For starters, this book is a TOME. I have a severe dislike of eBooks, but if you are at all inclined in that direction, this is one to get in eBook form.
Before I get into this, because I realize that I mostly recorded my gripes as I went along, I will say that this book is great at what it does, which is to touch on a bit of everything, give an overview of NYC during WW2, and provide names and organizations that interested people can dig into further.
This book is very comprehensive, in that it covers pretty much all aspects of life in NYC during WW2 and the years leading up to it as well as the contributions of prominent New Yorkers to the wider effort on the homefront, with a strong focus on policy/planning/organizations/politics and movements. Despite the size of the book, most things are covered only to a very shallow depth, so while it is comprehensive in some ways, in others it is simply a launching point for a deeper dive into subjects of interest. There are also allusions to things that are not explained at all. However, Wallace has an EXTENSIVE bibliography that interested people can dig into (or just start looking up names like I did). Wallace does clearly lay out his narrative, but it is stated according to his interpretation with little to no consideration of other possibilities or points of view.
The book is organized by subjects, so it does jump around in time. Usually, this is ok however there were a few chapters where it jumped around in time within the chapter, and this got very confusing.
My first gripe with this book is that it BADLY needs a list of acronyms. There are so many different organizations with 3 and 4 letter abbreviations, and it is impossible to keep them straight. Along with the long lists of names, there is no way I can remember what an acronym from 3 chapters ago stood for! There were even a few where I could not for the life of me figure out where they were introduced the first time.
One nice thing about this book is that there are photographs sprinkled throughout. Some of these didn't feel totally relevant and/or their relevance was never explained, such as a scene from A Tree Grows in Brooklyn, a photo of Marines practicing to abandon ship in a chapter about the Communist schism, and The Bid Duck in Flanders, Long Island. I'm wondering if Wallace picked more obscure pictures because he assumed his readers would already have seen the more famous ones, such as the Bund Rally in Madison Square Garden decorated with banners of George Washington, American Flags...and swastikas. I think some like that would have had a bigger impact on the audience, even if some of them have seen the photos before.
The book does give addresses for pretty much everything mentioned in the book. As a non-NYCer, this admittedly didn't mean a whole lot to me, but I imagine it would be interesting for locals.
The book does often bog down in lists of names and organizations and often felt like it was name dropping just for the heck of it. In some chapters, I felt like I was reading through the part of a corporation's "about us" website that gives the bios of their board of directors.
Wallace does make an attempt at turning this into a multicultural history, and succeeds where Black and Jewish people are concerned, but that's really it. Asians barely get a mention, and Latinos aren't mentioned until talking about the music scene and the Latin influence on it. Then they are forgotten again until a chapter on Puerto Rico and colonialism. Also, how is Adam Clayton Powell Jr "almost blond"?
Overall, while I have picked many nits here, this is a very good book, especially for anyone from NYC with an interest in local history. I picked up many interesting tidbits and came away with a better appreciation of the homefront in WW2.