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Software engineer Tori Jaecar has made it. At least, that's what she tells herself. Her coworkers suck, she hates life in the big city, and she's starving for meaning in life since her brother's death, but who cares? Happiness is a small price to pay for success.When Tori's boss is murdered in front of her, she's saved by part-time monster hunter, full-time bad boy Vince Lenoir, and their destinies entwine. In their hunt for the killer, they embark on an odyssey of epic proportions—literally. Legendary villains from Greek mythology have moved to America. They threaten to send humanity back to the classical era. To stop them, Tori and Vince must answer three who they are, who do they want to be, and who lies at the heart of it all?

392 pages, Paperback

Published September 2, 2025

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4,592 reviews141 followers
September 20, 2025
The First Liar by MC rising is set in Atlanta Georgia and involves Tori she is tired of working with Jeff who treats her like it’s the 70s and well she’s a woman. This doesn’t stop Tori, after learning he was fired through no fault of hers, of wanting to know why. This is how she finds herself in the middle of the street standing with him, she suddenly get shot in the chest, blacksout only to come to and watch the truck driven by an extra large lumberjack kill her boss Jeff. This is when Tori essentially loses her mind and chases after said lumberjack. she is relentless in her chase and right when the lumberjack has had enough that is when tori meets Vince Lenore or rather he saves her life. At the very least he was expecting a thank you not for Tori to get into his car and refuse to leave this is how she now finds herself at the condo with Vince Roy and Brooks. When she woke up that morning she was fighting to be heard at work now she will be fighting to save the world. when modernity and the mythical meat in reality Tori will be right in the middle of it but can she survive? there’s so much I’m leaving out of this review like Tori’s romance the loss of her brother and so much more. I was looking so forward to this book as these are some of my favorite types but they just had too many problems with the timeline certain things she said about Atlanta like when she said only criminals had guns in Atlanta I would like to know which Atlanta she’s talking about because it cannot be the one in Georgia but I digress I still gave this book 3 stars because it was entertaining I liked the romance the sub plot with her brother and there were lots of lol moments. I think if she tightened up the timeline and made it more feasible to the reader and have more truthful statements about the town the story is based in it would make for a much better book. if you want an entertaining read and are good at suspending belief you will find this a book to enjoy if you’re a stickler for the story to be on point maybe skip this one. #NetGalley, #TheBlindReviewer, #MyHonestReview,# MCRising, #TheFirstLiar,
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2,836 reviews434 followers
August 21, 2025
In a literary landscape saturated with urban fantasy, M.C. Rising's debut novel "The First Liar" emerges as a refreshingly grounded take on mythological resurrection. This isn't your typical "chosen one discovers hidden magical world" narrative. Instead, Rising crafts a story that feels remarkably relevant to our current political and corporate climate, using Greek mythology as a lens to examine power, identity, and the price of survival in modern America.

The novel follows Tori Jaecar, a software engineer trapped in the soul-crushing machinery of corporate life, whose mundane existence shatters when her boss is murdered before her eyes. Enter Vince Lenoir, a part-time monster hunter whose cynical exterior masks deeper wounds, and suddenly Tori finds herself thrust into a world where legendary villains from Greek mythology have migrated to America with decidedly contemporary ambitions.

Character Development: From Archetypes to Authenticity

Rising's greatest strength lies in her masterful character development, particularly in how she transforms mythological archetypes while honoring their essential nature. Tori begins as an overworked millennial, complete with imposter syndrome and a suffocating sense of purposelessness following her twin brother Luke's death. Rising creates a protagonist whose grief is specific, whose technical skills matter to the plot, and whose transformation into "the Greatest Hunter to Ever Live" feels completely earned and authentic.

Vince Lenoir represents one of the most compelling interpretations of the "bad boy with a heart of gold" trope in recent fantasy literature. His relationship with his makeshift family—Roy Angelus and Brooks Wyman—provides emotional depth that perfectly grounds the supernatural elements in genuine human connection. The mystery surrounding Roy's true identity (revealed to be Hermes himself) adds rich layers to their dynamic that reward careful readers throughout the narrative.

The mythological antagonists transcend simple villainy through Rising's exceptionally nuanced portrayal. Narcissus, cursed to seduce anyone he touches despite his own revulsion, becomes a genuinely tragic figure whose barbed wit masks profound pain. Orion's toxic masculinity and need to prove himself feels disturbingly contemporary, while Director Webb's transformation into Arachne the spider-weaver serves as a perfect metaphor for corporate manipulation and the web of lies that bind modern institutions.

