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First published September 16, 2025
I still have most of the same criticisms that I had with the last book. The characters being 13 is a detriment to the book’s plot, and just does not make sense. Why are these 13-year-olds acting so mature, and being treated like they are older than they are? Why are people trying to throw 13-year-olds in prison? Why are people airing out their dirty laundry to a pack of 13-year-olds? I think Claribel A. Ortega marketing this as middle-grade is downplaying their own strength of writing, and I believe that if the characters were aged up, and that stupid witch slang + the names were replaced with ones trying less hard to stay in the juvenile range, and this was advertised as a YA, the story would not be affected in the slightest (besides possibly being less cringe), and perhaps it would have more success. Although, at least in this book it is being brought up that they are only 13 more.
I do not remember if I mentioned this in my review for the last book, but the main character, Seven, being the least interesting and likeable character is kind of a problem. In the last book, she had some good internal conflict, but it did not seem to affect her relationships, or her life enough for it to be taken seriously, and was barely brought up. In this book, they, again, proposed an interesting internal conflict for Seven, and again, did not do enough with it. She is probably the most 1 dimensional character.
Also, everything is a little too convenient in this book. There is always a way out, and another option in this book. They get through challenges too easily, which makes the stakes seem less serious. I think they should have drawn out the action scenes and dilemmas more, instead of being like “oh no! This terrible thing is happening! Oh wait, look, there’s an escape route and I just happen to have companions who can take care of it! How convenient! Wow! We just happened to stumble upon the place we have been looking for this entire time! How convenient!” It gets tiring.
One of this book’s biggest problems when it comes to writing is not telling and not showing. One example:
“‘What if one of these witches is evil, like Lotus or Ambert or Helio? How will we know if we’re safe here?”
It wasn’t easy to trust strangers when even the witches they’d thought were friends had betrayed them time and time again”
Yes. I get it. They have been betrayed, and have a hard time trusting people. You showed that perfectly with Thorn’s dialogue. You did not need to spell it out for us. I know this is middle-grade, so it is possible that Claribel A. Ortega thinks they need things explicitly stated for them. If that is the case, most middle-schoolers are not slow. They would be fine.
Small complaint, Delphinium sounds way too… modern for someone who is from so long ago. She said the word “yapper.” That is not 1700s vocabulary. But, shout out to her for not having a dumb name like the rest of these goats (look! I used Witchlings vocab! …🤮). I immediately thought she might be a traitor as soon as there was a line saying “but if anyone knew how to deal with it, it was Delphinium.” Whenever a book has a line where a character is talking about how reliable or trustworthy another character is, bonus if they think that after suspecting them of something, they are almost always a twist villain. This specific line was a yellow flag, because it did not outright mean that Delphinium was a villain, but it did suggest to me that she was withholding some information. Red flag lines are stuff like “they have done so much to help me, how can I suspect them now?” “I was immediately ashamed for not trusting them after all they have done to prove themselves.” If a character has a moment of doubt, but quickly brushes it away, you can bet that they were right in the first place. Anyways, that was just a fun tidbit. I will not say whether or not my suspicion about Delphinium was right, for the sake of remaining mostly spoiler free.
The premise of the memory wiping, along with the villains getting away scott-free and having a ton of political power and influence is an engaging one. It was honestly sad the way people were forgetting things, especially when Alaric forgot Jonafren’s name. Those two are so cute together. Leave them alone. 😡
Ortega definitely does have the ability to build tension and suspense. Some of the action scenes had me on the edge of my seat. Some were also surprisingly devastating for middle-grade.
I am liking how intelligently written these books are. Their messages are relevant to what is happening today. But, it is strange how I seem to be finding more substance in middle-grade than books for older demographics. Although this book does have less substance than the previous two, it does still have enough to make it purposeful.
I enjoyed the more adventure-y feel this book has. It has some of the simple charm of the first book, but also the substance and themes that the later books had, so it is the best of both worlds.
Additionally, I appreciated that Ortega was doing more with the world she created. The expansions and additions were very much welcome, and made the premise more innovative and novel.
I really like Flint, despite him not being there much. I enjoy his personality, and even though he is not a great person, boy is he entertaining.