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Benighted
From nightmares to knighthood, the true war starts now.
Brin has conquered the nightmares that once plagued him, and now his goal is to master the power of his class—illusion.
With a new skill that lets him split his mind and juggle multiple thoughts, his imagination is the only limit. But time is running out.
War looms as four nations unite against the Queendom of Arcaena. The Witch Queen’s undead army threatens to destroy everything in its path. When Brin is summoned by the leader of an order of knights, he’s plunged into a conflict that will shape the fate of the world.
Brin’s glass and illusion magic are getting stronger, but his greatest advantage is a dangerous secret: the allied kingdoms’ strongest warrior, a Paladin, is actually Arcaena’s spy. Will Brin reveal the secret to everyone, or wait for the perfect moment to strike?
One thing is certain: Brin’s trump card may be a secret, but Arcaena has secrets of her own…
Brin has conquered the nightmares that once plagued him, and now his goal is to master the power of his class—illusion.
With a new skill that lets him split his mind and juggle multiple thoughts, his imagination is the only limit. But time is running out.
War looms as four nations unite against the Queendom of Arcaena. The Witch Queen’s undead army threatens to destroy everything in its path. When Brin is summoned by the leader of an order of knights, he’s plunged into a conflict that will shape the fate of the world.
Brin’s glass and illusion magic are getting stronger, but his greatest advantage is a dangerous secret: the allied kingdoms’ strongest warrior, a Paladin, is actually Arcaena’s spy. Will Brin reveal the secret to everyone, or wait for the perfect moment to strike?
One thing is certain: Brin’s trump card may be a secret, but Arcaena has secrets of her own…
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First published January 6, 2026
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January 18, 2026
This episode stands out from the earlier books both in pace and scope. There's more action and the stakes are higher.
The reader can now envision a time when Brin will be able to reveal his secret to the world at large and remain free... perhaps even be recognised as a hero.
The reader can now envision a time when Brin will be able to reveal his secret to the world at large and remain free... perhaps even be recognised as a hero.
March 31, 2025
Started the first section of chapters on Royal Road and I am very excited with where this is going. I really enjoyed book 1 and book 2, so I am excited to get back to that type of reading journey.
January 23, 2026
3.5 - nothing in this book was as interesting as Aberfa and Brin’s relationship but it was entertaining and Im looking forward to the next book
January 13, 2026
Definitely the most fun book in the series, but held back by contrivances.
As much fun as this book was, with the MC joining a knightly order in the run up to open war with the witch queendom, the number of contrivances for the plot and the battle sequences really robbed me of payoffs for the inevitable victory. Plus we weren’t even allowed to really even revel in the victory before ending the book.
This book sees MC leave his friends, and his plot armor foster parents behind, as he travels to join a knightly order from some neighboring country led by the knight who answered his system quest in the first book.
Initially, this is a lot of fun. The author really shines here with his ability to create dynamic, dimensional side characters. It was fun to see the MC adapt to the military life and his second in command role to a new squad (given by the order’s commander and his friend). Training and learning to lead are a fun read when done right. My only concern here is MC is still 14? Why hasn’t more time passed? That could have easily been accomplished with some time jumps. Kinda hard to take a 14 year old seriously even on a world with magic and different views on adulthood. Plus he’s knocking on level 50 before he’s 15? I know he’s a prodigy, and he’s been in lots of fights, but still… it kinda breaks the world building to a degree. Something easily fixed with time jumps. But too late for that now.
And there’s combat with the lance (squad). Namely two set piece battles. MC basically is forced to reveal his illusionist class to help win the first one, but it’s no big deal I guess? I still don’t understand why people treat illusionist like witch? That makes no sense to me. I thought it was established that illusionists hid their class because of the hard counter of that revealing potion. There’s even illusionists running movies basically for jobs. But for some reason a combat illusionist is scary? Never understood that. I feel the author just added this in to introduce another layer of tension that is unnecessary in my opinion and feels forced for the contrivance it is. Like if people aren’t suspicious of movie illusionists, though presumably they can accomplish the same shenanigans as any other, why are they suspicious of MC?
And there’s more contrivances, the victories aren’t result of planning and progression, and really the only training that matters is for the stats gained, basically the victories come from bumbling from one situation to the next and doing just enough to win. I think this is a writing trap a lot of authors fall into when writing fights, they want tension, but we all know good guys win, so it feels forced. What does it matter if MC passes out just as the battle is won? The best fights are the result of the investment we readers make in the progression. A culmination of that investment, not some forced stakes to the same end.
