DNF’d at 43%
This felt so slow to me. Almost the halfway point and they’re still staying away from each other. No spice yet,
The FMC is insipid. She’s timid. She’s painfully shy. If you jumped out and said “Boo!” She’d probably be in a corner crying. She has one friend. One.
Yrs, she had a nearly fatal accident while figure skating with her then partner. This happened at 20. She hasn’t been on the ice since then. Her brother is overly protective of her forbids her from going on the ice. Which, I get. The trauma from almost losing your only family member would do that.
Instead of communicating with him, she asks his best friend to help her relearn the basics behind his back.
Of course he says “yes” and then later uses the fact she’s hiding it to get her to drink with him in exchange for a book. That felt weird to me.
Sure, it was supposed to be this lightheaded thing, where he loosened her up some, in order to get to know her better. Yes, at the end, he just gave her orange juice and some fruity syrup instead of the watered down shots he gave her before. It still felt kind of icky. Why are you blackmailing her to do something, even if it’s innocent, when her brother would be more mad at you for helping her do the thing he forbade her?
I’m honestly so bored with this book. He’s apparently God’s gift to women and she’s a frumpy mouse who has no idea how beautiful she actually is.
She’s been away to college for 2 years. I have questions about that. How old is she now? If she was 20 when she had her accident,was she enrolled in college before? How long was she out for recovery from her accident?
Supposedly, her partner’s ice skate blade cut through her femoral artery and she almost bled out. I would imagine that would take a significant amount of recovery time. Not just from the surgery, but possibly also physical therapy,etc. What kind of degree did she even get?
If she is 22, how was she able to finish her degree in 2 years, if she was out for a significant amount for recovery? Or did she just have the accident and she was right back in class?
These are the things I think about because the book itself is so boring. Apparently, she’s had a crush on the MMC for years. She’s never had another boyfriend, which he is delighted to learn. Because of course she’s a virgin. She didn’t try anything with the MMC because he is best friends and teammates with her brother.
The MMC supposedly also had a thing for her for a long time, but couldn’t act on it because not only is her brother his best friend, but also his team captain and partner in multiple businesses.
It felt like “let’s throw every possible reason why I can’t touch her, but I still will” into the book.
Not only could this possibly blow up his friendship with her brother, but also their professional sports team and every business venture they are partners in. What more could the author have added? If it went wrong, he could lose everything. Of course, none of that is really brought up outside of she’s his best friend’s younger sister.
I don’t even want to continue this. The characters are uninspired. MMC: Cocky. A player, incredibly handsome, rich, a celebrity. FMC: young, introvert, painfully shy, doesn’t like to go out, woefully unaware of how every man wants her when they see her, because she’s that beautiful. Don’t forget extremely humble and inexperienced.
I’m giving it 2 stars because the base idea was good,but the execution was sorely lacking. You could say that it didn’t stick the landing