Actual rating: 3.5
This was a nice, simple, light read that was a perfect for a break away from my longer current read.
As many have pointed out, there were multiple editing errors that shouldn't have occured, and therefore this could have used some extra lovin'.
But putting the errors aside, I thought this was a nice "who done it" mystery. Valerie wasn't inexperienced, which was a great point. A lot of authors I've found try to have their characters just starting out with no previous experience, or even relatable experience. So Valerie having a background in PI work, even if not a lot, was a nice touch.
On the flipside, she really had no idea what she was doing at times, which is partially why my rating is actually 3.5 instead of a solid four. Jerry did most of the leg work in terms of contacting people, which is why it wasn't surprising that his father, Kyle, wanted Valerie and Jerry to team up. And when you think about it, with Jerry being a suspect in the case she was doing private investigative work on, he shouldn't have had any input whatsoever. Had they not found anything or who the real killer was, Jerry could have had more than just a murder charge against him. This could have been considered "impeding investigation" since Jerry was not the PI.
But I digress. Overall, this was a nice, quick read. If you're not too much of a grammar and spelling stickler, but love mysteries, I'm sure you'll enjoy this one.