The whole mana/magic level is totally contrived. He has just enough to win, that’s it. There’s no established context for how much each skill uses, or how much he regenerates, or why he doesn’t have more potions despite being heir to two of the most powerful mages in the world. It’s just what it needs to be for the moment, and not a hair more, like literally passing out at the end. That’s bad writing. Sorry.
Then there’s all this fighting while no one dies. This is the biggest issue here, and for this series, as it runs opposite to its dark tone. If you want real tension, especially in a series that invests in characters, you have to be willing to kill them to create it. Now, it just feels like no matter what direction circumstances the author weaves, it’s just noise cause good guys win.
It would have been better had they lost one of these battles, or at least lost a significant number of the men. Instead they get three potions and a bard out of nowhere and wing-it for a dub. To me, that’s not good writing.
As for the future of the series, I am not optimistic. This is the downside of not having an OP MC, as every fight ends in similar situations winged-it patterns. It’s like the opposite problem of having an OP MC where stakes are contrived by circumstances to make it seem fair. Instead of threading the needle, this author misses to left where most series miss to the right. But in both cases, it’s still not fun.
That said, the biggest crime of all of this is the lack of leveling and payoffs. The statue thing was some payoff. But a couple levels for all that work? We didn’t even get to enjoy the fruits of those levels in the new class selection, that can is kicked to the next book. That feels cheap, and I’m taking another star for that. First one was for the contrivances.
As I said, I’m not optimistic about the future, first because of the issues I’ve already mentioned that I don’t see getting better, but also because the plot itself is so uninteresting. Despite the banal nature of the threat, it would feel more ominous if the author was willing to sacrifice his characters. It would be more fun if the author was willing to allow the MC to power up and be in the mix. It would be more rewarding if the author was willing to let us see the investment in all this character and lore building pay dividends in payoffs. This far in, I don’t see that happening.
As much fun as this book was, with the MC joining a knightly order in the run up to open war with the witch queendom, the number of contrivances for the plot and the battle sequences really robbed me of payoffs for the inevitable victory. Plus we weren’t even allowed to really even revel in the victory before ending the book.
This book sees MC leave his friends, and his plot armor foster parents behind, as he travels to join a knightly order from some neighboring country led by the knight who answered his system quest in the first book.
Initially, this is a lot of fun. The author really shines here with his ability to create dynamic, dimensional side characters. It was fun to see the MC adapt to the military life and his second in command role to a new squad (given by the order’s commander and his friend). Training and learning to lead are a fun read when done right. My only concern here is MC is still 14? Why hasn’t more time passed? That could have easily been accomplished with some time jumps. Kinda hard to take a 14 year old seriously even on a world with magic and different views on adulthood. Plus he’s knocking on level 50 before he’s 15? I know he’s a prodigy, and he’s been in lots of fights, but still… it kinda breaks the world building to a degree. Something easily fixed with time jumps. But too late for that now.
And there’s combat with the lance (squad). Namely two set piece battles. MC basically is forced to reveal his illusionist class to help win the first one, but it’s no big deal I guess? I still don’t understand why people treat illusionist like witch? That makes no sense to me. I thought it was established that illusionists hid their class because of the hard counter of that revealing potion. There’s even illusionists running movies basically for jobs. But for some reason a combat illusionist is scary? Never understood that. I feel the author just added this in to introduce another layer of tension that is unnecessary in my opinion and feels forced for the contrivance it is. Like if people aren’t suspicious of movie illusionists, though presumably they can accomplish the same shenanigans as any other, why are they suspicious of MC?
And there’s more contrivances, the victories aren’t result of planning and progression, and really the only training that matters is for the stats gained, basically the victories come from bumbling from one situation to the next and doing just enough to win. I think this is a writing trap a lot of authors fall into when writing fights, they want tension, but we all know good guys win, so it feels forced. What does it matter if MC passes out just as the battle is won? The best fights are the result of the investment we readers make in the progression. A culmination of that investment, not some forced stakes to the same end.
The whole mana/magic level is totally contrived. He has just enough to win, that’s it. There’s no established context for how much each skill uses, or how much he regenerates, or why he doesn’t have more potions despite being heir to two of the most powerful mages in the world. It’s just what it needs to be for the moment, and not a hair more, like literally passing out at the end. That’s bad writing. Sorry.
Then there’s all this fighting while no one dies. This is the biggest issue here, and for this series, as it runs opposite to its dark tone. If you want real tension, especially in a series that invests in characters, you have to be willing to kill them to create it. Now, it just feels like no matter what direction circumstances the author weaves, it’s just noise cause good guys win.
