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Pseudo-Immortals: The Novel
What if aging was cured?
Would 200-year housing loans be a thing?
Would purposeful aging be the next hot fashion trend?
Would people postpone their dreams now that they had all the time in the world?
Travel to the near future of transhumanist Sheila Patel as we venture through her life as a Pseudo-Immortal Vintage who desperately attempts to challenge existentialism on the daily (a feeling which unfortunately will never be cured even in the possible future).
With possible death in sight, she navigates through a myriad of intrusive thoughts until they ultimately land her in the high-action, eye darkening, vein-popping adventure she didn’t know she needed…
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Great for readers who are seeking to branch out to the Sci-fi genre, Pseudo-immortals is a light, action-packed English novel featuring transhumanists Sheila Patel and Flynn Murr as they launch themselves into an investigation to seek justice for the people they love. Sprinkled with humor, romance and all things tech in the near future, prepare to be put at the edge of your seats (it had better be a comfy one), aggressive page-flipping, and sipping cooled teas that were meant to be hot. Are you ready to hop on this ride through the world of genetics, annoying limitations of AI and absolvable crime? Buckle up.
Would 200-year housing loans be a thing?
Would purposeful aging be the next hot fashion trend?
Would people postpone their dreams now that they had all the time in the world?
Travel to the near future of transhumanist Sheila Patel as we venture through her life as a Pseudo-Immortal Vintage who desperately attempts to challenge existentialism on the daily (a feeling which unfortunately will never be cured even in the possible future).
With possible death in sight, she navigates through a myriad of intrusive thoughts until they ultimately land her in the high-action, eye darkening, vein-popping adventure she didn’t know she needed…
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Great for readers who are seeking to branch out to the Sci-fi genre, Pseudo-immortals is a light, action-packed English novel featuring transhumanists Sheila Patel and Flynn Murr as they launch themselves into an investigation to seek justice for the people they love. Sprinkled with humor, romance and all things tech in the near future, prepare to be put at the edge of your seats (it had better be a comfy one), aggressive page-flipping, and sipping cooled teas that were meant to be hot. Are you ready to hop on this ride through the world of genetics, annoying limitations of AI and absolvable crime? Buckle up.
334 pages, Paperback
Published May 10, 2025
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About the author
Charissa Ong Ty
7 books99 followersCharissa Ong published her first English Poetry and Short Stories book in 2016. #MidnightMonologues is the finalist for the International Book Awards 2017 for both Best Cover Design and Poetry categories. It has also been MPH's Best Books of 2016. Her second book launched in 2018, Daylight Dialogues have also reached the Best-Sellers list.
Her books are now available nationwide in Malaysia, Singapore, and the Philippines, as well as on Amazon in audiobook, ebook, and paperback formats.
She has also released her boxset, Poethree O'Clock which comprises of the hardcover versions of Midnight Monologues, Daylight Dialogues, and an illustrated poem short story 'What Does Your Name Mean?'
Poetry and Short Stories - A Practice Book authored by Charissa launched in 2021, and hit the best sellers list and won the award for best cover design for 2022's International Impact Awards.
My Medicine is her third official poetry book which has also stayed in MPH's International English Fiction Best Sellers list for 25 weeks.
Pseudo-Immortals is her 7th book, but her first novel publishing in May 2025.
Her books are now available nationwide in Malaysia, Singapore, and the Philippines, as well as on Amazon in audiobook, ebook, and paperback formats.
She has also released her boxset, Poethree O'Clock which comprises of the hardcover versions of Midnight Monologues, Daylight Dialogues, and an illustrated poem short story 'What Does Your Name Mean?'
Poetry and Short Stories - A Practice Book authored by Charissa launched in 2021, and hit the best sellers list and won the award for best cover design for 2022's International Impact Awards.
My Medicine is her third official poetry book which has also stayed in MPH's International English Fiction Best Sellers list for 25 weeks.
Pseudo-Immortals is her 7th book, but her first novel publishing in May 2025.
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April 21, 2025
This book marks the debut novel of the author, and it’s quite a bold start. The story centers around Sheila Patel, who is 214 years old when the novel begins. In her futuristic world, lifespans stretch across centuries thanks to technological advancements. But what happens when you live that long? What becomes of purpose, meaning, or even identity? That’s the crux of Sheila’s journey. The decision she makes and the cost of that decision. As the plot unfolds, she discovers a ploy that ties directly into her predicament. Whether or not she succeeds in seeking justice, and at what price, is what drives the rest of the narrative.
First off, I have to say, I loved the cover! It’s modern, sleek, and eye-catching. The design is minimal yet impactful, and even the edges of the book are beautifully done. Huge kudos to the designer, it truly feels like a work of art.
One of the standout moments for me was the ending. It presents an ethical dilemma that I’m still thinking about. What does it really mean to play God? Can a life stretched over centuries ever feel fulfilling, or does it become monotonous? I appreciated that the author chose to leave readers with this question. It left me reflecting long after I’d turned the final page.
The futuristic setting was another highlight. The author did a commendable job of building a world that feels advanced yet eerily possible. With how rapidly technology is evolving, especially AI, I often find myself wondering, how much is too much? Where do we draw the line? This book sparked those exact thoughts, which made the experience feel even more relevant.
Now, about the characters. The central figures are Sheila and Flynn. Personally, I didn’t feel very connected to them. They didn’t fully come alive for me, and I think their development could have gone a bit deeper. Their relationship, in particular, felt a bit forced, like it stemmed more from circumstance than genuine chemistry. It seemed like they leaned on each other during vulnerable moments rather than forming a meaningful bond. Of course, that might have been intentional, but it left me not really rooting for them as a pair.
The pacing was alright. I did manage to finish it in one sitting. It started off a little oddly and dragged in parts, but the second half picked up speed. That said, the ending felt somewhat chaotic and, at times, a bit confusing. I think a little more clarity in the final chapters would have helped tie things together.
As for the antagonist, I felt they lacked impact. The villain didn’t really stand out for me, and I think the story would have benefited from a more cunning or complex adversary. That could have given the protagonists more depth as well. Some of the plot twists were also a bit predictable.
All in all, this book is an intriguing sci-fi debut that dives into themes of longevity, technology, and what it means to be human. If you're into futuristic stories that make you question where we’re headed as a society, this one might just be worth checking out.
I would like to thank the publisher for the arc copy. Wishing good luck for the launch!
First off, I have to say, I loved the cover! It’s modern, sleek, and eye-catching. The design is minimal yet impactful, and even the edges of the book are beautifully done. Huge kudos to the designer, it truly feels like a work of art.
One of the standout moments for me was the ending. It presents an ethical dilemma that I’m still thinking about. What does it really mean to play God? Can a life stretched over centuries ever feel fulfilling, or does it become monotonous? I appreciated that the author chose to leave readers with this question. It left me reflecting long after I’d turned the final page.
The futuristic setting was another highlight. The author did a commendable job of building a world that feels advanced yet eerily possible. With how rapidly technology is evolving, especially AI, I often find myself wondering, how much is too much? Where do we draw the line? This book sparked those exact thoughts, which made the experience feel even more relevant.
Now, about the characters. The central figures are Sheila and Flynn. Personally, I didn’t feel very connected to them. They didn’t fully come alive for me, and I think their development could have gone a bit deeper. Their relationship, in particular, felt a bit forced, like it stemmed more from circumstance than genuine chemistry. It seemed like they leaned on each other during vulnerable moments rather than forming a meaningful bond. Of course, that might have been intentional, but it left me not really rooting for them as a pair.
The pacing was alright. I did manage to finish it in one sitting. It started off a little oddly and dragged in parts, but the second half picked up speed. That said, the ending felt somewhat chaotic and, at times, a bit confusing. I think a little more clarity in the final chapters would have helped tie things together.
As for the antagonist, I felt they lacked impact. The villain didn’t really stand out for me, and I think the story would have benefited from a more cunning or complex adversary. That could have given the protagonists more depth as well. Some of the plot twists were also a bit predictable.
All in all, this book is an intriguing sci-fi debut that dives into themes of longevity, technology, and what it means to be human. If you're into futuristic stories that make you question where we’re headed as a society, this one might just be worth checking out.
I would like to thank the publisher for the arc copy. Wishing good luck for the launch!
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April 27, 2025An ARC was provided in exchange for an honest review. Thank you to the Penwings Publishing team!
The plot of Pseudo Immortals is topical, giving us a glimpse into a future where AI assistants help humans with everything from daily tasks to complex risk assessments and research.
The book touches on several interesting ideas, chiefly revolving around genetic modification, the abuse of power, and social status.
However, despite this being a sci-fi book, there is a lack of thorough world building, or helpful descriptions of the setting beyond the bare minimum. This was exacerbated by glaring inconsistencies.
All the characters used overtly contemporary slang even though the book takes place centuries in the future. The protagonist Sheila is 214 years old, but sounds like a teenager.
Most of the detailed descriptions in the book center around other characters’ appearances or clothes, driving home the impression that Sheila acts and thinks like a self-absorbed teenager.
Is this emphasis on aesthetics a symptom of a society that has been coddled by their all-knowing AI assistants? Sheeple who are constantly marketed to by corporations to buy the latest technology in order to optimize themselves, and preserve their bodies at the age of 30 lest they, god forbid, age?
