Boy, I've got a lot to say about this book. I was so excited for a suspense/crime/murder mystery fire department story, but that just wasn't it. First of all, it felt like a debut, because it wanted to be too much at the same time for less than 300 pages (tho I honestly was glad it wasn't more) - but it's like the 40th book by the author. There's a series of arson, which our MC seems to be connected to, and the other MC works for the - I actually don't know if it's the Police department or the fire department?? - and is psychologically trained to analyse these patterns. So far so good, of course it's not only a thriller/mystery, it's also a love story. But we don't get to know the characters at all. We don't get a feel for them and their relationship, it seems like insta love without any logical indication- so I just didn't get to root for them at all. They just were irrelevant somehow, and that's sad, because not even the danger in the finale really touched me, because I just didn't care about the characters - or I even found them irritating, more on that later. The suspense part of the book was honestly the only thing keeping me reading it, and that was sprinkled with SO many illogical things (also, more on that later, I took a lot of notes), that it also didn't really keep me interested. The "who" and also the "why" were solved too soon, so it really only was an action showdown we were walking towards, without any big revelations or plot twists. And still there are questions pending, like was it really an accident, the way the dad died, what the f*ck was the Harrison case, it's just not plotted really cleverly. And now to the things that bothered me in detail (potential spoilers ahead):
There were a lot of minor illogical things, but in such an amount that it really bothered me. For example talking about water currents in a pool, the fire department staff training SWIMMING while on duty, so they have to get out of the pool and into their uniforms until they can get to the EMERGENCY (Or is that a thing in the US? In Germany they might use a gym or play football or something on duty, but not swimming??), they switched pronouns from they to he and back talking about the suspect without the information changing, they talked about a shift change happening while working and still the MC hops onto the next fire truck even tho his shift obviously ended, the life of one MC is literally in danger and they do NOTHING about it?! No security at home, none at the station,... Related to this is also the MC being totally stubborn like "stopping meant letting him win and I wasn't ready for that", like don't you have a basic survival instinct??
They didn't use a condom for their first time without talking about it (but the c*m dropped out of him), also there was the legendary line "as we reached the peak of our orgasms", like what is an orgasm if not the peak?
In the dark, the MC first sees a cut open wetsuit and THEN something burning besides it.
What bugged me the most and I almost threw my Kindle at the wall, was a flat burning and one MC still entering it without any protective gear and talking about how the smoke feels in his lungs - LITERALLY THREE TO FIVE BREATHS OF SMOKE ARE DEADLY. And then he says he put the fire out with a fire extinguisher (even tho the ceiling was also burning already, so it didn't feel realistic), and a few minutes later they are outside and are watching the flames - so did he put it out or didn't he?!
Also at the final triathlon, the MC stopped on the bike course half a mile in front of the transition zone and he says "Close enough to run, even on legs already burning from fifty miles of pushing the cycling pace" - but a triathlon is ALWAYS swimming - cycling - running. So even without the incident stopping him from finishing the cycling course, he would have to run at least 5 kilometres after the cycling course?
And then the epilogue again felt like a debut, because the MCs are talking about what happened over the past year, so the reader can get the information, but it just seems so unnatural, because why would they talk about that if they LIVED together this past year.
Great potential, but the author definitely needs alpha-/beta readers. But even without all the mistakes it probably wouldn't have been a 5 star book for me, because I prefer the perpetrator not being known at around 50% and then it only being an action showdown, but that's personal and others may love that.
Disclaimer: I received a free ARC, left this review voluntarily and it features my honest opinion.