It would have been better had they lost one of these battles, or at least lost a significant number of the men. Instead they get three potions and a bard out of nowhere and wing-it for a dub. To me, that’s not good writing.
As for the future of the series, I am not optimistic. This is the downside of not having an OP MC, as every fight ends in similar situations winged-it patterns. It’s like the opposite problem of having an OP MC where stakes are contrived by circumstances to make it seem fair. Instead of threading the needle, this author misses to left where most series miss to the right. But in both cases, it’s still not fun.
That said, the biggest crime of all of this is the lack of leveling and payoffs. The statue thing was some payoff. But a couple levels for all that work? We didn’t even get to enjoy the fruits of those levels in the new class selection, that can is kicked to the next book. That feels cheap, and I’m taking another star for that. First one was for the contrivances.
As I said, I’m not optimistic about the future, first because of the issues I’ve already mentioned that I don’t see getting better, but also because the plot itself is so uninteresting. Despite the banal nature of the threat, it would feel more ominous if the author was willing to sacrifice his characters. It would be more fun if the author was willing to allow the MC to power up and be in the mix. It would be more rewarding if the author was willing to let us see the investment in all this character and lore building pay dividends in payoffs. This far in, I don’t see that happening.
January 10, 2026
Rating 5.0 stars
I loved this book. The biggest thing that I loved about it is the characters. The author did an amazing job giving each character a unique personality and the narrator did an excellent job bringing these characters to life. If I was more logical about my reviews I could probably pick apart things that could have been better. If I were to break down this book into different categories I would probably take a couple points off here and there in each category and that would lead me to rate it lower. Don't care though. I loved the characters and their interactions so much that nothing else matters. That isn't to say the rest of the book is lacking, just that the characters are well this one excels.
In this one Brin has to go off on his own. The separation from his friends and from Hog was very emotional. Brin ends up going to another land by the knight that helped save him in book 1. It was thought to be too dangerous to go to the magic tower, which is where Hog was summoned to go. So now Brin is on his own in a foreign land and doesn't know the rules. He is thrust into a secondary leadership position in the knights order he was sent to and has to navigate his way through his new role, while at the same time trying to keep the secrets he needs to keep.
The magic system is very interesting. The fact that he has something called a split mind and can direct his mind to do things for him without directly being in control and a novel idea. This skill shows it limitations and how Brin has to work around them. While in the knights order he has to fight a horde of goblins, deal with some witches and deal with the political maneuvering of the current land he is in and the Queendom of Arcaena.
The only real gripe I have is the ending. It sort of ended with a cliffhanger. Well, that isn't technically true. Overall, I really enjoyed this book and placed it on my favorites list.
I loved this book. The biggest thing that I loved about it is the characters. The author did an amazing job giving each character a unique personality and the narrator did an excellent job bringing these characters to life. If I was more logical about my reviews I could probably pick apart things that could have been better. If I were to break down this book into different categories I would probably take a couple points off here and there in each category and that would lead me to rate it lower. Don't care though. I loved the characters and their interactions so much that nothing else matters. That isn't to say the rest of the book is lacking, just that the characters are well this one excels.
In this one Brin has to go off on his own. The separation from his friends and from Hog was very emotional. Brin ends up going to another land by the knight that helped save him in book 1. It was thought to be too dangerous to go to the magic tower, which is where Hog was summoned to go. So now Brin is on his own in a foreign land and doesn't know the rules. He is thrust into a secondary leadership position in the knights order he was sent to and has to navigate his way through his new role, while at the same time trying to keep the secrets he needs to keep.
The magic system is very interesting. The fact that he has something called a split mind and can direct his mind to do things for him without directly being in control and a novel idea. This skill shows it limitations and how Brin has to work around them. While in the knights order he has to fight a horde of goblins, deal with some witches and deal with the political maneuvering of the current land he is in and the Queendom of Arcaena.
The only real gripe I have is the ending. It sort of ended with a cliffhanger. Well, that isn't technically true. Overall, I really enjoyed this book and placed it on my favorites list.
November 28, 2025
I love Brin the main character of this LitRPG series, he is young but a powerful illusionist, and now he is learning how to split his mind into different threads, and eyes to follow trouble were he himself cannot be. And trouble is brewing, as Arcaena is threatening war on the kingdom. Arcaena is run by a very powerful witch controlling an army of undead, and if Brin hates something it is witches. He is forced to leave his friends and join a group of Knights, whereby he takes on a very important role, that of trying to make his lance the best there is, even though he starts off with a bunch of weak recruits. Brin goes all out to make them bond with one another, knowing that only if they watch each other's back will they be strong enough to prevail. He does end up building a great team, and as they fight a massive battle against never ending numbers of goblins in order to keep the people of the city safe, it is only thanks to him and Cid, the lance's prime, that the city is saved. I loved this very exciting book, the 4th in the series and look forward to book 5 which seems to be taking us to full out war with Arcaena.