Who knows. Unfortunately, this theme was not expanded upon.
Plot-wise, the action scenes don’t feel risky, and the stakes don’t feel high because there’s always a tech solution that conveniently comes to the aid of the characters at just the right time.
Additionally, the characters feel one dimensional. There’s no chemistry between the main couple, and their dynamic comes across as heteronormative. Their interactions and conversations are cliche and canned, lifted wholesale from popular romance micro-tropes and memes.
Pseudo Immortals bounces from topic to topic and mashes genres together without taking the time to delve into specific themes and issues.
The beauty of sci fi, and speculative fiction at large, is that it forces the reader to contemplate heavy questions about mortality and humanity.
Unfortunately in this case, the book falls flat, never bothering to follow the lead to the end of the rope, which is a shame because Pseudo Immortals had exciting concepts in need of further exploration.
Ultimately, the book feels more like an Austin Powers movie than a thought-provoking YA sci-fi novel. If only the characters and writing were as intricate as the cover.
The plot of Pseudo Immortals is topical, giving us a glimpse into a future where AI assistants help humans with everything from daily tasks to complex risk assessments and research.
The book touches on several interesting ideas, chiefly revolving around genetic modification, the abuse of power, and social status.
However, despite this being a sci-fi book, there is a lack of thorough world building, or helpful descriptions of the setting beyond the bare minimum. This was exacerbated by glaring inconsistencies.
All the characters used overtly contemporary slang even though the book takes place centuries in the future. The protagonist Sheila is 214 years old, but sounds like a teenager.
Most of the detailed descriptions in the book center around other characters’ appearances or clothes, driving home the impression that Sheila acts and thinks like a self-absorbed teenager.
Is this emphasis on aesthetics a symptom of a society that has been coddled by their all-knowing AI assistants? Sheeple who are constantly marketed to by corporations to buy the latest technology in order to optimize themselves, and preserve their bodies at the age of 30 lest they, god forbid, age?
Who knows. Unfortunately, this theme was not expanded upon.
Plot-wise, the action scenes don’t feel risky, and the stakes don’t feel high because there’s always a tech solution that conveniently comes to the aid of the characters at just the right time.
Additionally, the characters feel one dimensional. There’s no chemistry between the main couple, and their dynamic comes across as heteronormative. Their interactions and conversations are cliche and canned, lifted wholesale from popular romance micro-tropes and memes.
Pseudo Immortals bounces from topic to topic and mashes genres together without taking the time to delve into specific themes and issues.
The beauty of sci fi, and speculative fiction at large, is that it forces the reader to contemplate heavy questions about mortality and humanity.
Unfortunately in this case, the book falls flat, never bothering to follow the lead to the end of the rope, which is a shame because Pseudo Immortals had exciting concepts in need of further exploration.
Ultimately, the book feels more like an Austin Powers movie than a thought-provoking YA sci-fi novel. If only the characters and writing were as intricate as the cover.
April 20, 2025
Pseudo-Immortals had a lot of very interesting stories to tell. Loved the AI world and the convenience of it.
From being sort of a "teenager" stuck in a corporate world and then transitioning to a mother, which led to her being a spy and then in the end becoming a political figure.
It is quite an interesting read and had so much potential if the book was longer. Plus with that epilogue!! It's not all man but ALWAYS A MAN that never respects a woman's wishes 😭.
Secretly wished it was a tad bit longer bcs there were so many things that can be further explained / detailed.
From being sort of a "teenager" stuck in a corporate world and then transitioning to a mother, which led to her being a spy and then in the end becoming a political figure.
It is quite an interesting read and had so much potential if the book was longer. Plus with that epilogue!! It's not all man but ALWAYS A MAN that never respects a woman's wishes 😭.
Secretly wished it was a tad bit longer bcs there were so many things that can be further explained / detailed.
April 27, 2025
intriguing premise with lots of cool tech introduced throughout the story (germline editing, facial disguise tech, consciousness transferral etc.), yet kept accessible for readers new to the scifi genre. the fast-paced story was also really easy to follow and breeze through, with humour and wittiness sprinkled in for that ✨extra character✨ (though i felt it can be toned down a little— why is Sheila mean to her AI!!!)
the author explored themes of good and evil, power and corruption, what it means to be human when you are literally half AI— and i personally would’ve loved for some of the themes to be explored further, with more focus on that and less on the romance (not a fan sorry Flynn i preferred u as an antagonist) bc it felt rather unnatural and “inappropriate”, especially at the time of events (iykyk) i also like my men flawed and flynn is… too good to be true LOL
overall, this was a lighthearted read that is hopeful among a sea of dystopian scifi narratives. give this a shot if you’re looking for a quick YA romance sci-fi read :) not to mention the absolute GORGEOUS cover and sprayed edges. thank you penwings publishing for the ARC and congrats Charissa on your debut novel!
you can now pre-order Pseudo Immortals on Penwings Publishing here: https://penwings.com/product/pre-orde...
the author explored themes of good and evil, power and corruption, what it means to be human when you are literally half AI— and i personally would’ve loved for some of the themes to be explored further, with more focus on that and less on the romance (not a fan sorry Flynn i preferred u as an antagonist) bc it felt rather unnatural and “inappropriate”, especially at the time of events (iykyk) i also like my men flawed and flynn is… too good to be true LOL
overall, this was a lighthearted read that is hopeful among a sea of dystopian scifi narratives. give this a shot if you’re looking for a quick YA romance sci-fi read :) not to mention the absolute GORGEOUS cover and sprayed edges. thank you penwings publishing for the ARC and congrats Charissa on your debut novel!
you can now pre-order Pseudo Immortals on Penwings Publishing here: https://penwings.com/product/pre-orde...
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April 27, 2025This ARC was kindly gifted by Penwings Publishing in exchange for an honest review. Many thanks to the Penwings Publishing team!
First of all, the cover! Kudos to the designing team for coming out with a spectacular cover design. The book's blurb pulls us into anticipating a discussion of a futuristic world where the lifespan of humanity is expanded and possibly makes humans immortal by becoming half-humans, half-machines. This world full of AI robots as companions rather than a workforce sort of tells us how the author might view and hope that AI settles or coexists with humans in the future. Though there are many instances where this could be discussed in the book, even with only two instances of AI companions included in the storyline, we didn't get the chance to see this being discussed. Nor did we have a discussion of existentialism given that humans in this book live circa the late 2900s and early 3000s with a plethora of resources to extend one's lifespan. We are not told what the socioeconomics of humans living their lives past 150 years are or the mundanity of that life having AI as companions and taking care of most daily necessities. The setting is the perfect chance to go on and on about what's the meaning of life and the sorts, but the way the story goes on doesn't bring us to explore these questions.
Possibly, if grief is the main theme of the story, it would be a very good discussion, but as it happened in the book, it became just a plot device to bring the main characters to seek justice for their children (with supposedly a romance subplot as a coping mechanism, but I find that dominates the plot and takes away the chance to talk about the more important themes) and uncover the rivalry between two mega capitalists in their world. However, I find it very interesting that one billionaire was painted to be the 'villain' and the other billionaire sort of stays in the grey area, making him seem like he wants to bring humanity to a better version—transferable—though in actuality, he might just want to milk the revenue until the end of time. The latter 'villain' is the type that we also observe in the present day, billionaires hiding behind philanthropy.
If given the right focus and direction, this book would have been so good at exploring what it seeks to do, which is to discuss immortality and what actual good it will bring to humanity. Overall, I find this to be a very good initiative from our local industry, trying to bring out more books that highlight topics on existentialism, immortality, and ethics. That said, the writing could be strengthened to better support the weight of the ideas being explored.
First of all, the cover! Kudos to the designing team for coming out with a spectacular cover design. The book's blurb pulls us into anticipating a discussion of a futuristic world where the lifespan of humanity is expanded and possibly makes humans immortal by becoming half-humans, half-machines. This world full of AI robots as companions rather than a workforce sort of tells us how the author might view and hope that AI settles or coexists with humans in the future. Though there are many instances where this could be discussed in the book, even with only two instances of AI companions included in the storyline, we didn't get the chance to see this being discussed. Nor did we have a discussion of existentialism given that humans in this book live circa the late 2900s and early 3000s with a plethora of resources to extend one's lifespan. We are not told what the socioeconomics of humans living their lives past 150 years are or the mundanity of that life having AI as companions and taking care of most daily necessities. The setting is the perfect chance to go on and on about what's the meaning of life and the sorts, but the way the story goes on doesn't bring us to explore these questions.
Possibly, if grief is the main theme of the story, it would be a very good discussion, but as it happened in the book, it became just a plot device to bring the main characters to seek justice for their children (with supposedly a romance subplot as a coping mechanism, but I find that dominates the plot and takes away the chance to talk about the more important themes) and uncover the rivalry between two mega capitalists in their world. However, I find it very interesting that one billionaire was painted to be the 'villain' and the other billionaire sort of stays in the grey area, making him seem like he wants to bring humanity to a better version—transferable—though in actuality, he might just want to milk the revenue until the end of time. The latter 'villain' is the type that we also observe in the present day, billionaires hiding behind philanthropy.
