September Readathon
There's a lot going on but it never amounts to much. It also reads like three half-conceived plots shortcutted into one book.
The heroine is supposed to be capable and courageous but mostly she bungles things. The hero is supposed to be cold and calculating but mostly he can only manage to react to what happens. Events unfold around and to them.
There's an abrupt pivot at the 3/4 mark where suddenly she's got her wits about her and she's able with her own derring-do, he's wide open with his emotions, and they're completely in love. Then they consummate this with his burned and bandaged hands--when, after making a huge deal of treating and bandaging his hands moments before, they don't mention it again.
Several times, big plot beats are resolved in anticlimactic ways. And the resolutions go really smoothly, given the buildup. The investigation, the break-up of the brothel, the situation with the hero's nephew, the situation with the heroine's cousin. Even their sudden declaration of love and shift in their dynamic cools things down, and it's only external forces that threaten them thereafter--but again in almost offhand, and off-page, ways that are too easy to get free from.
Golly, even even the heroine's secret identity is already known and accepted by her now-complacently smug and happy husband, and when she gets to reveal, he steals the moment by saying yes dear I know it's fine. And her secret identity was one of the few things I went Hey, Nice about.
Parts were present in these three-some-plots that made me hopeful. But nothing satisfying ever coalesced.
Could have been an:
-- opposites attract solving a mystery that unravels a much bigger, darker scheme
-- two people with personal determination butting heads and falling in love adventure regency
-- opposites attract caught in social mores and manners who chafe against them to fall in love and mend the issues in their respective, overlapping, family dramas
Too bad it wasn't any of those, alone, and well developed.
I was baffled the secret bad guy was handled with a "they're a good person at heart, they've suffered enough," and otherwise handwaved. This by our many times over said to be errant knight hero who rescues stray dogs, hates to see ill done to the weaker, and takes on righting various wrongs.
Dier got heavy-handed with the little device of ending a scene on a metaphor with the heroine, to then echo and repeat it exactly with the hero to open the very next scene. Sometimes that really works, but save it and use sparingly for impact; it got predictable and a bit silly.
Moon/light and like a fist were metaphors used too often, because I noticed how often they were used.