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Knot a Game

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She’s the wallflower Omega nobody notices… until she steps into the locker room filled with Alphas who see her for who she really is.

Most people look straight through me—just the shy journalist tagging along behind her camera and notepad, trying to hold it together in an Alpha-dominated world. But then I meet three impossibly strong, sinfully gorgeous hockey players. Finn with his smirking confidence, Matteo with his sweet, steady warmth, and Ryder, whose silent intensity vibrates with every flick of his gaze.

They should be the stars of my newest sports exposé, not the men tempting me to surrender my heart (and my heat) in one fell swoop. My body, however, seems to have other ideas the moment I catch their scents. Suddenly, all my careful professional boundaries melt away into a swirl of knotting urges and playful nips that promise more than just a casual fling.

I’ve always been overlooked, but they insist they want me—no cameras, no scripts, no illusions. Just a roiling, blistering need to claim me as theirs. My journalistic instincts say it’s too good to be true. But my Omega side? She’s already begging to be in their arms.

Prepare for possessive Alphas, scorching nights, and an Omega discovering that sometimes being wanted means giving in to the pack she never expected.

218 pages, Kindle Edition

Published February 9, 2025

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Lynn Munda

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165 reviews
August 8, 2025
I really wanted to enjoy this story, but the execution left me frustrated and confused. The timeline is jumpy and inconsistent, the worldbuilding is vague—especially for an Omegaverse book—and events often contradict one another or feel randomly inserted with no setup.

From the start, the pacing is all over the place. Chapter 1 begins two weeks before a tournament, with a few practices mentioned. Then suddenly we’re at departure with little warning. By Chapter 2, the characters refer to events that never happened. Chapter 3 ends with Sloane alone in her hotel room, falling asleep—only for Chapter 4 to open with her arriving at the hotel again and discovering she doesn’t have a room. It’s hard to track where we are, who is present, or when things are happening.

Even smaller details feel off. Sloane’s alarm goes off in the middle of the night or early morning for an interview, but she just turns it off and goes back to sleep. There’s no indication of what time it is, and scenes like this feel disconnected from any internal rhythm or logic.

The inconsistencies keep piling up: in Chapter 3, five people are in the van (Ryder, Finn, Mateo, Sloane, and the driver). But in Chapter 4, there’s suddenly a coach with them. Then the whole team is at the lodge? And somehow the rival team is there too, with zero explanation? It feels like scenes were revised or reshuffled without smoothing the transitions, leaving jarring gaps.

The worldbuilding is especially weak given the Omegaverse setting. The story directly references the Omegaverse—as in, literally says “in the omegaverse, anything can happen”—but doesn’t actually establish how things work in this version of that world. There’s no clarity around dynamics, instincts, or social rules, which makes major plot moments feel unearned and unrealistic.

That becomes a major problem during the heat scene. Sloane, an unclaimed omega, goes into heat while stuck in a loft—an open space—with a lodge full of stranded strangers. Logically, every alpha nearby should sense her distress, and genre norms suggest some kind of protective or possessive response. But that tension never materializes in a believable way. It feels like a setup for chaos without consequences, and it broke the immersion completely.

By Chapter 4, I had to stop. The story felt like it was being made up as it went along, with events added to push the plot forward rather than growing naturally from the world or characters. There’s definitely an interesting idea underneath it all, but it needed much tighter editing, stronger continuity, and actual world rules to make it work.
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April 7, 2025
DNF at 16%

Honestly, the way this book was writing is lacking... it's very choppy in that there is no lead up to anything, like if it was all just being checked off in order from bullet points. Like at one point she just met the alphas and then a few pages later she's stating how Finn almost kissed her the week before, which was very random and would have been more advantageous to actually show the lead up of a relationship with that rather than brush it aside. The FMC is supposedly a quite shy wallflower but then simultaneously thinks very highly of herself, like by the second chapter she claims that all 3 alphas are jealous of each other vying for her attention. Also, I really hated the perpetual point of bringing up that as an omega she was suffocated by the Alpha energy, and how she had to fight against it regularly, as if literally any contact with an alpha would do that not just the 3 men who would have an affect on her (so it's not really anything special).

Overall, it's a pass from me
24 reviews
March 2, 2025
Well I didn't finish the book for one. The continuity sucks. The almost kiss? When did that happen? He gave her his coat. Again it's like pages are missing.
And I like a good cover picture & this one says lazy to me.
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