3/5*
I'm giving this 3 out of 5 ONLY for the story itself. I liked that Sebastian and Paisley were both at the same level and that they had good communication for what their expectations were. It was endearing to watch them figure it out together. Both main characters thought very highly of each other but not so highly of themselves. This was my first ever story that was set in Canada so that was a little different for me, but for the most part I still enjoyed the setting. Sebastian has a French accent and Paisley is totally a sucker for it, I liked how he would use that to his advantage when trying to flirt with her. The characters are in their early twenties and in college but there were many things that made it read more like high school than college I felt. I did however have some issues with this one as a whole.
For one, there was a LOT of unnecessary details given, details are definitely needed in a story, but these did nothing to add to the story or even the scene really and it just made things drag on. An example: There is a scene where Sebastian is in the kitchen of the bakery with his sister, and there is a good amount of detail and an overabundance of detail in the same scene. The good detail...."'I don't know', I reply, screwing up the sizing of a macaroon. I groan in frustration, wiping the messy batter away with a paper towel"...good detail, paints the picture, flows nicely. The over done detail...."Margaux sets her piping bag down. She's icing the mini carrot cakes we made earlier. They're filled with a cream cheese buttercream and candied walnut filling. The icing on top is also cream cheese buttercream mixed with shredded carrots"...way too much and unnecessary. The start of this scene shows that he is deep in thought and flustered about the situation, the end of this scene adds nothing but the fact that the cupcakes sound good, but why do we care about that?
Another issue for me was the amount of political talk. I respect that the author wanted to write about her beliefs, but they were placed in spots that they had absolutely no reason to be in. They did not add to the story at all and felt extremely preachy. In my opinion, I read for enjoyment and to escape reality, I don't want to read about politics, if I did, I'd read a non-fiction book. An example for this one that was over done is she has the FMC mention in several different ways (to herself, to her friend, to the MMC) that "[virginity is false and is based on the patriarchy]" (or something along those words). Once would be understandable but she says it THREE separate times, way to much and makes it very fake feeling. The other major one that was annoying to me was a global warming conversation between the FMC and her best friend that literally had ZERO reason to be there. It just takes you out of the scene in your head.
The final major thing that I did not enjoy so much about this book was that by the end, the main conflict of the story was not very believable and it felt very rushed compared to the over abundance of details at the beginning of the book. The pace was good throughout for the most part until close to the end and then it ramped up and was over the next thing you know.