3.5 stars - Spoilers
I'm not quite sure how I feel about Magic Breaks, in some ways I hated it with a burning passion and in others I absolutely bloody loved it. What I do know is that it was a definite improvement from the last book, which read like a silly teeny-bopper book with lots of misunderstandings, insecurity, douchery, and female doormatery. Thankfully, there wasn't any of it that rubbish in this one.
-The first half of the book really dragged for me, there were moments that were wonderful but for the most part I was rather bored. I enjoyed Hugh showing up and basically declaring war on the pack, he was so conniving and fun. Sadly, after that the rest was rather dull and repetitive, it mainly consisted of Kate, Desandra, Derek and their merry gang going from one dangerous place to another so they could prevent Hugh's war. One scene they were fighting vampires, the next some random creatures, then someone else, and then another random creature… It was the same cycle over and over. It was only when Kate was taken and trapped with Ghastek that the story actually gained some momentum for me… I loved getting to know more about Ghastek, he was fleshed out and given dimension whereas before he was just kind of there. Then it really got good when Curran finally showed up with the gang and lots of things actually started to happen — the introduction of Kate's grandmother, Ghastek's boss, and most importantly Roland. It was great to finally get some answers/development.
-I was kind of dreading the introduction of Roland, there was such a huge build up to his character in the previous six books… I was expecting him to be disappointing after all that suspense and mystery surrounding him. Thankfully, he was quite an entertaining character… he wasn't some evil, flat caricature who I wanted to just die. Sure, he was all powerful but he actually had depth and personality and seemed to genuinely care about Kate and want to know her. I'm hoping Kate never has to fight him because the way he was described pretty much ensured her never being able to win because he was that strong… So if they do ever go head to head down the line, Kate will have to die, her winning would read as contrived and unrealistic… It's been made very clear how weak and insignificant she is in comparison to him.
-On to something that pissed me off: The whole Curran acting like a disloyal, lying, two faced douche in the last book has been completely forgotten about… And instead Curran/Kate's relationship was more perfect than ever. Ugh, why bring up all those HUGE relationship/trust issues only to drop them because it didn't suit the current story line? Why do authors even bother writing angst/drama in a relationship when they can't even resolve it in a proper way? Curran saying he would lie again and again and showing how little faith he had in Kate was never addressed. Well, there was one off hand comment about them promising to be honest with each other but that was bullshit since Curran has shown before how little his promises and assurances mean.
To me, at the end of the last book Kate's character took a huge nosedive, she pretty much just shrugged and said it was cool Curran lied to her so convincingly, humiliated her in front of the pack, made her feel like rubbish, and had zero trust and faith in her… And then when he proposed she squealed like a loser, said yes, and forgot the way he treated her. Where was the badarse, take no prisoners Kate?! Where was the groveling and them actually working on their relationship? I wanted to see Curran working on proving himself again. I know he'd risk his life for Kate but I wanted to see him actually respecting her, trusting her, and honouring his promises to her… One random comment about them being honest to each other was nowhere near good enough.
-When Curren left in the beginning I just thought typical Curran conveniently leaving so that Kate as usual had to deal with all the pack politics, the bureaucratic nonsense, and the meeting with the People. The lazy bastard. I've always hated that Kate gave up so much for Curran (her home, her job, Andrea for a while, her secrets, her time and personality so she could be all diplomatic for the pack) yet he didn't have to change or sacrifice anything to be with her.
That's why I loved the ending when Curran left the pack, it was about bloody time he gave up something for Kate.
-Oh, and Curran being missing for most of the book felt like a cheap way of making readers miss him and thus forget what a wanker he was in the last book. Well, it didn't work on me. Yes, I missed his character but I didn't forget him disrespecting Kate, humiliating her, and making her feel rubbish. To me, he still needs to earn back Kate's trust.
-My favourite characters were probably Desandra, Hugh, and Roland. Desandra was so funny and crass and badarse, I'm glad she became alpha wolf in the end. I'm hoping she'll still be there for Kate even though she's no longer Consort.
Hugh was a great villain, I loved all his dirty/cheeky comments to Kate, I'm pleased he survived because I'd like to see him cause more problems for Kate and Curran, at least for a little while. I hope he doesn't become one dimensional though, his humour should remain, it makes him more interesting.
-I wasn't happy with Kate constantly being surrounded by male characters. It was as if she wasn't allowed to share scenes with more than one female character at a time, and when she was with more than one female character, it was either a very short scene or one of them always faded into the background.
Julie is meant to be Kate's ward, they have history, and a complex relationship yet she was barely in it. Instead random fairly new teenage character, Ascanio, was constantly hanging around Kate. I don't give a fuck about Ascanio or his relationship with Kate, he's a nobody, Julie should have been the one that ended up on Kate's mission. But oh no, it had to be a guy instead. Never mind actually developing her existing relationship with Julie, lets instead shove some random teenage guy in the story that Kate can mentor and interact with. I bet if Kate's ward had been a teenage guy, there would have been PLENTY of interaction, guidance, and bonding going on… But because Julie's a girl, there's no need to bother, apparently female characters/relationships just aren't all that important.
Ugh, Kate has/had FAR MORE interactions/close bonds/complex relationships with male characters, in comparison she has had very few with females, and the ones she is close with she only occasionally gets to share scenes with them. No, just no.
-I LOATHED Kate's pining and whining about Curran. She sounded like a pathetic YA heroine. I could understand her saying she missed and loved Curran once or twice but she kept banging on about him even when she was in danger and people around her were dying. And she was so mushy and sentimental about it. It really put me off her character, Kate was never like that before. She focused on what was going on around her and kept her cool, but all of sudden she turned into some loser Curran fangirl. Ugh, I hated that part of her character.
Also, she was kind of a damsel in distress in this one. Yea, everyone needs saving occasionally no matter how badarse they are but Kate's mantra of Curran rescuing her made her seem more like a useless princess rather than the kickarse nutter I knew and loved. I wouldn't have minded Curran saving her but I would have preferred if Kate kept trying to save herself (even if she was failing) instead of sighing and fantasizing about Curran coming to the rescue.
-I really wanted to see Raphael's reaction to finding out Andrea was pregnant. I doubt it'll be shown in the next book.
-Where the hell was Dali? She's such a cool, useful, and fun character yet she was nowhere to be seen. I would have rather had her as one of the prominent side characters instead of the run-of-the-mill male scowling-growling shifter Kate's usually with.
-There were lots of parts that were very info dumpy and slow, I didn't really notice that occurring in earlier books. I wanted more action and dialogue instead of dull history lessons on random creatures/people/places.
-Now that Roland has been dealt with, and Kate claimed Atlanta, and Kate/Curran are no longer pack… It feels as if the only plot there'll be is the stereotypical villain-of-the-week type plot that Kate will have to deal with. I'm hoping that's not the case, and instead there'll be continuing, interesting arcs in the next few books.
I'm guessing the series is back on track for me because even though I adored and despised this one all at once, I'm excited to read the next book in the series.