. (weakly)
There's a decent amount of areas where spelling, word choice and sentence structures could have used further review.
Now... I did absolutely love that Camden finds acceptance for himself and a great support system. That was the highlight of the entire book for me.
The book is still a fun read. If you're also just wanting some omegaverse spice, this one is definitely for you.
I've never read anything by either of these authors before this book. I may attempt to continue with this series to see if my opinion changes over time, but I'm currently not feeling the desire to,
The story centers around Camden, an omega who is trying to hide his identity and escape his father by going off to college. Here, he meets two alphas, River and Brooks, and a Beta, Henley, who are in a pack and whose families are rivals to his fathers' MC club. To further Camden's stress and anxiety, he discovers that these rivals are his scent match.
The idea behind the book, as well as an MM poly story, both excited me since I've not read anything like that before. However, that's where my excitement pretty much ended. My reasonings:
1) The story feels underdeveloped. The rival criminal families seem to be the reason this is labeled as a "dark romance", but are only briefly touched upon. When they are discussed, matters seem to be resolved quickly and with ease. This not only lacks believability, but also seems like an area where further exploration may have added more depth to the story.
2) The two alphas seem like the same person. The only differentiation I gathered was that River is covered in tattoos and Brooks plays on the football team. Everything else about this is pretty much identical, which had me flipping back pages to remind myself which POV was being read. Side characters like Mr. Kennedy and Jamie offered more complexity.
3) Similar to reason #1... the plot is severely lacking. If I were to guess, at least 60% of the books is just smut. I enjoy smut and spice as much as the next person, but i found myself constantly sitting the book down because there were times when I was hoping for just SOME plot to shine through.
4) The book could have used further editing. I came across multiple errors that, while not a hinderance to the story, left me distracted. A few examples include:
Gently covering Camden backup with his many blankets... (back up)
"He doesn't know," he moans weekly, gasping for air. (weakly)
There's a decent amount of areas where spelling, word choice and sentence structures could have used further review.
Now... I did absolutely love that Camden finds acceptance for himself and a great support system. That was the highlight of the entire book for me.
The book is still a fun read. If you're also just wanting some omegaverse spice, this one is definitely for you.
I've never read anything by either of these authors before this book. I may attempt to continue with this series to see if my opinion changes over time, but I'm currently not feeling the desire to,
June 10, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (5/5 Stars — I’m obsessed)
Title: Beg for It
Authors: Alisha Williams & Jenn Bullard
Genre: M/M Reverse Harem | Omegaverse | Dark Romance | College Romance
Tropes: Enemies to Lovers | Pack Bonding | Hidden Designation | Bully Romance | Found Family (eventually)
Audience: 18+ (Dark Content)
Finding a solid M/M reverse harem that’s also Omegaverse is almost impossible—but this book? This book had me in a chokehold. I was absolutely devastated when I realized book two wasn’t out yet. I need more. Immediately.
This is not your soft, fluffy omega romance. This is dark, toxic, possessive, and brutally steamy. It's the kind of smut that makes you question if your air conditioning is even working. The pack dynamics are feral and absolutely unhinged in the best way.
🩸 Plot Vibes:
Camden is hiding everything—his past, his identity, and the fact that he’s an Omega. His father is a dangerous man from a criminal MC, and Camden wants nothing more than to disappear and finally live on his own terms.
But Crown Well isn’t the quiet restart he was hoping for. Enter Brooks, River, and Henley—sons of his father’s enemies, who immediately decide Camden is their personal target. They’re ruthless, dominant, and absolutely sure Camden is to blame for the tragedies of their past.
Only… Camden is their omega. And when that truth starts unraveling, so does the fragile line between hate and obsession.
🔥 What I Loved:
Feral, jealous, “you’re mine or you’re dead” energy
Fully MM reverse harem (yes, they are all into each other too)
Dark and gritty without sacrificing emotional moments
Henley being the beta? Chef’s kiss.
Camden’s inner conflict and trauma handled with real weight
No easy redemption—the pack has to earn it
The smut: possessive, primal, unrelenting
⚠️ Trigger Warnings (serious content):
Suicide attempt
Parental abuse (past and present)
Murder
Stalking
Non-consensual tones in early scenes (coercion/dub-con vibes)
Heavy emotional manipulation
Mental health trauma
This is DARK omegaverse. Please check content warnings before diving in.
💭 Final Thoughts:
I felt so much for Camden. He just wanted freedom—to breathe—and these three come in like a wrecking ball, misjudging him, blaming him, then slowly realizing he’s not the villain. The emotional whiplash? Incredible. The unresolved tension? Painfully addictive.