If given the right focus and direction, this book would have been so good at exploring what it seeks to do, which is to discuss immortality and what actual good it will bring to humanity. Overall, I find this to be a very good initiative from our local industry, trying to bring out more books that highlight topics on existentialism, immortality, and ethics. That said, the writing could be strengthened to better support the weight of the ideas being explored.
April 26, 2025
This story impressed me with its detailed world-building. Charissa Ong Ty crafted a vivid future with imaginative companies, AI integration, creative and believable naming conventions, and organizational structures that feel fully fleshed out. In my opinion, the background of how technology shapes society is believable and rich, making the world the true highlight of the novel.
Unfortunately, the pacing is inconsistent to me. Some parts drag with little payoff, while major events like hostile takeovers, torture, escapes, and sudden rises to power feel rushed and shallow. These uneven shifts break immersion and make the story feel disjointed, as if critical moments were skipped or compressed without enough development.
The main character, Sheila, is difficult to sympathize with. She is snappy and rude, especially towards her AI, Allie, in the beginning of the book; but then later is much kinder to Allie. Sheila’s sudden decision to have a child feels under-explained and ethically questionable. Her relationship with her daughter Shiva lacks genuine warmth, and despite attempts to show love, Sheila’s personality makes the bond hard to believe. Similarly, Flynn’s attachment to Arnold is underdeveloped, and his outburst at Arnold’s death feels more performative than heartfelt.
What I find slightly unlikeable is the emotional reactions throughout the story. After deaths of their children, the characters pivot quickly into corporate espionage without showing much real grief or rage. Romance should confuse the characters more, but it just feels very underdeveloped. Their plan to go undercover and reclaim power feels procedural, tactical than personal, robbing the plot of deeper emotional stakes. In the end, the depiction of riches, fame, and privilege as a reward for survival and ambition (Flynn for CEO!) also leaves an odd aftertaste.
Finally, the epilogue rushes through what should be a profound theme: immortality versus mortality in the world of bionics, organ (re)growth, etc. Sheila’s decision to “ascend” mirrors endings like The Good Place but lacks the emotional weight or buildup needed to make it impactful. Overall, Pseudo-Immortals is imaginative in concept but struggles with character depth, emotional resonance, and pacing.
I appreciate having received the copy of the book by Penwings Publishing to members of Eat Books Club. Thank you!
Unfortunately, the pacing is inconsistent to me. Some parts drag with little payoff, while major events like hostile takeovers, torture, escapes, and sudden rises to power feel rushed and shallow. These uneven shifts break immersion and make the story feel disjointed, as if critical moments were skipped or compressed without enough development.
The main character, Sheila, is difficult to sympathize with. She is snappy and rude, especially towards her AI, Allie, in the beginning of the book; but then later is much kinder to Allie. Sheila’s sudden decision to have a child feels under-explained and ethically questionable. Her relationship with her daughter Shiva lacks genuine warmth, and despite attempts to show love, Sheila’s personality makes the bond hard to believe. Similarly, Flynn’s attachment to Arnold is underdeveloped, and his outburst at Arnold’s death feels more performative than heartfelt.
What I find slightly unlikeable is the emotional reactions throughout the story. After deaths of their children, the characters pivot quickly into corporate espionage without showing much real grief or rage. Romance should confuse the characters more, but it just feels very underdeveloped. Their plan to go undercover and reclaim power feels procedural, tactical than personal, robbing the plot of deeper emotional stakes. In the end, the depiction of riches, fame, and privilege as a reward for survival and ambition (Flynn for CEO!) also leaves an odd aftertaste.
Finally, the epilogue rushes through what should be a profound theme: immortality versus mortality in the world of bionics, organ (re)growth, etc. Sheila’s decision to “ascend” mirrors endings like The Good Place but lacks the emotional weight or buildup needed to make it impactful. Overall, Pseudo-Immortals is imaginative in concept but struggles with character depth, emotional resonance, and pacing.
I appreciate having received the copy of the book by Penwings Publishing to members of Eat Books Club. Thank you!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 10, 2025
Really interesting premise with lots of intriguing futuristic tech and concepts - some of which may well become our reality in the foreseeable future especially with the use of AI and its convenience.
The story delves somewhat loosely into themes such as mortality/immortality, existentialism, loneliness, what it means to be human in the face of immortality, the benefits and convenience of technology as well as its costs, power & corruption and ultimately, the morality and ethics of it all. Plenty of food for thought, though I wish some of these were further expanded on or explored more deeply to give them greater weight throughout the story.
The pacing was unfortunately a little inconsistent with underdeveloped world-building, exacerbated by the lack of emotional depth in the characters. Bigger emotions such as grief and love felt superficial - it felt like Sheila and Flynn trauma bonded instead - but the romance did make the story more lighthearted. Flynn also felt very one dimensional, and how does one person conveniently have answers for literally everything? I would’ve liked to see him struggle more tbh, the payoff would’ve been so much greater (for Sheila too). The ending and Sheila’s final decision also came somewhat abruptly, as there weren’t any instances leading up to it, unlike how she came to the decision to have Shiva earlier in the book.
Overall, the writing is simplistic and straightforward, making the story really easy to follow; however I do think a little more details and development would've made it a more immersive, thought-provoking read.
That being said, this book may serve as a good introduction to the sci-fi genre without being too hard science-y, and will be perfect for those who are looking for a quick, short and lighthearted read!
Thank you to Penwings Publishing for the ARC!
The story delves somewhat loosely into themes such as mortality/immortality, existentialism, loneliness, what it means to be human in the face of immortality, the benefits and convenience of technology as well as its costs, power & corruption and ultimately, the morality and ethics of it all. Plenty of food for thought, though I wish some of these were further expanded on or explored more deeply to give them greater weight throughout the story.
The pacing was unfortunately a little inconsistent with underdeveloped world-building, exacerbated by the lack of emotional depth in the characters. Bigger emotions such as grief and love felt superficial - it felt like Sheila and Flynn trauma bonded instead - but the romance did make the story more lighthearted. Flynn also felt very one dimensional, and how does one person conveniently have answers for literally everything? I would’ve liked to see him struggle more tbh, the payoff would’ve been so much greater (for Sheila too). The ending and Sheila’s final decision also came somewhat abruptly, as there weren’t any instances leading up to it, unlike how she came to the decision to have Shiva earlier in the book.
Overall, the writing is simplistic and straightforward, making the story really easy to follow; however I do think a little more details and development would've made it a more immersive, thought-provoking read.
That being said, this book may serve as a good introduction to the sci-fi genre without being too hard science-y, and will be perfect for those who are looking for a quick, short and lighthearted read!
Thank you to Penwings Publishing for the ARC!
May 11, 2025
Loved the intricate cover design with the sprayed edges - the more I progress in the story, the more I make sense of the cover illustrations, which was a pretty fun activity!
Appearances aside, the book centers around a futuristic society where humans are pseudo immortal - with replaceable high tech organs resembling robots that extends their lifespan. The characters also all have their own personal AI built into their systems, advising on their life choices. It revolves around the main character, Sheila Patel who has an existential crisis, subsequently deciding to build a baby to find purpose and fulfilment in her life. Things take a dark twist, and shes left to uncover a mystery that turned her life upside down…
The books touches upon few themes: abuse of power, capitalism, technological dependence & grief/loss of loved ones. There were also elements of romance, Flynn Murr who sounds too unrealistically perfect - men that only exist in books. Sadly I didn’t resonate with any of the characters because most of them are very Disney - they are either good or bad, theres no in between. It lacks the character depth and complexity with morally grey choices that would make me to them more.
I also wished that the complexity of the relationship between the characters and their personal AI’s were explored more. It was written in a very 2-dimensional manner, where the AI is portrayed as only a tool to the character without any special attachment to them, despite their personal AI’s accompanying them almost 24/7 advising on their lifestyles.
Overall, it was a really easy, short and fast-paced read. If you are looking for a lighthearted book that explores what the world may look like in the future - this may be it for you 💭
Appearances aside, the book centers around a futuristic society where humans are pseudo immortal - with replaceable high tech organs resembling robots that extends their lifespan. The characters also all have their own personal AI built into their systems, advising on their life choices. It revolves around the main character, Sheila Patel who has an existential crisis, subsequently deciding to build a baby to find purpose and fulfilment in her life. Things take a dark twist, and shes left to uncover a mystery that turned her life upside down…
The books touches upon few themes: abuse of power, capitalism, technological dependence & grief/loss of loved ones. There were also elements of romance, Flynn Murr who sounds too unrealistically perfect - men that only exist in books. Sadly I didn’t resonate with any of the characters because most of them are very Disney - they are either good or bad, theres no in between. It lacks the character depth and complexity with morally grey choices that would make me to them more.
I also wished that the complexity of the relationship between the characters and their personal AI’s were explored more. It was written in a very 2-dimensional manner, where the AI is portrayed as only a tool to the character without any special attachment to them, despite their personal AI’s accompanying them almost 24/7 advising on their lifestyles.