March 10, 2026
fun
Our favorite teen is now an established glassmaker in a city and free of nightmares. Political turmoil ruins his peace. Rather than be press ganged into the army as cannon fodder in a political war, he joins a knighthood order. There he becomes the drill Sargent (much to his and everyone’s surprise) and helps his squad become a cohesive fighting unit. His secret of being an illusionist gets out. He fights to save a city set to be betrayed by its own empire because politics is nasty. He wins and knows that before too long he will have to join his adoptive parents at the Mages tower for even more intrigue and political shenanigans.
A great YA story that explores leadership, learning, power relationships, and friendship. The pacing is steady, the world expands naturally, and teens grow a bit more. And the narrator is awesome! Please enjoy
Our favorite teen is now an established glassmaker in a city and free of nightmares. Political turmoil ruins his peace. Rather than be press ganged into the army as cannon fodder in a political war, he joins a knighthood order. There he becomes the drill Sargent (much to his and everyone’s surprise) and helps his squad become a cohesive fighting unit. His secret of being an illusionist gets out. He fights to save a city set to be betrayed by its own empire because politics is nasty. He wins and knows that before too long he will have to join his adoptive parents at the Mages tower for even more intrigue and political shenanigans.
A great YA story that explores leadership, learning, power relationships, and friendship. The pacing is steady, the world expands naturally, and teens grow a bit more. And the narrator is awesome! Please enjoy
January 15, 2026
Starts rough, gets better, ends great
This whole series has been outstanding, and this one is just as good -if not a smidge better.
While I did not care for that melancholic start at all, and the gloom it cast over the first half of the book, it eventually turns around.
We get to see Brin completely on his own without Hogg or Lumina to guide his choices, or to cover for his mistakes.
This series is amazing. And once again Johnathan McClain (Narrator) imbues the text with more humor and gravitas than the words alone would have.
This whole series has been outstanding, and this one is just as good -if not a smidge better.
While I did not care for that melancholic start at all, and the gloom it cast over the first half of the book, it eventually turns around.
We get to see Brin completely on his own without Hogg or Lumina to guide his choices, or to cover for his mistakes.
This series is amazing. And once again Johnathan McClain (Narrator) imbues the text with more humor and gravitas than the words alone would have.
September 12, 2025
read it on royal road, but I do come away feeling a bit disappointed. I think that this series is excellent, and with those high expectations this book felt a little worse than the standard.
Part of these probably it feels more like a part 1 of 2, with a more cliffhanger feeling instead of the more self-contained stories like in other books.
With that being said, this is still an amazing series and one that I think every litrpgs fan should consider "essential reading."
Part of these probably it feels more like a part 1 of 2, with a more cliffhanger feeling instead of the more self-contained stories like in other books.
With that being said, this is still an amazing series and one that I think every litrpgs fan should consider "essential reading."
January 9, 2026
I don't know, I didn't really find this compelling enough to finish. Brin remains a bit of a cold fish and I think the programming his brain stuff is rather tedious. Possibly because I write code for a living some of the time so it's work not fun. It feels like I've had enough of these. Which is a shame because the writing is as strong as ever. I just didn't have fun. If the stuff I don't like doesn't turn you off then it'd be a pretty strong recommendation I guess?
February 13, 2026
First, loved the book, 5 starred it.
However, the fact that Brin is still pretty young is beginning to be more and more of an issue I think. Him being able to give anyone orders and not be ignored is fairly unbelievable. Sure, most of the knights in this book seem to be 18 to not late 20's I guess, but Brin is at most 15 (appearance). I think the character could have used a 'down' year to age up before everything went crazy.
Just the thought I had in my head through the book.
However, the fact that Brin is still pretty young is beginning to be more and more of an issue I think. Him being able to give anyone orders and not be ignored is fairly unbelievable. Sure, most of the knights in this book seem to be 18 to not late 20's I guess, but Brin is at most 15 (appearance). I think the character could have used a 'down' year to age up before everything went crazy.
Just the thought I had in my head through the book.