The dynamic between the alphas and beta is intense and raw. I honestly couldn’t pick a favorite because they each bring something savage and necessary to the relationship. I’m dying to see where book two goes.
“Touch my packmates and I’ll kill you” — if that doesn’t tell you the energy of this book, I don’t know what will.
Highly recommended if you’re into:
✔️ Messy, unhinged pack dynamics
✔️ Omega in hiding
✔️ Angst, betrayal, and healing
✔️ Possessive dark romance
✔️ “He belongs to us” level obsession
📌 5 freaking stars. No notes. Just give me book 2 already.
Title: Beg for It
Authors: Alisha Williams & Jenn Bullard
Genre: M/M Reverse Harem | Omegaverse | Dark Romance | College Romance
Tropes: Enemies to Lovers | Pack Bonding | Hidden Designation | Bully Romance | Found Family (eventually)
Audience: 18+ (Dark Content)
Finding a solid M/M reverse harem that’s also Omegaverse is almost impossible—but this book? This book had me in a chokehold. I was absolutely devastated when I realized book two wasn’t out yet. I need more. Immediately.
This is not your soft, fluffy omega romance. This is dark, toxic, possessive, and brutally steamy. It's the kind of smut that makes you question if your air conditioning is even working. The pack dynamics are feral and absolutely unhinged in the best way.
🩸 Plot Vibes:
Camden is hiding everything—his past, his identity, and the fact that he’s an Omega. His father is a dangerous man from a criminal MC, and Camden wants nothing more than to disappear and finally live on his own terms.
But Crown Well isn’t the quiet restart he was hoping for. Enter Brooks, River, and Henley—sons of his father’s enemies, who immediately decide Camden is their personal target. They’re ruthless, dominant, and absolutely sure Camden is to blame for the tragedies of their past.
Only… Camden is their omega. And when that truth starts unraveling, so does the fragile line between hate and obsession.
🔥 What I Loved:
Feral, jealous, “you’re mine or you’re dead” energy
Fully MM reverse harem (yes, they are all into each other too)
Dark and gritty without sacrificing emotional moments
Henley being the beta? Chef’s kiss.
Camden’s inner conflict and trauma handled with real weight
No easy redemption—the pack has to earn it
The smut: possessive, primal, unrelenting
⚠️ Trigger Warnings (serious content):
Suicide attempt
Parental abuse (past and present)
Murder
Stalking
Non-consensual tones in early scenes (coercion/dub-con vibes)
Heavy emotional manipulation
Mental health trauma
This is DARK omegaverse. Please check content warnings before diving in.
💭 Final Thoughts:
I felt so much for Camden. He just wanted freedom—to breathe—and these three come in like a wrecking ball, misjudging him, blaming him, then slowly realizing he’s not the villain. The emotional whiplash? Incredible. The unresolved tension? Painfully addictive.
The dynamic between the alphas and beta is intense and raw. I honestly couldn’t pick a favorite because they each bring something savage and necessary to the relationship. I’m dying to see where book two goes.
“Touch my packmates and I’ll kill you” — if that doesn’t tell you the energy of this book, I don’t know what will.
Highly recommended if you’re into:
✔️ Messy, unhinged pack dynamics
✔️ Omega in hiding
✔️ Angst, betrayal, and healing
✔️ Possessive dark romance
✔️ “He belongs to us” level obsession
📌 5 freaking stars. No notes. Just give me book 2 already.
May 16, 2025
This book is about an omega who grew up in a hostile environment, in a world he would give anything to escape from, he finds himself in the arms of a pack who hates him for what he makes them feel, for every assumption they create. A pack that is his. Now he must learn to survive in yet another hostile situation, all while hiding his truth, he’s an omega, and he belongs to the pack that despises him.
I’ll start off with giving a trigger warning, this is a hard book, in the best ways, make sure to read the triggers and take care of yourself!
This was my first read with all males, I hadn’t read one before because I was concerned I wouldn’t be able to relate, truly set myself into the mindset of the main character. That was not the case, I’m thrilled to report that all of my concerns was unfounded. This book was so easy to fall into, the characters are so easy to get invested in, you root for the successes and cry for the downs, our omega is going through a really rough patch mentally and you feel it, it physically hurts reading.
This was an incredible book, it was beautifully written and so obvious that the authors enjoyed writing it together, a bit of a dream team if I’m being honest. I need more of the sinfulverse and I know I won’t be disappointed, highly looking forward to reading their next book together, exploring this world that they’ve created.
I would recommend this book to anyone who likes omegaverse, dark in particular, if the MMMM scares you I would urge you to give it a try, it’s worth taking a chance on, it’s a beautiful book.
The alphas in this book is hard, in more than one way, but like all good partners, they melt for their significant other, so I’ll leave you with two quotes that had me cackling, knowing that they’re usually these hard asses who can make people run the other way screaming with just a glance.