Mythological Framework: Ancient Wisdom for Modern Problems

Rising demonstrates impressive mythological literacy while making the content completely accessible to readers. The revelation that creatures from various mythological traditions—Greek, Cherokee, Chinese—coexist in this world opens fascinating possibilities for cultural dialogue and representation. The author's decision to root the primary conflict in Greek mythology while acknowledging the validity of other mythological systems shows sophisticated understanding of cultural appreciation and inclusivity.

The connection between mythological figures and constellations provides a particularly elegant structural element. When Grace explains that Orion the Hunter, Asterius the bull, and other enemies are literally written in the stars, it creates a beautiful sense of cosmic inevitability while emphasizing humanity's ancient relationship with these stories. This astronomical connection also serves the plot brilliantly, providing clues that feel organic and meaningful.

The political dimension of the mythology proves especially compelling. President Arvis's revelation as Zeus—the ultimate patriarch wielding power through fear and manipulation—serves as pointed commentary on authoritarian leadership. Rising's decision to make the primary antagonist a sitting president creates genuine urgency and relevance that elevates the stakes beyond personal survival to societal transformation.

Prose Style and Pacing: Urban Fantasy with Literary Sensibilities

Rising's prose strikes a perfect balance between accessibility and sophistication. Her descriptions of corporate life ring with authentic detail, particularly in the opening chapters where Tori navigates the casual sexism and mind-numbing bureaucracy of her workplace. The author's background clearly informs these scenes, lending remarkable credibility to Tori's technical expertise and workplace experiences.

The supernatural elements receive equally careful attention, with Rising creating genuine atmosphere through psychological depth rather than relying on simple shock value. The labyrinth sequence beneath Channel 4, where reality itself becomes unstable, showcases the author's exceptional ability to create genuine dread through atmosphere and disorientation. Her descriptions of mythological creatures feel both ancient and contemporary—Orion's toxic masculinity, the spider's web of corporate manipulation, Narcissus's complex relationship with his own power.

Rising demonstrates remarkable skill in integrating worldbuilding smoothly into action sequences and character development, making the learning curve feel natural and engaging throughout the narrative.

Thematic Depth: Identity, Power, and Transformation

"The First Liar" explores themes of identity and authenticity with remarkable sophistication for a debut novel. The central question—"who lies at the heart of it all?"—resonates on multiple meaningful levels. The exploration encompasses Zeus's manipulation of truth for power, Narcissus's tragic existence, and Tori's journey toward recognizing her own worth and potential.

The novel's examination of corporate culture as a form of mythological evil feels particularly timely and insightful. Director Webb's transformation into Arachne creates a literal monster out of workplace manipulation, while the Tianyi corporation serves as a modern labyrinth designed to trap and exploit workers. Rising's decision to stage climactic battles in corporate spaces—office buildings, conference rooms, underground facilities—reinforces the powerful idea that contemporary evil often wears a business suit.

The theme of chosen family versus blood family runs beautifully throughout the narrative. Tori's relationship with her deceased twin Luke provides emotional weight to her character arc, while her growing bond with Vince, Grace, and the others demonstrates how trauma can create meaningful connections. The revelation that Roy has been acting as a surrogate father figure to Vince adds genuine poignancy to their relationship and emphasizes that family bonds transcend biological connection.

Cultural Commentary: Mythology as Mirror

Rising uses her mythological framework to examine contemporary American issues with impressive insight. The immigration of ancient mythological figures to America serves as a brilliant metaphor for cultural displacement and adaptation. These beings maintain their essential nature while adapting to new contexts—Narcissus becomes a manipulative corporate executive, Orion transforms into a toxic masculine archetype, Zeus assumes the identity of an authoritarian president.

The novel's portrayal of President Arvis/Zeus as a political figure who thrives on fear and division feels particularly relevant to current political discourse. Rising grounds her critique in mythological tradition—Zeus has always been a problematic patriarch whose power depends on keeping others divided and subservient—creating commentary that feels both timeless and immediate.

