Bleh. I didn't read the first in this series, but I clearly wasn't missing much since the couple from that book carried straight on through this one (their wedding seemed like a bigger event than THIS book's HEA). In fact, that was one of my complaints about this book-- it was just too darn crowded.
There are no less than three (possibly four) romances cooking at the same time here, leaving little attention to devote to the main couple. Because there were so many of them, you don't really get a chance to know any of them well-- Phoebe's sister and her best friend felt largely interchangeable for most of the book, and while I definitely got that Dylan used to be in the NHL (which apparently equipped him to be a wunderkind later), I didn't know much more about him. I felt like I knew even LESS about Noah, who's supposedly the male lead of this title. And don't even get me started on the mysterious and weirdly all-knowing man who's been following Noah around. Or not. Maybe. Add to this a bi-coastal cast and multiple historical references, and you have a recipe for confusion.
But... okay. The cast was a little large, and it was perhaps overstuffed with plot fragments, but those things are both forgivable. What I *couldn't* forgive was the apparent lack of an editor or copyeditor. The book was just... all over the place. There was unnecessary detail diarrhea stuck in every which way (and distracting mightily from already unclear scenes), frequent and ANNOYING continuity mistakes, contradictory events, and uneven pacing. Many scenes lacked any kind of segue, to the point that I was flipping back pages, trying to figure out how or why we'd just changed locations or where a certain character had appeared from.
This book needed an editor, and it needed one BADLY. I won't be picking up this author again.