I read for pleasure. I had to stop reading this at page 89, when it became abundantly clear that I was not enjoying the reading experience at all, and it all really started right from the beginning. I wanted to push through, but it just was not to be. Daniel Lefferts novel, needs to have a disclaimer to it and tell the reader to have a thesaurus on hand and at the ready while reading this 380 page novel. This gentleman threw every variation of simple words at the reader, causing multiple breaks to look up words that could have been conveyed in a way most people know.
Unfortunately, Lefferts decided to show his audience that while it is a debut novel, that he wanted to show how pretentious he is. Who was this novel exactly written for? Who was his target audience? If you are not outré, and carry a Masters/Doctorate in Literature, and attended an Ivy League school, you may find yourself deeming this writing out of your wheelhouse.
I did not get to know the characters, therefore, I did not care about them, because I was too preoccupied with looking up words to see what they meant instead of settling into the story.
Lefferts has promise as a writer, but he needs to bring himself down from the clouds and produce something most readers will enjoy, and not have to feel like they are inept because they don’t get his choice of vocabulary. Pretentiousness and arrogance are not good looks.
Some of the words I came across, and have never seen, let alone used in my 51 years on this earth include:
Afflatus
Lugubrious
Bolus
Idee Fixe
Mephitic
So, if you choose to read this, be warned, it is slow, overly verbose, from a debut author who (in my opinion) shut the door in the face of so many readers who may have wanted to read this, but decide to pass after being put through the thesaurus turn style of alphabet hell.