The representation of diverse mythological traditions suggests a thoughtfully inclusive approach to fantasy worldbuilding. Rising's mention of Cherokee mythology through Spearfinger and Chinese traditions through Chenlong demonstrates awareness that American mythology should reflect American diversity.

Technical Elements: Structure and Worldbuilding

The novel's structure expertly balances multiple plot threads while maintaining clear focus. The central mystery—who is behind the mythological awakening and why—provides strong narrative momentum while character development and relationship building provide deep emotional investment. Rising demonstrates exceptional skill in managing exposition, integrating mythological information through character discovery in ways that feel natural and engaging.

The worldbuilding feels authentic and lived-in, particularly in its portrayal of contemporary settings. Atlanta emerges as a character in its own right, with Rising drawing on real locations and historical events to ground the fantastic elements beautifully. The use of actual Atlanta landmarks—from corporate towers to historic sites like Roswell Mill—creates geographic authenticity that enhances immersion and connection.

The magic system feels consistent and thematically appropriate throughout. Powers relate meaningfully to mythological origins and character psychology rather than feeling arbitrary, creating internal logic that supports the story's emotional truth perfectly.

Final Assessment: A Remarkable Debut with Extraordinary Promise

"The First Liar" announces M.C. Rising as a fantasy author with exceptional talent and vision. Rising demonstrates impressive mythological literacy, outstanding character development skills, and a keen eye for contemporary social issues. The book's exploration of identity, power, and authenticity through a mythological lens creates a reading experience that feels both fantastical and urgently relevant.

The novel succeeds brilliantly in its portrayal of workplace culture as a form of modern evil, making the corporate setting feel as dangerous and compelling as any mythological labyrinth. Rising's decision to make her protagonist a software engineer rather than a traditional fantasy hero creates opportunities for unique problem-solving approaches and grounds the supernatural elements in recognizable contemporary reality.

"The First Liar" establishes Rising as an author who masterfully balances entertainment with substance, creating a debut that exceeds genre expectations while offering meaningful commentary on contemporary life. The book's rich mythological framework and compelling character development suggest tremendous potential for future installments, making this an essential read for anyone seeking urban fantasy with both heart and intelligence.

The novel represents a significant achievement in contemporary fantasy literature, demonstrating the kind of literary ambition and cultural awareness that marks Rising as a major new voice in the genre. "The First Liar" offers readers a perfect blend of ancient wisdom and modern insight, establishing M.C. Rising as an author whose future works will undoubtedly continue to push boundaries and explore new territory in mythological fiction.

For fans of mythology, urban fantasy, or contemporary fiction with supernatural elements, "The First Liar" delivers a compelling and thoroughly satisfying reading experience that will leave readers eagerly anticipating Rising's next work.
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29 reviews8 followers
May 10, 2025
• I received an ARC for this book from Netgalley and the publisher in exchange for my honest review and I appreciate both your work and commitment to this project. The following opinion is my own and holds no major spoilers.

The First Liar
MC Rising
Rating: 1/5 (DNF 10%)

I hate DNFing ARCs that I get for review but I suffered extensively through the 10% of the book I managed to read.

Every single person in this story it’s absolutely gorgeous, flawless and physically attractive while the action scene was so confusing that I had to read it twice to understand what was actually happening. The FMC that was shown as indecisive and a pushover in the first pages out of nowhere decides to banter and hop in a car with an unknown man less than ten pages afterwards, changing her personality in a 180º arc.

But the worst part - and this is where I realize someone made their research or not - there was a guy stitching a dog bite on her arm (which we don’t because it’s an infectious wound), with no anesthetics (at least there wasn’t a description of one) and “His touch was so gentle that she barely felt the pinch of his needle. He’d done this before.”, she thought.

Girl, a needle through your skin hurts like hell, no matter how many times you or that person did that before.

Unfortunately this reads like a draft of a bad harem fanfiction and I’m definitely not up for it.
18 reviews
June 9, 2025
Got the arc from Net Galley, made it about 20% through

Had a really interesting premise but the prose was pretty horrible and overall the writing needed a lot more love and care
I was not enthusiastic about this main character, simply not a fun or interesting person to follow
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152 reviews5 followers
April 7, 2025
Thank you to NetGalley, the publisher, and the author for providing me with an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review.
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"Legendary beasts. Heroes returned from the afterlife. Prophecy, fate, destiny, and now gods."

