I really liked this book.
Although the writing style could improve.
I never was a fan when a story isn’t told continuously. This back and forth in time to be honest, for every chapter a different time span, was aggravating.
Not that the story isn’t interesting, the opposite in fact, but it presents a slow pace for the main storyline. Not to mention that I am completely absorbed in it, which shows great writing talent, but Slam!, suddenly someone slaps me awake because the next chapter is again some reconnaissance of the past, that rips me viciously from the present story I was so engrossed in. Either make the present story chapters longer or incorporate some memories into it instead of presenting them as a new chapter interrupting the reading flow.
I hope it all fuses together soon before it gets unbearable, because I really like this book series otherwise.
It would have been nice to have at least a chapter about how Ryan and Jack reconnected and arranged their living together in the junktown for the time being.
As Jacks plot thread revolves mainly around the search for Ryan, I would have liked a dedicated chapter to finish this plot thread properly.
The author jumped right into another thread.
One thing that bugged me during the whole book was that I felt the author didn’t grapple properly with the fact that the InnerZone characters had the mindset that abducting and enslaving innocent people over centuries, using them for their own gain is acceptable. They know that they doom the slaves to a very short and miserable life span.
And then suddenly it isn’t anymore and they change sides. That was a given and not really a believable development. And not mention how the slave characters didn’t even treat them differently or with any animosity for their actions.
Still, the male characters were interesting and the author has the ability to suck me into the story which is rare. That’s why I gave it a fourth star.