Overall, it was a really easy, short and fast-paced read. If you are looking for a lighthearted book that explores what the world may look like in the future - this may be it for you 💭
May 10, 2025
Set in a future where aging has been cured, Pseudo-Immortals explores the emotional and ethical consequences of immortality. The premise had so much potential, and while there were glimpses of intriguing ideas, the execution didn’t fully land for me.
The dialogue felt stilted and sometimes pulled me out of the story. I could sense the introspective tone the author was aiming for, but at times, it veered into territory that felt more awkward than impactful.
Similarly, the action scenes felt low-stakes, often solved a bit too conveniently by technology, which took away some of the tension.
Some interesting themes were introduced, particularly around society’s obsession with youth and perfection, but I found myself wishing they had been explored a little more deeply.
That said, I appreciate the ambition behind the concept and the questions it raises especially around the emotional and ethical weight of living forever.
Thank you to Penwings Publishing for the review copy, I appreciate the chance to read it and want to congratulate Charissa Ong Ty on her debut novel!
The dialogue felt stilted and sometimes pulled me out of the story. I could sense the introspective tone the author was aiming for, but at times, it veered into territory that felt more awkward than impactful.
Similarly, the action scenes felt low-stakes, often solved a bit too conveniently by technology, which took away some of the tension.
Some interesting themes were introduced, particularly around society’s obsession with youth and perfection, but I found myself wishing they had been explored a little more deeply.
That said, I appreciate the ambition behind the concept and the questions it raises especially around the emotional and ethical weight of living forever.
Thank you to Penwings Publishing for the review copy, I appreciate the chance to read it and want to congratulate Charissa Ong Ty on her debut novel!
April 29, 2025
2.5 ⭐️ - Thank you Penwings Publishing (and Eat Books Club) for the ARC copy!
Pseudo-immortals has plenty interesting concepts and started out really promising. Given how rapidly AI is evolving these days and how much we rely on the technology, the way it was incorporated into the story does provide a glimpse into a future that doesn't seem too far off. While I do feel that the world building could've been developed a little further, the story makes up for it with a fast-paced, engaging narrative that's easy to follow.
However, as someone who values character development above all, the book fell short for me in that area. Sheila and Flynn both feel underdeveloped and lacking in emotional depth. I find myself constantly waiting for the story to slow down and let us get to know them better, but it never quite delivered that. Wouldn't Sheila have a lot of stories to share after...... 214 years of life? 🥺🥺
Then there's Flynn. He feels more like a real life walking ChatGPT with six packs abs than a real character. It's also hard to root for him or get to know him when there's only one POV from him. He also always seems to have the answers and solutions to all their obstacles which I feel undercuts Sheila's own arc.
The romance subplot also didn't quite land for me. While I believe that everyone grieves differently, the timing and development of their relationship felt rushed and lacking in emotional groundwork to make it believable.
With that said, if you're just looking for a quick sci-fi read/concept-driven adventure, this may still be for you!
Pseudo-immortals has plenty interesting concepts and started out really promising. Given how rapidly AI is evolving these days and how much we rely on the technology, the way it was incorporated into the story does provide a glimpse into a future that doesn't seem too far off. While I do feel that the world building could've been developed a little further, the story makes up for it with a fast-paced, engaging narrative that's easy to follow.
However, as someone who values character development above all, the book fell short for me in that area. Sheila and Flynn both feel underdeveloped and lacking in emotional depth. I find myself constantly waiting for the story to slow down and let us get to know them better, but it never quite delivered that. Wouldn't Sheila have a lot of stories to share after...... 214 years of life? 🥺🥺
Then there's Flynn. He feels more like a real life walking ChatGPT with six packs abs than a real character. It's also hard to root for him or get to know him when there's only one POV from him. He also always seems to have the answers and solutions to all their obstacles which I feel undercuts Sheila's own arc.
The romance subplot also didn't quite land for me. While I believe that everyone grieves differently, the timing and development of their relationship felt rushed and lacking in emotional groundwork to make it believable.
With that said, if you're just looking for a quick sci-fi read/concept-driven adventure, this may still be for you!
April 26, 2025
My first poetry contest was inspired by Pseudo-Immortals. I choose immortality as a theme in my contest because it is not that cliché yet in poetry.
Penwings Publishing is kind enough to send me a copy of the Pseudo-Immortals novel so that I can better understand the story to manage my contest more effectively.
I had an interesting read, so I decided to write my first-ever book review. Both my firsts are about Pseudo-Immortals: my poetry contest and book review. People are going to think that Charissa paid me to do these. News Flash: She doesn’t (I don’t even know her).
This review contains no spoilers, so read on with peace of mind. Let me start with plain honesty.
When Charissa unveiled her Pseudo-Immortals novel, I half expected to read a carbon copy of something written out of the Deus Ex video game series. But Pseudo-Immortals has proven to be more than that. (And there is no deus ex machina in the story.)
While the Deus Ex video game series is written like a political satire, Pseudo-Immortals focuses on the things that matter more, such as our human experience in a transhumanist universe — a pleasant awakening that comes at the right time considering AI is overtaking every aspect of our lives one by one.
The themes of love, loss, and even attraction don’t always work when you take away the natural aspect of them, but I have to say that Charissa weaved her story around these themes beautifully.
I highly recommend that you read Charissa’s Pseudo-Immortals short story in My Medicine right before reading her novel because you will have a more satisfying experience. It’s like playing a good remake of a classic video game.
She created a sci-fi concept unlike anything we have ever read, challenging our view on life and immortality. Those who are dating (Charissa included) will definitely be invested in the story because the chemistry between Sheila and Flynn and the adventures they have together appeal to hot-blooded young adults. It is a young adult novel, indeed. Charissa is a novelist now, and she earned it.
There is a misdirection in the story that is cleverly written, and what I really like about this novel is it draws a clear distinction between our interaction with AI and how we communicate with our fellow human beings. One thing I learn from the novel is that immortal sometimes just means you can’t die naturally. It does not mean that you can’t be killed (I typed this with a wolfish grin). Now I see how the word “pseudo” applies here. If characters can’t be killed, you don’t have a story.
Charissa made a smart move by pivoting to writing a novel because if she published a fourth love poetry book, I am going to roll my eyes.
While My Medicine is a fun read and Daylight Dialogues is not bad, Midnight Monologues is Charissa’s masterpiece. Publishing a fourth love poetry book will dilute it further, like how unnecessary movie sequels tend to ruin the original one. Midnight Monologues should be retained as where Charissa started — where it all started.
If Charissa really wants to write a fourth love poetry book, may I suggest that she get married first and then let time pass for a while? Then she can write a poetry book about her married life and how she maintains a healthy relationship with her husband. This kind of book will definitely appeal to married couples, and that’s one way to cook a different recipe using the same ingredient.
Personally, I find Pseudo-Immortals to be a breath of fresh air after reading a series of love poetry books from Penwings Publishing. It’s not them, it’s me. Penwings' books are soulfully written, but I am not big on love. But I am big on second chances.
The most profound lesson I learned from Pseudo-Immortals, the novel, is every story deserves a second chance to be told. It is not a sin to remake a classic film such as Snow White, but don’t change what you are not supposed to. Expand on the universe and alter what is acceptable to surprise the audience while keeping the fundamentals. Focus on telling a good story instead of being politically correct, and that is one thing that the Pseudo-Immortals novel got right.
Hollywood writers should read Pseudo-Immortals in both the previous short story form in My Medicine and the novel itself to see how Charissa retells a story. With that, I conclude my honest review of Pseudo-Immortals. Thanks for reading.
Penwings Publishing is kind enough to send me a copy of the Pseudo-Immortals novel so that I can better understand the story to manage my contest more effectively.
I had an interesting read, so I decided to write my first-ever book review. Both my firsts are about Pseudo-Immortals: my poetry contest and book review. People are going to think that Charissa paid me to do these. News Flash: She doesn’t (I don’t even know her).
This review contains no spoilers, so read on with peace of mind. Let me start with plain honesty.
When Charissa unveiled her Pseudo-Immortals novel, I half expected to read a carbon copy of something written out of the Deus Ex video game series. But Pseudo-Immortals has proven to be more than that. (And there is no deus ex machina in the story.)
While the Deus Ex video game series is written like a political satire, Pseudo-Immortals focuses on the things that matter more, such as our human experience in a transhumanist universe — a pleasant awakening that comes at the right time considering AI is overtaking every aspect of our lives one by one.
The themes of love, loss, and even attraction don’t always work when you take away the natural aspect of them, but I have to say that Charissa weaved her story around these themes beautifully.
I highly recommend that you read Charissa’s Pseudo-Immortals short story in My Medicine right before reading her novel because you will have a more satisfying experience. It’s like playing a good remake of a classic video game.
She created a sci-fi concept unlike anything we have ever read, challenging our view on life and immortality. Those who are dating (Charissa included) will definitely be invested in the story because the chemistry between Sheila and Flynn and the adventures they have together appeal to hot-blooded young adults. It is a young adult novel, indeed. Charissa is a novelist now, and she earned it.
There is a misdirection in the story that is cleverly written, and what I really like about this novel is it draws a clear distinction between our interaction with AI and how we communicate with our fellow human beings. One thing I learn from the novel is that immortal sometimes just means you can’t die naturally. It does not mean that you can’t be killed (I typed this with a wolfish grin). Now I see how the word “pseudo” applies here. If characters can’t be killed, you don’t have a story.