The story throws together an odd collection of characters chasing after mythological beings - “Monsters”. It is kind of tongue-n-cheek Percy Jackson meets a parody of American Gods. I couldn’t decide if this was supposed to be cozy supernatural or YA fantasy.
"Tell me, how do you feel about road trips, jiu-jitsu, and ghost stories?"
- Roy's recruiting pitch

The story begins with mousy Tori, who can’t stand up for herself. She has the epitome of the misogynistic boss, James. In the first few pages he basically tells her to smile more and infers that women are better off making sandwiches instead of suggestions. So when James is murdered in a hit and run, you would think she would be relieved. But no, she chases down the culprit. Maybe not the best idea when she finds herself hanging between two streetlights and at his mercy. Luckily, a “muscle-car-hero” enters the fray, saving her life.

This near-death experience surely put things into perspective, right? Ah, that would be a no. Tori decides that if this vigilante is going after the murderer, she is calling shotgun!

Our villain, Orion, isn’t your typical hit and run driver. He’s a mythical bad guy with Hell hounds. Okay, so they are just really big mastiffs that can regenerate - but same thing right? Suddenly, Tori, who is finally being recognized at work, decides to take a sabbatical to join three men she just met to chase monsters. Now if this were Sam & Dean Winchester, I could totally get it. But it’s a young, chain-smoking-rebel-with-a-cause (Vince), a protective senior (Brooks), and an attractive, enigmatic charmer (Roy). In order to be a part of their team, Tori offers up a clue to what Orion is after, and offers herself up as bait.

From here, our cast of characters chase after Orion while also trying to discover what he is up to and how his plans involve the President. Along the way, our ragtag heroes land themselves in life or death situations, while managing to recruit new people along the way. There doesn’t appear to be a plan and they continually fail at getting any closer to discovering Orion’s endgame. But hey, they survive. This is no easy feat given that they are confronted with a new monster and their inevitable demise seemingly in every chapter. Okay, maybe not every chapter, but enough that I'm beginning to lose track of all the monsters.

Two-thirds in, it feels a bit directionless. Chapters end abruptly and then the characters are in totally different situation in the next. Frequently, I thought I must have dosed off and missed something while reading this book. Only to thumb back through the pages and sigh, "Nope, no plausible explanation or leading events given." Even our lead character expresses her confusion...

Tori was beginning to feel like she was watching a soap opera out of order. She hated soap operas."


If you want a light-hearted frolic involving supernatural and mythological beings, then this may be the read for you. For me, it was a rudderless boat on the ocean, drifting aimlessly which prompted the question, "Are we there yet?"
42 reviews
May 22, 2025
While the premise was definitely intriguing, the story itself was often confusing and left me with more questions than answers. I wasn’t sure how everything started, why certain characters were involved, or why these “monsters” were so willing to follow Zeus. Were there others not working for him? And where were the other gods—why didn’t they intervene?

The dream sequences, flashbacks, or alternate world (it wasn’t clear which) were particularly hard to follow, especially since they seemed to bleed into reality but only for specific characters. The pacing also felt uneven—several days would pass in just a few pages, with not much happening besides one character recovering. It took a while to realize the setting was a post-apocalyptic America, which only seemed to matter in Atlanta and NYC. On top of that, the frequent repetition of certain words and the constant use of characters' full names became distracting.

There’s a lot of potential in the concept, but the execution felt a bit flawed to me.
75 reviews1 follower
May 30, 2025
This book was a rollercoaster. Every time I thought I knew what was happening, everything changed. Great read. The characters are great, and you just can't help but love them with all their quirks and flaws.
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17 reviews2 followers
May 17, 2025
Cool concept (kinda like adult Percy Jackson) but I just found it pretty hard to follow. Not my cup of tea but that of course doesn’t mean it won’t be others!
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6 reviews
July 10, 2025
Unfortunately, this was a DNF for me at 20%.

We're first introduced to Tori while she's at work. She makes a proposal to integrate cloud platforms and her sexist boss shuts her down, only to take credit for the idea later. Tori says and does nothing. She appears to be the non-confrontational sort. But, when her boss is murdered, she runs after Orion despite just witnessing a murder. This is really where it falls apart for me. Why does someone, who can't stand up to her boss, have the confidence to chase a monster?