February 16, 2026
Recommended read
I find myself writing bad reviews most of the time for the books I find on Kindle in this genre. This is a very good one. It's an excellent continuation of the plot and character development, while also avoiding just about all the pitfalls that usually start popping up the further you get into a series. Most impressive is the fact that power creep isn't an issue. Kudos to the author
I find myself writing bad reviews most of the time for the books I find on Kindle in this genre. This is a very good one. It's an excellent continuation of the plot and character development, while also avoiding just about all the pitfalls that usually start popping up the further you get into a series. Most impressive is the fact that power creep isn't an issue. Kudos to the author
January 12, 2026
Good Stuff
But for the life of me I can’t figure out how our guy turned into acting like a kid. I know a teenager’s body have that hormonal issues, but our guy should’ve been above that stuff. Otherwise this was a decent installment with the bull of putting off his advancement to the next book.
But for the life of me I can’t figure out how our guy turned into acting like a kid. I know a teenager’s body have that hormonal issues, but our guy should’ve been above that stuff. Otherwise this was a decent installment with the bull of putting off his advancement to the next book.
January 6, 2026
Truly one of the best series out there. This book begins one of my favorite arcs and is truly well done, not just for LitRPG, but for the fantasy genre as a whole. This is one of those series that ascends the genre to be truly truly good.
January 21, 2026
I like it
This is well written and a new favorite. I will be rereading the entire series again and again. Very interesting story that I completely recommend if you're ok with lots of violence.
This is well written and a new favorite. I will be rereading the entire series again and again. Very interesting story that I completely recommend if you're ok with lots of violence.
January 21, 2026
Excellent Book
Yet another amazing book in this series. It had an excellent story with great action, system, and magic/fantasy elements.
It is also clean with no profanity. I can't wait for the next book.
Yet another amazing book in this series. It had an excellent story with great action, system, and magic/fantasy elements.
It is also clean with no profanity. I can't wait for the next book.
January 26, 2026
An amazing addition to an excellent series
I thoroughly enjoyed this entire series so far, and this book fit in quite well. The author does an excellent job of bringing Brins adventures to life.
I thoroughly enjoyed this entire series so far, and this book fit in quite well. The author does an excellent job of bringing Brins adventures to life.
January 27, 2026
Fantastic entry in the series. So many new cool characters and dramatic plot. Bryn remains a complete treasure and it's a delight to watch him play around with his new abilities. Everything was great.
February 4, 2026
Fun read
As Brin takes new steps forward along his path its a fun fast ride. Looking forward to the next book as the author continues to build upon the last book. Im hoping he pulls off another great story
As Brin takes new steps forward along his path its a fun fast ride. Looking forward to the next book as the author continues to build upon the last book. Im hoping he pulls off another great story
February 18, 2026
Very surprised by this series. I very much liked the premise and the turn away from full murder hobo. I liked the reluctant friendships and good people that took him under his wing, setting him up for success when he breaks out on his one. A model for parenting in its own way.
February 25, 2026
Ramping up
The book starts a bit slow but man does it ever ramp up! Unfortunately I've read this shortly after release and I'll have to wait for the next book, because I want to read it. Right. Now!
The book starts a bit slow but man does it ever ramp up! Unfortunately I've read this shortly after release and I'll have to wait for the next book, because I want to read it. Right. Now!
January 8, 2026
Brin goes to war.
As charming and as fun as usual, but the stakes have gotten higher, and Brin must rise to the occasion while still dealing with his horror show of a past.
As charming and as fun as usual, but the stakes have gotten higher, and Brin must rise to the occasion while still dealing with his horror show of a past.
January 9, 2026
Good
Another bog standard addition to the series. A new arc that changes the characters involved, with a change of scenery.
Another bog standard addition to the series. A new arc that changes the characters involved, with a change of scenery.
January 9, 2026
good
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January 13, 2026
I got emotional
January 23, 2026
B
This book was mainly the setup for the next one and that's fine.
I do wish though that in books like this, authors could think up more of a reason to read than, idk, this.
This book was mainly the setup for the next one and that's fine.
I do wish though that in books like this, authors could think up more of a reason to read than, idk, this.
February 1, 2026
damn. just read it.
this is definitely my favorite in the series so far. I don't want to give anything away. but it sure was a fun read
this is definitely my favorite in the series so far. I don't want to give anything away. but it sure was a fun read
February 1, 2026
This is a top tier series in the genre. 👍🏽👍🏽
February 13, 2026
Great series
This series is amazing! Always entertaining and really grabs you. I think I've reread it at least 3 times. I highly recommend it.
This series is amazing! Always entertaining and really grabs you. I think I've reread it at least 3 times. I highly recommend it.
March 5, 2026
Enjoyed the continuation of the story.
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