Charissa made a smart move by pivoting to writing a novel because if she published a fourth love poetry book, I am going to roll my eyes.
While My Medicine is a fun read and Daylight Dialogues is not bad, Midnight Monologues is Charissa’s masterpiece. Publishing a fourth love poetry book will dilute it further, like how unnecessary movie sequels tend to ruin the original one. Midnight Monologues should be retained as where Charissa started — where it all started.
If Charissa really wants to write a fourth love poetry book, may I suggest that she get married first and then let time pass for a while? Then she can write a poetry book about her married life and how she maintains a healthy relationship with her husband. This kind of book will definitely appeal to married couples, and that’s one way to cook a different recipe using the same ingredient.
Personally, I find Pseudo-Immortals to be a breath of fresh air after reading a series of love poetry books from Penwings Publishing. It’s not them, it’s me. Penwings' books are soulfully written, but I am not big on love. But I am big on second chances.
The most profound lesson I learned from Pseudo-Immortals, the novel, is every story deserves a second chance to be told. It is not a sin to remake a classic film such as Snow White, but don’t change what you are not supposed to. Expand on the universe and alter what is acceptable to surprise the audience while keeping the fundamentals. Focus on telling a good story instead of being politically correct, and that is one thing that the Pseudo-Immortals novel got right.
Hollywood writers should read Pseudo-Immortals in both the previous short story form in My Medicine and the novel itself to see how Charissa retells a story. With that, I conclude my honest review of Pseudo-Immortals. Thanks for reading.
April 27, 2025
Sheila Patel, a 214-year-old pseudo-immortal sustained by bionic parts, lives in pursuit of happiness. She eventually chooses to have a child, Shiva, through the “Build a Baby” program. Fast forward to Sheila's 243th birthday, tragedy strikes—Shiva is found murdered. With the help of her new love, Flynn, Sheila sets out to uncover the truth behind her child’s death and the dark secrets of Generation Regen and Bionics Co.
Charissa takes us on a reflective journey through Sheila’s choices in living a full life—from her emotional bond with Flynn to how AI, including her companion Allie, shapes the future. Despite the rise of advanced tech, nostalgic elements like Polaroids remain cherished as vintage mementos.
She thoughtfully explores how AI and technology aid in uncovering the mystery behind Sheila’s daughter’s death, using simple language that makes complex topics like reproduction, aging, and immortality easy to understand. However, she also reveals the darker side of extended life: the costs, the upkeep, and the exploitation driven by greed and profit.
There’s a subtle tension between personal investment and sacrifice—like Sheila weighing the cost of her own bionic upgrades versus what she once spent for her daughter.
Charissa also weaves in layered interpretations of love: a poem at the story’s opening chapters, quiet sparks between Sheila and Flynn during their mission that will leave you chuckled, and Sheila’s unwavering devotion as a mother.
The only challenge I faced was visualising the action involving technology after the big reveal and the villain which I find it lacking. It took a few reads to fully grasp the sequence of events.
The story ends on a poignant note that tugs at the heart, offering a deeper meditation on the meaning of everlasting love.
Overall, this story left a lasting emotional impression. What stood out most to me was how seamlessly it combined heart and futuristic elements without losing its sense of intimacy. Even with the occasional challenge in visualising certain scenes, the narrative pulled through with a powerful, tender ending.
It’s a meaningful read for those drawn to sci-fi stories that reflect on what it means to love, live, and let go—especially in a world shaped by technology.
Thanks Charissa, Penswing, and Eat Books Club for having me to review "Pseudo-Immortals"
Pre-order is now available at Penswing.com.
Charissa takes us on a reflective journey through Sheila’s choices in living a full life—from her emotional bond with Flynn to how AI, including her companion Allie, shapes the future. Despite the rise of advanced tech, nostalgic elements like Polaroids remain cherished as vintage mementos.
She thoughtfully explores how AI and technology aid in uncovering the mystery behind Sheila’s daughter’s death, using simple language that makes complex topics like reproduction, aging, and immortality easy to understand. However, she also reveals the darker side of extended life: the costs, the upkeep, and the exploitation driven by greed and profit.
There’s a subtle tension between personal investment and sacrifice—like Sheila weighing the cost of her own bionic upgrades versus what she once spent for her daughter.
Charissa also weaves in layered interpretations of love: a poem at the story’s opening chapters, quiet sparks between Sheila and Flynn during their mission that will leave you chuckled, and Sheila’s unwavering devotion as a mother.
The only challenge I faced was visualising the action involving technology after the big reveal and the villain which I find it lacking. It took a few reads to fully grasp the sequence of events.
The story ends on a poignant note that tugs at the heart, offering a deeper meditation on the meaning of everlasting love.
Overall, this story left a lasting emotional impression. What stood out most to me was how seamlessly it combined heart and futuristic elements without losing its sense of intimacy. Even with the occasional challenge in visualising certain scenes, the narrative pulled through with a powerful, tender ending.
It’s a meaningful read for those drawn to sci-fi stories that reflect on what it means to love, live, and let go—especially in a world shaped by technology.
Thanks Charissa, Penswing, and Eat Books Club for having me to review "Pseudo-Immortals"
Pre-order is now available at Penswing.com.
May 9, 2025
I did not expect Charissa's debut novel to be a sci-fi story. Going from poetry to sci-fi feels like jumping from one end of the literary spectrum to the other, but I gotta say, she did pretty well here!
Pseudo-Immortals follows 214-year-old Sheila Patel as she navigates a futuristic society in which bionics and advanced research allow for a certain level of immortality. The novel starts off strong with a vibrant narrative voice and impressive world-building. I get the sense that the mechanics and science of the world were thoroughly researched. And although we don't see much of the world beyond several key settings, the ultra-modern atmosphere definitely comes through.
The plot was compelling, and it was a very fast-paced read. I read it in two sittings, though you could totally do it in one. Charissa has a way of really keeping things moving and keeping the tension high, especially at the rising action and climax. As someone who isn't really into sci-fi, I was surprised to find that Pseudo-Immortals was a fairly easy read. Great for entry-level sci-fi readers. Everything's made very accessible and understandable, without making the reader feel like they're lacking.
At the character level, I really enjoyed Sheila. I felt like she was a pretty dynamic character with a human side that really shines through. I didn't connect with the other characters as much. And there were some characters—one in particular, omitted for spoiler reasons—that I felt like could've been explored more. I felt like the overall character relationships were a bit underdeveloped, and the romance subplot didn't really seem believable to me. The emotional scenes of the story felt a bit glossed over, and the grief that I expected Sheila to feel didn't come through very strongly.
I love that Charissa used the narrative to raise philosophical questions about aging, and what immortality can do to a planet and society. Sheila, for instance, starts off feeling very existential, having done it all and felt it all. I'm sure people will be divided about the ending, but I loved it. I thought it was fitting, all things considered, and it made for a satisfying read.
Thank you to Charissa, Penwings, and Rish's Bookclub for the advanced copy!
Pseudo-Immortals follows 214-year-old Sheila Patel as she navigates a futuristic society in which bionics and advanced research allow for a certain level of immortality. The novel starts off strong with a vibrant narrative voice and impressive world-building. I get the sense that the mechanics and science of the world were thoroughly researched. And although we don't see much of the world beyond several key settings, the ultra-modern atmosphere definitely comes through.
The plot was compelling, and it was a very fast-paced read. I read it in two sittings, though you could totally do it in one. Charissa has a way of really keeping things moving and keeping the tension high, especially at the rising action and climax. As someone who isn't really into sci-fi, I was surprised to find that Pseudo-Immortals was a fairly easy read. Great for entry-level sci-fi readers. Everything's made very accessible and understandable, without making the reader feel like they're lacking.
At the character level, I really enjoyed Sheila. I felt like she was a pretty dynamic character with a human side that really shines through. I didn't connect with the other characters as much. And there were some characters—one in particular, omitted for spoiler reasons—that I felt like could've been explored more. I felt like the overall character relationships were a bit underdeveloped, and the romance subplot didn't really seem believable to me. The emotional scenes of the story felt a bit glossed over, and the grief that I expected Sheila to feel didn't come through very strongly.
I love that Charissa used the narrative to raise philosophical questions about aging, and what immortality can do to a planet and society. Sheila, for instance, starts off feeling very existential, having done it all and felt it all. I'm sure people will be divided about the ending, but I loved it. I thought it was fitting, all things considered, and it made for a satisfying read.
Thank you to Charissa, Penwings, and Rish's Bookclub for the advanced copy!
April 26, 2025
Given that poetry is what Charissa Ong is best known for, her literary jump into sci-fi is an interesting one. I’m all for authors who expand their literary horizons, so I was down to reading Pseudo-Immortals when it reached my mailbox.
Behind the shiny illustrated covers tells a story of Sheila Patel, a double-centenarian human with bionic limbs (a vintage pseudo-immortal) who lives in the far future where humans and artificial intelligence coexist.
In the first few chapters, you’ll get a strong sense of who Sheila is - someone who masks her loneliness with hobbies and depends on her AI assistant for everyday tasks. Deep down, she yearns for love and that led to her decision to have a baby. From there, the book takes off in quick bursts of action.