Then when she meets the monster hunters, she wants to join them because, I've no idea why, she is seeking some sort of justice for an asshole boss. She should've said good riddance. I've seen other reviews mention she had brother she'd lost mysteriously. Maybe mention this earlier?

Anyway, the inconsistent characterization was jarring and made me not trust Tori. I found myself just not caring anymore.

I think it would have been more compelling if her boss was a good boss. Imagine Tori's entire workplace is kind of sexist, but her boss is her champion. He sticks up for her and pushes her towards success. When she witnesses his murder, she has lost someone important and comes out of her shell to seek justice. There'd be character development early on and we'd have more reason to root for her.

Anyway, thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for the ARC.
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7 reviews
April 3, 2025
If you like a heavy dose of monsters, gods and Greek mythology following an epic adventure then The First Liar is for you.

It follows a group of unlikely friends battling to stop villains before the world is forever changed focusing on relationships and dynamics between the characters and monsters without any real romance.

The book is jam packed with characters and tales of monsters so get ready to emerge yourself in all things gods and monsters.

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6 reviews
April 3, 2025
THE FIRST LIAR pulls you in with strong characters that actually make you feel something and keeps you hooked with the action. Tori goes from a bored software engineer to a total badass, and Vince totally has issues. In a fun way. If you’re into epics with flawed humans you can’t help but root for, this one’s a must-read.

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1,520 reviews693 followers
September 19, 2025
3.7 stars

I received this book for free, this does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review

“I don't care if you tag along, but I'm warning you. You might not be able to tag back out.”
Tori buckled her seat belt.


From the moment Tori sees her boss killed in a hit and run and she tries to chase after the driver, she finds herself thrown into a world of monsters and the hunters that chase them. With some tv show Supernatural, a lot of mythology (mostly Greek), and real historical events and figures, The First Liar takes you on a ride full of mystery, emotions, and battles. Told mostly from our twenty-something software engineer bored with her day job in Atlanta, Tori mourns the loss of her brother while feeling she's meant for something greater. When she meets up with a younger guy, Vincent, who gets his own povs more in the second half, she gets brought into a world that only a few knew about.

There was so much more to Greek mythology than its heroes and villains.

The story works to keep the players true identities hidden as long as possible, Vincent's “parents” Roy and Brooks, who rescued Vincent when he was a boy and taught him how to fight, are two men who always seem to know more than they're telling. Tori learns from them that around fifty years ago, someone or something seems to have awoken mythological beings and they're now running amok. Roy, Brooks, and Vincent have been fighting them and trying to piece together a puzzle of what their main plan seems to be. Orion, Narcissus, Asterius, are seen the most but there are numerous other mythological characters you'll recognize throughout.

“After all this is over.”

The first half's pace is slower as, along with Tori, the reader gets some introduction to a world that exists in the shadows. This is also set in the future (I think I worked out the year to be 2046) and climate change with political upheaval has taken it's toll on the United States. Tori's feeling like she's stuck in life, grief over brother, societal issues, along with Vincent's unresolved trauma from his childhood, will have you feeling for the characters. There's a little romance with Tori getting drawn to Roy and a character that comes in later, Grace, slowly penetrates Vincent's wall around himself. You'll get to feel like you'll know Tori, Vincent, and Grace but Roy and Brooks remained a little too distance for me; it serves the plot but I just personally wanted to know them more.

So she couldn't let this be a happy ending. Or a sad one.
It had to be a new beginning.


The second half really brings in answers and action, almost too fast and furious the last fifteen percent as battle after battle is raged. I really enjoyed the melding of real historical events (Atlanta building fires), mythology themes and characters, and supernatural elements; made for an interesting and fun story. There's an ending but it felt more like a closing chapter with room for our group to definitely go and fight more battles, it is alluded to there are more on the horizon. Interesting, chaotic at times, characters that will intrigue you, and a story that was emotional and fun. If looking for something different, definitely give this one a go, especially during the spooky fall season.
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90 reviews27 followers
July 24, 2025
3.5 stars

The First Liar is a fast-paced blend of urban fantasy and Greek mythology, delivering an adventure that's equal parts witty, heartfelt, and action-packed.

The story opens with Tori, a software engineer whose life is turned upside down when she witnesses her boss’s murder. From this moment on, her life spins into chaos. She’s rescued by Vince, a part-time monster hunter with a rebellious streak, who rescues and sweeps her a whole new hidden world on a quest to stop mythological villains from wreaking havoc on the modern world.