“They’re adorable, but need some serious guidance. In fact, I find myself pulling out a shoe candle, a bubble lamp, and a plant that looks like a penis when they’re not looking.
They’re a little clueless, but they mean well.”
“Ugh, going anywhere with my alphas is like trying to get squirrels to go in the correct direction.”
I’ll start off with giving a trigger warning, this is a hard book, in the best ways, make sure to read the triggers and take care of yourself!
This was my first read with all males, I hadn’t read one before because I was concerned I wouldn’t be able to relate, truly set myself into the mindset of the main character. That was not the case, I’m thrilled to report that all of my concerns was unfounded. This book was so easy to fall into, the characters are so easy to get invested in, you root for the successes and cry for the downs, our omega is going through a really rough patch mentally and you feel it, it physically hurts reading.
This was an incredible book, it was beautifully written and so obvious that the authors enjoyed writing it together, a bit of a dream team if I’m being honest. I need more of the sinfulverse and I know I won’t be disappointed, highly looking forward to reading their next book together, exploring this world that they’ve created.
I would recommend this book to anyone who likes omegaverse, dark in particular, if the MMMM scares you I would urge you to give it a try, it’s worth taking a chance on, it’s a beautiful book.
The alphas in this book is hard, in more than one way, but like all good partners, they melt for their significant other, so I’ll leave you with two quotes that had me cackling, knowing that they’re usually these hard asses who can make people run the other way screaming with just a glance.
“They’re adorable, but need some serious guidance. In fact, I find myself pulling out a shoe candle, a bubble lamp, and a plant that looks like a penis when they’re not looking.
They’re a little clueless, but they mean well.”
“Ugh, going anywhere with my alphas is like trying to get squirrels to go in the correct direction.”
June 25, 2025
I'll be honest, I've really never read any of Alisha Williams' books before, and Jenn Bullard was new to me too. The thing is, I think Williams comes up with good ideas, but in past peeks at her novels, there's just something about the writing style and editing issues that turns me off.
Regardless of that, I gave Beg For It a try because I love MM and I'm always looking for MM poly stories, which are hard to come across.
Unfortunately, I found the MM poly that I wanted, but not too much else.
As far as positives go, I still really like the idea: male omega flees his criminal father in order to live his own life, but he unsuspectingly winds up on the radar of his father's enemies' sons. I'm giving the book a three based on the idea itself.
For me, this idea was underdeveloped. I would have loved to see more into the criminal families and had that rivalry play a bigger role. As it is, it feels like those elements are just there to give the story the "dark" label, but it's not really a big part of the story. The fact that they're from enemy families is easily dismissed, and the situation with Cam's father is resolved just as simply by the end of the story.
With the guys, Henley and Camden stood out the most. Brooks and River kind of faded together, where sometimes I wasn't sure whose POV it was. At least with Lee and Cam, I knew whose eyes I was looking through when it was their turn. Generally speaking, though, even as the more unique, I feel like I don't have a super strong sense of who they are. There were just a lot of opportunity, I think, to dig deeper into developing the characters, and I wish that's how things had worked out.
As far as anything else goes, the story also needs some editing - punctuation, possessives, word choice/spelling, even like the plural forms of some basic words. The errors don't interfere with understanding the story, but there's enough of them that it stands out to me and is being mentioned here.
Regardless of that, I gave Beg For It a try because I love MM and I'm always looking for MM poly stories, which are hard to come across.
Unfortunately, I found the MM poly that I wanted, but not too much else.
As far as positives go, I still really like the idea: male omega flees his criminal father in order to live his own life, but he unsuspectingly winds up on the radar of his father's enemies' sons. I'm giving the book a three based on the idea itself.
For me, this idea was underdeveloped. I would have loved to see more into the criminal families and had that rivalry play a bigger role. As it is, it feels like those elements are just there to give the story the "dark" label, but it's not really a big part of the story. The fact that they're from enemy families is easily dismissed, and the situation with Cam's father is resolved just as simply by the end of the story.
With the guys, Henley and Camden stood out the most. Brooks and River kind of faded together, where sometimes I wasn't sure whose POV it was. At least with Lee and Cam, I knew whose eyes I was looking through when it was their turn. Generally speaking, though, even as the more unique, I feel like I don't have a super strong sense of who they are. There were just a lot of opportunity, I think, to dig deeper into developing the characters, and I wish that's how things had worked out.
As far as anything else goes, the story also needs some editing - punctuation, possessives, word choice/spelling, even like the plural forms of some basic words. The errors don't interfere with understanding the story, but there's enough of them that it stands out to me and is being mentioned here.
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