Ok, as has been mentioned elsewhere, this version is self-published. I have no problem with self-publishing and encourage anyone to have a go. However, this book (more than book 1) could really do with some heavy copy editing. I mean the sort of copy editing that Stephen King recommends… the gnarly, old copy editor who won’t stand for any fluff, will draw attention to pacing and generally add a lot of marginalia recommendations. That’s before any proofreading.
All the above is a shame because the premise of the trilogy is interesting. I have enjoyed reading it so far and I am sure I will take a look at book 3 when it comes out.