I really LOVE this concept and the story but the execution wasn't what I expected.

The story is packed with mystery, morally gray characters, and a mythology infused plot that doesn’t hold back on the twists. The humour was one of my favourite parts.

I loved the characters! Especially, Tori! I enjoyed watching her character evolve from awkward new to the hidden world to someone who embraces the chaos around her. Her slightly awkward transition into this monster hunting world felt realistic and relatable. I loved that it made her feel human.

The concept of ancient Greek villains resurfacing in modern times was a cool twist. It gave me Lore and The Lightning Thief vibes.

Despite loving a lot of things and the premise having potential, the execution felt a little uneven? The writing was a little clunky at times, and I struggled to stay emotionally invested at times. As well as the pacing not flowing very smoothly. Some scenes felt rushed while others dragged on. I found myself wanting more worldbuilding and having clearer character motivations... Like I'm not sure what Tori was thinking when she decided to jump headfirst into a new world with a stranger after witnessing the very traumatic death of her boss. It was just a little weird? But also so intriguing in a way that I wanted to know more.

Overall, I enjoyed parts of the story, it was captivating and had a lot of potential. The First Liar offers a mythology, action packed high-stakes story with a dash of humour. And although I had some issues, I can see a lot of mythology fans loving it!
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93 reviews2 followers
April 14, 2025
Thank you to the author and the publisher for the free ebook arc received through Netgalley

This book was my first dnf in a long time, as I DNF’ed at 33%

The First Liar is about Tori, a software engineer that gets thrown into a world of monsters and monster hunters when she witnesses her boss’ death.

And while I loved the idea for this story, the writing is just tough to get into.
The story is extremely telling, to the point where it reads like a first draft almost. The characters become flat and the worldbuilding messy, because we are told everything that’s happening instead of seeing them.
I really believe there is a great world somewhere in that book, but you just can’t find it.

The main character is protected by some pretty heavy plot armor, and quite annoying imo. She fully believes she ‘has trained for monster hunting’ after training for a month, and actually gets annoyed that a person who has years of experience wins every time they spar? Like girl, get a grip on reality.
As for the other characters, I couldn’t tell you their personalities. There’s the one we’ve been told drinks, the one we’ve been told is barely there and the one we’ve been told that heals. But because we’re are not shown these interactions, it is difficult to actually feel empathy for any of these characters, the main character included.

Overall, 1/5 stars because there is great idea buried in there, the book just needed some edits to make the writing more engaging.

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12 reviews
May 31, 2025
The First Liar is a dynamic fusion of urban fantasy and Greek mythology, delivering a fast-paced adventure filled with wit and heart.

The story follows Tori Jaecar, a disillusioned software engineer whose mundane life takes a dramatic turn when she witnesses her boss's murder. Rescued by the enigmatic Vince Lenoir, a part-time monster hunter, Tori is thrust into a hidden world where ancient Greek villains have resurfaced in modern America. Together, they embark on a perilous journey to prevent these legendary adversaries from plunging humanity back into chaos.

Rising's narrative is rich with humor and action, balancing intense battles with moments of levity. Tori's evolution from a grieving sister to a determined heroine is both compelling and relatable. The camaraderie between characters adds depth, while the absence of a central romance allows the plot to focus on personal growth and friendship.

For fans of mythology-infused tales like Percy Jackson, this novel offers a refreshing take with its blend of contemporary settings and classical lore. While some may find the plethora of mythological references dense, the engaging storytelling ensures a captivating read.

Overall, The First Liar is a commendable debut that promises more thrilling escapades in its anticipated sequels.
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48 reviews
May 25, 2025
🌻 I was able to get approved for an ARC of this book in NetGalley, so I would like to thank both the author as well as the publisher for trusting me with a copy. My review below is my own personal opinion, so please feel free to still check out the book once it comes out to form your own opinions.


DNF'd at 8% unfortunately.

If one can see my highlights on this book it would primarily be me asking "what the heck is going on?" or pointing out how contradicting everyone is already considering that I'm only at the start of the book.

FMC literally has no sense of survival, and the men... it made me feel like I was going through the start of Twilight in a way--with Bella meeting Carlisle and the others? Yeah, that.