Pseudo-Immortals is far from a heavy sci-fi read. Short chapters and straightforward prose, it’s a fast-paced book you can finish over the weekend. The author’s simplistic writing also makes it accessible to anyone new to the genre.
In favour of pacing, I feel the novel sacrifices much of the world-building I expect in sci-fi books. What does the futuristic world look like outside of Sheila’s bubble? How is the AI world governed? What’s life like for other vintages like Sheila? A deep dive into this imagined AI future would have made the book more immersive.
Much of the action happens in the second half of the book. However, some sequences felt a bit hard to follow. Sometimes, I find myself lost in the chase and have to reread certain parts when the pace quickens.
Despite the gaps in immersion and sequential clarity, I commend the author for braving her literary expansion from poetry to sci-fi. It’s no easy feat. Like every journey, it’s onwards and upwards from here.
Huge thanks to Penwings Publishing for the arc and the opportunity to review this book.
Shoutout to Charissa Ong (yes, the author herself!) and Adrianus Harris for the stunning cover design and illustrations.
Behind the shiny illustrated covers tells a story of Sheila Patel, a double-centenarian human with bionic limbs (a vintage pseudo-immortal) who lives in the far future where humans and artificial intelligence coexist.
In the first few chapters, you’ll get a strong sense of who Sheila is - someone who masks her loneliness with hobbies and depends on her AI assistant for everyday tasks. Deep down, she yearns for love and that led to her decision to have a baby. From there, the book takes off in quick bursts of action.
Pseudo-Immortals is far from a heavy sci-fi read. Short chapters and straightforward prose, it’s a fast-paced book you can finish over the weekend. The author’s simplistic writing also makes it accessible to anyone new to the genre.
In favour of pacing, I feel the novel sacrifices much of the world-building I expect in sci-fi books. What does the futuristic world look like outside of Sheila’s bubble? How is the AI world governed? What’s life like for other vintages like Sheila? A deep dive into this imagined AI future would have made the book more immersive.
Much of the action happens in the second half of the book. However, some sequences felt a bit hard to follow. Sometimes, I find myself lost in the chase and have to reread certain parts when the pace quickens.
Despite the gaps in immersion and sequential clarity, I commend the author for braving her literary expansion from poetry to sci-fi. It’s no easy feat. Like every journey, it’s onwards and upwards from here.
Huge thanks to Penwings Publishing for the arc and the opportunity to review this book.
Shoutout to Charissa Ong (yes, the author herself!) and Adrianus Harris for the stunning cover design and illustrations.
May 13, 2025
Disclaimer: I received an advanced reading copy from Penwings Publishing — thank you to the team. This is my honest review of Pseudo-Immortals by Charissa Ong.
The concept of this book felt like an episode of Black Mirror. The story is set in a dystopian, futuristic world where humans live longer with extraordinary capabilities through various bionic enhancements. It explores the fine line between scientific progress and disrupting natural processes. I loved how creative the author, Charissa Ong, was with this book. Her imagination regarding the extent of "pseudo-immortality" is commendable.
The plot itself is a good mixture of sci-fi and thriller. The first half of the book kept me on edge. Her narration is both fast-paced and captivating. I love the subtle humor in this book; it brought a few unexpected chuckles, especially in the first few chapters. Additionally, the ending definitely brought the whole story full circle (plus a speculative cliffhanger for a sequel, maybe?).
However, there were some parts of the book that felt "forced." The main character, Sheila Patel, has conflicting emotions, making it hard for me to relate to her. Moreover, the extent of AI capabilities described in this book felt like a bit of a stretch at times (though that might be due to my limited perspective).
Nevertheless, considering it’s Charissa’s debut novel, I think it’s a great one! This read definitely got me thinking about the possibilities of humans becoming pseudo-immortal (or even immortal!) in the future. I appreciate how it opens up a debate on the pros and cons of pseudo-immortality and the ethical gray areas that come with such advancements. It also raises important questions about the cost of incorporating these biotechnological modifications into our lives.
I'd recommend Pseudo-Immortals to anyone looking to explore the sci-fi genre. It’s definitely an easy yet thought-provoking starting point.
The concept of this book felt like an episode of Black Mirror. The story is set in a dystopian, futuristic world where humans live longer with extraordinary capabilities through various bionic enhancements. It explores the fine line between scientific progress and disrupting natural processes. I loved how creative the author, Charissa Ong, was with this book. Her imagination regarding the extent of "pseudo-immortality" is commendable.
The plot itself is a good mixture of sci-fi and thriller. The first half of the book kept me on edge. Her narration is both fast-paced and captivating. I love the subtle humor in this book; it brought a few unexpected chuckles, especially in the first few chapters. Additionally, the ending definitely brought the whole story full circle (plus a speculative cliffhanger for a sequel, maybe?).
However, there were some parts of the book that felt "forced." The main character, Sheila Patel, has conflicting emotions, making it hard for me to relate to her. Moreover, the extent of AI capabilities described in this book felt like a bit of a stretch at times (though that might be due to my limited perspective).
Nevertheless, considering it’s Charissa’s debut novel, I think it’s a great one! This read definitely got me thinking about the possibilities of humans becoming pseudo-immortal (or even immortal!) in the future. I appreciate how it opens up a debate on the pros and cons of pseudo-immortality and the ethical gray areas that come with such advancements. It also raises important questions about the cost of incorporating these biotechnological modifications into our lives.
I'd recommend Pseudo-Immortals to anyone looking to explore the sci-fi genre. It’s definitely an easy yet thought-provoking starting point.
September 15, 2025
Got the first dibs on this new release, thanks!
Little Hanie has always been a fan of scifi and anything robot related growing up. I was really looking forward to reading this.
If you look it up, the “pseudo-immortal” concept is unnaturally extending someone’s lifespan through technology or bioengineering so they don’t die of aging.
This novel follows the story of Sheila Patel, a centuries-old pseudo-immortal navigating a transhumanist future. Somehow trying to portray predictions of our realities of the future when AI and tech deeply integrated into our lives.
The plot throws Patel into corporate conspiracies, AI flaws, messy relationships, and her sudden desire of having a baby while she wrestles with existential crisis, yada yada yada.
I feel like a lot of things trying to be squeezed into this debut novel. Undeniably theres a lot of important topics discussed; i.e., immortality versus mortality, AI dependence, love stripped of its natural context, power abuse, and the paradox of endless time that gives us the illusion of emptiness in life, etc.
However, (honest opinion as a reader) the premise only rope me in at the beginning of the book. But it got bit messy to the point that it felt confusing and idk whats going on and then the final part that feels rushed. I think the arc could be better because I found myself not curious enough to finish a book that can be read (I normally read) in one sitting or two days (also, Im a poly-reader). Based on my personal discussion with fellow readers, a lot of them mentioned that an editor will make or break the book and I couldnt agree more.
Overall, it’s an interesting story.
All these tech advances *improves (in a way) and extend life, but will our lives be meaningful?
Yes, everything will be up to us to shape and define it but how can we be so sure we wont be facing the challenges that Patel did?
Little Hanie has always been a fan of scifi and anything robot related growing up. I was really looking forward to reading this.
If you look it up, the “pseudo-immortal” concept is unnaturally extending someone’s lifespan through technology or bioengineering so they don’t die of aging.
This novel follows the story of Sheila Patel, a centuries-old pseudo-immortal navigating a transhumanist future. Somehow trying to portray predictions of our realities of the future when AI and tech deeply integrated into our lives.
The plot throws Patel into corporate conspiracies, AI flaws, messy relationships, and her sudden desire of having a baby while she wrestles with existential crisis, yada yada yada.
I feel like a lot of things trying to be squeezed into this debut novel. Undeniably theres a lot of important topics discussed; i.e., immortality versus mortality, AI dependence, love stripped of its natural context, power abuse, and the paradox of endless time that gives us the illusion of emptiness in life, etc.
However, (honest opinion as a reader) the premise only rope me in at the beginning of the book. But it got bit messy to the point that it felt confusing and idk whats going on and then the final part that feels rushed. I think the arc could be better because I found myself not curious enough to finish a book that can be read (I normally read) in one sitting or two days (also, Im a poly-reader). Based on my personal discussion with fellow readers, a lot of them mentioned that an editor will make or break the book and I couldnt agree more.
Overall, it’s an interesting story.
All these tech advances *improves (in a way) and extend life, but will our lives be meaningful?
Yes, everything will be up to us to shape and define it but how can we be so sure we wont be facing the challenges that Patel did?
April 26, 2025
As a newcomer to sci-fi, reading Charissa’s debut Pseudo-Immortals felt like a whirlwind—like a kite caught in a storm. The journey spans birth to death, solitude to excitement, grief to justice, and ultimately, peace. Readers experience it all: love, loss, existential crisis, political corruption, fear, a leap of faith, and even humor. Charissa tackles issues especially relevant to younger generations—the “living dead” of social media, endlessly scrolling just to “survive.”
The story follows Sheila Patel, a member of the Vintage group, who questions humanity’s latest breakthrough: a cure for aging. Through her inner monologue and conversations with her AI “friend,” Sheila dives into big existential questions—Is immortality what we really wanted? Why do we exist if we live forever? What does love mean after centuries of life?
