Obeying Daddy - Part One: A Daddy Daughter Mind Control Story

by Neve Nox

18-year-old Alexa is on thin ice after her latest screw-up. So she’s shocked when Daddy gifts her a choker necklace. Soon, poor Alexa learns there’s a catch when Daddy uses the choker to control her body. Daddy demands total obedience. And it begins with Alexa naked, and her legs spread wide against her will. ~ Part 1/3 of a dark daddy daughter dubcon incest mind control serial.

ebook

Published June 3, 2021

About the author

I write forbidden and taboo age gap romance. My books feature morally grey heroes, sweet heroines, sizzling scenes, and a dash of suspense. Find my books at: https://nevenox.com

I also write dark and taboo short stories which are only available on Smashwords. You can find them on my publisher website: https://theoxgirls.com/nevenox

Reviews

[Kursed Reads · Rating 2 out of 5]

There is no plot. Don't look for one. If you’re looking for a taboo, one-handed read, this might flick your bean. The writing is a bit stilted and awkward, but it serves the purpose. The purpose: see above.

[Kimmylongtime · Rating 5 out of 5]

The audiobooks for these became available in Google books and I hopped right on it. Nikki diamond is in so we are re-reading and listening to the whole series again. I love the dominant older man trope with a little submission.

[♥ I’d Rather Be Reading ♥ · Rating 3 out of 5]

- FMC: Alexa
- MMC: Daddy
- POVs Included: Single Female POV (Alexa)

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SUMMARY: (SPOILER WARNING)

Alexa has made some mistakes in her life. But most recently she managed to get kicked out of college.

Now her dad has a punishment planned for her that she doesn't expect. A punishment that involves her total obedience thanks to a special choker he had made for her.

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REVIEW:

I've only read a handful of mind-control themed erotica and it's not necessarily something I seek out. But I am working my way through Neve Nox's stuff because I enjoy her stories so I picked this series up too.

In Part 1 we have everything setup and are just getting started with things. So only a bit happens, but it's still pretty steamy.

I will say I would've loved more of an explanation from her dad about his motives and reason for going this route? Has he wanted her before or is this simply a punishment for him? Just would love to know the background more.

Still, overall a pretty steamy start and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in Part 2.

[Kim B · Rating 4 out of 5]

start of the series - mind control.
dad daughter

[Ashley · Rating 3 out of 5]

Quick short read. Part 1 to a 3 part series. Taboo daddy/daughter relations, mind control. Story is in 3rd person, IMO that's the only downside to it.

[Greeneyes Belle28 · Rating 5 out of 5]

Father Daughter Incest.
Hot and steady read.

[Pam · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great story. I only wish it could be true!! I still have an issue with the incest -so in my mind it's a step-dad - so that makes the book hotter for me!

[LiLu · Rating 3 out of 5]

Part one. It has potential, and part 1 was an ok set up for the rest.

[dina · Rating 2 out of 5]

So shortttt