Dramatic epic story during a turbulent and transitional time in China's history.
The main character, Violet Minturn, is a young girl raised in a courtesan house, where women are courted for sexual favors. As expected, Violet's life is fraught with drama and tragedy. She's fatherless, enjoys spying on the courtesans as they're having sex with their visitors and is a lonely child attached to her cat.
Tan has a really good eye for descriptions and went into lengthy detail to describe every setting and person that the two main characters encounter. The first 75% of the book is written in Violet's first person point of view. Even though there is a lot of interesting historical detail, I found it strange that a young girl would observe and note so much detail about furnishings and locations.
Lots of disasters happen to Violet, including being kidnapped from her mother and stuck in a house of prostitution, but Violet spends paragraph after paragraph describing the setting, furniture, business model and competition for the new house she finds herself imprisoned in. It was almost like she was an impartial observer to her own story and so intrigued by the political machinations of a house of ill repute that she didn't have time for emotion. I thought to myself, she got over that rather quickly.
Although she suffers heartbreak after heartbreak, she is still naive enough to be tricked and betrayed by a slew of sleazy characters. We learn that the same thing happened to her mother years ago. She also imagined people were more trustworthy than they were.
Violet's best friend, Magic Gourd, was the only constant in her life. She was the Tiger Mom to Violet, eager to make her the best courtesan ever. She pushed her to practice singing, taught her sexual techniques, told her stories and folk tales to please men, hired actors to help her learn her trade, sewed gowns for her, shopped for jewelry for her, checked out the suitors, and basically plotted and planned Violet's debut into the world of high end prostitution. As a typical Tiger Mother, she was disappointed when Violet was not voted Top Ten Beauty, and vowed to have her try harder the next year.
I enjoyed the short-lived romance Violet had with Edward, an American, but as is typical in Amy Tan's books, no happiness lasts long.
This book read like a history lesson mixed with graphic sexual descriptions with laugh out loud names for sexual organs: stem, petals, gates, sword, scabbard, and pudendum. Most of the sexual scenes bordered on disgusting, especially the violent ones. And Violet never really reacts to the pain and humiliation she endures. She's too busy describing the dents on the table, or the small pieces of lint on the rug, or the seams on the curtains.
While I read the book eagerly, it was hard to connect to the main characters because they were too distant. They were more focused on storytelling than allowing the reader to experience through their eyes. The male characters were cardboard and generally a bunch of jerks, with Edward perhaps the only one with any redeeming qualities. Violet and Edward's romance was sweet and had some poignant moments, but passed away too quickly.
[spoilers follow]
The narration at 75% from Violet's mother, Lulu or Lucia, was all backstory and in my opinion not needed. We already knew what had happened to Violet and her baby brother. We know things went wrong with her relationship to Violet's father, and I felt we didn't really need to know all the details of her seducing him, and her cold relationship with her parents. Finally, I found it unbelievable that a shrewd madam like Lulu would so EASILY be tricked by Fairweather [in the turning point of the story] because darnit! This is not the first child who was stolen by a man she trusted! Didn't she have inklings of deja vu? Or thought to herself, I don't hand over a child to a man who says we'll meet on board the ship because years ago, I handed a baby to a man who said he'd take him to visit his family and never returned. And get this, the reason she's on the ship is so she can go to San Francisco to see this son who was kidnapped. But never once does she suspect her daughter would be stolen. This trickery could be seen by the reader a mile away, but because it is a necessary plot point, Lulu had to be temporarily blinded to the sneaky man who no one trusted, especially her side kick who warned her about it. [Incidentally, years later, Violet also persists on being easily duped despite Magic Gourd's repeated predictions of disaster. Like mother, like daughter?]
Plot threads were also dropped and never revived. The entire plot hinges on Violet's abduction because her mother wanted to go to San Francisco to see the son who was kidnapped, but after Lulu returns home, she decided she didn't feel like seeing this son anymore because she grieves for her daughter who the scoundrels told her was killed while crossing a street.
Lulu, we must remember, is a sophisticated madam in Shanghai where lies flow like wine. After arriving in San Francisco, she receives a telegram from her best friend/sidekick saying her daughter has died and she believes it and stays in San Francisco without even once going back to Shanghai to investigate. Lulu has ALL these contacts with men who frequent the courtesans in Shanghai. If she were to return, she would no doubt have ferreted out the truth, that her daughter [who was well known as the Eurasian courtesan of high demand] was a star vying to be one of the top beauties. She was even mentioned in the mosquito press. True, Lulu didn't have internet and google, but at the same time, Chinese people talk, servants gossip, and it wouldn't take a genius to go back to Shanghai to look for Violet's grave and find her instead plying her trade as a high demand courtesan.
Add to the fact that Violet's father knew Violet was still alive AND he knew Lulu was distraught about losing Violet AND he lived in San Francisco where Lulu was, and you're telling me in what, 20 years, he never once lets Lulu know their daughter is alive because Violet once told him she hates her mother for abandoning her? So he respects her wishes not to talk about her mother anymore??? Can we just knock that man over the head with a 2 by 4 for stupidity?
The other problem I had was plot structure. The rising tension was the question: will Violet ever find her mother again? Will she ever escape from the courtesan trade and later from her abusive husband? Will she find her daughter who had been kidnapped and brought to America?
But the answer, when it came was already a letdown. After the daring escape from Moon Pond, Violet is going through her late husband's belongings when she conveniently finds a letter from her father saying her mother is sad that she lost Violet and never cared about the son she crossed the ocean to seek. Violet decides to contact her mother and find out her side of the story. They correspond and then her mother helps her find her daughter whom she easily locates and moves to their neighborhood. However, years literally go by from the time her daughter is seven until her daughter is a college student before they finally get together because the daughter was snooping while her adopted mother was away and found some letters intercepted by her adopted mother and decided to write back.
The ending is a long set of drawn-out narratives as each woman tells the other two a summary of their life story, with Violet's daughter being the last one to speak. Lulu and Violet's daughter go back to America and Violet, Magic Gourd, and Violet's third husband stay behind. It was rather a sad, plodding ending.
Although this may seem like a critical review, I gave it 5 stars for the historical detail, richness of description and extensive research that went into it. It is also literary fiction and not genre fiction, so I didn't want to mark it down because it didn't have the plot and character elements of genre fiction [i.e. pacing, likeable characters, ending with all threads tied up.]
The tragedy of these women is compounded by their inability to discern duplicity and their naive wish to put their trust in a man (basically an illusion), so while I might have made fun of them for not standing up for themselves or being more suspicious, their yearning for love and acceptance overwhelmed the advice of their sidekicks and the story ends in a way that resigns each woman to their fate. The American in me wishes for a fairytale ending, but the Chinese in me knows that happiness is fleeting and we need to grab ahold and savor those nuggets and be content.