Charissa enriches Sheila’s 258-year journey with futuristic twists, clever acronyms, and a fast-moving narrative that picks up quickly after a slower start. Her blending of AI and tech feels effortless—like spreading butter on warm toast—even for someone not typically into sci-fi. A playlist curated by Charissa adds a cinematic layer to the reading experience, and at times, it felt like watching a movie. I even wished to see Sheila, Flynn, Allie, and Bret (their AI partner) brought to life on screen.
That said, the characters didn’t always feel fully developed—they lacked the emotional depth that makes fictional people feel real. Some scenes, especially moments of grief, felt rushed, and the romance didn’t quite land—it seemed more functional than felt. Still, the story’s creativity, momentum, and humor kept me hooked. One line I’ll never forget: “Today’s body stash brings tomorrow’s bag of cash!”
The story follows Sheila Patel, a member of the Vintage group, who questions humanity’s latest breakthrough: a cure for aging. Through her inner monologue and conversations with her AI “friend,” Sheila dives into big existential questions—Is immortality what we really wanted? Why do we exist if we live forever? What does love mean after centuries of life?
Charissa enriches Sheila’s 258-year journey with futuristic twists, clever acronyms, and a fast-moving narrative that picks up quickly after a slower start. Her blending of AI and tech feels effortless—like spreading butter on warm toast—even for someone not typically into sci-fi. A playlist curated by Charissa adds a cinematic layer to the reading experience, and at times, it felt like watching a movie. I even wished to see Sheila, Flynn, Allie, and Bret (their AI partner) brought to life on screen.
That said, the characters didn’t always feel fully developed—they lacked the emotional depth that makes fictional people feel real. Some scenes, especially moments of grief, felt rushed, and the romance didn’t quite land—it seemed more functional than felt. Still, the story’s creativity, momentum, and humor kept me hooked. One line I’ll never forget: “Today’s body stash brings tomorrow’s bag of cash!”
April 27, 2025
With a sleek, artsy cover, the book undoubtedly met the mark on its first impression. Charissa’s writing style accommodates a simple yet fun read, fitting in making her novel debut. Sending the reader into a future that may yet still not be too far away, Charissa Ong provides a glimpse of what might come to be.
Sheila Patel lives her life as a pseudo-immortal during a time when one’s financial means can be used to optimize their body through enhanced capabilities and limb replacements. With old age death no longer a hurdle, quality of life is extended through the will of personal AIs. Although companionship and virtual prototype experiences were easily fulfilled by an AI, Sheila Patel finds herself in search of a deeper sense of living. Her choices lead her down a path of maternal responsibility and eventual discovery of a corporate feud at the very top
Adventures along the way have her confronting unforeseen circumstances that demand more than just mere brawn and wit. Sheila’s journey teases at a potential romance that may appear clear-cut at first but holds mysteries that can have the reader leaning either way. On the other hand, her partner in crime, Flynn Murr, is not someone you could get a read on at first glance. With a gradual build leading up to several twists in between, the journey in a nutshell was one I am glad I took.
Overall, it was a worthy read that showcased clear promise for Charissa Ong’s future endeavors. Looking forward to what's in the making.
May 28, 2025
Pseudo Immortals by Charissa Ong Ty
Introduction (6/10)
- Introduces well about each character and the world
Ending (8/10)
- Bear in mind it's a sad ending
Storyline (6/10)
Plot twist (5/10)
- Plot twists are OK, the whole story is not boring at all except the dragging
- Not bad at all
Thickness of each chapter (10/10)
- <10 pages for each chapter
Thrill (6/10)
- Depends on each situation actually. Some are (6/10) and some are (2/10)
Narration (6/10)
- Great, accept the unnecessary dragging
Situation description (9/10)
- Specific and easy to imagine
Character description (8/10)
- Love the details, the bionic and organic bodies
Character development (4/10)
- Not much, since the main characters are already matured enough
Fl (6/10)
- Good woman who thinks and acts fast. Also very smart, putting her emotions aside to focus on solutions
Ml (5/10)
- Flirty asf but smart and cunning
Side characters (4/10)
- Unimportant lmao. Some died too fast
Overall rate (5/10)
- There was not too much to talk about this book since it kinda bored me but it also hyped me up to the point where it was hard for me to put it down probably because of the nice plots. To conclude, the book has 20% of lovey-dovey, 10% of thrill and 70% of business+tech-related so yeah. Read on your own risk
Introduction (6/10)
- Introduces well about each character and the world
Ending (8/10)
- Bear in mind it's a sad ending
Storyline (6/10)
Plot twist (5/10)
- Plot twists are OK, the whole story is not boring at all except the dragging
- Not bad at all
Thickness of each chapter (10/10)
- <10 pages for each chapter
Thrill (6/10)
- Depends on each situation actually. Some are (6/10) and some are (2/10)
Narration (6/10)
- Great, accept the unnecessary dragging
Situation description (9/10)
- Specific and easy to imagine
Character description (8/10)
- Love the details, the bionic and organic bodies
Character development (4/10)
- Not much, since the main characters are already matured enough
Fl (6/10)
- Good woman who thinks and acts fast. Also very smart, putting her emotions aside to focus on solutions
Ml (5/10)
- Flirty asf but smart and cunning
Side characters (4/10)
- Unimportant lmao. Some died too fast
Overall rate (5/10)
- There was not too much to talk about this book since it kinda bored me but it also hyped me up to the point where it was hard for me to put it down probably because of the nice plots. To conclude, the book has 20% of lovey-dovey, 10% of thrill and 70% of business+tech-related so yeah. Read on your own risk
May 12, 2025
Pseudo-Immortals is a fun and imaginative work that follows the journey of Sheila Patel as she attempts to find meaning and fulfilment in a futuristic, bionic society.
The world Charissa Ong has crafted feels both fantastical and just a few centuries out of reach. The worldbuilding is fun and immersive; details of the world Sheila inhabits and the seemingly mundane parts of her daily routine are scattered throughout the text, which together create a really interesting possible future.
Structurally, the novel suffers from minor inconsistencies in grammar, tense and pacing that sometimes felt a bit jarring. I found it difficult to connect to some of the main characters and this also affected the emotional impact of certain scenes. But ultimately, this was a fun and exciting read that kept me engaged till the end. At its heart, this book feels like a thoughtful exploration of the value of love and human connection in an AI-driven world. I look forward to seeing what else this author has in store for us.
Many thanks to Penwings Publishing for providing an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
The world Charissa Ong has crafted feels both fantastical and just a few centuries out of reach. The worldbuilding is fun and immersive; details of the world Sheila inhabits and the seemingly mundane parts of her daily routine are scattered throughout the text, which together create a really interesting possible future.
Structurally, the novel suffers from minor inconsistencies in grammar, tense and pacing that sometimes felt a bit jarring. I found it difficult to connect to some of the main characters and this also affected the emotional impact of certain scenes. But ultimately, this was a fun and exciting read that kept me engaged till the end. At its heart, this book feels like a thoughtful exploration of the value of love and human connection in an AI-driven world. I look forward to seeing what else this author has in store for us.
Many thanks to Penwings Publishing for providing an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
May 15, 2025
The author did a remarkable job by creating a world that is two centuries older than today. AI would become more than a companion, one that could influence our decisions but also make our innermost thought indistinguishable from data. What is there to live for when AI can map our thought pattern, make politically correct suggestions and offer predictive analysis well before making any decisions? This comes to mind as the protagonist ponders about the meaning of love on her 214th birthday. What else is there really to live for, if not for love? The guilty pleasure of confusing and misleading AI brings only a limited amount of satisfaction after all.
As the protagonist runs simulations within the safety and comfort of her living room, and later on risks her life to uncover why the love of her life was taken from her, we discover what we live for and what we would die for revolves around how we want our love to become everlasting. Further on that notion, would pseudo immortality allow everlasting love to flourish or become a chokehold? Would it be right to hold on to pseudo immortality for our loved ones that comes after us?
As the protagonist runs simulations within the safety and comfort of her living room, and later on risks her life to uncover why the love of her life was taken from her, we discover what we live for and what we would die for revolves around how we want our love to become everlasting. Further on that notion, would pseudo immortality allow everlasting love to flourish or become a chokehold? Would it be right to hold on to pseudo immortality for our loved ones that comes after us?
May 15, 2025
Pseudo-Immortals by Charissa Ong Ty is a fast-paced, action-packed sci-fi novel featuring transhumanist protagonists Sheila Patel and Flynn Murr as they investigate to seek justice for their loved ones. It is a sharp wit and thrilling ride into a future world where power comes at a price and justice is risky. The book is suitable for readers interested in branching into sci-fi and offers a light yet engaging narrative.
Flynn Murr, Sheila’s partner in uncovering the mystery, is depicted as somewhat enigmatic and gradually revealed through the story. Their relationship adds subtle romantic tension but also serves as a functional alliance during vulnerable moments.
Overall, Pseudo-Immortals is well-received as an exciting sci-fi debut with a compelling plot and characters, recommended for those who enjoy futuristic investigations and transhumanist themes.
I’m grateful for the chance to read this book before its launch. Would like to thank Charissa for trusting me with an advance copy.