Like I mentioned earlier, this is purely my take on this book, and trust me, I TRIED to pick it back up every time I put it down, and love it, but I thought to myself if I would be able to sit through having a FMC like this, and unfortunately, the answer was no.

I will give it 2 stars as I loved how free-flowing the author's writing style is, which is always a win for me.
223 reviews2 followers
July 26, 2025
I feel like this book had the bones of a really interesting story, but I found the read a bit difficult because it seemed to jump around and felt disjointed quite a bit. Even the characters didn't feel like they stayed the same ... not that characters can't evolve and change as the book moves along, but it felt like they would jump from being very meek and mild to suddenly super brave and reckless and tough, then back to meek and insecure again. I found it a bit disorienting, and it felt like there was a lot of stuff in their pasts that was constantly alluded to, but never really explained that much, so it could be confusing.

I expected to like it a lot more than I did, and I found it a bit hard to get into, although there were parts that were very well written and flowed, other parts just did not, at least for me.

Thank you to LibraryThing and the publisher for this book in exchange for an honest review.
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54 reviews3 followers
August 31, 2025
Thank you to NetGalley, Running Wild Press, and MC Rising for giving me the opportunity to read this book ahead of publishing.

The premise of The First Liar really grabbed me. A software engineer caught up in a hidden world of monster hunters and Greek mythology sounded so fun and unique, and it’s what made me excited to pick this one up.

Once I got into it, though, the execution didn’t fully land for me. The pacing felt a little rushed at times, and the writing style leaned choppy, which made it harder for me to connect with the characters or get fully pulled into the world. There were definitely some cool ideas, but I just found myself wishing the story slowed down a bit to let them breathe.

That said, I think readers who enjoy fast-paced, high-energy urban fantasy with mythological twists will still find a lot to like here. It just wasn’t quite the right fit for my reading tastes.
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111 reviews10 followers
June 16, 2025
The First Liar had all the elements of a story I should’ve loved—secrets, morally gray characters, and an atmosphere thick with tension. But unfortunately, it just didn’t work for me. The concept had potential, but the execution fell flat. The writing style felt a bit clunky, and I struggled to connect with either the characters or the plot.

I kept waiting for that moment when everything would click, but it never quite came. The pacing felt uneven, and the worldbuilding and emotional depth didn’t feel fully developed. I wanted to be gripped by the twists and betrayals, but instead I felt mostly detached.

That said, I can see how others might enjoy the mind games and mysterious tone—it just wasn’t my cup of tea.
Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC - this review is left on my own accord and all thoughts and opinions are my own.
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21 reviews
June 29, 2025
We first meet Tori at her software engineer job where everything seems normal until her boss is murdered in front of her.
Tori meets Vince, a part time monster hunter, after he saves her. They set off on an epic quest and come across villains inspired by Greek Mythology that threaten all of the human race.

This book had a lot of elements I enjoy in a good story. There was plenty of mystery, some morally grey characters and a lot of tension. This book was also a rollercoaster of events, and it kept me guessing up until the very end.

Thank you to Netgalley for the E-Arc, Rize and Running Wild press!

3.5 stars, rounded up to 4 on Goodreads
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4 reviews
March 29, 2025
Attacked by a myth absolutely killed me. Definitely good comedy which I love in a book especially fantasy because it helps keep the casual fun too. Tori is definitely a girl that's had this desire to fight since forever and I love to see how well she gets into it plus I love the slightly awkward stages. If you love a slice of comedy and a slice of fantasy this is definitely the type you'd love. It's a great read, not for me in the long run but fantastic for mythology lovers like fans of percy like myself, I'd recommend it for sure so please give it a go!
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September 2, 2025
She believes she has made it even though she hate those around her. Her boss is killed in front of her and is saved by a monster hunter. Life is about to change as she gets pulled into stopping the old gods from bringing back their times. See where they will lead you
I received an advance copy from hidden gems and a great action packed read
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6 reviews
July 30, 2025
I liked this book a lot. There were a few twists throughout that I couldn’t have predicted that kept my interest in the story. I also liked how complex some of the characters morals were. Thank you to netgalley and the publisher for this arc.
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November 25, 2025
The book started off very interesting and full of action and then it skidded to a halt and turned into a romantic drama that dragged on chapter after chapter. I finally gave up on this book about half-way through as it wasn't drawing me back to it.
1 review
June 10, 2025
The first liar was an amazing book. 10 out of 10
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