Obeying Daddy - Part One: A Daddy Daughter Mind Control Story

by Neve Nox

18-year-old Alexa is on thin ice after her latest screw-up. So she’s shocked when Daddy gifts her a choker necklace. Soon, poor Alexa learns there’s a catch when Daddy uses the choker to control her body. Daddy demands total obedience. And it begins with Alexa naked, and her legs spread wide against her will. ~ Part 1/3 of a dark daddy daughter dubcon incest mind control serial.

ebook

Published June 3, 2021

About the author

Neve Nox writes dark and dirty age gap stories. Her books feature dominant, morally grey men claiming sweet, sometimes naive women by any means, sizzling scenes, and suspenseful themes. If you like taboo, she writes that too, but those stories are only available on select stores. Find all her books at: https://theoxgirls.com.

Reviews

[Kursed Reads · Rating 2 out of 5]

There is no plot. Don't look for one. If you’re looking for a taboo, one-handed read, this might flick your bean. The writing is a bit stilted and awkward, but it serves the purpose. The purpose: see above.

[Kimmylongtime · Rating 5 out of 5]

The audiobooks for these became available in Google books and I hopped right on it. Nikki diamond is in so we are re-reading and listening to the whole series again. I love the dominant older man trope with a little submission.

[♥ I’d Rather Be Reading ♥ · Rating 3 out of 5]

- FMC: Alexa
- MMC: Daddy
- POVs Included: Single Female POV (Alexa)

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SUMMARY: (SPOILER WARNING)

Alexa has made some mistakes in her life. But most recently she managed to get kicked out of college.

Now her dad has a punishment planned for her that she doesn't expect. A punishment that involves her total obedience thanks to a special choker he had made for her.

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REVIEW:

I've only read a handful of mind-control themed erotica and it's not necessarily something I seek out. But I am working my way through Neve Nox's stuff because I enjoy her stories so I picked this series up too.

In Part 1 we have everything setup and are just getting started with things. So only a bit happens, but it's still pretty steamy.

I will say I would've loved more of an explanation from her dad about his motives and reason for going this route? Has he wanted her before or is this simply a punishment for him? Just would love to know the background more.

Still, overall a pretty steamy start and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in Part 2.

[Kim B · Rating 4 out of 5]

start of the series - mind control.
dad daughter

[Ashley · Rating 3 out of 5]

Quick short read. Part 1 to a 3 part series. Taboo daddy/daughter relations, mind control. Story is in 3rd person, IMO that's the only downside to it.

[Greeneyes Belle28 · Rating 5 out of 5]

Father Daughter Incest.
Hot and steady read.

[Pam · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great story. I only wish it could be true!! I still have an issue with the incest -so in my mind it's a step-dad - so that makes the book hotter for me!

[LiLu · Rating 3 out of 5]

Part one. It has potential, and part 1 was an ok set up for the rest.

[dina · Rating 2 out of 5]

So shortttt