Flynn Murr, Sheila’s partner in uncovering the mystery, is depicted as somewhat enigmatic and gradually revealed through the story. Their relationship adds subtle romantic tension but also serves as a functional alliance during vulnerable moments.
Overall, Pseudo-Immortals is well-received as an exciting sci-fi debut with a compelling plot and characters, recommended for those who enjoy futuristic investigations and transhumanist themes.
I’m grateful for the chance to read this book before its launch. Would like to thank Charissa for trusting me with an advance copy.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 25, 2025
Pseudo Immortals shows an interesting take on a future where people can live forever using tech like genetic modification, AI, and consciousness transfer. The story is about a woman who’s been alive for hundreds of years and starts to question what life really means when people don’t have to die anymore.
It starts off feeling pretty personal but later turns into a mystery with some bigger things going on. The world feels cool and kind of believable, and the ideas it brings up—like living forever, what we leave behind, and how much we should mess with nature—are pretty thought-provoking, even if the book doesn’t go super deep into them.
Some parts of the plot are exciting, but a few twists feel a bit too easy or predictable. And the ending wraps up faster than expected. But overall, it’s a fun read with a cool premise.
It starts off feeling pretty personal but later turns into a mystery with some bigger things going on. The world feels cool and kind of believable, and the ideas it brings up—like living forever, what we leave behind, and how much we should mess with nature—are pretty thought-provoking, even if the book doesn’t go super deep into them.
Some parts of the plot are exciting, but a few twists feel a bit too easy or predictable. And the ending wraps up faster than expected. But overall, it’s a fun read with a cool premise.
May 13, 2025
A great attempt at a debut novel - I would give this read a 2.5 stars.
This novel has a good premise and the world building was interesting. Though I wish there was more of it throughout the book. The book does take a while to pick up but once it does, it’s easy to get through as there are a lot of things happening with each chapter ending with a cliffhanger.
I appreciated the relationship between Sheila and Flynn, however at times it felt a bit “teenage” like instead of adults? Though I’m not sure if that was what the author intended.
Great concepts were introduced in the book like bionics, conscious transference and AI assistance in the flesh. The last bit reminded me of the Wondla series!
The battle/fight scenes were interesting and the memory erasure weapons are an actual nightmare.
Overall, a quick and fast read :-)
This novel has a good premise and the world building was interesting. Though I wish there was more of it throughout the book. The book does take a while to pick up but once it does, it’s easy to get through as there are a lot of things happening with each chapter ending with a cliffhanger.
I appreciated the relationship between Sheila and Flynn, however at times it felt a bit “teenage” like instead of adults? Though I’m not sure if that was what the author intended.
Great concepts were introduced in the book like bionics, conscious transference and AI assistance in the flesh. The last bit reminded me of the Wondla series!
The battle/fight scenes were interesting and the memory erasure weapons are an actual nightmare.
Overall, a quick and fast read :-)
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 18, 2025
We dive into the world Sheila Patel lives where aging is a thing of the past and AIs are our everyday companion, with all the time in the world, Sheila decides to make a change in her life - having a child. However, her happiness is cut short after her daughter’s 30th birthday where a party ends in a mass murder.
A fast-paced adventure in which Sheila fights to uncover the mystery of her daughter’s death. I enjoyed the sci-fi elements of the book but felt that the romantic and familial relationships could have been fleshed out more. I didn’t really buy the quick love Flynn and Sheila had, even after everything that has happened, I would felt like it was more of a trauma bonded friendship. It seemed as though not enough depth and I couldn’t really feel the connections to the characters. Overall it was a okay read though.
A fast-paced adventure in which Sheila fights to uncover the mystery of her daughter’s death. I enjoyed the sci-fi elements of the book but felt that the romantic and familial relationships could have been fleshed out more. I didn’t really buy the quick love Flynn and Sheila had, even after everything that has happened, I would felt like it was more of a trauma bonded friendship. It seemed as though not enough depth and I couldn’t really feel the connections to the characters. Overall it was a okay read though.
May 20, 2025
This was my first dip into the Sci-Fi genre, and it made for a solid, accessible introduction without feeling too overwhelming. The author did a great job weaving in futuristic concepts (some of which felt eerily possible) and at times, it was like reading a Black Mirror episode. It definitely made me question reality for a moment.
The plot moved at a good pace, especially with the action, which kept me engaged. However, the romance felt a bit rushed and leaned into the insta-love trope, which didn’t quite land for me.
What I appreciated most was how the story mirrored real-world issues and encouraged reflection, there's a lot to unpack haha. That said, I think the writing itself could be tightened to make the narrative even stronger.
Overall, a thought-provoking light read, especially for Sci-Fi newcomers like me.
The plot moved at a good pace, especially with the action, which kept me engaged. However, the romance felt a bit rushed and leaned into the insta-love trope, which didn’t quite land for me.
What I appreciated most was how the story mirrored real-world issues and encouraged reflection, there's a lot to unpack haha. That said, I think the writing itself could be tightened to make the narrative even stronger.
Overall, a thought-provoking light read, especially for Sci-Fi newcomers like me.
May 14, 2025
This was my first sci-fi book, and I think it was a great introductory read to the genre.
I really enjoyed the beginning, it drew me in right away. The book was also an easy read, thanks in part to the great font size.
One aspect I particularly appreciated was the research into AI and technology. By the end of the novel, it genuinely had me reflecting on how the future might look with the growing influence of AI.
However, I did find it a bit hard to relate to the characters, particularly Flynn and Sheila, as their chemistry felt somewhat lacking. I was also hoping for a deeper exploration of the mother-daughter relationship between Shiva and Sheila.
Overall, congrats to Charissa on her debut novel! Thank you for sending me an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I really enjoyed the beginning, it drew me in right away. The book was also an easy read, thanks in part to the great font size.
One aspect I particularly appreciated was the research into AI and technology. By the end of the novel, it genuinely had me reflecting on how the future might look with the growing influence of AI.
However, I did find it a bit hard to relate to the characters, particularly Flynn and Sheila, as their chemistry felt somewhat lacking. I was also hoping for a deeper exploration of the mother-daughter relationship between Shiva and Sheila.
Overall, congrats to Charissa on her debut novel! Thank you for sending me an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
August 18, 2025
i actually had a hard time finishing this book. idk if it’s the storyline and the plot, the ways of writing, the characters, or maybe it’s me.
i’ve been putting off this book in dnf for awhile until i decided to finished the book today.
i couldnt quite grasp and feel the emotion delivered by the characters. however, nearing the end of the story when sheila decided to finally let go and with how things has been progressing for both her and flynn, that’s when i feel the emotion yet it’s there; but not hitting through. i blame it on me though.
one thing i love about this book is how there are limited romance, yet it’s there. and it makes us yearn for more especially with how cute flynn and sheila were together.
overall? good book, just not my cup of tea.
i’ve been putting off this book in dnf for awhile until i decided to finished the book today.
i couldnt quite grasp and feel the emotion delivered by the characters. however, nearing the end of the story when sheila decided to finally let go and with how things has been progressing for both her and flynn, that’s when i feel the emotion yet it’s there; but not hitting through. i blame it on me though.
one thing i love about this book is how there are limited romance, yet it’s there. and it makes us yearn for more especially with how cute flynn and sheila were together.
overall? good book, just not my cup of tea.
May 10, 2025
This is my first sci-fi after ages and it's been a refreshing read! I love how the author teleports us into the future with advanced technologies and AI being an integral part of our lives.
The author makes it a point to highlight that despite all the advancements, we are human after all. There's still greed and power but also, the need for love and belonging. It makes you wonder where we are going with all the advancements, is immortality all that we seek? And the consequences of it.
Love the sudden banter between Sheila and Flynn during serious situations, completely taking you off guard at times. Overall, I've enjoyed the book and the message that came with it.
The author makes it a point to highlight that despite all the advancements, we are human after all. There's still greed and power but also, the need for love and belonging. It makes you wonder where we are going with all the advancements, is immortality all that we seek? And the consequences of it.
Love the sudden banter between Sheila and Flynn during serious situations, completely taking you off guard at times. Overall, I've enjoyed the book and the message that came with it.
May 25, 2025
I received an ARC of this in exchange for an honest review. Thank you Penwings Publishing.
Pseudo-Immortals has a strong start that pulls you right in. The world building is good and the story evolves around Sheila Patel, a vintage who is hell bent on solving the mystery behind the deaths of an entire generation including her own daughter.
What could have perhaps been improved was the depth of the characters. I was not a fan of the cliched conversations between the two protagonists and could not bring myself to root for their love story as it felt forced.
My favourite part was the shocking epilogue.
Overall, a good YA debut novel which is suitable for sci-fi beginners.
Pseudo-Immortals has a strong start that pulls you right in. The world building is good and the story evolves around Sheila Patel, a vintage who is hell bent on solving the mystery behind the deaths of an entire generation including her own daughter.
What could have perhaps been improved was the depth of the characters. I was not a fan of the cliched conversations between the two protagonists and could not bring myself to root for their love story as it felt forced.
My favourite part was the shocking epilogue.
Overall, a good YA debut novel which is suitable for sci-fi beginners.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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